RuNak - SS - Entangled Updated chapter 6- Pg 8 May 20 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Artemis7

This is the Aniruddh we need, the one with a clear conscience and level headed, the one who does not lie through his teeth

Had fun reading Ani and Jhanak go back and forth in the crowd, as well as in the room

Thanks for liking the banter

Originally posted by: Anusha16

I know right? Anu ji, how do you write their banter? I struggle so hard to do justice to their bickering lol. It just doesn't come naturally to me. Seriously. Please give me tips.

You won’t believe I had written one whole story dedicated to banter and named it - Humari Shadi- Tu Tu main main

Originally posted by: Paulaonohi

Whatttt??? Wowwwww. I was just screaming reading this. How nice if Ani had done this!! Please continue

Finally got down to reading this part!! I LOVE your Ani! I was literally cheering for him!

Loved how he stood up for Jhanak and shut his family members, but this silly girl will still fight him!

Loved the progression in your story - eager to read more as the story unfolds!

Well written!

Chapter 1

Firstly I don't know the show neither the characters

but reading this 1st chapter

makes me captivated now as to what will happen with

Jhanak

will read the other chapters later today

Originally posted by: Mridzy

Finally got down to reading this part!! I LOVE your Ani! I was literally cheering for him!

Loved how he stood up for Jhanak and shut his family members, but this silly girl will still fight him!

Loved the progression in your story - eager to read more as the story unfolds!

Well written!

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 1

Firstly I don't know the show neither the characters

but reading this 1st chapter

makes me captivated now as to what will happen with

Jhanak

will read the other chapters later today

Hope I am able to keep you connected with the flow of the story and make you correlate with all the characters even if you have not watched the show.. first time writing something other than Maaneet is a challenge for me as well

Chapter 2

Interesting Chapter

Anirudh seems like a gentleman one with culture

and filled with essence

though he cannot do a fake marriage , as marriage is important

but Jhanak knowing that he has always dreamt about marrying Arshi

wants to stop him

I like that the marriage ceremony happened

but it seems like Tejas is a dangerous man and wants to do something to Anirudh

Chapter 3

Curious Chapter

I'm really liking Ani and his morals

though he has been in love with Arshi but now his responsibility is his new

wife .

on the other hand Jhanak wants the marriage dissolved and Ani keeps on reminding her

about Tejas who will never leave her alone

at Ani's home everyone seems worried about him and is curious about his connection

with Jhanak

Originally posted by: tellyme

Anushaji.. I love banters between couples.. maybe twisted brain of mine…

You won’t believe I had written one whole story dedicated to banter and named it - Humari Shadi- Tu Tu main main

Please send me the link to that, I would love to read it!