SS: Dev ke Vidhi ki Jai, part 4 updated page 6

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part One:

So this story starts where Jai keeps forcing Vidhi to work hard and keeps her away from her home and family and mainly Dev.


He goes to an extent of calling her in the evening after 8 or 9 to work on presentations for the next day. This occurred on two occasions. Dev starts to notice a few changes in Vidhi.


It is unlike Vidhi to ignore family or ignore him, but she had ignored or rather stayed away from him for the past couple of nights.


Dev decides he will surprise Vidhi at work for lunch and spend sometime with his wife. Next morning Dev leaves for work even before Vidhi wakes up. A surprised Vidhi starts talking to herself, “ main kuch zyada hi busy hogayi hoon kaam ko leke, main Dev ji se bhi theek se baat nahi Kiya pichle ek hafte se”


Vidhi’s train of thought is broken by the second alarm she has so that she can wake up. She gets ready, has her breakfast and heads to work. Just before lunch time Dev arrives at Vidhi’s office to pick her up, when he over hears a conversation between Jai and another person on the phone. Vidhi comes happily towards Dev , to find him shocked and stuck to his ground.


Jai: nahi yaar, main jaan bhuchke Vidhi ko kaam deta hoon woh bhi 8 bake ke baad, kyunki main nahi chahta hoon ki tum un Raichand’s ka ghulam banke rahe.


Dev and Vidhi shocked look at eachother and continue to hear Jai talk.


Jai: woh bahut kabil hai, lekin un Raichand’s ne usey family ke naam pe baandh ke rakha hai


Jai: pata nahi kya dekha us buddhe Raichand mein ki ussey Shaadi kar li


Vidhi unable to listen to his bull shit anymore, goes to Jai who was facing the other side


Vidhi: aap samajte kya hai Aapke baare mein?


Jai shocked to see Vidhi


Jai: woh, I was telling my friend how I am saving you from your family who are forcing you for a homebound life


Vidhi: who the hell do you think you are? You are nothing to me, you do not have a right on me other than being my employer. What do you know about family or love or having a relationship for you to decide that my family is burdening me?


Dev: Vidhi let’s go.


Vidhi: nahi Dev ji, I need to speak today. Apne aap ko bada modern samajte hai yeh Jai, he doesn’t even understand that even though we have an age gap in our relationship, you have treated me as an equal. Not once have to pushed your idea or agenda over me.


Vidhi: what I do for my family is the love I have for them, the respect I have for them. You are forgetting, I am married to Dev Raichand. Kabhi humara Ghar dekha hai? Itte saare naukar hai, phir bhi main insist karti Hoon ki Khana main banaungi.


Dev: Jai, Tum khud ko masiha samaj rahe ho, the problem is Vidhi doesn’t need help, you are the one who needs help. Maine kabhi nahi Socha tha ki tumhari itti choti si soch ho sakti hai.


Dev: Vidhi yaar tum cholo lunch ke liye.


Vidhi: Dev ji, ussey pehle, I need to do something. She writes a quick resignation letter and hands it over to Jai and walks away with Dev’s hand in hand.


She collects all her belongings and head out of the office. They sit in the car and Dev immediately pulls Vidhi close to a hug. Vidhi, “I am sorry, your boss turned out to be a stupid guy.”


Vidhi: I am the one who has to be sorry. I didn’t see his real intentions. I just kept doing work unassumingly. I am sorry I ignored you while trying to work.


Dev: It is alright. But I have a better opportunity for you. I was worried about you when you didn’t have time for anything for the past few days. So I did something.


Vidhi: kya Dev ji?


Dev: actually, you never graduated your MBA, of you remember, ek din college jaati this aur 3 mahine gayab. Pehle MBA khatam karlo.


Vidhi nods her head and they drove to Raichand house.


Dev: Vidhi, you don’t need to mention what happened in your work.


Vidhi: lekin mummyji


Dev: it is up to you, but Meri baat mano don’t


Vidhi and Dev comes home to realize no one was at home and Vidhi decides to have a maike pe chauka.


They quickly change into comfortable clothing and have something to eat which was prepared for lunch and go to their bedroom.


Vidhi: Dev ji


Dev: haan Vidhi


Vidhi: humne Socha Hum nayi shuruwat karenge, lekin humane toh kuch Kiya bhi nahi


Dev: kya bol rahi ho?


Vidhi: wahi ki humein proper shuruwat karlena chahiye


Dev: Vidhi, wahi cheeze dohrawogi to kya mujhe samaj mein aajayega? Theek se bolo.


Vidhi unable to explain what she meant to Dev, goes to him and hugs him and kisses him on his cheek.


Finally Dev understands what she meant by nayi shuruwat. He tries to kiss her but she turns around her back facing Dev. Dev walks to her, slides his hand around her stomach, pulls her to him. He gathers her hair from one shoulder and moves it to the other side and runs a trail of kisses along her nape of her neck. He bites her on her neck and nuzzles with his beard. The biting and the nuzzling leaves a red scar and a flared up one, but Vidhi doesn’t complain. She is lost in the sea of love. She wants them to literally start a fresh.


