Bags of Charm: A sweet mix-up ~ ArShi OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

I'm a little lost for words while looking at this Banner... it's so perfect . The hanging letters, the cafe backdrop as well as the coffee and cupcakes in the background are... Ummha *Chef's kiss*. I absolutely love the vibe they present and make me eager to read the story... so Congratulations on winning Priya!

Coming to the story, its so sweet... my teeth are rotting... wo bhi bina cupcake khaaye . Akdu Arnav sitting alone and whirlwind Khushi hijacking his plans... so adorable . I also like the open-ending... very realistic. Perhaps they like each other's company enough to exchange phone numbers... or maybe this is just a chance encounter and they don't meet again... merely holding onto the fond memory of their little rendezvous. Either way, I like it very much and am glad you participated in this contest

Love,

Stuti

@bold: That was exactly what I was aiming for.😁

Thank you so much Stuti. I’m so glad you enjoyed reading it.❤️🤗

Originally posted by: m4manju

Wonderful OS. A sweet mix up indeed. And looks like Arnav is retaining his title as Akdu Singh Raizada, sorry bhi nahi bola humph! But we love our laad governor either way :D

Loved the cute, clumsy Khushi. Hope she did open that 'Club Bag-exchange' after all, with a certain charming investor she met that day

Beautiful cover, Priya. Love the coloring and background of the cafe as well

Haha, thank you for the lovely comments Manju! I’m glad that you enjoyed reading it.

Ummm… is that a subtle… may be even blatant attempt to get me to continue this? The idea of Khushi starting a business and Arnav being an investor is interesting. May be someone can write a one-shot on that prompt.

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

A beautiful cover that is brimming with happiness and optimism... emulating the theme's charming interactions! Great work, Priya.

When I first read your work, Mrinalini, I was curious, but I ended up admiring it. You are a very talented writer. The narrative style, the vocabulary choice, and the plot's seamless progression are all excellent. Good work.

Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation, Madhuri.

Originally posted by: Savera84

Indeed a sweet mix up. I mean after the mix up them having a sweet cup cake. It is so real and Arnav and Khushi in a set up like that is icing on the cake.

Mix up of bags especially on the conveyer belt at the airport is so common.

Nicely written story Mrina and Priya's book cover totally complimented the story. I felt like I myself was transported to that café with all those aromas and sounds.

Cheers..

Thank you so much Raji! Glad you enjoyed reading it.

Originally posted by: x.titli.x

I love the cover Priya, you are totally surpassing yourself as graphicerWell done girlMrina, this brought a huge smile on my face, loved how Khushi made Arnav smile at the end despite the clumsy chaos and offered him cupcakeLoved their coffee date

Thank you my dear Maria!❤️ Bringing a smile to faces is what I love most about writing.

Originally posted by: dair10arshi

Hiiiiiiiii, New reader here! You have earned yourself a fan 😍

If Barun and Sanaya ever reunite for a project I would love to see them portraying this version of Arnav-Khushi. I could actually envision their current selves play the characters the way you have written.

Awww, yay! Thank you for liking my work so much.❤️

Originally posted by: coderlady

This was one mistake worth making. Who knows, this could be the beginning of something very sweet indeed.

Indeed this could be the start of something amazing but unfortunately real life mein bohot rarely aisa hota hoga. Thanks for dropping in.❤️

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

I love the chemistry you created between Arnav and Khushi here

Thank you so much my dear Hinna!❤️