MG SS: Shhh...:- Updated Part20||31st July||Pg.37|| - Page 29

Originally posted by: tellyme

lovely.... beautifully described the horror scene.😊

Thank you Di.

Glad to know it had the desired horror effect.

Part 14

A very happy Vijayadashami and prosperous Dasara to all.

Part 15:

"Yeha akhir ho kya raha hai!! Meri accident hona aur Geet aapne aap ko uskeliye zimedar kehna....kahi mai pagal to nahi banrahi hu? Something is definitely wrong"

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Maan was not able to come out of what he got to experience yesterday...him seeing someone on the stairs, Geet standing inside the room like a statue and the door automatically closing on its own when he tried to enter, and him finding her on the front door who had just arrived from outside, who he felt was his Geet...

Then whom did he see in the room? Who was that?

At the end all Maan was left with was questions..

A thought of his house being haunted by a ghost did cross his head, but he just brushed it off murmuring that such things doesn't exist and he must have imagined things.... But the alarming experience he had was far from just an illusion, not being able to get a clear picture of the things going on..

Next day, Maan found himself seated opposite to Adi in Adi's cabin..as his patient...

Ready to get himself called as a mentally unstable person than believing in ghosts.

Adi seated opposite to him was keenly observing Maan, who had his head resting on his locked palms, wide eyes starring at nothing in particular, his forehead filled with sweat beads and his face showed how disturbed he was..

"Kya re...last week aapne wife ko laye ti check up karvane keliye, iss hafte kudh ko he check up karvane aayi ho.....Actually ho kya raha hai Maan!" Adi asked, to which Maan gestured 'I don't know' with his hands, which were shivering slightly

"I don't know anything!!" Maan said before continuing

"Mujhe hui experience ke bare agar bataya to, aap ko lagega ki mai kissi horror movie ke story narrate kar rahi hu.. Lekin aise hi hua hai." Adi was intently listening to Maan all the while, while Maan continued, shaking his head and hands in disagreement to accept what he experienced to be because of a ghost..while somewhere subconsciously his mind did.

"I don't believe in all these, aise kuch nahi hote.."

"I have never seen you being this tensed!" hearing what Maan was saying an alarm rose in Adi's mind, while Maan too nodded his head in agreement to what Adi said.

"Hisss..one minute."Adi thought for few seconds, before opening his drawer and searches for something in it.

Adi takes out a card, making sure he had got it right, he forwards it to Maan.

"Contact this person.* Maan who was busy again starring at some random place in the cabin immersed in his thoughts, looks up at Adi, takes the card and stares at it.

"I think...aapke ghar mai jo problem hai... It's beyond science.." Adi rose his doubts, while Maan scrunched his face hearing that.

"What Dr.!!"

"He is the right person to solve this problem."

Adi pointed to the card and ended the conversation there. If what Maan said were true then this is just the beginning and hopefully he will not be too late in solving this problem or he will have to be facing the worst.

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Maan was off searching for the person who could solve his problem, leaving behind all his work, infact that didn't even matter to him now given to the situation.

He parked his car and got out not being able to locate the right address, though he was in the right locality..

He looks around only to spot a man of middle age, wearing torn and patched up clothes, crouching down by the side of the road infront of a pile of garbage, reading a crushed newspaper, with a dirty sack beside him, outwardly the person looked like a plastic collector.

Maan finding no one else there walks up to him

"Hello! Excuse me." the person looks up at him.

"Kya aap bata sakate hain ki ye address kahaan aata hai?" Maan forwards the visiting card. The shabby looking person looks at the card, which read

Asiam Khan

Psychiatrist

Along with the person's address and ph no. printed on it.

The person stood up, looked at Maan and then back to the card with uncertainty written all over his face,

"Ye

*points towards the card, then pointing towards himself he continued*

mai he hu"

That was it, Maan who was messed up with all that was happening, was on the edge of loosing his sence. And after listening to the man infront of him, he did loose it as he raised his hand to hit him.

