Execution was not in a right path...

While replying to one of the post, this opinion came to my mind and I am just sharing it.

1.Arjun's entry was messy and shocking, The makers should have been a little bit careful in introducing him. They could have mentioned just his name and the fact that Arjun is Tara's fiance to us but may not to Deva... Arjun has helped the Sehgal"s to get a good place to stay and he is going to get married Tara could have justified his role. The makers could have then cast the actor. After Tandav, Tara running to hug Arjun would have been even more sensible, but Deva being unaware of the same could be the shocking element and a valid point of he thinking Tara betrayed her again.

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Deva's past had a huge role to play in this story, But makers didn’t execute it at all. Parallely his torement and pain could be added along with the budding love in present. They could have seen How Deva had to sleep in streets, He had to wander for food, He was abused, He was beaten, He was tortured.. They could have shown how he survived from evil traffickers who forced children to beg or be involved in sex racket.Such incidents could have grown a strong empathy, His revenge would have been more justified. Deva is insomniac, Why he cannot sleep should have been established. His tough exterior could have get a proper arc. These things can increase trp... The show would have been survived in its original time slot. Yeh chizien agar thora thora karke pehele dikha dete toh Trp aunties vi engage ho jati....

Now they are bringing a new female lead. The character should be arched carefully. Her being the rare blood group donor can be an excellent twist. Both Tara and Deva will be indebted to her. She could be a buisness partner of Deva later. Or she can be Farwari's old friend who knew Deva from her juvenile days.. Initially she can be positive later turning negative sensing the turbulence in Devra"s relation. Such characters can be a good use if is put through properly.

This is my opinion. You can share of yours!!

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

While replying to one of the post, this opinion came to my mind and I am just sharing it.

1.Arjun's entry was messy and shocking, The makers should have been a little bit careful in introducing him. They could have mentioned just his name and the fact that Arjun is Tara's fiance to us but may not to Deva... Arjun has helped the Sehgal"s to get a good place to stay and he is going to get married Tara could have justified his role. The makers could have then cast the actor. After Tandav, Tara running to hug Arjun would have been even more sensible, but Deva being unaware of the same could be the shocking element and a valid point of he thinking Tara betrayed her again.

2.

Deva's past had a huge role to play in this story, But makers didn’t execute it at all. Parallely his torement and pain could be added along with the budding love in present. They could have seen How Deva had to sleep in streets, He had to wander for food, He was abused, He was beaten, He was tortured.. They could have shown how he survived from evil traffickers who forced children to beg or be involved in sex racket.Such incidents could have grown a strong empathy, His revenge would have been more justified. Deva is insomniac, Why he cannot sleep should have been established. His tough exterior could have get a proper arc. These things can increase trp... The show would have been survived in its original time slot. Yeh chizien agar thora thora karke pehele dikha dete toh Trp aunties vi engage ho jati....

Now they are bringing a new female lead. The character should be arched carefully. Her being the rare blood group donor can be an excellent twist. Both Tara and Deva will be indebted to her. She could be a buisness partner of Deva later. Or she can be Farwari's old friend who knew Deva from her juvenile days.. Initially she can be positive later turning negative sensing the turbulence in Devra"s relation. Such characters can be a good use if is put through properly.

This is my opinion. You can share of yours!!

I agree with your posts...they are not taking care of minor details ...I love Vishal and Kanika so I can ignore other stuff but someone who is neutral viewer..these will be glaring gaps...they are introducing tracks suddenly and not giving them smooth arc..it's difficult to suddenly connect to new characters and tracks...I wish they get a grip on story soon..only Devra performance can't pull a serial..

You have pointed out very good questions.

My question is why are they rushing so much?

There has been so many scenes which can be extended.

1. The fire incident: it is the most important incident that changed the life of two innocences drastically. Untill then they were living happily but this incident changed their life. There was no proper scenes for this fire fiasco.. just some flashbacks and Raunak with some firecrackers. If I remember chacha chachi were discussing putting kerosene around the pandal. They could have shown Full planning and plotting and Vanraaj witnessing these that affected him mentally.

2. Deva's sufferings and becoming of Mr mallik:

It was not executed properly too. I expected a scene of his sufferings to his sister or to Tara. After marriage when Tara has taken vow to bring old Deva back. At least she has to know the depth of his sufferings. On the first night I expected Deva to tell her the pains he had to go through beyond Tara's expected.

3. Tara's professional life taken 360°turn ..aab woh dhoodh nikalegi . 7 days challenge is long forgotten.

4. Ananya's change of mind.

5. Arjun's entry.

6. Raunak Farwary angle.

7. Vanraaj.

There are so many things makers can do but for TRP rush they are messing up with the story line.

I wanted to explain above mentioned points. But time Kam hai.

I agree with you. In case of Deva's past makers ke paas abhi bhi time hai. They can beautifully design and execute it. Production values drastically reduced.

