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Posted: 8 months ago
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Beautiful ending to a wonderful journey ❤️

Just amazing 😍

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thank you very much.can you please write your favourite scenes,favourite character and favourite jodi?


My Favorite Characters Were Shaurya And Palki

And Rajveer Pallavi


My Favorite Scene Was The Ones When Shaurya Saved His Father Raghav


And Rajveer Pallavi 's Valentines Day Dance

And Marriage

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Part 11

Staggering update.... fantastically written

thanks for the pm

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Ties That Bind, Ties That Break Part 1

This SS is loosely based on the Malayalam movie Spadikam which was remade in Telugu as Vajram, Tamil as Veerappu and in Kannada as Mr. Theertha.But this SS is not exactly like the movie.

This is a family story which has very less couple scenes.

Thank you Salley for helping me to find a title for this story.

Thank you very much ShiriHoonMain@ExoticDisaster for the cover page.

A young boy in 20's is punching a boy on the road.All were staring at them.A car stopped there.A middle aged man who was in the car stared at the boy in anger.

He came out of the car and went near them.Seeing him the young man stopped punching the other boy.The other boy just ran away.The middle aged man looked at the boy in disgust.He called the young boy angrily:Shaurya!

Shaurya:Dad!

He was the famous Maths Professor Raghav Jindal.

Raghav:What is thus Shaurya?You have always embarrassed me.Now you are embarrassing me again by fighting like a goon in front of me.

Shaurya became dull.

Shaurya:That boy was disturbing some girls.That's why I punched him.

Raghav:Oh really?Then why no girls are around you?All the girls are after Rajveer because he is a gentleman.But no girl comes near you because you are nothing other than a pure rowdy.You are a goon who is born to shame me.

Shaurya got hurt.

Shaurya:Yes.I am a goon.But I don't fight with innocent people.But I fight for innocent people.I am proud of myself.

Raghav:But you are a shame for your own family.I am glad that you are not my only son.Otherwise I would have died out of shame.

Shaurya's heart got wounded.

His pain turned into his frustration and anger.

He uttered:Monster!

Raghav suppressed his anger as it was a public place.

Raghav walked away and got inside the car.



Raghav Jindal was taking Maths class in his college.

He saw some students talking in his class.

He could not control himself and blasted at them.

Raghav shouted:Get out of my class.

They bent their heads in shame and went out of the classroom.



After some time those students got suspended from the college.Those students looked at Raghav painfully.

One student:Why did you give us such a big punishment for not attending your class properly?Did we do any crime Sir?

Raghav gritted his teeth in anger.

Raghav:Even after getting suspended you guys have no regret.Not listening to my Maths lecture is equal to any crime.I don't need such students in my classroom.Those who cannot do Maths properly do not even deserve to enter the college compound. Be happy that I did not dismiss you from this college.

I am the Vice Principal of this college too.At anytime i can throw you out.Mathematics is life.There is no life without Mathematics.After waking up we look at the clock first. Right?That's the importance of Mathemetics in our life.If one cannot do Maths properly he is a life time loser and a complete waste.So all of you...

Raghav screamed:Get out.



Shaurya went to the Jindal Mansion.

His siblings Kavya and Rajveer hugged them emotionally.

Rajveer:Shaurya!

Raghav:Rajveer.. you have a prestige.Don't ruin it by clinging onto a goon like Shaurya.

Shaurya,Rajveer,Kavya and their mother Preeta became upset.

Preeta:What are you saying Raghav?You are asking your son to stay away from his own brother?

Raghav:It is better not to have a rowdy brother like Shaurya.I am sure that Shaurya is jealous of his brother Rajveer's achievements.

They all became upset again.

Raghav:Shaurya...look at Rajveer.Unlike you,he was excellent in studies.He used to get 100/100 for Maths.See where he is now.He is the CEO of a big company now.But you didn't study when you had to.So you are just a taxi driver and a big zero.You only have a big surname Jindal.

Raghav walked away in irritation.

Rajveer:Shaurya...don't take dad's words seriously.

Shaurya:No Rajveer.Trust me.I am proud of you.I am not at all jealous of you.

Rajveer:I know that.I understand you very well Shaurya.

Kavya smiled.


(The credit for the edit goes to the unknown editor).

Shaurya smiled emotionally.

Kavya:Shaurya..whatever dad says..you are our best brother.

Shaurya:KD...Rajveer...I am happy to get such wonderful siblings.

They smiled.

Preeta smiled emotionally.

Shaurya went near Preeta.

Shaurya:Maa!

Preeta caressed her face and said:Ignore your father's cruel words.

Shaurya:Yes Maa.For me he is only a monster.

Preeta:Don't call your father a monster.

Shaurya:That's impossible Maa.

Preeta became dull.

Preeta:Mohit's family is coming here to fix his and Kavya's marriage officially.

Shaurya smiled at Kavya.

Shaurya:You are lucky to have an engineer as your husband.I could not become an engineer,but just a loser.

Kavya became upset.

Kavya:Don't say like that Shaurya.For us,you are not a loser.

Shaurya smiled emotionally.



Preeta was feeding Shaurya with her hand.

Shaurya:Maa,your cooking is the best.But when you feed me with your hands it tastes better.

Preeta smiled.

Shaurya:But others will tease us if they see a mother feeding her adult son.

Preeta giggled.

Preeta:Let them tease us.But I won't stop feeding my children.

Shaurya smiled.

After she finished feeding him,he laid his head on her lap.She caressed his head.

He remembered Raghav taunting him.

Shaurya:Maa,your lap is the best place for comfort.When I lie on your lap,I get relief.

Preeta smiled.



Rajveer was sitting with his fiancee Pallavi.

