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I am equally excited to write. (I blame the initial drive.)
I am equally excited to write. (I blame the initial drive.)
Good job with exploring why Sahiba has such a gripe with rich people to begin with. It’s never properly explained in the show and that kind of irks me. Why hate the rich so much? Right now, I get it, the family she is in is not nice at all but on that first encounter with Angad, to go on about rich people wasn’t exactly needed or nice from her part. If she has had previous bad experience then it makes sense.
Good word flow and solid start
Looking forward for more❤️
Yeah. In recent years most serials under explored characters. I am guilty of rewriting and filling loopholes to satisfy my own wishful thinking.
I agree with NidhaA. She pretty much stated what I wanted to say. So my review is easier to write now 😸😸 Thanks NidhaA.😂😂
I mostly enjoyed her point of view towards the Brar's. 😍😍😍
A very good start. Looking forward to see how you take this story with the tracks in the show. Best of luck for your writing ❤️
I think I am going to deviate from the serial track on two accounts, one - I hate when they just add common tracks after a point to continue the serial; two - fanfiction being a different form allows me the liberty to manipulate the pace of storytelling to suit it.
I do hope that you will like Sahiba's perspective more in upcoming chapters.
Sure. But I do not know how to tag since I am new to the forum.
I think you didn't saw one of the episode where she talks with her father & they showed a flashback scene that how her father used to design jewellery and one day she along with her father went to a lady's house to give the set and she said how the design were amazing and once they left that lady was shocked that the jewellery was missing from the box but it was her due to her negligence the chain felt down and both the husband & wife called the police and arrested sahibas dad, but later that day she found the jewellery and told the police to release sahiba dad, they didn't even apologize for their wrong behavior since then sahiba had the hatred for the rich that the rich only care about themselves.
Originally posted by: Joshrocks28
I think you didn't saw one of the episode where she talks with her father & they showed a flashback scene that how her father used to design jewellery and one day she along with her father went to a lady's house to give the set and she said how the design were amazing and once they left that lady was shocked that the jewellery was missing from the box but it was her due to her negligence the chain felt down and both the husband & wife called the police and arrested sahibas dad, but later that day she found the jewellery and told the police to release sahiba dad, they didn't even apologize for their wrong behavior since then sahiba had the hatred for the rich that the rich only care about themselves.
Oh I do remember the scene, but it was presented much later than I would personally prefer.
Okay, now it makes sense. I jumped into TMD from somewhere in between and it’s my own lack of patience to blame 😆. Thank you for clarifying.Originally posted by: Joshrocks28
I think you didn't saw one of the episode where she talks with her father & they showed a flashback scene that how her father used to design jewellery and one day she along with her father went to a lady's house to give the set and she said how the design were amazing and once they left that lady was shocked that the jewellery was missing from the box but it was her due to her negligence the chain felt down and both the husband & wife called the police and arrested sahibas dad, but later that day she found the jewellery and told the police to release sahiba dad, they didn't even apologize for their wrong behavior since then sahiba had the hatred for the rich that the rich only care about themselves.
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Originally posted by: Joshrocks28
I think you didn't saw one of the episode where she talks with her father & they showed a flashback scene that how her father used to design jewellery and one day she along with her father went to a lady's house to give the set and she said how the design were amazing and once they left that lady was shocked that the jewellery was missing from the box but it was her due to her negligence the chain felt down and both the husband & wife called the police and arrested sahibas dad, but later that day she found the jewellery and told the police to release sahiba dad, they didn't even apologize for their wrong behavior since then sahiba had the hatred for the rich that the rich only care about themselves.
No I haven't watched 😊 I will have to recheck again. Thanks for notifying 👍🏼
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