Tere Bin OS : dil mera dhakran teri..

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Ok so this os for those who didn't feel good after the promo released..

Mahi specially tere liye yeh os... Ise zyada emotional mn nahi likh skti the 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Baki log bhi parh lena r batana sb comments mn ...


I'm not going to write haya part again ..

The scene started with meerub searching for haya and feena shocked her by telling haya is with murtasim in the village...

Meerub : lagta hai haya madam apnay kamray mn chup k beth gai hn.. kal k bad shayad mu dekhanay k kabil nahi rahi na... Bechari.. r kar bhi kia skti the ... Itnay piyar s kisi r k shohar k liye khana banaya r wo apni biwi ko us date p le gaya... Kuch nahi jo skta is ka...

Feena : nahi bi bi g wo haya bibi to...

Meerub: kia haya bibi..?

Feena : wo to khan shab k sath gaon gai hn ...

It take fewer sec to process her words in meerub mind she just stoped and turn

Meerub : kia murtasim k sath haya gai hai...

Feena : han bibi g ...

Meerub furiously run towards the main door ..

Meerub : driver mujhe chabi do mujhe abhi isi wkt gaon jana hai hai ...

Driver : per bi bi g is wakt... Ap akelay

Meerub : han is wkt mn akelay jaon ge..

Driver : per bi bi maa begum r khan yeh bat bardasht nahi karain gaye...

Meerub: bardasht to ab mujh s nahi ho raha... Tm de rahe ho ya mn ase hi chali jaon..

Driver : bibi g ap buht ghusay mn lag rahi is halat mn gari chalana theek nahi hai... mn ap ko le k chalta hun ap bethiye...

Meerub sit in the car... They left for village..

Scene 2 :

Here murtasim walking here and there in pool side and misses meerub... he is surprised she visited only one time bt every corner every inch is filled with her memories... How she decorated the dining table for him ... When he entered after bakhtu got shot how she came running toward him..

her concerns her tears, her guilt, her courage to fight back ... Her newly found jalousy and claiming her right on him ... Everything he misses at the moment he is lost in her...

Suddenly His eyes blinks due to clear water of pool and his lips curved upward as the moment of throwing her in pool flashes in front of his eye .. and he smiles...

Murtasim : meerub... Meerub... Meerub ... Oh khadaya kia kar dia hai is larki n mere sath... Sath na ho k bhi us ka khayal hamesha sath hota hai... Pata nahi kb mitain ge yeh duriyan...

Then murtasim fone rings he attended the call ..

Murtasim : hello han bakhtu...

Bakhtu : shab yeh kheton mn kuch kartoos milay hn ... Ap plz a k ek dafa dekh lijye k yeh hamre to nahi hn ...

Muratsim : acha theek hai ata hun...

Bakhtu : ap plz kuch garam pehn k aiye ga yehn buht sardi hai

Murtasim : ok ..

Murtasim cuts the call and he wears mehroon sweater and left

At late night :

Murtasim come back to the house... He is surprised to see the candles are settled for dinner.. the he saw someone is standing near the window in red dress having back towards him...

Murtasim felt fortunate that what he just wished for just got it...

He matched closer toward her ... As he reached .... Hold her arm and turn her

Muratsim : meerub tm yehn...

and surprised... Meerub turn into haya šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

Haya smiles back ..

Haya : meerub nahi haya...

Murtasim expression changes into frim..

Murtasim : tm ye meerub k kapron mn kia kar rahi ho...

Haya : wo actually murtasim mere kapron p kuch gir gaya tha to mai n meerub k kapray la diye to mn n pehn liye.. afsoos tm meerub ko expect kar rahe thay.. use tmhara itna khayal hota to kia hi bat hoti... Mohabat to karti naji hai tm s... Shohar honay k natay khayal ho kar leti..

Murtasim : use hai muhabat... Bs kehti nahi hai.. buht jald kehnay bhi lage ge wo bji puri duniya ko cheekh cheekh k..

Haya : tm bs us k piyar mn pagal hotay rehna...meerub tmhare teer dil k ar par bji kar dege na to tm kaho gaye muhabat k hathon mare gaye...

Murtasim : asi hoti muhabat

Haya : mujh s behtar r kon smjh skta hai...

Then haya walk away... Angerly and stops near table she touches her finger with red spice and apply it on her eye ..

Haya : ahahh....

Murtasim : haya? Kia hua...

Her comes near her...

Haya : murtasim meri ankh mn kuch chala gaya hai buht jalan ho rahi hai... Ahaaaa....

Murtasim : jao pani s dho lo aram ho jaye ga...

Haya : per murtasim...

Murtasim : jao ...

And she furiously walk toward the washroom as her plan floped..

Haya in her mind : itni asani s to apna plan fail nahi honay de skti mn ...

Haya comes back after washing her eye..

Haya: Murtasim kuch karo nahi bardash ho raha its burning....

Murtasim saw her eye is swelled...

Murtasim : acha dekhao mujhe

He come close to her and checking her eye with his one hand on her head and other on her chin ... Haya intentionally holds his hand...

Here at this moment meerub comes there... She is shocked to find murtasim and haya in compromising position...

Meerub : murtasim....

Haya smriks ...

Murtasim shocked... He jerk his hand from her face...

Murtasim : meerub...

Then he saw his and haya position... And realize what she considered

Meerub devastately left from there..

