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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hiiiiiii people I am back with my new ' ASOR ' – Anniversary ….. before I start writing this asor I would like tell u all something. In this asor there is no shikha and sunaina . veer and sapna are husband and wife and sameera is their legitimate daughter ……

I will start writng the asor soon so plz wait for sometime

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok will wait for you to begin! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am back with the asor so the asor starts like this

Part1 – the hawks have completed a mission successfully . over the past one month they had been involved in the mission and were quiet streesed out too and needed a break from their hectic schedule . so veer sir gives them a 5 dayz holiday to go and enjoy themselves . everyone is very relieved on hearing this news. Everyone is in the canteen and are very excited and keep discussing as wat to do in the holidays so farhan gives them an idea

Farhan – kyon na hum picnic pe mahabaleshwar chalein after all wahaan toh samrat ka farm house bhi hai ( samrat is not bad in this asor)
Everyone agrees to this proposal then isha says
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Isha – wow farhan kabhi kabhi tum kaam ki baatein katein ho

Farhan is totally lost in looking at esha and says

Farhan – esha yeh toh tumhara asar hai
Everyone has a good laugh at this and again start making plans for the picnic except abhi, sameera notices this and askes ( they both are already engaged)

Sam – kya hua abhi itne srious kyon ho ?
Abhi – sameera, who kya hai na ki mere mom dad ki annivarsery 4 din baad hai aur main unh eek surprise dena chahta hoon main picnic pe nahin apaonga
Then tanvi says ,

Abhi – mere paas ek idea hai kyon na hum uncle aunty ko bhi apne saath picnic par le chalein phir hum sabb unhe milke bahut bada surprise deingein

Every one thinks it's a nice idea
But abhi says – tanvi idea toh acha hai , par kya unlog raazi hongein ?

Sam – abhi tum iske tension mat karo main unhe man longi yeh tum mujh pe chod do

Esha – haan abhi tum tension mat lo agar aunty uncle apne hone waali bahu ki baat zaroor maan legein

Sameera starts blushing and everyone teases her
Then abhi says – sameera tum veer sir aur sapna aunty se bhi kaho hamare saath chalne ki liye toh aur bhi maaza ayega

Sameera – haan yeh toh accha idea Hai hum sab unse mil ke baat karegein

So everyone agrees to this plan and go to talk to veer sir except abhi sam who said dat they will come a bit later . so everyone leaves leaving abhi and sam alone in the canteen

Will continue soon … I hope dat u all liked it till here

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Posted: 17 years ago
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it is very good
pls cont.......... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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itz a gud start. do carry on soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow , Stuti!! No Sunaina and Shikha? Nothing can go wrong now!!! 😆
Anyways, great going and keep up the good work!!! 👏
Edited by luv_kdr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cont it...am sure reading this! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx a lot for ur appreciations here is the next part

Part2 – so now abhi and sam are alone in the canteen, abhi moves closer to sameera and takes her hand in his hand and says

Abhi – sameera ur great, tum mere har problem ka solution kitne aasani se dhoond lete ho … I really luv u a lot

Sam- ( smiles ) abhi , jab koi kisse se itna pyaar karta ho toh uske pareeshani ko aasani se samajh leta hai I luv u too abhi

Then both of them hug each other , wishing that time would have halted at that very moment while they were each others arms
Suddenly sam realizes that they ned to convince veer sir also so she tells abhi .

Sam – abhi chalo papa koh convince bhi toh karna hai na
Abhi –( naughtily ) sameera maine toh unhe already unke sabse keemti cheze apne beti dene mujhe ki liye convince kar liya hai

Sam – haan main yeh jaanti hoon par picnic pe chalne ki liye bhi toh convince karna hai na
Then both of them go to veer sir s room and request him for coming to picnic with them at he is reluctant but finally he agres to this proposal .. everyone is happy at this

Now it's the turn to convince abhi"s parents so sam goes to abhi"s house along with him
And askses veena and abhi"s dad to come with them even they agree and both abhi and sam are really happy as everything is going according to their plan

So its decided that next day all the hawks and the respective parents will be setting out for mahabaleshewar

That night neither abhi nor sameera are able to go to sleep
They both are very excited as after so many dayz they willl get sometime to spend with each other
Abhi calls up sam on her cell and they both keep talking about how much fun they will have in the picnic ..time passes by and they don't realize dat it is 4 oclock in the morning … sameera says dats its better they get some sleep ….. then abhi tells her gudnite and gives her a flying kiss on the phone itself sam in return too gives him a flying kiss ….. and then they both go off to sleep lost in each others thoughts ……..

Will continue soon with the picnic and more abhi sam romance ……..i hope u all liked it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwsome update so sweet please update it soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow..........awesome
pls cont fast
waiting........ 👏

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