SaHan OS Thread - The Renter (pg 1) and The Impersonator (pg 5) - Page 5

Originally posted by: bubblesort

Thankyou for the tag🤗

It's a beautiful piece ❤️

People in real life are actually this layered , their past held the reasons for making them what they are today and you beautifully portrayed it .

Although I doubt ITV creatives to even have such idea😆 but one can hope 😆

Originally posted by: NotAMuggle

This was amazing ⭐️ I love your writing style and the character sketch you put in. ⭐️

Thank you for the tag 😊 And excited to read the next part 😳

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

Woah! 🤪

First thing first, I am on cloud 9 being tagged first on your post (call it a silly human feeling, but I am churan-chatni kinda person and well, small things/actions really do matter to me 😳)

As for the story, you've woven magick in your words yet again! From Renter to Impersonator, there is a huge shift and yet, it all connects! The opening line with Manbeer and her story was like a Deja Vu for me, because believe me when I write this, I had been thinking... what if one day Aakal or perhaps, her own MIL, reminds Manbeer of her horrid past, or her social status before marriage and here you just proved that I am not the only one thinking on those lines! 🤗

Not only I loved the conversation between the mother-son duo, but also how everything was expressed so beautifully. I am looking forward to more instalments to this story! Even if you decide to keep it short and maybe write only a few chapters more, you will find me cheering for you from here! I just want you to continue building this story and keep writing more! ❤️

Brilliant story, amazing twist and a beautiful shift on the tonality of your writing from chapter 1 to this, without making it evident!. The flow is just super!👏

why didnt you post in new thread yaar?

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This is soooo gd. Plz make this into a collection of one shots 😍😄

It's sad to see Manbeer not understanding or even empathizing with Sahiba after what she has gone through herself. Seems like she is taking out her own pent up frustration on her.

I am glad Angad is understading her though.

There are two ways people can turn out when they don’t have a good past - either they vow not to inflict the same on others or they perpetuate the cycle they were subjected and find satisfaction in others suffering (kinda like some bullies, some of them are doing it because they themselves have either been bullied or are being bullied) Manbeer is the second category here but change is always possible so fingers crossed 🤞🏾. Thanks for the comment love. ps: I did want to change the title but cannot seem to figure it out. Any help with that will be appreciated.

Originally posted by: la_Reine

It's sad to see Manbeer not understanding or even empathizing with Sahiba after what she has gone through herself. Seems like she is taking out her own pent up frustration on her.

I am glad Angad is understading her though.

Originally posted by: NidhaA

There are two ways people can turn out when they don’t have a good past - either they vow not to inflict the same on others or they perpetuate the cycle they were subjected and find satisfaction in others suffering (kinda like some bullies, some of them are doing it because they themselves have either been bullied or are being bullied) Manbeer is the second category here but change is always possible so fingers crossed 🤞🏾. Thanks for the comment love. ps: I did want to change the title but cannot seem to figure it out. Any help with that will be appreciated.

Ok so to change the title, go on first page of the thread, at the top where you see the thread title right you will see a button on the right side of it. It's an edit title button. Try that.

Amazing! You are a wonderful writer.

Please do write more. This is hilarious 😂. Absolutely wonderful ❤