Bheege tum Bheege hum - One Shot

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Posted: 2 years ago
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It was a rainy day and Dev who was playing with kids in ground of Baalghar were not ready to come inside.

Vidhi : Devji !! Bacchon chalo naa andar chalo. Arrey baarish mein bheengene toh Sardi aa jaayenge.

Dev : Haan bacchon !! Tum log chalo andar. Hum sab kal khelenge , bahut maza aayenge .

Meanwhile kids screamed; Humein khelna hein..aur khelna hein.

Vidhi : Bacchon ziddh mat karo . Dekho naa baarish kaafi zor se ho rahe hein.

Meanwhile Matron came there and said : Mein sab ko leke jaati hun andar. Aap yeh chaatha leejiye , Vidhi....Dev Sir bhi bacche jaise ban gaye , yahan khade hoke chillayenge toh nahin maanenge aapki baat Vidhi.

She smiled and Vidhi took the umbrella ☔ from her. As the kids went inside she went near Dev. Dev was dancing in rain twirling his overcoat upwards.

Vidhi : Arrey aap barish mein bheeg rahe hein, aur yeh kya pagalpan hein ? Aise coat utarke yun hawa mein kyun ghuma rahe ho aap ?

Dev throw the umbrella ☔ to a side and held Vidhi's hands.

Vidhi: Arrey ek toh aap bheeg rahe hein, upar se chaatha leke aayi toh usse kyun fenki aapne ?

Vidhi walked to take umbrella and Dev held her in his arms.

Vidhi : Dev ji !! Aap kya kar rahe hein!! Koyi dekhnenge toh !!!

Dev : Romance kar raha hun apni biwi se ...

Vidhi : Dev ji !! Bacche

Dev : Arrey sab chale gaye andar . Yeh baarish kee boondhein kaafi space diye humein toh kyun naa iska istemal kare

Vidhi : Aap baarish mein bheeg rahe hein....Kya bacchon ke saath aise masti karna baarish mein? Umra kaa Zara bhi khayal nahi aaya aapko ?

Dev : Bheeg toh tum bhi rahi ho Vidhi . Jab yeh baarish kisi ke bhi umra ki Seema ko nahin parakhta toh hum kyun kare ??? Masti toh abb zyada karunga mein kyunki tum saath mein ho naa

Vidhi : Accha !!

Dev nodded his head.

Vidhi : Theek hein phir mein bhi karungi....

Dev : Tum kuch bhi kar lo mujh jaise masti toh tum kar hi nahi pawogi ....Tumhare chehre kaise laal laal hote hein jab bhi hum donon ke.....

Dev coughed

Vidhi ; Hum donon ke ....Kya Dev ji !! Batayiye naa

Dev: Nothing.....

Vidhi : Aapko batana hi padega.....

Dev : Tum chaatha le awo ...

Saying this Dev released her gently from his arms.

Vidhi : Arrey itni jaldi haar maan gaye aap !! Masti kyun nahi kar rahe hein?. Mein karun !!!

Dev stared her with his sparkling eyes. Vidhi hugged him and started tickling at his stomach....Dev was unable to stop her as her tiny fingers were so fast running here and there .

Dev : Nahi....Vidhi 🥰🥰🥰 mujhe gudgudi ho rahe hein....Vidhi !!

Screaming so louder he held her hands tightly and now their eyes looked each other intensely.

Vidhi's eyes 👀 almost turned red and Dev's eye pupils were running like flames of fire....

Vidhi : Mein toh bas Masti hi kar rahi thi.

She said very innocently with a low voice...Soon a smile came at Dev's lips seeing how his wife sone times looks so pretty as a kid . He uplifted her and said : Aur karo masti . Mujhe accha lagta hein .....

Vidhi smiled and cupped Dev's face. They both pressed their foreheads intensely.....

Vidhi : Dev ji saath mein masti karenge toh bahut accha lagenge ...

Dev released her from him .

Vidhi : Mein daudne waali hun .....Mujhe pakadke dikhayiyega.

Dev nodded his head.....

Vidhi started running faster and in between she was turning back and she was seeing Dev was also running to chase her..At a point when she turned back she didn't find Dev and she was much worried.