Vidhi takes the initiative and sits on the bed pulling Dev to follow her, without realizing her husband was also in his zone. Both trying not to let their inhibitions in and remembering all the time they tried to be intimate and were disturbed by someone in their family.


Both decide, not today. Dev gets up and goes to the door, locks it and dims the light to ensure that no one notices that they were home. He walks back towards the bed, Vidhi, doesn’t blink her eyes and waits for Dev patiently.


Vidhi, who was sitting until now, lays down on the bed. Neither of them in a position to understand the emotions they are going through but are sure that they want eachother to take their relationship to the next level which they were hesitant so far.


Dev: Vidhi, I hope this is not a reaction of what happened in your office today.


Vidhi: absolutely not Dev ji. I have been wanting this for a while now, but there was some hesitation I could sense from both our ends, but today, it feels right. It is just meant to be.


Dev: I am not trying to be a spoil sport but I can’t believe that guy assumed so many things about you and I.


Vidhi: exactly, aapko jaana bhi nahi aur assume kar liya ki you are the one trying to clip my wings without knowing that you were the one to give me wings.


Dev: do you know the full form of “ASSUME”?


Vidhi nods in negative


Dev: making an ASS of yoU and ME.


Dev: sab tarah ke log hai yeh aaj prove ho gaya


Vidhi: Dev ji, yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?


Dev: kya kar Raha hoon?


Vidhi: hum Kahan the, aap kahan chale gaye?


Dev: you are right. Sorry Vidhi.


He slowly bends down to his knees to match Vidhi’s eye level. Takes her hands in his hands and brings them to his lips to kiss them. He then moves his hand to the hair near her ear and tucks them behind the ear and moves the hair aside and runs his fingers along her neck.


He gently pushes Vidhi onto the bed. Bends down and pecks her lips. Vidhi’s hesitation goes for a toss and reaches to Dev’s lips and kisses them. Dev deepens the kiss by attacking her upper and lower lips one after another. Moving his hands along her petite body and reaches for the edge of her T-shirt. He slowly slips in his hands into the Tshirt, sending shivers down Vidhi’s spine. He makes small circular motions to pull the Tshirt up to reach her bra. He pulls off his t-shirt and Vidhi’s and settles to placing kisses to all of Vidhi’s newly discovered bare body. Leaving a few love bites along the way.


Vidhi tries to show some courage, runs her hand along Dev’s body, and finally pulls him down making Dev lose his balance and falls on top of her completely. The instantaneous reaction upon the bodies touching one another leads to another passionate kissing session, this time lasting a few minutes until they come up for some air. Slowly they discard the remaining clothing and embark to discover new horizons.


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So, I started working on this new one for the past few days. Today's episode made things more clearer. Hence decided to divide this idea into chapter than one shot.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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DEV KE VIDHI KI JAI - Mujhe title padke laga kee Vidhi kee jaijaikar ho rahi hein. Baad mein Monkey Bhai Jaiji kee yaad aayi🤪🤪🤪

Shaam ko padke comment karungi . Of course title had captured me so well here.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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👏👏🤪🤪 Kya mast likha hai...... Aise hi dikhana chaahiye episode main.


I laughed the most when Vidhi said ........Humaara ghar dekha hai? Itne saare naukar hai par khana main hi banaati hoon🤣


Especially when she never knew how to cook in Bimla's kitchen. Remember the pre-marriage episodes😆

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I really hope something similar happens in the drama, 😒😒, but not raising my expectations 😂😅.

This was really good, thanks for writing on this idea. ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Vidhi's answering Jay was on point 🔥🔥🔥 Bro is all set to make her 'azad' but doesn't think ki azadi manga kaun? And nothing to say about the last part , it was hotttttt

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Super one 👏👏👏 I loved this Vidhi who took the courage to gave resignation. Loved how she took stand for herself. Absolutely these kind of a scene is required in the show. I loved how Dev frankly told her " I hope this is not a reaction of what happened in office today and the way Vidhi replied she was desiring for this so long. Their conversation was much needed and you showed it in a decent way. And the way they both took initiative for next level slowly has shown in a beautiful way. I loved it 😍 Title dekhke pehle kuch samajh aayi , mujhe laga ki aap kuch humour type ke kuch likhi ho. Phir yaad aayi kee uss zone mein aap kuch likhi nahin. This was worth reading, waiting for next part

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Absolutely mindblowing, Monkish :):) Loved it so much, read it in one go.. love to see sensible Dev and Vidhi who know how to take out time for themselves and not keep serving the family all the time :) Eagerly waiting for the next part

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Loveddddd it! Vidhi's reactions and her answers were on point! God knows when will we see such content in the show, will we ever see it? 🙃🙃🙃


Last bit was 🙈🙈👌

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Excellent writeup as usual Monkish.

It was a good contnuation to the the annoying situation caused by Jai bundar.

Thoroughly enjoyed every part of it,

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Posted: 2 years ago
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really liked it, namrata. mazza a gya padh ke. 😳☺️❤️


i wish vidhi aise hi show mein bhi jai ke company chodh ke chali jaye.🤔

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