Some of you have put across very good points that are in my mind too. I wish anybody from production or writers could see your discussions here.(thoda akal ayegi).

Yaar Trp keliye ithana insecure hai experiment karneka ithna darr hai, they should not have promised us biggest passionate love story etc etc.

Something is missing feeling comes Because they have not locked up the story properly. Instant noodles bana rahe hai.Arjun's entry tak teek tha.

Actors ki kami thi? sheezan ko leke aya.

Kya bolke laya re usko ,boyfriend ka role bolke laya tha. Jitna jaldi wo chala gaya, itna jaldi wild card

Contestants eliminate nahi ho raha hai.

First of all already existing characters ka graph me consistency nahi hai. Every week new character new track. I wish deva should throw away everybody except his mom. Naani , buffalo seriously 🙄

As deva said achha khaasa Anaadh ka jindagi jee raha tha.🤦‍♂️

Did trp increase after this bakwas naani track?

Deva is not toxic. "Toxic" word aajkal kuch zyada highlight ho ra hai. Deva ka emotions towards tara are intense. Shaking, tossing,shoving are common in passionate love story (I assume)

Gowtham Hegde please come back and save chaand jalne laga .

Guys if it is possible to reach any of the team member from chand Jalne Laga on behalf of media please let them know your feedback.

So Color's, swastik, writers please visit Indiaforums every now and then, not only Twitter.

Anyhow VISHAL ADITYA SINGH and KANIKA MAAN I will tolerate all the ridiculous tracks for you guys.

🙏🙏

This was my review even before I read this post. How same are our views? Makers sure need to do something as only DevRa romance can't bring TRP. Hegde has done it in IPKKND & Geet as well Madhubala. Even in Madhubala after Raja entry Hegde stopped writing & show stopped soon.

#CJL 4 Jan. Filler episode. Good to see Tara using her brain to find Jyoti. So Deva's wish for Jyoti to prove she is his mother gets fulfilled. Mama-Nani playing games for their benefit. Tara may get fooled but not Deva. End of episode Proved - Deva's lifeline is Tara. Somehow find something lacking in screenplay since Mr Hegde's not writing it. Precap: Good to see Farwari. Nani playing new games. This sure is gonna be a matter of tussle betn #DevRa In trying to do tit for tat Deva may befriend a new girl.

Originally posted by: Krishi.p

I agree with you. In case of Deva's past makers ke paas abhi bhi time hai. They can beautifully design and execute it. Production values drastically reduced.

Some of you have put across very good points that are in my mind too. I wish anybody from production or writers could see your discussions here.(thoda akal ayegi).

Yaar Trp keliye ithana insecure hai experiment karneka ithna darr hai, they should not have promised us biggest passionate love story etc etc.

Something is missing feeling comes Because they have not locked up the story properly. Instant noodles bana rahe hai.Arjun's entry tak teek tha.

Actors ki kami thi? sheezan ko leke aya.

Kya bolke laya re usko ,boyfriend ka role bolke laya tha. Jitna jaldi wo chala gaya, itna jaldi wild card

Contestants eliminate nahi ho raha hai.

First of all already existing characters ka graph me consistency nahi hai. Every week new character new track. I wish deva should throw away everybody except his mom. Naani , buffalo seriously 🙄

As deva said achha khaasa Anaadh ka jindagi jee raha tha.🤦‍♂️

Did trp increase after this bakwas naani track?

Deva is not toxic. "Toxic" word aajkal kuch zyada highlight ho ra hai. Deva ka emotions towards tara are intense. Shaking, tossing,shoving are common in passionate love story (I assume)

Gowtham Hegde please come back and save chaand jalne laga .

Guys if it is possible to reach any of the team member from chand Jalne Laga on behalf of media please let them know your feedback.

So Color's, swastik, writers please visit Indiaforums every now and then, not only Twitter.

Anyhow VISHAL ADITYA SINGH and KANIKA MAAN I will tolerate all the ridiculous tracks for you guys.

🙏🙏

Actually trp is still stable even after that Nani track matlab logo ko pasand aara hei.

Originally posted by: govindagopala

This was my review even before I read this post. How same are our views? Makers sure need to do something as only DevRa romance can't bring TRP. Hegde has done it in IPKKND & Geet as well Madhubala. Even in Madhubala after Raja entry Hegde stopped writing & show stopped soon.

#CJL 4 Jan. Filler episode. Good to see Tara using her brain to find Jyoti. So Deva's wish for Jyoti to prove she is his mother gets fulfilled. Mama-Nani playing games for their benefit. Tara may get fooled but not Deva. End of episode Proved - Deva's lifeline is Tara. Somehow find something lacking in screenplay since Mr Hegde's not writing it. Precap: Good to see Farwari. Nani playing new games. This sure is gonna be a matter of tussle betn #DevRa In trying to do tit for tat Deva may befriend a new girl.

It's actually not Tara being fooled or something she still thinks from a positive aspect for everyone. Deva b kafi emotional hei es mamle mei.