Pallavi:Rajveer,you got such a good position.All are praising you.Then why are you still not happy?

Rajveer:I am happy with my career graph.I am happy to get praised by others as my hard work is getting paid off.But I feel sad that dad is always comparing Shaurya with me and taunting him.I never wanted this to happen Pallavi.I love Shaurya.I wish I was a bad student.I wish I was not successful.If so dad would not have behaved like this to Shaurya.

Pallavi:Rajveer,I understand your condition.You feel helpless and depressed to see your dad insulting Shaurya.But have faith in yourself and destiny.Everything will be fine one day.

Rajveer:I don't know whether everything will be fine.But after sharing my pain with you,I feel relieved.

Pallavi smiled slightly.

Rajveer embraced Pallavi emotionally.

Pallavi caressed his back to comfort him.

Shaurya was drinking in the bar with his friend Sandy.The police cops reached there.

The sub Inspector Anuj Rathore said:Shaurya...come with us to the police station.

Shaurya:But what crime did I do to come there?

Anuj:You punched Ravin in a public place.

Shaurya:He deserved it as he was touching girls in public places.So I didn't do anything wrong my laying my hands on him.So I won't come with you.

Anuj:How dare you disobey me?

Anuj pulled his collar.

Shaurya:Leave me Sir.Otherwise I might lose control and end up beating you.It will be a Shane for you to get beaten in a bar.

Anuj suppressed his anger.

Anuj:You will pay for this Shaurya.

Anuj walked away with the other cops.



Shockingly Kavya was caught by Anuj and brought to the police station.

Awesome chapter. It was emotional and interesting. I agree with raghav when he was scolding shaurya as fighting is wrong but shaurya shouldn't call him a monster. But it was too much for raghav to use his position as a VP to suspend students just for talking and saying maths is everything. It's like he is obsessed with maths. Shocking that shaurya didn't study while his siblings are educated and are going to have nice people as their life partner. Shaurya and preeta scene was emotional. It was sweet when she fed him food but when he lay on her lap their conversation was emotional. Raghav suspend students just because they talked in class so I guess I can understand why he hates shaurya but it's affecting their family as even shaurya hates him and calls him monster. Now kavya was taken to police station but even if she returns home safe raghav will blame shaurya but I hope she doesn't get into any trouble.

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

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Ties That Bind, Ties That Break Part 2

Edits credit goes to the unknown editors.

Thank you Salley for blurring the unnecessary areas of the edits on my request.


Raghav reached the police station.Kavya hugged him crying.

Kavya:Dad!

Raghav:Kavya!

Raghav:Sir...what mistake did my innocent daughter do?

Anuj:Sometimes people have to pay for their siblings' crimes too.Shaurya Jindal refused to come here.So to bring him here I had to bring his sister to the police station.

Raghav and Kavya were shocked.

Shaurya reached there.He looked at Kavya.

Shaurya:KD!Are you alright?

Kavya wept:Shaurya,I am alright.

Shaurya stared at Anuj.

Shaurya:You didn't do right sir.You have hurt my sister.

Anuj:It's because of you she had to be here.When you try to mess with me,your sister will suffer.

Shaurya lost his control:What did you say?

Shaurya raised his hand to beat Anuj.

Suddenly Kavya stopped him.

Kavya:No Shaurya.Please don't beat a police officer when they are trying to prove that you are a goon.

Shaurya nodded.

Anuj pushed him inside the lock up.

Kavya became upset.

Kavya:Please don't put my brother in the jail.

Raghav:Kavya..please stop your sentiments.

Raghav told Anuj:Because of this criminal,my innocent daughter had to be in the police station.So let him be in the jail Sir.

Shaurya thought:What else can I expect from my monster dad.

Kavya was shocked:Dad!How can you say this?

Raghav:He deserved it Kavya.You are too innocent to understand it.

Kavya looked at Shaurya painfully.

Shaurya:Don't worry about me KD.I am alright.

Anuj:Prof.Raghav Jindal...you can take your daughter with you now.

Raghav and Shaurya were relieved.

Raghav:Thank you Sir.

Raghav held Kavya's hand and walked out of the police station.Immediately Anuj started beating Shaurya.

Shaurya:I am not beating you back only because my sister asked me not to beat you.So don't think that I am weak.

Anuj smirked.



Kavya told Rajveer:Rajveer...get Shaurya out of the jail fast.

Rajveer:Of course yes Kavya.You don't worry.

Kavya was relieved.



Rajveer released Shaurya from the jail.

Shaurya and Rajveer hugged each other emotionally.

Anuj smirked at Shaurya.

Anuj:Now you know how I am.So don't mess up with me.Understand?

Shaurya kept silent.

Rajveer:Shaurya...let's go.

They both stepped out of the police station.



They reached the compound of the Jindal house.

Shaurya:Rajveer!Maa..?

Rajveer:Don't worry.We have not told anything to Maa.

Shaurya:Good.Maa will be upset if she comes to know that I was arrested by police.



Raghav told the Advocate:I want to make a Will.After our death,all our properties should go to Kavya and Rajveer.

Preeta was shocked.

Preeta:What are you saying Raghav?Then what about Shaurya?

Raghav:I will not give anything to that loser.

Preeta became upset.

Preeta:But he is also our son.

Raghav:He is not less than a goon.I can't consider a goon as my son.

Preeta became upset.

Mohit's family came to the Jindal Mansion and fixed his marriage with Kavya.All were very happy.

Mohit:Kavya..finally we are getting married.

Kavya:Yes Mohit.I can't believe that it's happening soon.

They smiled.Mohit:By the way you are looking very pretty in this attire.

She blushed.

