Strange Relationships - Maaneet SS #4#5 updated

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Strange Relationships

This is a short story I wrote years back but did not complete it.

Now I want to complete all my stories.


Hope you will read this one.


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# 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/166274906

# 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/166278355

# 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/166283992


# 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/166353882

#5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/166370356


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Posted: 7 months ago
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Ok dear

All the best ☺️

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It has been late and I did not feel like going home. Someone knocked and I straightened myself, thinking who was staying this late in the office. I looked at the clock it was 10:15 p.m.

Come in I said

The person entered my cabin, I should have known he was none other than Aditya, my friend Adi, "you are still here it's very late. Everyone at home would be worried."

I sighed, "yes, they will be worried, I must go but I don't want to."

He came near me and sat on the same sofa I was sitting on, " you can always tell me what's wrong."

Adi everything is wrong, basically I am afraid of Geet. Every time I see her, I feel guilty. I have failed Dev bhai. I am no longer able to do justice with what he asked me to do." I said.

"Will you brief me", he asked.

"Geet is adamant that I should get married as soon as possible. She is also forcing Daadi to go and talk to the Singhania's and she keeps asking me why Sameera is not visiting us lately. You know how she likes her, the two women always were good friends and now she is wondering why not once Sameera has come to visit her I don't know what to do."

"Why don't you tell her the truth," he advised. "Daadi does not have the courage to tell her and I am not able to even look at her without anger and guilt. Her family says I should move on as if nothing has happened and get married as per her wish. They say there's nothing wrong with getting married to Sameera and Geet will also love it, but Adi how can I. I know everything I did, what I thought was right or say what I was told to do at that time. I did not go against their wishes." I could not continue

"If you know, what you did was right then go and tell her everything. She is brave, she will definitely understand," he said

"I will try" was all I could say.


I still remember that day I was on cloud nine that day.

Why would I not be? It was my brother's marriage. His would be wife, a very sweet girl named Geet. She is the daughter of my father's best friend Mr Mohinder Handa.

My brother Dev had been head over heels in love with her for the last 2 months. Yes, since last two months only, just because before that he did not know that she even existed. The Handa family returned from America only 3 months back and when my brother saw her, he was all lattoo on her. It was just his lucky chance that Daadi decided that it would be good to have him tied up with her, a charming girl of 21.


The moment Sameera, my girlfriend met Geet, they rocked. Both the girls shared the same taste and the same charm. This also made Daadi sigh in relief, as I was surely going to marry Sameera, so it would be good if both Bahus of the house liked each other.

Now you all must be wondering who I am? Most of you must guess, yes I am Maan, as in Maan Singh Khurana. I am 22 yrs, old, pursuing MBA from IIM Ahmedabad, first I did my graduation in architecture and now I am doing MBA. I am here in Delhi to attend my brother's marriage.


As soon as I complete my MBA I will marry Sameera, now that my bro is getting married, I am very happy.

"Maan, Maan" oops someone is calling me, let me see who is missing me.


"Maan!"


"Coming" oh, it's Daadi calling me, "Yes, Daadi, I am here."

"Where were you? We are getting late" she sure looked worried


"Hey chill Daadi, it's just an hour's journey" I kissed her palm and ran to the bus.

"Maan, what is taking so long?" asked my brother.

"Bro chill, I too am in a hurry to get you married, after all I went to do MBA just because I could not keep my hands off Sameera while staying in the same town." I winked at Sameera, who turned beetroot.

"You are shameless" Daadi hit the newspaper she was carrying on my head.

Everyone was on the bus and we left for Gurgaon. We sang all through the ride.


Handa gave a grand reception and the marriage went well. Geet now my Bhabhi was looking like an angel.

The couple took blessings from everyone after the ceremony.


"Won't you two touch my feet?" I asked them, everyone present glared at me


Bhabhi came forward and touched my feet, I was shocked, "I was just kidding Bhabhi, I am your Devar I should be the one touching your feet and take blessings."

She smiled at me, "I am younger then you, so it's Ok, but Sameera will have to treat me like a Jethani once you two get married"

Everyone laughed and I felt like the earth should swallow me.

"And call me Geet, Bhabhi seems weird, you always called me by my name" she added


I smiled at her sheepishly.

Did I forget to tell you that before doing my MBA I was sent to America for training and there I lived at Handa's.

And that time I used to call her Geet, I never knew then that she will land up to be my Bhabhi.

Well Sameera came forward and touched her feet, "Ok Di, but till then I will continue calling you Di"


They hugged and I was happy.

Dev and Geet were a perfect couple, within a year they were blessed with a son, and they named him Adhiraj.

By the time Adhiraj was one, I was done with my MBA and as soon as I returned my engagement date was set. And finally I was engaged to Sameera officially. Everyone was very happy.

Soon after the two families gathered and called their respective Pandits to discuss our marriage date.

And that was it, both said that there was no chance of any marriage for another 2 years, and if the marriage takes place either the bride or the groom will die. Now poor me and my Sameera, we had no say in this.


It was decided that marriage will only take place after 2 years.


I felt very bad, but I could not go against my Daadi, my bro and my Bhabhi, so I decided to talk to Sameera.

