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Riveting update... brilliantly written
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Part 5
Riveting update... brilliantly written
Very Nice So Palki Is Shaurya 's Childhood Friend
Aww
Maybe She Will Heal His Pain His Cruel Father Put On Him
Yes,in the previous chapter itself I had shown Palki in the childhood scenes.
Thanks a lot.
Originally posted by: SilverBell
Very Nice So Palki Is Shaurya 's Childhood Friend
Aww
Maybe She Will Heal His Pain His Cruel Father Put On Him
Salley
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Thank you very much for the lovely comments.
Shaurya was drinking.Suddenly somebody snatched the alcohol bottle from his hand.It was Palki.Shaurya was shocked.
Shaurya:Why are you in the bar?This place is not good for the girls.So get lost.
Palki:I think you care for me.That's why you don't want me here.But the way you asked me to leave was too rude.You asked me to get lost.So rude.
Shaurya:Shut up and leave.
Palki:I will not shut up.
The angry Shaurya pinned her towards the wall and closed her mouth with his palm.
Shaurya:I told you to shut up and leave.
Palki pushed him.
Palki:I will leave.But you should come with me.This place is not good for boys also.Drinking is not good.
Shaurya:I told you not to order me.
Palki:You also don't order me.I will stay here itself and I will not let you drink.
Shaurya:I paid money for this bottle.I will drink it.Stay away from me.
Palki:I will not let you drink.
Shaurya:Oh really?Let me see how you will stop me from drinking this.
Palki smirked and took the bottle.Then she drank the whole bottle.Shaurya was shocked.
Shaurya:What did you do?The one who is against drinking drank the whole bottle?
Palki:I can do anything to stop you from drinking.
They shared an eye lock.
Shaurya:Since you got drunk I will drop you home.I can't send you alone in this condition.
Palki smiled:So you care for me.Without drinking you are going to accompany me.I am happy.
Shaurya was silent.
They both started walking to the exit.The intoxicated Palki did not have balance while walking.So she slipped.Shaurya held her preventing her from falling down.They shared an eye lock.
Shaurya:You can't even walk properly.Stupid girl!Who asked you to drink this much if you can't handle yourself.
Palki pouted.Shaurya held her hand and walked.
By mistake Shaurya stepped his foot on her dupatta on the floor.
Palki:Shaurya!
She picked up the dupatta and showed him.It was torn.
Palki:You tore my dupatta Shaurya.
Shaurya:I did'nt do it purposefully Palki.
Palki:But you tore it.
Palki started crying like a small child.
Shaurya:Oh no...this girl has become mad.
Shaurya:I said 'sorry'.Then why are you crying?Please stop crying.
Palki stopped crying.Shaurya was relieved.
Shaurya:Come with me to the car.
He held her hand and started walking.
While walking,Palki started smiling and started singing.
Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha
Shaurya was shocked.
Shaurya:Stop singing here Palki.Are you mad?
Without listening to him,she started singing cutely.Shaurya was going crazy.
Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha
Palki started dancing.
Mausam Ye Be-Imaan
Masti Ka Ye Saman
Roko O Logon Zameen Pe
Girne Laga Aasmaan
Thumak Thumak Ke Jhuloongi
Main Udke Gagan Ko Chhuloongi
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha
Shaurya went near her to stop her from dancing.
Shaurya:This is a public place.Stop dancing.The people will think that you are mad.
Suddenly Palki held his hand romantically and started dancing.Their close proximity started affecting him.
Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Thandi Thandi Pavan
Jalta Hai Ye Badan
Jee Chahta Hai Bana Loon
Tujhko Apna Sajan
Hua Nahin Ye Pehle Kabhi
Meri Jaan Badal Gayi Abhi Abhi
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha
He thought:What is happening to me?
Shaurya carried Palki forcefully to the car and started driving.Inside the car also Palki was singing which annoyed Shaurya.
Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Jaati Hai Tu Kahan
Jaaneman Jaanejaan
Ladki Hai Tu Khoobsurat
Ladka Main Naujawaan
Tujhe Gale Laga Loon Aa
Palkhon Mein Bitha Loon Aa
Ho Gaya
Mujhe Nasha
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha
Shaurya dropped her home.After reaching home also Palki was singing.
Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Ho Gaya
Mujhe Nasha
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha(DDLJ)
Ravinder and Janki were stunned.
Janki:Palki beta...why are you behaving like this?
Ravinder:What happened Palki?
Shaurya:She just had liquor to give me company.
Ravinder and Janki were shocked.
Shaurya:Tell your daughter not to interfere in my life.I will drink whenever I want and do whatever I want.
Ravinder and Janki were upset and remained silent.