Pallavi and Rajveer smiled looking at Mohit and Kavya.Pallavi:Mohit and Kavya are looking so sweet together.

Rajveer:You are right Pallavi.After all we are their role models.Are we not sweet together like them?

Pallavi smiled.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Preeta smiled looking at Mohit-Kavya and Rajveer-Pallavi.

Preeta told Shaurya:Kavya is going to get settled soon.Rajveer is also committed.Now you should also get married.

Shaurya just smiled.

Shaurya:Maa!

Raghav taunted him:Which parents will give their daughter to a goon?

Preeta became upset.

Shaurya:Actually for the first time my monster dad said something true.No good family will get their daughter married to me. I don't care also.I am happy being single.

Preeta became sad

while Raghav smirked.

Anuj was romancing a lady in the hotel room.Somebody knocked the door.He opened the door.He was shocked to see Shaurya there with a smirk on his face.

Anuj:You?

Shaurya:Yes.I was keeping an eye on you.So I reached here.The so called ideal police officer is with a call girl.Great!

Anuj was embarrassed.

The lady came and stood near her.

Shaurya's best friend Sandy who was behind him started taking their photographs.

Anuj was shocked.

Anuj:Please don't leak the photographs.

Shaurya:I am not that cheap to do that.But promise me that you will not trouble my family anymore like you troubled my sister Kavya.

Anuj:I will not trouble your family.

Shaurya:Okay..good.

Shaurya and Sandy walked away.

Anuj was really angry.

Anuj:I will not leave you Shaurya.



Shaurya went to a hotel room.A girl was standing there.

Shaurya:Why did you call me here Shanaya?

Shanaya:Shaurya,I left my home.I can't stay there anymore.Dad won't allow me to marry Sunny.I love Sunny.I have called Sunny too.We are planning to get married.

Shaurya:Okay...relax.I will conduct your wedding.After all you and Sunny are my good friends.

Shanaya smiled.

Suddenly Anuj landed up there with police constables.

Anuj:We are raiding this hotel.Shaurya...you are arrested along with this girl for immoral traffic.

Shaurya and Shanaya were shocked.

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The chapter was awesome. Glad that kavya is alright. I don't know whom to support when raghav got shaurya arrested because I am not sure at what circumstances shurya threw away his studies to become a Rowdy but anuj is not right to keep kavya to bring shaurya to police Station. I am surprised to see anurag as the police. He is perfect as villain. Perfect pics. Glad that rajveer got shaurya out of prison. It's really sweet that he and kavya always loves shaurya. It was irritating when raghav said who gave their daughter to a rowdy because it spoiled the sweet mother son moment preeta and shaurya was having. Shaurya catching anuj with a call girl was clever but he should made the news public then anuj may have lost his police but now he still has powers and publics made shaurya and his shanya as bad people which was disgusting. I wonder if shanaya is his pair or someone else because she already loves someone else.

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Ties That Bind, Ties That Break Part 3

Shaurya went to a hotel room.A girl was standing there.

Shaurya:Why did you call me here Shanaya?

Shanaya:Shaurya,I left my home.I can't stay there anymore.Dad won't allow me to marry Sunny.I love Sunny.I have called Sunny too.We are planning to get married.

Shaurya:Okay...relax.I will conduct your wedding.After all you and Sunny are my good friends.

Shanaya smiled.

Suddenly Anuj landed up there with police constables.

Anuj:We are raiding this hotel.Shaurya...you are arrested along with this girl for immoral traffic.

Shaurya and Shanaya were shocked.

Shanaya started crying:You are misunderstanding us Sir.We are not like you think.We belong to a decent family.

Anuj smirked:I can understand how decent you are.

Shanaya:Please believe us Sir.

Shaurya:I know that you trapped us purposefully as revenge.But please leave this girl.She is innocent.She is just my friend who loves someone else.Arrest only me.

Anuj:Sorry my boy.It's not possible as you both are found together.

The cops handcuffed them.

Sunny who reached there saw this and became really upset.




Raghav,Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya were shocked to know about Shaurya's arrest.

Preeta:Raghav,please save Shaurya from the prison.

Raghav:No Preeta.The one who is immoral deserves to rot in the jail.

Preeta:How can you be so cruel to your son Raghav?Don't you trust my upbringing?I brought him up.My Shaurya won't be immoral.So even if you can't,I will release him from the jail.

Raghav was irritated:You know Preeta?A few days back also Shaurya was arrested.Kavya suffered because of him.That time Rajveer only got him out of the jail.

Preeta was shocked.

Preeta:What?

Preeta looked at Rajveer and Kavya.

Preeta:What happened actually?Why did Shaurya get arrested before?

Rajveer:Maa,actually Shaurya was trapped.He hit a guy for misbehaving with girls.But Inspector Anuj arrested Shaurya using Kavya.

Rajveer explained everything.

Preeta was shocked.

Kavya:Yes Maa.Shaurya has not done anything wrong.

Raghav:Stop defending Shaurya.Again and again our family is compelled to go to the jail because of Shaurya.I can never forgive him.

Preeta was in tears.




Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya visited Shaurya in the police station.

Shaurya was ashamed to face Preeta.

Shaurya:Maa!Trust me.I did'nt do anything wrong.

Preeta held his hand and said:I know that Shaurya.I know my son.My son can't be bad.

Shaurya became emotional.

Rajveer:Don't worry Shaurya.We will take you out from here.

Kavya:Yes..trust us.

Shaurya:Where is dad?He may have refused to come here because I brought him shame.Right?

They all became dull.

Shaurya:If he feels ashamed I don't mind staying in this jail forever.

Preeta became sad.

Preeta:But he is your father Shaurya.