While the startled man moved a step back, and rose his hand as a shield

"Yee "

Realizing what he was doing Maan fisted his palm and looked away controlling himself.

After calming himself down for a few seconds, he turned back to the man

"Dekhiye, pehle se he mai bohat parishan hu. So please, don't joke around and tell me the address "

"Arre, ye *points towards the card* mai he hu sabh. To understand how state of mind of a plastic collector is, I'm doing this work."

He picks up his sack.

While Maan was surprised "Really?" he still couldn't believe that this man was so dedicated to his work, would go around dressed almost as a beggar to study their state of mind. He was amazed.

"Yes"

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Maan stood amazed gazing at the certificates and medals that were displayed in the living room of Mr. Khan's house.

Khan walked in after getting changed into a formal shirt and pants. Now looking like a psychiatrist.

"Please take your seat" he called out to Maan, while he himself settled down on the sofa.

Maan took his seat with a polite thank you.

" To bataye, bath kya hai?" Khan was straight to the point.

Maan fumbled searching for the right words not knowing how to express himself

"Umm... Sir... Wo... Mmm... Ghar par ek problem hai sir..."

"To hum dono yaha betke kyu time waste kar rahe he."

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Maan opened the door to his house and entered along with Khan and closed the door.

But surprisingly the man just walked a few steps into the house and stopped not moving further. Before Maan could guide him further to the sofa,

"Kon kon rehti hai yaha kaha aapne?"

"Sir, mai aur meri wife."

"Hmm"

"Ek minute, I will call her." he was about to step forward to call Geet, when

"Nahi.. No" khan stopped him, and started seriously glancing around the house. While Maan just stood beside him letting him do his job.

When all of a sudden *Boom* one of the light bulb in the hall, in their eyesight went boom.

The impact of the sound was awful in the silent house, that Maan jumped back in his place as he was unprepared. While Khan too was startled but was still and composed in his place.

"Sir, aise he kuch na kuch hote rehte hai iss ghar mai."

"Mmm" khan was seriously analyzing the situation asked Maan again.

"Kon kon rehti hai kaha aapne?"

"Hum dono hi Sir." Maan answered unsure of why this question was asked again.

To which Khan slyly laughed before reveling

"Huh.. Teen log rehti ho"

"Nahi sir." Maan was still in denial.

"Huh! Mujhe iss ghar mai ek aur kadam aage badna hai to, aap ko wo teesri member ki bhare mai pata chalna chaye.....pata lagaye. Mai badh mai aata hu."

"Sir!"

With that said he walked out, while Maan stood there complementing what to do and how while looking at the now broken bulb.

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Thank you everyone for reading and liking the last update. Sorry for the late update, I'm a kind of held up.

The story is coming to an end. Most probably next will be the climax, if not then it might extend to an another update.

Part 16

Updated part 15 👆

Please do read and comment.

Thank you.

Thanks for updating

will read and comment in the morning

part 14

Jessie is making Maan crazy. He wants to be known. Ne wants Maan to be so scared after finding out about him that will leave Geet. Thats what he thinks.

Maan finding out about Jessie will actually be good. He will finally understand the mystery.

part 15

Maan makes contact with Mr. Khan. Adi thinks he can help. Can he?

Why did the doctor just leave? How will that help Maan?

Hi, be lated Happy Dasara to u too dear, nice chapter, Maan went to Adi, and said him everything, Adi believe him and gave him a card, and ask him to meet the person, Maan meet the person and said him everything, Mr.khan went with Maan to his house and get to know that something is not right, Mr. Khan said to Maan that in their house 3 people is staying, asked Maan to inquiry about this, and said he will come latter, if the ghost harm Maan then because Maan come with Mr. Khan. Dear can we get a early update pls.

Originally posted by: taahir004

Thanks for updating

will read and comment in the morning

No problem.. Take your time.