One Shot - Whispers of the Waves - Page 2

It was really heart touching..nicee.beautiful OS.

A Beautiful Yet Sad OS

Geet has passed away but her memories lives with Maan

and their three children

their courtship days was indeed filled with fun and excitement

but now when Maan wants his life to end Geet wants him to live to his fullest

Awesome and emotional story . Maan lost his wife ....his geet but he didn't forget her , everyday , every moment he is missing her and remembering her , his longing for her touched our heart , he has all....his children, grand children but life is incomplete without his geet.

Originally posted by: Hakuna_Matata11

Wonderful one shot.👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

It was really heart touching.

The way you have penned down the emotions absolutely impeccable.

Originally posted by: m4manju

Beautiful OS! Maan's longing for his wife who's no longer in this world was so well-written. Also, him reflecting in how Geet's passing away affected their kids especially their youngest, was so touching.

Loved the ending too. They are truly soulmates who will always be by each other's side

Man lost his wife .his wife but he didn't forget her. I like it.

Hi Anu

thanks for the pm

congrats on another OS

Touching OS.... beautifully written

sad that Geet passed away

Maan was indeed shattered

of cos he had to survive for Geet and their children

glad that his children understood and supported him

it was clearly hard for Maan to survive without his Geet

great that Maan tried to keep himself busy

he thinks of their past

lovely memories

at least they managed to convince their families for their marriage

as expected he misses his Geet

he wants to be with her

not surprised that Geet encouraged Maan

liked that she assured him that she is there with him