Shaurya:But has he ever behaved like a father?

They all became upset.

Shaurya:Maa,I am only worried about Shanaya.Because of me only she is in this condition.She loves Sunny.Their relationship should not suffer because of me.

Rajveer:You don't worry about Shanaya and Sunny.Sunny and Shanaya's father released her from the jail.Guess her father accepted Sunny seeing his trust in Shanaya even after the arrest.

Shaurya was relieved.


Preeta and Rajveer bribed Anuj and got Shaurya released from the jail.


Raghav was very angry seeing Shaurya.

Raghav:I don't want an immoral son here.You are a shame to this family.How could you be so cheap Shaurya?

Raghav took his belt and started beating him with it.Preeta started crying.

Preeta:Raghav,please stop it.Please don't beat him.He is innocent.That's why he is out of the jail now.

Raghav:I know that you bribed the inspector to release him from the jail.You are too innocent to believe that Shaurya is innocent.

Preeta was silent.

Raghav stared at Shaurya and said:You know what?I had decided not to give any property to you.You proved again that my decision is correct.

Raghav tried to beat Shaurya again with the belt.Shaurya remembered Raghav beating him with the cane in childhood.

Suddenly Preeta held Raghav's hand.

Preeta:I won't let you beat my son again.If you want to beat him,first beat me Raghav.

Raghav became upset and walked away.

Preeta caressed Shaurya and asked him:Are you alright beta?

Shaurya:Ya.

Preeta:Don't worry.He has stopped beating you.

Shaurya:Whatever it is, monster dad loves you madly.That's why when you told him that he has to beat you first to beat me,he just stopped beating me.

Preeta remained silent.

Preeta took the first aid box and applied ointment on the area where Raghav beat him.



Pallavi told Rajveer:Rajveer,you have succeeded in saving Shaurya from the jail.Then why are you worried?You should be happy now.

Rajveer:I don't know Pallavi.I feel that the Inspector Anuj is targetting Shaurya unnecessarily.

Pallavi:Nothing like that Rajveer.What will he gain out of it?

Rajveer:Maybe I am wrong.But dad is also misunderstanding Shaurya.If his own father misunderstands him,how public will judge Shaurya?

Pallavi held his hand and said:Don't worry Rajveer.Everything will be alright.Time will heal everything as truth will always win.

Rajveer nodded.



Shaurya started drinking thinking how he got arrested along with Shanaya for immoral traffic and how he got beaten by Raghav.

Suddenly Preeta reached there and took the glass from him in frustration.

Preeta:Shaurya,what is this?I know that you drink outside.But now you started drinking at home also?This is what I taught you?

Shaurya:I am sorry Maa.I got arrested for what I have not done...I am losing my control.I can't tolerate.I am a good for nothing goon.But I am not immoral Maa.

Shaurya started crying.Preeta's eyes got filled up with tears.

She hugged him and said:I know the truth.Your family knows the truth.So you don't worry about what society thinks.You have to be strong.

Shaurya:But dad...he does'nt believe that I am innocent na?Because of this incident,he thinks that I am really dirty.

Preeta became upset.

Preeta:You wait patiently beta.One day your dad will understand you.

Shaurya:Dad will never understand me.He hates me since childhood.

Preeta was very upset.

Shaurya:Dad told me that he won't give any property to me.But I am not upset at all Maa.All I want is his love,not his property.

Preeta hugged him painfully.



Sandy was very angry with Anuj.

Sandy:Anuj should not be spared.We should leak his photographs and ruin his image like he spoiled your image in the society.He took advantage of your good heart and insulted you in public.

Shaurya:I don't want to take any revenge now.Because Anuj will be more revengeful and he will trouble us more.And I can't stoop so low to leak such photographs.

Sandy:Anuj knew that whatever he does,you won't defame him.That's why he got the guts to torture you.

Shaurya:I will not leave him simply.I will give him punishment when the right time comes.



Shaurya met Sunny and Shanaya.

Shaurya:Sunny...I was scared whether you will misunderstand me and Shanaya.

Sunny:What are you saying Shaurya?We know each other since childhood.How can I misunderstand you both?

Shaurya became emotional.

Shanaya:Shaurya,stay away from that wicked sub inspector Anuj.He can do anything to torture you.

Shaurya was silent.



Raghav slapped Shaurya.

Raghav:Mohit's family is not interested in their alliance with Kavya.Because her brother is immoral.So they can't trust Kavya.It's all because of you Shaurya.

Shaurya was in tears.

Shaurya:I have not done anything wrong.I swear.I will talk to Mohit and his family.

Kavya:No need Shaurya.I know that you have not done anything wrong.So you don't need to beg anyone to marry me.

Shaurya:But KD...

Suddenly Mohit came there.

They were stunned.

Kavya:You cancelled our wedding.Then why did you come here Mohit?



Glad that sunny trust shanaya and her father also accepted them but sad that raghav continue to misunderstand shaurya. It was really heartbreaking when he beat him wit his beat. Shaurya remembering his suffering from childhood was heartbreaking. Sunny saying he didn't mistrust them was nice. Sandy trying to convince shaurya to leak anuj's pics was shocking. I thought if the pics get leaked he will lose his job but even if he lose his job he will just become more revengeful and try to harm shaurya and his family. Shocking that mohit's family cancelled the wedding because of shaurya shanaya arrest. I guess mohit is there to say he didn't care about anything else and he trust kavya and wants only her but I wish his family also realized their mistake and accept kavya. Shaurya saying he doesn't care for the properties but wish raghav would love him was emotional that I got so angry at raghav for not loving him like his other children.

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Ties That Bind, Ties That Break Part 4

Raghav slapped Shaurya.

