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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

And this might be my pet obsession speaking so please indulge me - but can y'all give last names to the characters?


Abhay has one but Veronica and Sam don't (yet)


And why does Veronica have a Christian-sounding first name and why is her Uncle named Ashutosh Gupta? Did she have a foreign/ Christian father since Ashutosh is her mom's brother? What was her maiden name before she married Abhay?


Is this fic based in Kolkata?


What is Samarth's qualification? Was he also a Micro student like Abhay?


Abhay joined his family business

Veronica works at TCS (software)

What does Sam do (apart from part-time chauffering?)


Is Sam's granddad still alive?

How did Sam manage to stay out of Veronica's life when she was married to Abhay and he was chauffeuring for the Mehta family? Did he quit then?


Please please someone thresh out these details cos they're mighty important (to me)... 😳

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Also, here's a suggestion to all the contributors...


Maybe each time you post your segments, you can follow it up by quoting my posts on the sequence of events and the timeline and add on to it with the salient points in your segment for ease of reference for all authors? So they don't have to go back and re-read to remember all the significant happenings from the previous segments?

Each author quotes the previous author's timeline/event posts & updates it with their own


And WD can update it on the first page if need be.

Idk if this will help

You're abandoning us like this? 😭

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago

Answering the ones I have answers to -


In my segment I was planning to use Samarth Malhotra but backed out last minute and kept it Samarth... ppl are free to take it up, or I can go back and add in the surname if you want smiley36


Also, Veronica Kapoor sounds good. That's what she is in my mind smiley42


Fic was never based anywhere but Simi mentioned St Xavier's College (which I know every city has one but it reminded me of mere sheher wala smiley36)

So yeah, after my segment it's now based in Kolkata, you're welcome to make them read Byomkesh Bakshi and have rosogollas anytime smiley39


I imagine Abhay and Vero stayed in a different place when they were married? And when Vero left, Abhay went back to his parents' place. That's why he sent the pregnancy reports back through Sam šŸ˜…

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago

Also, ajkal Christian names are pretty common. I have a David and Julia in my workplace and none of them have any Christian background, bas their parents liked the name for them smiley36


Vero's familial background is whatever we want it to be šŸ˜†

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Bee222

Answering the ones I have answers to -


I imagine Abhay and Vero stayed in a different place when they were married? And when Vero left, Abhay went back to his parents' place. That's why he sent the pregnancy reports back through Sam šŸ˜…

I thought it was mentioned in someone's segment (T's?) that Veronica and Abhay stayed with her in-laws? She just packs her bags and leaves without saying anything to her in-laws I think? And that she heard him arguing with his folks (tying in with how they were involved in deceiving her). I could be wrong though.


Thanks for clarifying about the name. I'm quite nitpicky about them - it's my failing šŸ˜³šŸ˜†

Edited by LizzieBennet - 2 years ago
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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Bee222

You're abandoning us like this? 😭

. *channeling my inner Kate Sharna* You no longer need me!

Jk, šŸ˜† but I think each author knows their material best so it's better if they update it 😳 (if you want to, that is)

Edited by LizzieBennet - 2 years ago
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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Is you writing after qd?


Yeah, cool šŸ˜ŽšŸ‘

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Don't give Samarth a last name yet, please!😳

I have something in mind šŸ˜

Edited by ExoticDisaster - 2 years ago
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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago

6 people already in line behind me 😲


*Me running to join the queue again šŸƒā€ā™€ļøšŸƒā€ā™€ļø*


Put me after whoever is there last šŸ˜† idk if anyone signed up after Simi 🤪

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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago

Wow...what an absolutely amazing segment it is, my dear Bhree!! This is the best segment till now to be honest and you made me fall in love with the character of Samarth for the very first time in this fic. Your storytelling is just too good, kudos to you. šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ¤—Love love...

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