Slowly Ravinder broke his silence looking at Shaurya:When you were in school,I did a big mistake to you.Actually it was a sin which shattered your life.After that I left that school.But my guilt did'nt reduce.Only if you forgive me,I will be guilt free.
Shaurya:I forgave you Sir.
Ravinder smiled.
Shaurya:But will I get my childhood back?Will I get my life back?
Ravinder became upset.
Shaurya:But don't worry.I am happy in my present life.
He walked to his car and drove away.
Ravinder:Poor boy.He is making himself believe that he is happy in his life as a revenge to the ones who wronged him.
Shaurya went to attend Sunny and Shanaya's engagement party.
There Shaurya was surprised to see Palki.He was mesmerized by her beauty.
Shaurya:You guys invited Palki also?
Shanaya:Ya..she was our school mate na.
Palki went near him.
Palki:How do I look Shaurya?
Shaurya:Horrible!
Palki got irritated:How mean!Can't you say anything positive?
Shaurya:Don't expect anything positive from me.
Palki:You are really a kadoos.
Shaurya:I am a goon like my father says.Because I am the son of a monster.
Palki became dull.
Palki:Guess the angry young man does not have any mood to smile.Let me make you smile.
Shaurya:Impossible.
Palki:Let me try.
She cracked some jokes.They both burst into laughter.
Palki:I won the challenge.I made you laugh.
Shaurya smiled.
Palki's hair curls started falling on her face.He touched her hair curls and removed them from her face.
She was smiling at him.
Palki:Shall we take some photographs together?
Shaurya:Okay.
They posed for photographs.
Sunny and Shanaya exchanged rings.
Shaurya reached home.Preeta hugged him saying:Happy birthday Shaurya...
Shaurya:Thank you Maa.
Rajveer-Kavya:Happy birthday Shaurya.
Shaurya:Thank you all.Where is dad?
They became dull.
Shaurya:As usual he did not even bother to wish me.
Preeta:Beta...don't bother about dad's absence.
Shaurya:It's okay Maa.I am used to it.I don't care whether that monster is here or not.
Preeta felt sad for Shaurya.She remembered her conversation with Raghav.
Flash back...
Preeta:Raghav,why are you not wishing Shaurya on his birthdays?Bechara is so sad.He is longed to get wished by you.
Raghav:First of all he is not a bechara.He is someone who disobeyed and disrespected his own father.If he ever becomes successful in his career I will wish him.But I know that he will never be successful in his life.
Preeta became upset.
Preeta:Not everyone can be successful in their career.But that does not mean that they should be denied parental love.
Raghav:But some people do not deserve parental love.
She became upset.
Present...
Preeta:Don't mind it Shaurya.We can celebrate it.
Rajveer:Yes Shaurya.We can celebrate it nicely.
Kavya:Pallavi and Maa have baked a cake.I made kheer.Rajveer arranged lunch.
Shaurya:I am lucky to have such a sweet mother and siblings.
They all hugged together.
Rajveer and Pallavi brought the cake singing:Happy birthday Shaurya.
Shaurya smiled.
Rajveer:Let's rock Shaurya.
Shaurya smiled:Ya.
Rajveer:Now cut the cake Shaurya.
Shaurya cut the cake and fed it to everyone.
Kavya fed him his favourite Kheer.Preeta served him food
and fed it to him with her own hands.Shaurya became emotional.
After the celebration Shaurya got a message from Palki.
"Shaurya,please come here.It's urgent".
She sent him the address too.
Shaurya was stunned:Is Palki in danger?
Palki drinking the whole bottle to stop Shaurya from drinking was hilarious. Palki crying for her torn dupatta and singing in the rain was also funny. Shaurya forgiving Ravinder was nice, but he can't get back his childhood, mostly because of Raghav. Palki making him laugh was cute. About Flashback scene I will only say that every child deserves a father but not every man deserves to be a father. At least he has a good mother and siblings. Wondering what happened to Palki. Perfect pics, waiting for next
Very interesting update dear 🙂
Just loved it 🤗
Thanks for the PM ☺️
Keep writing ✍️
Part 6
Outstanding update.... grandly written
thanks for the pm
Very Nice Chapter
Palki Will Wish Shaurya Happy Birthday I Guess Or Maybe She's Really In Danger?
Salley
Silverbell
GOLDIE ABROL
khwaishfan
Thank you very much for the lovely comments.
Shaurya reached the place where Palki asked him to come.
He was surprised to see the place decorated with balloons.
Palki came smiling:Happy birthday Shaurya.
Shaurya smiled:Thank you.
Palki:How is my surprise?
Shaurya:You scared me Palki.Do you know how scared I was?I thought you were in danger.
Palki:I am surprised that the so called goon gets scared.
Shaurya:Bad joke.
Palki giggled.
