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Posted: 2 years ago
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Osm agla part lmba dena pls😜

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruhanikagoenka

Osm agla part lmba dena pls😜

I will try.
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Loved it., 😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 2 years ago
#74

Glad they realise they care for eo more than friends

Who is keeping an eye on ri

Hope to those gals save themselves or ri and rest help them

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part 10


Back to Nasik .


Rajveer , Mahir, Naina gathered to move to the mil .

Riya & Barkha secretly followed them .


They reached the mill and tried to look for a breakthrough. They couldn’t find anyone presence till now . They heard 2 voices .


Voice 1: US Savita ka mug band karo. Aur usne kisko video bheja ??


Voice 2: phone gir kar tut Gaya hai . Pata nahi . Par boss ko Bol do ke jaldi se consignment nikal le .


Voice 1: wooh boss hai . Wooh sab Jante hai . Yahan sab clear karte hai aur location pe chalte hai . Boss ne Bulaya hai .


Rajveer : team let’s follow them .


They followed the man and it lead them to old forest area .


Rajveer : team yahan sambhal ke v don’t know ke kitne admi hai ya unka plan kya hai ? Aur back ko inform karo mahir v might need them .


Mahir : jee sir.


Riya and Barkha followed them to the forest .


Riya : oh god inn sabme Arjun se toh baat hi nahi hue hai . Wooh pareshan honge . Jaldi se mission Khatam karke unse baat karti hoon.



Etf Mumbai :


Shree: sir informer ki details ke hisab se wooh human trafficking gang operates in Satara nasik area .


Arjun : Nasik ??


Arjun heart went to Riya again .


Arjun : ok then let’s go to the location Sameer: shree call chotu and Ayesha. Sanya se kaho humse connected rahe .

Shree: sir .


Etf left for Satara Nasik area .


Here , in the forest ,

Boss of the gang was very angry .


Boss : in ladkiyon ka aaj raat hi bando bas kar na hoga . Kal Tak wooh academy walo ne kuch kar Diya toh sare mehnat pe pani phir jayega . Taiyari karo.


Riya and Barkha were shocked to know that girls are being kidnapped and trafficked .


Boss : subah in Sabka auction hai . Bohot badi Rakam Milegi inhe bechne ki.


Riya deliberately made a sound and everyone was alert .


Riya: Barkha go back and get help hide and go .


Riya got every one attraction towards her .


Kaun ho tum ??


Riya : mein mein Rasta Bhul hai hoon . College ke trek par ayi thi . Aur app log kaun ho ?? Yahan kya kar rahe ho??


Boss : pakadkar dal do ise bhi . Kal ke auction mein ek aur .


Riya pretended to be scared . No no please mein toh Madad mang ne aye thi. Aap log mere papa ko nahi jante .


Her pleads went unheard . Here Rajveer , Naina and Mahir saw what happened .


Rajveer : yeh ladki ek baat nahi Manti. Kaha se aa gai ?


Naina : sir Abhi wooh khatre mein hai . Hume use Bachana hoga.

Mahir : let’s go back and get force .

Rajveer : subah tak wait kiya toh wooh hath se jayegi.


Barkha found her team. They were shocked .

Rajveer : what are the hell are you doing ??

Barkha : sorry sir but hum kaise aramse baith skate the ?? Sir Riya ne ek tracker rakha hai . V can track her and other girls trapped her .

Rajveer : back to academy .


Here etf was on the way to the informers lead. there was an Abandoned godown .


Informer : Sir aap jis gang ki khabar nikalne ko boli Thi wooh yahi pass ke jungle mein Dera dale hai aur khabar hai ki kal yahan ek fashion show hone wala hai . Fashion show ki aad mein auction aur Bahar se bade bade log aa rahe hai ladkiyan kharidne.


Sameer : ok Tum Hume us Jagah Ka pata Batao. Shree fashion show mein kaise ghus Sakte hai pata Lagao.


Shree: on it sir .


On the way back to the academy, Mahir eyes fell on the abandoned godown .

Mahir : sir ek minute jab hum yahan se gai the tab yeh godown bandh tha . Abhi tala tuta hua hai .


Naina : let’s go v might get more info .

Rajveer, Mahir and Naina slowly moved towards the godown .


Here etf was making their plan to get more information and entry inside the show .