She was a very humble girl, she said, "Maan, we have known each other for long, and have waited equally long for this marriage. These two years will also pass. And what will be these two years in the 60-70 years we are going to live together"

I agreed, she was always so sensible.


So I went to the Mumbai branch meanwhile.


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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
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Geet ki shaadi kissi aur se

,💔❤️‍🩹😡😡

Give next part fast 😁 😁

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Awesome so looking forward

Thank you

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Oh wow

Did not expect this at all

But all was well something definitely happened to change all this looks like something happened to dev

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Posted: 7 months ago
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congrats for new story


why geet is with dev n everyone is happy

waiting to read more

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Today is Adhiraj's 3rd birthday; I am in Delhi to attend it.


"So, Geet what is the schedule for today?" I asked.

"As usual, the party is at 5 pm for kids and from 8 pm others join in" she said.

"This means I am free till 8" I said.

"Yes, but you should ask your bro, if he has some plans" she gave me a teasing look


"Oh! Geet, don't be a bore. You tell bro I am out with friends" I pleaded


"Friends! Or..."

"Oh! Come on, now I am going" I said and without waiting ran to the garage.

Within 30 mins I was parked at the mall, at the same time Sameera too parked her car.


I hugged her; I can't explain how much I missed her.


"Maan, I missed you" she was in tears I traced the drop falling from her eyes and kissed it, "Jaan, but I did not miss you"

She was shocked, and gave me an accusing look, I smiled, "how could I miss you when you were always here in my heart?"

She was all blushing; we went to watch the movie, what was the movie neither of us remembered as we were too busy with each other.


We were both dying to feel each other; it was only Sameera's resolve and her family values that stopped us from getting physical.

After the movie we went shopping, I felt like buying the whole shop for her, she was the most beautiful woman I have ever met, she was intelligent, graceful, innocent, and respected our traditional values.

After engagement I would have married her inspite of what the Pundits said, but her family believed all this, and above all she believed in them. So here I was waiting, she believed in them. So here I was waiting, she always says, waqt se phele aur kismet se zyada kch nahin milta' (you don't get things more than your luck and before the right time).

My family did not believe in horoscopes and all, in bro's marriage the pundits were not consulted, brother and Geet liked each other, agreed to marry and now here they are happily married with a son.

Sameera came out of the changing room, looking beautiful in the pink suit. "Marvelous, now why don't you try this"

I handed her a dress, she went inside and immediately came out, "What is this?"

She was shocked, I have given her a mini skirt and a spaghetti top; I knew she would be shocked.

"Will you not wear this for me?" I asked


She blushed as my eyes traced her perfect figure, "Ok, but you will only peep in for a second"

I was like wow, "ok" I said, imagining how she will look in it. After about 30 mins she called me, "Maan, peep in, but only for a few seconds"

"I am coming" I announced as I entered the changing room.

She stood, her back facing me, she had covered herself with her duppatta; I went near her and slowly removed the duppatta covering her, she was panting due to nervousness; I went in front of her and slowly traced my fingers on her bare arms.


She shivered, "look at me Sameera" I said, my voice heavy with desire.

She was blushing hard, with a lot of difficulty she looked at me, but as soon as our eyes met she covered her face, I wanted to make unspeakable things with her but one look at her and the trust she showed on me forced me to back off.

"Change Sameera, or else I will take off these two pieces and celebrate our wedding night here" I kissed her closed eyes and went out.


By the time she came out I was well composed, but she was feeling very awkward, anyone looking at her would think that something had happened between us in that room, I laughed remembering the scene of a movie where the heroine thinks that by hugging and kissing the hero once she has been pregnant. She is so innocent.

Later I helped her become normal and took her to my house for the party.


The party was rocking, Geet was a perfect planner, and Dev was a perfectionist who followed his wife with blind eyes.After the party the Singhania's stayed and discussed the marriage and as 2 yrs were over, the date for marriage was fixed.I was not there when they were talking.


"Sameera" said Geet


"Ji Bhabhi" Sameera asked


"Go, call Maan"


"I... I mean I " Sameera stammered blushing


"Yes, Betaji" said Daadi

Daadi


Sameera came to my room, she knocked


"Yes its open" I called


She stepped in with a thumping heart, I have seen here coming, as soon as she stepped in I pulled her towards me, she was looking so cute, "So, you have come to see your room" I said


She blushed more, "No.. I mean, actually... Bhabhi"

"Ok so Geet is your partner in crime" I said in a stern voice, it was really hard to control my laugh when she was so was so confused


"No, Daadi is calling you" and she ran out of the room, I pulled her and kissed her nose, I can swear she would have fallen if I were not holding her, she was all beetroot.


The date was after 3 weeks, bookings were made, shopping done, and these 3 weeks flew with selecting things, decorations etc.


Today is the haldi ceremony in the evening; Geet has gone to the Singhania's with the haldi to be applied to Sameera.


Dev bro had gone to the tailors to collect the sherwani.

Daadi was busy instructing the helpers, Adhiraj was here sitting on my back, while I was doing pushups and talking to my bro on the phone.


Suddenly our worlds came to stand still, there was a loud BANG!!!!!!!!!


And what followed changed the course of our lives.

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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
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Hi, nice chapter dear, geet and dev married and Maan and Sameera.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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part 1

Geet is married to Dev and blessed with a child already too. She seems happy.

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