FF-(PH)-Dil par likdo Mera naam/NOTE pg33(JUNE6th)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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<FONT color=#009933>DEDICATED TO-My Besssttestt Friend <FONT color=#ff0066>Balpreet</FONT>...(the pics r for u)...šŸ¤—lub u....and also dedicated to...Preeti...</FONT>


<FONT color=#cc0099>Hey...This is my first FF, on KDMHMD...So enjoy...</FONT>


Characrter list-</FONT>


<FONT size=4>Heer-Daughter of Teji, and Balraj'Lived in Punjab.</FONT>


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<FONT size=4>Meher-Sister of Heer</FONT>


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<FONT size=4>Balraj-Father of Meher, and Heer</FONT>


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<FONT size=4>Teji-Wife of Balraj, and mother to Meher, Heer</FONT>


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<FONT size=4>Prem-One of three sons of Lalit Juneja'They live in Mumbai</FONT>


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<FONT size=4>Preet, Harman- are brothers of Prem(step)</FONT>


<FONT size=4>Preet Harman</FONT>


<FONT size=4>Veena-Step sister of Prem</FONT>


<FONT size=4>Kulraj-Married to Kiran, not too important in this FF'Real sister to Prem</FONT>


<FONT size=4>Gayatri-Step mother to Prem and Kulraj-Loving and affectionate toward all kids</FONT>


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<FONT size=4>Lalit Juneja-Father of All'Rich business man, emotional and loving</FONT>


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<FONT size=4>Now for Part 1</FONT>


<FONT size=4> The Maan's house was brightly illuminated with tons of lights, and was bustling with tons of people. And why shouldn't it have been, today was the wedding of Balraj's oldest daughter Heer Maan. Heer had always believed in love, ever since she had witnessed it in her childhood, Meet and Mahi. Mahi had ran away with her love going against her entire family. Heer remembered this very well, since it was her birthday and her first account of true love. Heer remembered how Mahi had burned the barn, just to be with her love, Heer also remembered what Mahi had told her 'Heer, pyarr se badkar koi ahasass nahi hota. Pyarr main sab sahi, aur sab sacha lag tha hai. Jab tujhe pyarr hoga na, tab shayad tujhe samajma ayyega ki maine assa kyun kiya.' But even though Heer believed all this, she knew her father was always right, and if her father had choose Manmeet as her life partner, than Manmeet it was'</FONT>


<FONT size=4> When Heer was first born, her parents had arranged her marriage with Manmeet. And ever since then Manmeet was her jeevan sathi'And today June 1st was her wedding. A couple of days ago a panjitji had come, and read Heer's kundili. He said that 'June 1st ko Heer ki zindagi badal jayegi' Heer's parents, both Balraj and Teji were ecstatic to hear that. All they wanted was for their children to be happy. </FONT>


<FONT size=4> But little did they know, that Heer was anything but happy. She couldn't explain it but she wasn't as happy as a dulhan should have been'She was on the terrace of her house, looking over toward the backyard of her house, looking up into the sky seeing the moon and stars shine. 'Patha nahi main kush kyun nahi hoon, jab ke main bachpan main janthi thi ki mere shaddi Manmeet ke saath hone hai'Mann ajj na jane kun bechain hai, assa lagtha hai kuch bouth acha hone wala hai'Shayad Panditji sahi the, ki aaj mere zindagi badal jaye gi'Liken mere sapne ka kya'? Main ek doctor ban na chathi thi'Mummyji, aur Daddyji neh ithne paise waste kiye mujhe college bejne ke liye'</FONT>


<FONT size=4>Heer held her masters degree out and threw it in the air'and watched it fly by'</FONT>


<FONT size=4>'Didi, app yahan!Jaldi neche chalo barath anne wali hai..'Meher said, all excited</FONT>


<FONT size=4>'aye' Heer replied </FONT>


<FONT size=4>Soon enough after Heer let go of her dreams, she was taken downstairs'Only to be horrified at what she saw'</FONT>


<FONT size=4>A crowd of people, surrounding something'All she could really see was everyones sad, shocked face'Meher on the floor crying'What was going on she wondered? Heer glanced over at her dad, his eyes were numb, and he looked like someone slapped him across the face'Teji shortly let go of Heer's hand, and walked over to the center'But seeing what was there made her mother fall to the ground crying'Something was defiantly wrong Heer thought, when a women came up to her and said 'How sad, kitni jawan thi humhari Heer, aur usske saath ithna bura' '</FONT>


<FONT size=4>Okay, so how was that!!I hope wasn't too boring'Please do comment..becasue I'm not going to continue if I think no one's reading it!!</FONT>


<FONT size=4>-Nikita Khandelwal</FONT>

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salma_786786 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey Nikita..... this sounds really interesting....it grabbed my attention šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Manmeet and Heer's wedding fixed since childhood now this is new..... i guessing that Manmeet died!!!! 😃

would love to read more šŸ˜‰
Edited by salma_786786 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
really interesting FF,
seeing everyone shocked and sad faces,
I hope Manmeet is dead, plz plz
(LOL i am sooooo bad 😔 šŸ˜› )
anyways
very interesting FF
plz continue Fast
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great job very intresting cnt wait for the next prt
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow bery nice and interesting introšŸ‘..
And Niki (I hope u dont mind me calling u that) ..Firstly welcome to the kdmhmd forum!😃
And the title of ur ff is weally nice and the story gripped my attention..
Aww Heer wants to be a doc.. And ya I m guessing Manmeet ko kuch hua hai.. As HC_ROX(sowwie dunno ur name) said.. I feel so bad.. but interesting bery interesting...
Looking forward to ur next update!
Edited by -Faith- - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow, really interesting šŸ‘ Love the story so far 😳 I'm guessing Manmeet is dead (I hope he is) šŸ˜† Do continue soon, looking forward to your next update 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok..so manmeeth is dead. FINALLY !..

It's not happening in the serial..yahan FF mein he hojaye !! šŸ˜†

Aur plz Nikita..yeh track toh please maat lana ke Manmeeth mar gaya aur since Heer ki shaadi ussey bachpan mein fix hogayee thee toh aab woh widow hogayee hai !

Please...this is one reason that really puts me off !..
I hate it even when it happens in serials.

So please that track is a big NO !...PLEASE !

Over-all a good start. Keep continuing.

Thanx for letting me know abt this FF and pm me when you update it.

PLEASE..PLEASE..PLEASE DON'T INCLUDE THAT TRACK OF HEER BEING A WIDOW !
It's an earnest request !! 😳
Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW!!!

very very BERY interesting concept!!
i think it willl be ve very interesting...
well...they are not married yet so she cant be widow naa? šŸ˜•
love how u described the emotions....a true BT serial šŸ˜†
do contine.....

shabz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I love the beginning and so glad Manmeet is dead too!! šŸ˜† šŸ˜†...nice FF...can't wait for the rest!! 😃 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this is really nice..i like it its..different point of view.. i would love to c more of this,.... šŸ‘

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