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Posted: 2 years ago
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read 10 parts...jaldi jaldi inki shadi karwaosmiley42

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Waah waah...

It hurts to even read about such broken state of Neil...smiley19...

At least this YUkti cares about his feelings ,his pain & understands them....

Proposal set up...soft music... YUvika/YUkti in a attractive outfit.... Hayeesmiley42


Waiting for the next part...fir kab dance karaegi unhe...??smiley37

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Waah waah...

It hurts to even read about such broken state of Neil...smiley19...

At least this YUkti cares about his feelings ,his pain & understands them....

Proposal set up...soft music... YUvika/YUkti in a attractive outfit.... Hayeesmiley42


Waiting for the next part...fir kab dance karaegi unhe...??smiley37 shadi main karenge smiley37

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Writer ji bohot wait karwaya hain apne iss part k pehele apke exams k liye aab update chaiye apun ko jaldi jaldi smiley37

Aur chance mile toh aur ek dance ghusa Dena asmita di khush ho jayengi smiley1

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Spandan24

Writer ji bohot wait karwaya hain apne iss part k pehele apke exams k liye aab update chaiye apun ko jaldi jaldi smiley37

Aur chance mile toh aur ek dance ghusa Dena asmita din khush ho jayengi smiley1

Hayee.....meri Khushi ki kitni chinta hai tujhe...... main Dhanya Hun...smiley31smiley37

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hayee.....meri Khushi ki kitni chinta hai tujhe...... main Dhanya Hun...smiley31smiley37

ee maine pehle bhi pucha tha dance dene k liye because of aap smiley37
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part 13


Yuvika chants to herself that today she has to act like Yukti Multani who is stubborn & possessive......who can go any length to prove her madness. "Ms.Multani....aap mujhse milna chahti thi....phir yeh sab kya hai?!", exclaims Neil. Yuvika takes a deep breath & says "Main tumse milna chahti thi kyunki kuch baatein hoti hai jo sirf do log kar sakte hai". Neil furrows his eyebrows & says "Kaisi baat?!.....isse pehle aap kuch bole main apko sorry bolna chahta hun". Yuvika comes near him swiftly & softly says "May I know that tum sorry kyu bol rahe ho?". "Kal raat jo kuch bhi hua dance ke samay woh nahi hona chahiye tha. Aapko male attention ke adat hogi aur uske related stuffs bhi par main waisa ladka nahi hun", says Neil directly looking at her. Yuvika chuckles & says "Aur tumhara yahi baat mujhe accha lagta hai......maybe that's why I like your attitude". "Can you stop flirting?!. Aapko shayad loyal rehna pasand nahi hoga par mujhe hai", says Neil. "Ek murde ke liye itne loyalty?!....such a shame", says Yuvika deliberately to press a wrong nerve.






"Excuse me?!", exclaims Neil feeling angry. "Excused", replies Yuvika. "Main apse-", Neil gets cut off as suddenly Yukti aka Yuvika bends down infront of him. "Neil Bhardwaj, I don't know how but main tumse pyaar karne lagi hun aur yeh Yukti apne pyaar se disloyalty kabhi nahi dikhaygi. So will you marry me?", says Yukti aka Yuvika making Neil dumbfounded. "Main apse shaadi nahi kar sakta", says Neil although he is feeling nervous. Yuvika gets up & angrily says "How dare you to reject me" which makes Neil look at her with widen eyes. Then Yuvika's expression gets soft & obsessively says while touching Neil's face "Kya kami hai mujhme?!......I know tum Yuvika se pyaar karte ho but you need to move on. Look at me.....even main bhi uss Yuvika ke tarah dikhti hun then what's the problem?!....oh....I guess I should change my appearance right?!.....tab toh tum mujhse shaadi karoge right?". Neil understands that Yukti has become deranged woman now. On the other hand, Yuvika knew that she is successful pretending that she's madly in love with him. "Ms. Multani....get a grip. Leave me. Main nahi kar sakta aapse shaadi", exclaims Neil while freeing himself from her. Neil starts going from there when Yuvika says "Tumhare dad aaj orphanage gaye hain right?". Neil stops hearing her.