Vidhi : Dev ji !! Dev ji aap kahan hein? Dev ji aap please aayiye naa. ..Kahin Dev ji beech mein gire toh nahin ? Unhein koyi chot aayi kya ?

Vidhi started moving here and there and she saw Dev lying at the ground with closed eyes. Vidhi rushed near Dev and screamed: Dev ji !!! Aankhein kholiye ! Kya huwa aapko ? Aapko chakkar aaye aur mein kaisi biwi hun ? Bina dekhke itne aage daudi !!! Dev ji aankhein kholiye !! Dev ji Sorry 😔😔 Dev ji aankhein kholiye please 🥺🥺

Vidhi almost started crying badly .

Dev slightly winked his eye 😉 with a smile

Dev : Masti kar raha thaa mein.....

Vidhi : Aise koyi karta hein kya !!!

She started punching him chest with her tiny palms. Dev kissed her both palms and made her to lie down at his body....He embraced her and kissed at her forehead.

Dev : Vidhi!! Aise khoob saare baarish ke din aayenge ....Aur humein ek saath uss mein bheegna hein, ek dusre ko baahon mein sametna hein....

Vidhi : Mazak mein hi sahi abhi joh Kiya woh dubara mat keejiyega....Mein bahut ghabra gayi Dev ji.

Dev : Arrey tumhare hote huye mujhe kuch ho sakta hein kya ?? Aur dubara aisa kuch karunga nahin, Promise....Sach mein mujhe kuch ho bhi jaaye naa toh bhi meri Bhannat wife toh mujhe bacha hi lenge ...... Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hein kaise tumne uss jungle mein mujhe dhoondke bacha liye....Kaash Tum nahin bachati toh wahin pada hota mein ....

Vidhi : Sh!! Yeh saari baatein mat keejiye...Yeh pal hein ek dusre ko pyaar karne kaa ....Toh wahin karenge hum...

Dev ; Toh tumhein samajh mein aa hi gayi kee mein kya keh raha thaa...

Vidhi ; Mein Dev Raichand ki biwi hun , itni samajh toh mujh mein bhi hein...

Dev and Vidhi laughed and they both passionately kissed each other's lips ...


After long time wrote One Shot with my 15 minutes break time in between work time.. Please read and drop your views, friends.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Love.. ❤️❤️

That was so beautiful.. Rain sequence will always be dream for us.. 🥺🥺🥺🤧🤧

Too much heart broken with the off airing news.. but these stories will keep our videv alive 🥺🥺❤️❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Thank you. Will be reading your work today evening Pakka promise.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Maddy thanks a lot. I am not getting time to write stories now ....But if forum will not be closing will try to write and as always your suggestions are expected dear.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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For me, this is the last scene of Na Umra Ki Seema Ho... Sacrifice for the family, family functions and all are okay but for once their story deserves an ending with only them... Being unguarded and truly themselves in each other's embrace

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chaostud

For me, this is the last scene of Na Umra Ki Seema Ho... Sacrifice for the family, family functions and all are okay but for once their story deserves an ending with only them... Being unguarded and truly themselves in each other's embrace

Oh 😯😯😯 😯😯 Always I dream a pure rain scene like the promo which they show first which I can't rewrite as that was extraordinary. But writing this one my mind was viewing that promo only which made me to watch this show. Thank you so much for reading this....

Finally you learned to tag 😊😊😊😊😊🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣 I got a groupbie promotion and after that now I can tag people par kya hi fayda ab toh 😭😭

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hey koyi baat nahi 🤗🤗🤗🤗 Moderators se request kee hein kaafi logon ne....If they agrees forum will not be closing....So let's see

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow!! Revu❤️ yaar you gave the beautiful ending scene. I can’t write more. You know about me right . I can’t move on from ViDev easily. That unnamed pain in stomach succumbing me.
thank you for entertaining us with beautiful stories and that to resemble the things only we can connect with ViDev.

Thank you so much.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Absolutely beautiful 😍

If they ended this way it would be like coming full circle with a ViDev moment in their own place of bliss and us who cheered for them all along

I am so emotional to see them go

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