RaYa OS :" Apology" - Page 2

OMG! This story was so great. I wish Priya and Ram could marry based on their choice, rather than forcing themselves and betraying everyone else.

And thanks for tagging!

Wow..loved it❤️...and thanks for the tag🥰

I loved the concept and the ending

I do like your repair work on the balh storylines, a lot. The only bit I didn't like in this was Priya seeming a bit of a pushover in relation to her mother's pressure, but I respect any logical author's view, so I'll take it.

It's very cathartic when IF writers divert the stupidity we have to see and just simplify. This is how Shalini should behave if she wants the best mommy tag. I wish the leads would use their heads and hearts and stop irritating us.

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Beautiful OS, Nita ❤️

This is the second time I am reading your story. Watching Ram-Priya get married by lying made me feel so sad that I came to read your story again.

It's perfect, this is how it should have been. They should have apologized and come clean. I can totally imagine RaYa dancing for the first time at SharTika wedding

Well written as always. Maybe make this a ss instead of a os. What happened in that dance at shardul and ritika’s wedding to change their minds?:)

Originally posted by: Nja91

Like this better than the show.... Please keep writing! 👍

Thank you ❤️. Glad you liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: Sonia.himk

another amazing masterpiece.. 👏

Thank you for the lovely feedback ❤️. Glad you liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: DreamOfEndless

Beautiful OS, Nita ❤️

This is the second time I am reading your story. Watching Ram-Priya get married by lying made me feel so sad that I came to read your story again.

It's perfect, this is how it should have been. They should have apologized and come clean. I can totally imagine RaYa dancing for the first time at SharTika wedding

Unresed :)