He turns towards her & asks "Ha....par aap kyu puch rahi hai?!.....listen....mere papa ko impress karke mere paas aane ke koshish bhi maat karna". Yuvika tsks & says "Darling....main itna bhi downmarket wali harkaate nahi karti.....yeh logo ko impress karke apne taraf karna isn't my forte....jo mujhe chahiye woh main apne tarike se hasil kar leti hun......you know I wanted things to occur slowly as per your convenience par tumne mujhe majboor kiya to take a wrong route". "Kya matlab?!", asks Neil. "Main soch rahi hoon jis orphanage main tumhare dad abhi hai waha pe aag lag jaaye toh kya hoga?!.....ya phir kisi bhi tarah unke accident ho jaaye toh kya hoga?!", says Yuvika dramatically making Neil look at her with widen eyes. "Don't you dare-", Neil gets cut off by Yuvika saying "Ya phir woh Yuvika ke behen jo aaj club jayegi usse kisi anjan admi ke saath ek kamre main bandh kardu aur phir kal har jagah baas usko lekar breaking news aayegi". "Mujhe jhute dhamki dene ke koshish bhi maat karna", Neil yells at her angrily. "Darling.....main kabhi jhoote dhamki nahi deti hun....well fhilhaal tumhare paas sirf do option hai.....ek ya toh apne dad aur uss Yuvika ke behen dono ko bachao......ya phir mere proposal ko accept karo. Choice is yours.....tumhara time abhi se shuru hota hai.....well tumhare paas baas aaj raat taak time hai kyunki patience mujhme hai nahi", says Yuvika smiling at him. "You're mad", says Neil angrily. "I know.....but abhi taak tumne mere pagalpan dekha nahi", says Yuvika smoothly.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Please update next part of your story eagerly waiting

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part 14




Neil starts driving rashly. He calls Vidhur but Vidhur doesn't picks up the phone. "Yeh papa bhi na sahi time pe phone nahi uthate hain",curses Neil. Meanwhile Yuvika tells her minion to keep eyes on that orphanage. The plan is very simple.....a burning paper will make fire alarm ring loudly as soon as Neil reaches there. He will be successful by saving Vidhur but he can't warn Isha. Isha is in unconscious state that too from morning in Yuvika's radar according to Yuvika's plan. Isha's phone will be switched off so that Neil gets panicked. In a way, nothing will happen to Isha & Vidhur but plan will be successful.






Neil reaches there soon & according to plan, a man in disguise holds a burning paper infront of fire alarm. Fire alarm starts ringing & everyone starts panicking. Neil also hears the fire alarm from outside & gets paranoid. Children of orphanage starts coming out while shouting. Neil trying to go inside but fails. Vidhur comes out hastily & also helps children to go out. When Neil sees Vidhur, he hugs him tightly. Neil feels peace while Vidhur just gets dumbfounded. "Betu....tum yaha kab aaye?....aur main thik hun.....tum chinta maat karo", saying this Vidhur starts pating Neil's back. "Papa,Maine apko kitne baar call kiya!....aap mera phone uthaya kyu nahi!?", exclaims Neil while breaking the hug. "Accha thik hai. Agli baar dhyaan rakhunga", says Vidhur. Neil gets a call & picks up the phone without seeing the caller name.









"Hello"says Neil. "Darling....trailer kaisa tha?.....accha laga?", hearing that Neil checks the caller name & curses himself. Neil makes Vidhur sit in a car & tells him he'll attend a important call. "Just shut up. Tumhari tarah patthar dil wale insaan nahi dekha life main", exclaims Neil angrily over phone. "See darling, main patthar dil wali nahi hun.....koi apne hone wale sasurji ke saath aisa thodi na karte hai.....maine toh baas fire alarm bajaya hai....aag thodi na lagaya", says Yuvika making Neil realize the matter. "Par darling, Isha related baat bohot serious hai kyunki I know woh bhi tumhe pyaar karti jo mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai. So isse lightly maat lo. Baki baatein sham ko karungi. Fhilhaal bohot bu-", Neil hungs up the phone. He just don't want to listen any crap now. He hurriedly starts driving towards Mahajan Mansion. He needs to warn Isha.







Soon he goes to meet Arjun & inquires about Isha. In which Arjun replies that Isha left early today that too in morning. Evening is very near. Neil gets frustrated that he doesn't even know where Isha went. Neil knows that if gets fail to save Isha then he have to marry Ms. Multani because that deranged woman can go any length now. He doesn't want to take risk. He reluctantly calls Yukti Multani & tells "Main apse shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hun".

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Posted: 2 years ago
#50

Oops...this YUkti Multani is dark....I must say...

"Saam daam dand bhed" to get married to Neil.... acting deranged...

Waah Neil agreed to marry YUkti...

Very good...

Abb I am waiting for the next chapter...smiley27

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