Raghav:Mohit's family is not interested in their alliance with Kavya.Because her brother is immoral.So they can't trust Kavya.It's all because of you Shaurya.

Shaurya was in tears.

Shaurya:I have not done anything wrong.I swear.I will talk to Mohit and his family.

Kavya:No need Shaurya.I know that you have not done anything wrong.So you don't need to beg anyone to marry me.

Shaurya:But KD...

Suddenly Mohit came there.

They were stunned.

Kavya:You cancelled our wedding.Then why did you come here Mohit?

Mohit:I am sorry Kavya.Now only I came to know that my parents informed you about cancelling this marriage.

Kavya:I have no problem.I don't want to have any relationship with the person who doesn't trust my brother and me.

Rajveer:Kavya is right.If there is no trust,it's better not to get married.

Mohit looked at Kavya:Who told you that I don't trust Shaurya?I am sure that your brother cannot be immoral.And I trust you more than myself.

Kavya and others were surprised.

Mohit:I came here to tell you that I will marry only you.

Mohit-Kavya shared an emotional eye lock.

Raghav:But your parents....

Mohit:I have convinced them also.I made them understand that Shaurya is out of the jail because his innocence is proved.

Preeta:Yes,my son is innocent.

Raghav stared at Preeta.

Shaurya:We are really grateful to you Mohit.Thank you for your trust in us and loving my sister so dearly.

Mohit:No need of thanking me.Because I love Kavya.

They all smiled.




Preeta brought chocolate for Raghav.

Preeta:Raghav,taste this. It's a yummy chocolate.

Raghav:What happened?Today my wife is in a very romantic mood.

Preeta smiled.

She encircled her arms around his neck.

Preeta:Why?Can't I be romantic with my kadoos husband?

He smiled:Of course yes baby doll.

She smiled.

Preeta:Kavya's marriage did not get cancelled.To celebrate this joy chocolate has been bought.

Raghav:Good.

Preeta fed him a piece of chocolate with her hand.Raghav smiled.

Preeta:Yummy.Right?Shaurya bought this for us.

Raghav's face became dull.

He spat it in the washbasin. Preeta became dull.

Raghav:This chocolate is not fresh Preeta.Just throw it.

Preeta:Your problem is not with the chocolate,but with the person who bought the chocolate.Right?Don't insult your own son like this by spitting like this.

Raghav ignored it with irritation and walked away.



Rajveer waited in front of Pallavi's hospital for her to come.Slowly Pallavi came out.

Rajveer:Dr.Pallavi,finally you came.

Pallavi:Ya.An urgent case was there.That's why I became late.

By the way I am glad that you brought the bike instead of the car to pick me up.

Rajveer:You only told me to bring the bike.But why do you prefer bike to the car?

Pallavi:I will tell you that later.

Rajveer:Okay.Sit behind me.

Pallavi sat behind Rajveer and he started riding.

Pallavi:Ride the bike slowly Rajveer.The traffic is dangerous.

He took a sudden brake in between and Pallavi embraced him from behind for balance.He got goosebumps when she embraced him.

Slowly she removed her hands off him.

Pallavi:Now did you realize why I asked you to bring the bike?If it's a bike,I can hug you whenever I want.If it's a car,it's not that easy to hug you while driving.

Rajveer blushed.

Rajveer:Pallavi,these days you are very naughty.

Pallavi:Is it wrong to get naughty with my fiancee?

Rajveer smiled.

Rajveer:You can get naughty with me whenever you want and I love it.

They smiled at each other romantically.




Shaurya remembered his childhood days.

After the school hours get over, Raghav used to teach Maths to Rajveer,Kavya and Shaurya at home.

Raghav asked some formulas to Shaurya.Shaurya kept quiet while Rajveer said the formulas fast.

Raghav:Look how brilliant Rajveer is at Mathematics. But you can't even say a formula properly.Go and wash Rajveer's clothes.That's your punishment.

Raghav threw Rajveer's clothes including the undergarments at Shaurya's face.

Raghav:Wash them now.

Preeta:Raghav,what are you doing?

Raghav:Preeta,stay away from this.

Preeta:But I am his mother Raghav.

Raghav:This is between a Maths teacher and his student,not between a father and his son.So his mother should not interfere.

Preeta looked at Shaurya washing Rajveer's clothes helplessly.



The next day Raghav asked the same formulas to Shaurya.Shaurya said the wrong answer.Raghav took the cane and started beating him.Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya were crying.

Preeta:Please stop it Raghav.

But Raghav did not listen to Preeta.



Shaurya,Rajveer,Kavya and their neighbour Palki were sitting together.Shaurya was making a small musical instrument with some tools.Finally it became successful and music started playing in it.

Preeta:It is so nice Shaurya.You have immense talent.

Palki:Wah Shaurya!You are great.

Shaurya smiled.

Shaurya and Palki started singing with the instrument.Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya were dancing.

Raghav came there along with Palki's father Ravinder who was the English teacher of Shaurya.The angry Raghav took the musical instrument and threw it.It got destroyed.All became sad.Shaurya started crying.

Ravinder:What did you do Raghav?You should have encouraged Shaurya to make such things.He is do talented.

Raghav:First let him study.Do you know how how marks he scored for Maths?

Ravinder:Shaurya,how much did you score for Maths?

Shaurya:60.

Raghav:Just 60.But Rajveer scored 99.Even an ordinary worker's son in his class got 100/100 for maths.But Shaurya brought shame to a Maths Professor like me by scoring low marks.

Ravinder:So what?Nothing is going to happen if Shaurya doesn't score 100/100 for maths.

Raghav:The world is surviving because of maths.Those who cannot score well for maths is a big zero.

