Fichain #2 | Last part P.44 - Page 5

Well, this story is pacing up nicely! 👏

Great job- Simi, T and Shibz.

Simi- you explained a little of the background for these three.

Abhay: Topper, Micro student and rich guy (son of a business tycoon), all around scumbag 😡

Veronica: Middle-class, orphan, raised by her maternal uncle, has a younger cousin Shweta, deeply in love with Abhay,

It’s the perfect set-up for Prince marries commoner.

(Did Abhay ditch his Micro degree and join his family business?) It made me angry that Veronica’s uncle had to pay for the wedding when Abhay’s parents are so rich. I already dislike them!

Then T, you explained the heartbreak part really well. The scum was cheating. And you also threw in that tidbit about him arguing with his parents so that’s a throwback to Parm’s set up about it all being planned. Well done! 👏

You also explained how Samarth had been deceiving her- by hiding his feelings from her while dating her cousin, Shweta .. not nice Samarth.

Shibz, the diary entries were a great idea. So now we have Samarth’s PoV & the reason for his heartbreak. Unrequited love.

Remains to be seen how his family was involved - whether in the whole Veronica-Abhay fiasco or something else we haven’t yet learned about. What’s the relationship between Abhay & Samarth- that’s yet to be explored too because so far all we have is that they are classmates.

It’s been a week since Nica left Abhay? And now she’s preggers so it could go any way. Plus Sam knew about Abhay’s cheating and he kept quiet? So another reason for Nica to feel deceived by him.

Now there’s also scope to explore Shweta and the other woman in Abhay’s life!

Bee, take it away! Eager to see where you’re going with this!

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

Okay, seriously guys, WTF?! Get a good mfing director, this needs to be a series!!

Loved it! the perfect start, the fairy-tale and the truth breaking Veronica's perfect world!! Ooffff!! *Chefs kiss* kya mast likha hai!! 👏🥳

Enjoyed it.

Tu bhi join kar na...

Thank you Sup Di for your detailed feedback. 🤗❤️Please continue doing the same so that our train of thoughts don't get derailed while writing the next segments.

Originally posted by: Quantum-Dot

Thank you Sup Di for your detailed feedback. 🤗❤️Please continue doing the same so that our train of thoughts don't get derailed while writing the next segments.

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Well, this story is pacing up nicely! 👏

Great job- Simi, T and Shibz.

Simi- you explained a little of the background for these three.

Abhay: Topper, Micro student and rich guy (son of a business tycoon), all around scumbag 😡

Veronica: Middle-class, orphan, raised by her maternal uncle, has a younger cousin Shweta, deeply in love with Abhay,

It’s the perfect set-up for Prince marries commoner.

(Did Abhay ditch his Micro degree and join his family business?) It made me angry that Veronica’s uncle had to pay for the wedding when Abhay’s parents are so rich. I already dislike them!

Then T, you explained the heartbreak part really well. The scum was cheating. And you also threw in that tidbit about him arguing with his parents so that’s a throwback to Parm’s set up about it all being planned. Well done! 👏

You also explained how Samarth had been deceiving her- by hiding his feelings from her while dating her cousin, Shweta .. not nice Samarth.

Shibz, the diary entries were a great idea. So now we have Samarth’s PoV & the reason for his heartbreak. Unrequited love.

Remains to be seen how his family was involved - whether in the whole Veronica-Abhay fiasco or something else we haven’t yet learned about. What’s the relationship between Abhay & Samarth- that’s yet to be explored too because so far all we have is that they are classmates.

It’s been a week since Nica left Abhay? And now she’s preggers so it could go any way. Plus Sam knew about Abhay’s cheating and he kept quiet? So another reason for Nica to feel deceived by him.

Now there’s also scope to explore Shweta and the other woman in Abhay’s life!

Bee, take it away! Eager to see where you’re going with this!

I love how you summarised it and also dropped what's to be explored so that the next writer doesn't have to scratch their heads🤣

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

I love how you summarised it and also dropped what's to be explored so that the next writer doesn't have to scratch their heads🤣

Wow Shibu, what a fabulous way to include Samarth's POV ❤️

Uff this story has so many details 🥺 it's pretty much like a novel waiting to be explored. Samajh hi nahi aa raha kis dhaage ko chodu aur kis waale ko pakdu 🥺

Feeling like a child who wants all the candy in the store 🤣

Originally posted by: Bee222

Wow Shibu, what a fabulous way to include Samarth's POV ❤️

Uff this story has so many details 🥺 it's pretty much like a novel waiting to be explored. Samajh hi nahi aa raha kis dhaage ko chodu aur kis waale ko pakdu 🥺

Feeling like a child who wants all the candy in the store 🤣

@bold, someone open a fanwiki page and not all the details down for me🤣

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

@bold, someone open a fanwiki page and not all the details down for me🤣

Thanks to Lizzie's notes, or it hadn't really hit me that Samarth's girlfriend was Shweta 😆 main to kuch aur hi soch rahi thi uske liye 🤪

Originally posted by: Bee222

Thanks to Lizzie's notes, or it hadn't really hit me that Samarth's girlfriend was Shweta 😆 main to kuch aur hi soch rahi thi uske liye 🤪