Palki:You remember how we used to celebrate your birthday in childhood?
Shaurya remembered his childhood birthday with Palki and smiled.
Palki:Let us relive that moment Shaurya.
He smiled.
Palki brought the cake.She cut the cake holding his hand and fed the cake to him.
Palki:Kadoos!Can't you give me a small piece of it?
Shaurya smiled and fed her a piece.She smiled.
Palki:We will take a photograph.
Palki made Shaurya sit and sat on his lap.
Shaurya:Ahhh!You are so heavy.
Palki:Stop it Shaurya.I am not heavy.Even in childhood I used to sit on your lap and you used to cry.
They both laughed.
Palki:When you laugh,you look so cute Shaurya.
She pulled his cheek and chin cutely.
They clicked a photograph.
Surprisingly Shaurya embraced Palki.
Shaurya:Thank you Palki for making my birthday so beautiful.
Palki smiled happily at him.
Palki:Always be happy like this Shaurya.This is what I want from you.
He smiled.
Preeta went near Raghav with a bowl of Kheer.
Preeta:Raghav..Kavya has prepared very tasty kheer.Have it.
Raghav:My daughter Kavya makes the best kheer.But if you feed me,it will be tastier.
Preeta blushed.
Preeta fed him kheer.
Raghav:So tasty.But why did Kavya make kheer today?There is no special occasion.
Preeta:You forgot our son's birthday Raghav.Today is Shaurya's birthday.
Raghav became dull.
Raghav:I am sorry Preeta.I don't want to have anything from Shaurya's birthday celebration.
Preeta became upset.
Preeta:How can you be so stone hearted Raghav?You are treating Shaurya like your enemy.
Raghav:No Preeta.He is not my enemy.Because unfortunately that loser is my son.But I don't consider him as my son to be a part of his birthday celebration.
Preeta:Raghav!
Raghav:Yes Preeta.Unfortunately that loser became my son.But I don't want to consider him as my son.To be frank I don't want him to be there for Mohit and Kavya's engagement function.Because he is a bad omen.Such characters should not be there for an auspicious occasion.
Raghav walked away.
Preeta's eyes became wet.Shaurya who was overhearing it went to his room with a broken heart.
Preeta entered Shaurya's room.She was stunned to see him cry.
Preeta went near him.
Preeta:Shaurya,why are you crying beta?
Shaurya turned off his face and wiped his tears.
Shaurya:Do you think I will cry?No way.
Preeta:Don't hide your tears atleast from your mother Shaurya.
Shaurya's eyes got filled up with tears.
Preeta:You heard what Raghav said about you.Right?
Shaurya nodded tearfully.
Preeta held him closer and said:You are not a bad omen Shaurya.Without you,no function is auspicious.
They both hugged each other crying.
Rajveer was writing some thing in the paper.Pallavi came and sat near him.
Pallavi:Are you busy?
Rajveer:I am preparing for my presentation.
Pallavi:I came at the wrong time.Did I disturb you?
Rajveer:You can never be a disturbance Pallavi.
He looked at her romantically and said:When I keep looking at you,I get encouraged to give a better presentation.
Pallavi blushed.
Pallavi:You are getting romantic at the wrong time.Naughty boy!
Rajveer:Romance has no time Pallavi.I can romance you at any time.
Pallavi smiled shyly.
Sandy and Shaurya were talking at their usual spot.Shaurya:Everyone will give costly gifts to Kavya on her engagement.But a taxi driver like me cannot afford even a costly artificial ornament.I am a fool.I should save saved money to buy a wedding gift for Kavya.
Palki who came there overheard it.
Palki went near them.
Palki:Shaurya!
Shaurya:Why have you come here Palki?
Palki:I felt like seeing my childhood friend.So I came here.You have anything to tell me?
Shaurya:No.Why?
Palki thought:Shaurya is so egoistic that he does'nt want to share his financial problem with me.
Palki:Shaurya....even if you hide,your Palki can understand what you are going through.Just because I am not talking about it openly don't think that I am not aware of anything.And if you like it or not,I will always stand for you.
Shaurya looked at her emotionally.
Shaurya's birthday celebration by Palki was lovely. Can't believe Shaurya called him a bad omen, if he sees clearly he is the bad omen because Shaurya got him as a father, no one gets parents of their choice and that ways no one gets children also of their choice. No child gets a chance to choose their parents when they aren't even born else Shaurya wouldn't have chosen Raghav, only Preeta. Parents themselves choose to be parents na? Child hasn't said in their dreams they want to born, it's their decision na? Then they birth them later they call them bad omen, if you birthed the child, bear him as well. Preeta saying without him, no function is auspicious? Or inauspicious? Palki saying she will always stand for him was sweet. Why such a short chapter? Perfect pics, waiting for next
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