Everyone became dull.



Shaurya made a small machine.Raghav threw it outside making Shaurya upset.



Raghav met Ravinder.

Raghav:Ravinder,I want your help.

Ravinder:What help?

Raghav:Shaurya is getting low marks for all the subjects.

Ravinder:But he is getting pass marks.

Raghav:That's not enough.I want him to be a famous Mathematician like me.For that he should be failed in his 8th grade.You are his class teacher too.You exclude his name in the list of the students who passed the 8th grade.

Ravinder was shocked.

Ravinder:How can I do that when Shaurya is not such a bad student?He passes in all the subjects.

Raghav:Only if he fails he will be determined to work harder and score high marks.



Ravinder purposefully made Shaurya fail in 8th grade.

Shaurya was shocked to see his answer papers where even the correct answers were cut off by the teachers.He approached Ravinder in his house.

Shaurya:I wrote the answers which you taught me Sir.Then why did you cut it and make me fail?

Ravinder could not face him because of guilt.Palki looked at him painfully.

Palki:Shaurya!

Shaurya:Now onwards I won't study anything.

Ravinder and Palki were shocked.

Shaurya walked away.

Ravinder's wife Janki told Ravinder:I was proud to say that I am the wife of an ideal school teacher.But now I am ashamed of you Ravinder.You destroyed a student.How could you?

Ravinder became upset.

The angry Shaurya burnt his school books and tore Raghav's clothes.

Raghav could not control himself.

Raghav:This much arrogant you are?How dare you burn your school books which are Saraswati Devi's assets?You destroyed your father's clothes also?

Shaurya:You are not my father.You are a monster.

Raghav boiled with anger:You talked to your father with disrespect.This much guts you have?

Raghav took the cane and beat him.



The guilty Ravinder resigned his job.

Raghav was shocked.

Raghav:Why did you resign?

Ravinder:I did a big mistake to Shaurya listening to your words.I am ashamed of myself.I can't face myself now.I cannot look at Shaurya's innocent face.So I am leaving this place itself.Remember Raghav.It's all because of you.

Raghav was shocked.



Ravinder left the place with his family.

It was such an emotional chapter. Glad that mohit family also believe shaurya is innocent. Now I understood why shaurya didn't study but raghav is really too much for failing shaurya when he scored 60.. That's not a worst mark. It was good but he was too much that he didn't realize his son's true interest and support him. I guess palki will be his love interest. Ranvider failing shaurya raghav's saying was shocking because of shaurya decided not to study. Surprising that out of guilt ravinder resign and left but still raghav didn't change.

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Ties That Bind, Ties That Break Part 5

Preeta was looking at the rain and weeping.Raghav sat near her.

Raghav:What happened Preeta?Are you still worried about Shaurya?

Preeta:You have never even looked at him with love.That's why I am worried.He is longing for your love.

Raghav:You are too innocent to think that Shaurya is longing for my love.If Shaurya wanted my love,he would not have kept on insulting me.Has he ever respected me?He is always rude to me and backanswers me.Does any other son address his own father as a Monster?He is nothing less than a goon.

Preeta:But you turned him into a rough person.Your behaviour only made him like this.

Raghav:Preeta...I don't want to spoil my mood by talking about Shaurya.Let us stop this.

He walked away.

Preeta became upset.

(Please ignore Shraddha's belly in the pictures).

Ravinder and his daughter Palki reached the Jindal Mansion.All were surprised.

Raghav:You had left this place. I am surprised to see you back.

Ravinder:Destiny brought me back to this place.

Preeta:Is this Palki?

Preeta caressed Palki's face and said:She has grown up into a beautiful woman.

Palki smiled.

Ravinder:My daughter Palki has joined Raghav's college as the lecturer.

Raghav:Yes..right.I had taken her interview.She is brilliant.

All were surprised.

Palki:Raghav uncle...Preeta aunty...I need your blessings to start my career as a teacher.

They smiled.

Palki touched their feet.They blessed her.

Raghav and Preeta hugged Palki.

Kavya:We are so happy to see you again Palki.

Palki smiled.

Palki:You are Kavya.Right?

Kavya nodded.

Rajveer:And I am Rajveer.

Palki smiled.

Kavya,Rajveer and Palki hugged each other.

Raghav:Kavya got first rank in B.SC Maths.Her photograph was there in the news paper.Rajveer is an engineer.He is a gold medalist.

Ravinder:What about Shaurya?

Raghav became dull.

Raghav:Since he disobeyed me and did'nt study, he became only a taxi driver.

Ravinder:That is not a bad job Raghav.

Raghav became dull.

Raghav:Anyways I don’t even consider him as my son.So what he does doesn't matter to me.

Ravinder and Palki became upset.

Preeta tried to change the topic.

Preeta:Ravinderji...Palki...you both came here after a long time.So please have lunch here.

They smiled.

Palki's eyes searched for Shaurya.

Palki:Where us Shaurya?

Raghav:He comes and goes whenever he feels like.So we don't know where he is.

Everyone became dull hearing how Raghav talks about Shaurya.

They heard some footsteps.

Kavya:Guess Shaurya has come.

Palki:I will go there and see him.I want to surprise him.

The all except Raghav smiled.

Palki went to the verandah and sat down leisurely blocking Shaurya's way.

He thought?Who is she?Why is she lying here?

Shaurya stared at her.

Shaurya asked in a rough tone:Who are you?

Palki:So you forgot me.

Shaurya:Why should I forget you when I don't even know you?

Palki:Look at me carefully.You don't recognize me at all?

He looked at her face.

Palki:Your childhood friend Palki.

Shaurya was surprised.



Flash back....