Murtasim : god... Haya... Tm...

Murtasim about to go behind her haya holds his hand

Haya : murtasim mat jaobus k peechay plz...

Murtasim jerk her hand away ...

Murtasim calls bakhtu...

Murtasim: bakhtu... Bakhtu...

Bakhtu comes there ...

Bakhtu : g sahab ...

Murtasim : haya ko abhi k abhi haveli waps le k jao..

Haya : murtasim abhi per...

He sign her through finger..

Murtasim: ek lafz r nahi haya.. mujhe nahi patan abhi kia kar bethon ga... Meerub ko kisi qeemat p nahi kho skta...

Murtasim shout : Jao... Jaoo....

Haya heart brokenly leaves...

Murtasim: bakhtu maa s kehna mn r meerub kuch din yehn akelay rehna chatay hn

Bakhtu : g sahab...

Haya n bakhtu left ....

Here Murtasim runs behind her..

Murtasim: meerub... Meerub...

Meerub is walking desperately here and there...

Meerub : mil gai fursat use tmhn ...

Murtasim : mn nahi chahta tha tmahre r mere beech mn koi aye...

Meerub : beech mn .. hmmm.... Beech mn ...

Murtasim took step closer

Murtasim : meerub meri bat suno jesa tm smjh rahi ho wesa kuch ....

Meerub pushes him away ... And yell..

Meerub : door raho mujh s ... mujhe yehn ek min nahi rukna ja rahi hn mn yehn s...

Murtasim holds her hand and yell back

Murtasim : meerub us ki ankh mn kuch...

Meerub slaps him hard...

Meerub : mujhe tmhare explanation nahi chahiye...

Murtasim is shocked on her behaviour... His eyes were filled with anger and emotions of love, care and betrayed... But again he tried to took one step closer... And tried to hold her hand and she jerk it away...

Meerub : don't touch me... Mn tmhare koi khareedi hui ghulam nahi hun jis ko tm jab marzi use karo r kb marzi aye chor do...

Murtasim holds her head frimly to make her look in his firing eyes...

Meerub tries to free herself but he holds her more frimly.. she tried to diverted her gaze but he just make her see in his eyes... Then he forcefully holds her hand from his other hand and place it on his heart...

Meerub : yeh ....

Murtasim : shhhhh....

Meerub felt fire in his eyes and the rythem of his heart beat at same time....

Then he loosens his grip fron her head and slowly holds her other hand and place it on her heart...

Meerub is shocked to realised their hearts beat simsimultaneously....

Then he slowly come closer to her touches his forehead with her

Murtasim : mehsoos karo ise meerub... Is lamhay ko, is rishtay ko, is dharkan ko r meri muhabat ko... Kitni shidadt s mera dil tmhare dil ki dharkan k sath dharak raha hai ....

Tears rolling down from both of their eye...

Murtasim : yeh rishta hai tmhara r mera.. dil r dharkan ka rishta... Dharkan chalti hai to dil dharakta hai... r jb dharkan band ho jati to dil bhi murda ho jata... Jesay dil dharkan k baghair kuch nahi wesay murtasim meerub k baghair kuch nahi...

Murtasim wipes her tears... Meerub stands still... didn't know how to react...

Is she Believe on her eyes r on her heart ...

Murtasim knows what battel she is fighting inside her.. her trust is shaken..

Murtasim : ankhon dekha jhut ho skta hai meerub dil s suna r mehsoos kia kabhi jhoot nahi hota...Tm bhalau abhi is bat ko na mano laikin ek din zaroor mano ge...

Then he left her there with unshed tears

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Tmne toh Murtu ko thapad hi padwa diya


Awww......cutie Murtu....dil le lo aur Haya se dur raho.


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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sera-high123

Tmne toh Murtu ko thapad hi padwa diya


Awww......cutie Murtu....dil le lo aur Haya se dur raho.


Hahaha ab tk becahare n buht suni the thapar p jobun n meeru ko mara tha mn n kaha kuch thora balance ho jaye ga 🤣🤣🤣🤣 hope so is bar mujhe na logon s galian parain 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
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How true is thisā¤ļøā¤ļø

Jesay dil dharkan k baghair kuch nahi wesay murtasim meerub k baghair kuch nahi...

Yar meeru ne kut diya murtu ko😭

Murtu haya ki baton mei aata hi kyun hai ..usko smart hona chahiye and haya se distance rakhna chahiye...

Nice OSā¤ļøā¤ļø hopefully meeru Maan jayegiā¤ļøā¤ļø

Keep writing dear...lots of loveā¤ļøā¤ļø

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: preciousn905k

How true is thisā¤ļøā¤ļø

Jesay dil dharkan k baghair kuch nahi wesay murtasim meerub k baghair kuch nahi...

Yar meeru ne kut diya murtu ko😭

Murtu haya ki baton mei aata hi kyun hai ..usko smart hona chahiye and haya se distance rakhna chahiye...

Nice OSā¤ļøā¤ļø hopefully meeru Maan jayegiā¤ļøā¤ļø

Keep writing dear...lots of loveā¤ļøā¤ļø

thank you so much šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜... Yeah i find their relationship like that... agr ek dusray s alag hua to dusra nahi rahe ga... ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

Yes mujhe laga ise thora murtasim ka slap balance ho jaye ga.... šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

will try to write more... šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜

Edited by aimmyangle - 2 years ago

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