Rajveer saw shree and held him on gun point saying freeze hands up and Surender. Shree turned . Hearing the sound Sameer and Arjun also took out their guns and aimed towards Rajveer , Naina and Mahir .


Sameer : kaun ho tum ??

Rajveer : tum kaun ho aur yahan kya kar rahe hoon ??

Sameer : we are etf officers . Guns down and surrender.

Rajveer : we are trained commandos .

Sameer : I’d

Rajveer : yours too .


They both showed each other their ids and got satisfaction.


Rajveer : sorry officer wooh yahan se Guzar rahe the aur yeh Tala Tuta dekha toh v got suspicious.

Arjun : iss waqt guzar rahe the .??

Mahir : wooh sir ek mission pe hai .


Sameer : this is my team . Have introduction of Arjun , Ayesha , shree and chotu .


Rajveer : this is my team . Introducing Naina and Mahir .


Rajveer : sir aap yahan kis case pe hai . Shayad v can help .

Ayesha : actually ek human trafficking ka case hai Jo asign Mumbai mein hua but Uske leads yahn Tak hai .


Naina : sir aren’t we working on same case ??

Mahir : I think so too .

Sameer : let’s share the facts and under stand .

Naina : sir v have to be fast . They have one of our cadet as hostage now . She willingly went in so she could help but it was all unplanned and we don’t know what will be happening to her .


Shree : sir ma’am please ayeye.

Mahir : sir there is a suggestion why don’t we go back .

Rajveer: no Mahir call Abhishek here with his tools and gadgets. We can’t waste a minute .



Here Riya got trapped with other girls . There were in total 15 girls .


Savita saw Riya and was going to call her for help . But Riya signalled her to be quiet till they are alone .

Riya : please mujhe Jane do. Mein ek college student hoon . Please

Guard : chup . Kabse bole ja rahe hai ek dam chup .

Riya pretended to be scared and when they were alone .


Riya : Dekho koi darna mat. Mein etf officer hu aur commando training le Rahi hoon . Meri team Hume bacha Legi . BAs tum sab log Himmat mat harna.


Savita : Didi yeh log Hame bechne wale hai . Kal fashion show ke naam pe .


One of the girls . Please save us.

Riya : girls sab Dhyan se suno. Hume kuch nahi hoga aur aaj ke baad Khud ko kabhi kamzor mat samaj na. Inhone aaj rak humari khubsorti Dekhi hai ab yeh hamare takat dekhenge.


Girls : hum nahi kar payenge.

Riya : mere sir kehte hai hara wooh nahi Jo Jeet nahi Saka par wooh hai jisne koshish nahi ki.

I will teach you some basic moves aur mere pass much chese hai jisse fayda hoga . Bas don’t lose hope .


Two girls started to keep an eye on anyone coming and Riya was trying to teach some moves which can be used when required .


Here etf and commandos planned everything.

Edited by Shahpinkerbell - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#76

Wow super ..my big bro always told me u need to try till u collapse to save yourself in dire circumstances

Thats one of the reasons I got self defence training lessons it has saved me a few times

And what u need is common sense , some confidence and rem the technique and u have the best bet for survival 💛

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Posted: 2 years ago
#77

Awesome updt

Riya traps herself with girls.. her team nd ETF reach there.. i think Sanya is also from their gang

Hope they take out girls nd Riya safely

Cont soon

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Posted: 2 years ago
#78

Loved it Pinku dear🤗

Awesome & interesting part

I just loved how Riya took risk to save the rest of the Girls & gave them assurance that everything will be fine now & they should not loose hope ☺

Arjun & Rajveer finally join hands to save the girls & finally got to know that Riya too is captive there with them .. I hope that these demons get what they deserve ... To rot in hell & I am sure Riya will teach them a good lesson

Waiting for more

Thanks for the tag 🔖

Continue soon🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Glitter_Goldie

Loved it Pinku dear🤗

Awesome & interesting part

I just loved how Riya took risk to save the rest of the Girls & gave them assurance that everything will be fine now & they should not loose hope ☺

Arjun & Rajveer finally join hands to save the girls & finally got to know that Riya too is captive there with them .. I hope that these demons get what they deserve ... To rot in hell & I am sure Riya will teach them a good lesson

Waiting for more

Thanks for the tag 🔖

Continue soon🤗

I am so happy you are liking it. With years lots of things have changed. May be 9 yrs ago I might not have thought about this plot
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Awesome update

Loved it

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