When Shaurya was busy making the machine,Palki went and gave him juice.

Palki:Drink this juice Shaurya.You are tired.

He smiled and took the juice from her.

Shaurya:Thank you Palki.

Palki:There is no 'thank you' in friendship.

They smiled at each other.



Present...

Though Shaurya was happy to see Palki,his ego did not allow him to express his happiness.

Palki:Hi Shaurya....

Shaurya said with attitude:Hi!

Palki:Won't you talk to me?We met after a long time.

Shaurya:I have nothing to talk to you.I am not that childish stupid Shaurya now.

He walked to his room.Palki became upset.



Rajveer met Pallavi and told her:Guess what surprise we got Pallavi?Palki has come back.She joined dad's college as a lecturer.

Pallavi:Palki?Your old neighbour who was Shaurya's best friend in childhood?

Rajveer:Yes.Exactly.I hope Shaurya and Palki will become best friends like before.Shaurya needs someone like her as a friend to heal his wounds.

Pallavi:Maybe that's why God sent Palki back to his life.She may fill his life with happiness.

Rajveer:I also hope so.

They smiled.

Rajveer:Palki can bring back smile on Shaurya's face.

Pallavi:You can also bring back smile and laughter on Shaurya's face by dressing up as a clown.

They both laughed.

Palki went to the taxi stand.She was surprised to see Shaurya's taxi.She was stunned to see the words written on the car-The goon's taxi.

Shaurya was stunned to see Palki near his car.

Palki:Chee...what have you written on the car?The goon?Remove it.

Shaurya:Why should I remove it?I am a goon.Even my father calls me a goon.

Palki:But you are not any goon,but Shaurya.So wipe it off.

Shaurya:Who are you to order me?

Palki:Teacher. I have joined Raghav uncle's college.

Shaurya was surprised.

Shaurya:Your father taught me in the school and made me fail in the exam purposefully. Now you also don't try that with me.

Palki became dull.

Shaurya:Just move away.

Palki:Won't you drop me to my college?

Shaurya:Okay.Get inside.

By smiling she got inside the taxi and sat in the front.

Shaurya:Why have you sat in the front.In the taxi everyone sits back.Only the driver sits in the front.

Palki:But you are not a taxi driver for me.You are my dearest friend.

They shared an eye lock.

Shaurya:Nonsense!

He started driving the car.Shaurya was silent though Palki tried to talk.

He dropped her to her college.

Shaurya:We have reached your college.Now get down.

Palki:Why didn't you talk to me through out our journey?

Shaurya:I told you that I have nothing to talk to you.Give me the taxi charge and leave.

Palki became dull.She gave him the money and immediately he left from there in his taxi.

Palki was gloomy.

Palki:He did not even say bye-bye to me.


Raghav have a big ego because of which he already spoiled shaurya's future but preeta is the one suffering the most because she can't be fully happy for her other kids when her one son is not happy and she is always worried about her son but raghav care less. Nice to see palki back and as a teacher. Her trying to gain shaurya's again was painful when shaurya actually wants to talk to her but his attitude is stopping him and he is being rude to her. Poor palki is upset after he went without saying bye. I hope like rajveer said palki can bring smile to shaurya.

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Ties That Bind, Ties That Break Part 6

Shaurya was drinking.Suddenly somebody snatched the alcohol bottle from his hand.It was Palki.Shaurya was shocked.

Shaurya:Why are you in the bar?This place is not good for the girls.So get lost.

Palki:I think you care for me.That's why you don't want me here.But the way you asked me to leave was too rude.You asked me to get lost.So rude.

Shaurya:Shut up and leave.

Palki:I will not shut up.

The angry Shaurya pinned her towards the wall and closed her mouth with his palm.

Shaurya:I told you to shut up and leave.

Palki pushed him.

Palki:I will leave.But you should come with me.This place is not good for boys also.Drinking is not good.

Shaurya:I told you not to order me.

Palki:You also don't order me.I will stay here itself and I will not let you drink.

Shaurya:I paid money for this bottle.I will drink it.Stay away from me.

Palki:I will not let you drink.

Shaurya:Oh really?Let me see how you will stop me from drinking this.

Palki smirked and took the bottle.Then she drank the whole bottle.Shaurya was shocked.

Shaurya:What did you do?The one who is against drinking drank the whole bottle?

Palki:I can do anything to stop you from drinking.

They shared an eye lock.

Shaurya:Since you got drunk I will drop you home.I can't send you alone in this condition.

Palki smiled:So you care for me.Without drinking you are going to accompany me.I am happy.

Shaurya was silent.

They both started walking to the exit.The intoxicated Palki did not have balance while walking.So she slipped.Shaurya held her preventing her from falling down.They shared an eye lock.

Shaurya:You can't even walk properly.Stupid girl!Who asked you to drink this much if you can't handle yourself.

Palki pouted.Shaurya held her hand and walked.

By mistake Shaurya stepped his foot on her dupatta on the floor.

Palki:Shaurya!

She picked up the dupatta and showed him.It was torn.

Palki:You tore my dupatta Shaurya.

Shaurya:I did'nt do it purposefully Palki.

Palki:But you tore it.

Palki started crying like a small child.

Shaurya:Oh no...this girl has become mad.

Shaurya:I said 'sorry'.Then why are you crying?Please stop crying.

Palki stopped crying.Shaurya was relieved.

Shaurya:Come with me to the car.

He held her hand and started walking.

While walking,Palki started smiling and started singing.

Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

Shaurya was shocked.

Shaurya:Stop singing here Palki.Are you mad?

Without listening to him,she started singing cutely.Shaurya was going crazy.

Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

Palki started dancing.

