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This is a great start. Well done on making it just slightly different that the original.
Good job with exploring why Sahiba has such a gripe with rich people to begin with. It’s never properly explained in the show and that kind of irks me. Why hate the rich so much? Right now, I get it, the family she is in is not nice at all but on that first encounter with Angad, to go on about rich people wasn’t exactly needed or nice from her part. If she has had previous bad experience then it makes sense.
Good word flow and solid start
Looking forward for more❤️
I agree with NidhaA. She pretty much stated what I wanted to say. So my review is easier to write now 😸😸 Thanks NidhaA.😂😂
I mostly enjoyed her point of view towards the Brar's. 😍😍😍
A very good start. Looking forward to see how you take this story with the tracks in the show. Best of luck for your writing ❤️
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