Humari Adhuri Kahani - RuNak OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: Manoshono

Message me your links so I don’t lose them. 😄

I have PM you as well. 😜

Sorry sorry. I noticed but haven't gotten to it. I Usually put-up important topics in my wall so you can view them anytime.

Ufff.....

Painful yet so beautiful........how did you write soo beautifully!! I mean it progressed so organically and naturally with just a correct flow .. nothing seems out of place or rushed...

Their conversation had an arc...began with a Normal tone, kept going up and up.with Ani being more and more vulnerable before jhanak.then reached a crescendo...then again gradually came down when Jhanak put ani to sleep..then again it started going up with Jhanak's word... attained the final climax point & then baam...... finish..

Everything is over...she is gone....

It is like watching a movie in the form of OS..I was transported to that world.. could see everything happening in front of my eyes...compelling....and emotional...you are really good at expressing emotions..

Magical....

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Ufff.....

Painful yet so beautiful........how did you write soo beautifully!! I mean it progressed so organically and naturally with just a correct flow .. nothing seems out of place or rushed...

Their conversation had an arc...began with a Normal tone, kept going up and up.with Ani being more and more vulnerable before jhanak.then reached a crescendo...then again gradually came down when Jhanak put ani to sleep..then again it started going up with Jhanak's word... attained the final climax point & then baam...... finish..

Everything is over...she is gone....

It is like watching a movie in the form of OS..I was transported to that world.. could see everything happening in front of my eyes...compelling....and emotional...you are really good at expressing emotions..

Magical....

Thank you! Glad to see you liked it!!