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Posted: 1 years ago
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Wow lovely Please update next part

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Part 3


At night

Neil's pov

Me and Yuvika were sitting in balcony of my home, gazing at the moon with a cup of tea in our hands. Soft moonlight was falling on her face. She was adoring the moon and I was adoring her.


She looked at me and said "Neil tumne hamesha mera saath diya h, tum hamesha mere saath the.... " I cutted her between saying "Aur aage bhi saath rahunga" she smiled.

"Mai bahut lucky hu jo tumhare jaise friend mila h mujhe" she said to which I gave her a smile.

"Friend?! Huh" I thought to myself.

There was a complete silence for a while.


Then something clicked in her mind, she stood up and said "Ek baat bolu?!"

"Haan"

"Vo...tum na uss Miraya se door raho"

"Kyu?!"

"Kyuki mujhe nhi pasand ki tum-" she stopped, realising what she was going to say.

"Ki mai?"

"Vo.. "

"Ki mai uske paas rahu, usse baat karu?!" I asked.

"Nhi, tumhari marzi tum jisse chahe usse baat kar sakte ho mujhe kya farq padta h" she said.

"Jhoot"

"Nhi"


So someone is being jealous. Seeing me with Miraya is affecting her. But why? I knew the answer but I wanted to hear it from her mouth.


Yuvika's pov

"Shit! what was the need to say this Yuvika" I cursed myself.


Before I could speak anything he pulled me close to him. My hands were on his chest and his were around my waist.


"Mera usse baat karna tumhe affect kyu kar rha h? " he asked getting more closer. We were so close that I could feel his breath on my face. I pushed him and moved backward.

"Woh.... Woh... " I said taking a step backward.

"Woh kya? " he said moving a step towards me.

"Bolo" he said taking one more step forward.


Soon I realized there was no space behind me as the wall hit my back. He pinned me to the wall, caging me between his arms and the wall, preventing me from going anywhere.


"Kya farq padta h tumhe? " he said making me more nervous.

"Farq padta h Neil" I said looking in his eyes.

Kyu?"

"Kyuki-" before I could say, we heard the sound of door bell.


Thank god! He turned around hearing the sound, I took this opportunity, pushed him and ran from there.


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The end smiley1

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Please write more like this or hot os

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chowmein123

Please write more like this or hot os


I'm writing one  aur ek hot wala bhi smiley9

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Loved it

We will be happy if you showcase your born writing skills in future too smiley31

Guys check the 3rd part of this beautiful story smiley27

Edited by Spandan24 - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#16

Aww....it is soo beautiful...

You know this hotness & sizzling chemistry is inherent in them...& You captured it beautifully....

Mere expectations badh Rahi hai..

Do write more...loved it...smiley27

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Prachii smiley31

This is sooo good! I like that you gave us possessive Yuvika. Show mein to Neil ka bhao hi nahi raha. Ye story padh ke dil ko sukoon milasmiley9. Write more and soon!!

Also, Spandan tumne mujhe tag kiya to mujhe laga tumne finally kuch likha haismiley36

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saumya2102

Prachii smiley31

This is sooo good! I like that you gave us possessive Yuvika. Show mein to Neil ka bhao hi nahi raha. Ye story padh ke dil ko sukoon milasmiley9. Write more and soon!!

Also, Spandan tumne mujhe tag kiya to mujhe laga tumne finally kuch likha haismiley36

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saumya2102

Prachii smiley31

This is sooo good! I like that you gave us possessive Yuvika. Show mein to Neil ka bhao hi nahi raha. Ye story padh ke dil ko sukoon milasmiley9. Write more and soon!!

Also, Spandan tumne mujhe tag kiya to mujhe laga tumne finally kuch likha haismiley36 ---- Nana likhunga likhunga meri writing skill itni badiya Hain na ( just ask asmita di smiley37) toh mujhe thoda time lagega likhne main smiley37

And don't you dare call me "tum" just tuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Edited by Spandan24 - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Spandan24

Loved it

We will be happy if you showcase your born writing skills in future too smiley31

Guys check the 3rd part of this beautiful story smiley27


Thank you for the tags 🫠

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