Mausam Ye Be-Imaan
Masti Ka Ye Saman
Roko O Logon Zameen Pe
Girne Laga Aasmaan
Thumak Thumak Ke Jhuloongi
Main Udke Gagan Ko Chhuloongi
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

Shaurya went near her to stop her from dancing.

Shaurya:This is a public place.Stop dancing.The people will think that you are mad.

Suddenly Palki held his hand romantically and started dancing.Their close proximity started affecting him.

Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na




Thandi Thandi Pavan
Jalta Hai Ye Badan
Jee Chahta Hai Bana Loon
Tujhko Apna Sajan
Hua Nahin Ye Pehle Kabhi
Meri Jaan Badal Gayi Abhi Abhi
Main Chali
Banke Hawa
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha



He thought:What is happening to me?

Shaurya carried Palki forcefully to the car and started driving.Inside the car also Palki was singing which annoyed Shaurya.

Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na

Jaati Hai Tu Kahan
Jaaneman Jaanejaan
Ladki Hai Tu Khoobsurat
Ladka Main Naujawaan
Tujhe Gale Laga Loon Aa
Palkhon Mein Bitha Loon Aa
Ho Gaya
Mujhe Nasha
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

Shaurya dropped her home.After reaching home also Palki was singing.

Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
Ho Gaya
Mujhe Nasha
Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha(DDLJ)

Ravinder and Janki were stunned.

Janki:Palki beta...why are you behaving like this?

Ravinder:What happened Palki?

Shaurya:She just had liquor to give me company.

Ravinder and Janki were shocked.

Shaurya:Tell your daughter not to interfere in my life.I will drink whenever I want and do whatever I want.

Ravinder and Janki were upset and remained silent.

Slowly Ravinder broke his silence looking at Shaurya:When you were in school,I did a big mistake to you.Actually it was a sin which shattered your life.After that I left that school.But my guilt did'nt reduce.Only if you forgive me,I will be guilt free.

Shaurya:I forgave you Sir.

Ravinder smiled.

Shaurya:But will I get my childhood back?Will I get my life back?

Ravinder became upset.

Shaurya:But don't worry.I am happy in my present life.

He walked to his car and drove away.

Ravinder:Poor boy.He is making himself believe that he is happy in his life as a revenge to the ones who wronged him.



Shaurya went to attend Sunny and Shanaya's engagement party.

There Shaurya was surprised to see Palki.He was mesmerized by her beauty.

Shaurya:You guys invited Palki also?

Shanaya:Ya..she was our school mate na.

Palki went near him.

Palki:How do I look Shaurya?

Shaurya:Horrible!

Palki got irritated:How mean!Can't you say anything positive?

Shaurya:Don't expect anything positive from me.

Palki:You are really a kadoos.

Shaurya:I am a goon like my father says.Because I am the son of a monster.

Palki became dull.

Palki:Guess the angry young man does not have any mood to smile.Let me make you smile.

Shaurya:Impossible.

Palki:Let me try.

She cracked some jokes.They both burst into laughter.

Palki:I won the challenge.I made you laugh.

Shaurya smiled.

Palki's hair curls started falling on her face.He touched her hair curls and removed them from her face.

She was smiling at him.

Palki:Shall we take some photographs together?

Shaurya:Okay.

They posed for photographs.

Sunny and Shanaya exchanged rings.



Shaurya reached home.Preeta hugged him saying:Happy birthday Shaurya...

Shaurya:Thank you Maa.

Rajveer-Kavya:Happy birthday Shaurya.

Shaurya:Thank you all.Where is dad?

They became dull.

Shaurya:As usual he did not even bother to wish me.

Preeta:Beta...don't bother about dad's absence.

Shaurya:It's okay Maa.I am used to it.I don't care whether that monster is here or not.

Preeta felt sad for Shaurya.She remembered her conversation with Raghav.



Flash back...

Preeta:Raghav,why are you not wishing Shaurya on his birthdays?Bechara is so sad.He is longed to get wished by you.

Raghav:First of all he is not a bechara.He is someone who disobeyed and disrespected his own father.If he ever becomes successful in his career I will wish him.But I know that he will never be successful in his life.
Preeta became upset.

Preeta:Not everyone can be successful in their career.But that does not mean that they should be denied parental love.

Raghav:But some people do not deserve parental love.

She became upset.



Present...

Preeta:Don't mind it Shaurya.We can celebrate it.

Rajveer:Yes Shaurya.We can celebrate it nicely.

Kavya:Pallavi and Maa have baked a cake.I made kheer.Rajveer arranged lunch.

Shaurya:I am lucky to have such a sweet mother and siblings.

They all hugged together.


Rajveer and Pallavi brought the cake singing:Happy birthday Shaurya.

Shaurya smiled.

Rajveer:Let's rock Shaurya.

Shaurya smiled:Ya.

Rajveer:Now cut the cake Shaurya.

Shaurya cut the cake and fed it to everyone.

Kavya fed him his favourite Kheer.Preeta served him food

and fed it to him with her own hands.Shaurya became emotional.


After the celebration Shaurya got a message from Palki.

"Shaurya,please come here.It's urgent".

She sent him the address too.

Shaurya was stunned:Is Palki in danger?

Palki drinking the whole bottle to stop shaurya from drinking was surprising. They ride back home was funny when palki started singing. Shaurya getting surprised seeing palki in sunnu sanaya engagement was nice. Loved how she made him laugh and they clicked pics together. It was emotional when raghav said shaurya don't deserve parental love. I wonder how he will realize he is wrong and shaurya has his own talent. Shaurya's mom and siblings making his birthday special was sweet. I guess palki is calling him to threw a surprise party for his birthday.

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