Ishq E Laa #3 (HUM) Azaan Sami , Yumna Zaidi , Sajal Ali - Page 76

Just finished reading your FF. It’s so tender and beautifully written, mazaa aa gaya. I had a smile throughout while reading. have you written other fanfics? I really loved your writing. Pls let me know if I can read other fic written by you, thank you

Yup Ishq E Laa Bahut Heee Pyara Drama Hai from Start To End I Really Loved It Man

Especially Azlan Character ♥️👌and Love The Fact That Azlan Ended Up With Azka Not Shanaya

Azlan Being Very Much In Love With Azka💓❤️ As Azka Is Perfect For Azlan In Every Way

By The Way Guys And All Yumna Zaidi Fans Have U Seen Tere Bin I recently Saw some Clips of Scenes From Drama Tere Bin And Let Me Tell u

How Awful Cringey And Over The Top And Ekdam Gandi Yumna Is Looking As Meerab

Vomit AA Rahi Hai Yumna aka Meerub Ke Chalupan Badtamiziya Planning Plotting And Ekdam Unnatural And Try Harder Wale Attitude Se

Itna Toh Sada Character Hai Meerub Ka Kher Poora Drama Sadela hai Tere Bin Toh 🤮🤮🤮🤮

In Tere Bin Matlab Itna Toh Sada Role Aur Drama Yumna ne Kaisa Choose Kiya I am Still In Utter Shock

Seriously Yumna Se Mujhe Bilkul Isi Expectation Nahi Thi Ki Yumna Isa Nonsense Worthless and Masala Drama Pick Karegi Chiiii Yar

Aur Murtasim Bhai Toh Alag Hee Level Ke Chipku Keechad Aur Cheap Aashiq Hai

Toh Agle Promo Mein Kitna Cheep Hoo Raha Hai Bhayankar Tarike Se Meerub Se Kaha ka Self Respect or Self Control Murtasim Has 0 Self Respect and Self Control

Worthless Character Of Meerub and Murtasim

bada Beech Raha Hai Meerub Ke Aage Vo Bhi Leechad Tarike Se

Murtasim Is Leechad

And Frankly Speaking Mujhe Toh Meerab aur Murtasim Ka Romance Cringe Worthy Over Mature and cheap Lag Raha Hai Lag Raha Hai Jaise 60 Saal Ke Uncle Aunty Romance Kar Rahe hoon

I Mean Mujhe Vaise Bhi Fierceness aur Over Passionatic Couples Bilkul Ache Nahi Lagte Like Meerub -Murtasim

I Am All For Subtle Innocent Child Like Caring Nurturing Loving and Subtle Romance Like Azka -Azlan

Upar Se Yumna Pe Toh Bilkul Bhi Nahi Suit Karta Itna Fierce Glamourous Gaudy Chalu Oversmart Arrogant Rude aur Aggressive Role Like Meerub

Yumna Cute Sweet Simple Masum sii Bacho Jaise Innocent Wale Role Mein Achi Lagti Hai Like Mahjabeen,Azka Azlan,And One In Zara Yaad Kar

Na Ki Meerub Jaise Chalu Gaudy Glamourous and Over Smart And Arrogant Roles Mein..

Originally posted by: columbia

Just finished reading your FF. It’s so tender and beautifully written, mazaa aa gaya. I had a smile throughout while reading. have you written other fanfics? I really loved your writing. Pls let me know if I can read other fic written by you, thank you

Thank you very much dear for the appreciation.It was my first attempt of writing. It is the only FF I have posted. Glad that it came to your notice and you enjoyed it. There was 2 or 3 small OS/scenes I wrote on Azkaan and posted earlier but need to find the page nos. I will send you.

Thank you.

Originally posted by: kamleshmehra

Thank you very much dear for the appreciation.It was my first attempt of writing. It is the only FF I have posted. Glad that it came to your notice and you enjoyed it. There was 2 or 3 small OS/scenes I wrote on Azkaan and posted earlier but need to find the page nos. I will send you.

Thank you.

Please do post itne other ones. I think you should try writing another one. Have you watched the show Pukar with Zahid and Yumna. Even that one they say I love you to each other in the last episode, but I felt it would have been lovely if they had few more episodes with Zahid enjoying her love, becuase he is a late entry in the show - almost at episode 10 and they show his one sided love throughout.I think your style of writing would suit their love story too. Please do write more.

Also what is the page number of the last part of your fanfic? I want to be able to read it again, but there is too much confusion. Thanks again

@Kamleshmehra’s Azlan and Azka's fanfiction:

1st Part- Pg 38

2nd Part- Pg 40

3rd Part- Pg 43

4th Part- Pg 44

5th Part- Pg 46

6th Part- Pg 47

7th Part- Pg 48

8th Part- Pg 49

9th Part- Pg 66

10th Part- Pg 70

11th Part- Pg 73

Part 12 - Pg 74

Here you go to make it easy for other readers

Originally posted by: columbia

Please do post itne other ones. I think you should try writing another one. Have you watched the show Pukar with Zahid and Yumna. Even that one they say I love you to each other in the last episode, but I felt it would have been lovely if they had few more episodes with Zahid enjoying her love, becuase he is a late entry in the show - almost at episode 10 and they show his one sided love throughout.I think your style of writing would suit their love story too. Please do write more.

Also what is the page number of the last part of your fanfic? I want to be able to read it again, but there is too much confusion. Thanks again

The small writings are on Ishq E Laa thread 2:

Page no. 15, 36, 48 and 53..

I did not watch Pukar...So I don't have any idea about the story..Thank you for appreciating the effort..

If I will write something on anything ..I will tag you..Thank you❤️

@Kamleshmehra’s Azlan and Azka's fanfiction:

1st Part- Pg 38

2nd Part- Pg 40

3rd Part- Pg 43

4th Part- Pg 44

5th Part- Pg 46

6th Part- Pg 47

7th Part- Pg 48

8th Part- Pg 49

9th Part- Pg 66

10th Part- Pg 70

11th Part- Pg 73

Part 12 - Pg 76

Here you go to make it easy for other readers.

Thank you @Columbia for your effort.

Part 1 51

Part 2 52

Part 3 55

Part 4 63

Part 5 69

Part 6 72

Part 7 75

Part 8 77

Part 9 78

Part 10 79

Par 11 80

Part 12 81

Part 13 83

Part 14 84

Part 15 85

Part 16 86

Part 17 87

Part 18 89

Part 19 93

Part 20

Azka is crying in her room

Azka:Mujhe to jana tha ek din yaha se phir mujhe kyu Rona aa raha hai.mene nahi socha tha ke me yaha se jate hue aise emotional ho jaugi.sabne itna pyaar itni izzat jo dee hai mujhe.par mene to jana hi tha ek din main phir….

Suddenly azka's phone rings

Azka:hello

P: doctor Azka sorry to disturb you par aaj aapki 3 appointments hai.aur aap abhi tak aayi nhi

Azka:par wo to 18th ko thi na.

P: doctor Azka r u ok?

Azka:jee kyu ?

P: doctor azka aaj 18th hi hai.

Azka:aahhh..i m sorry it's my mistake.

P:If u don't feel good so hum cancel kar de?

Azka:nahi..me aa rahi hu..but aap ab mazeed koi appointment na lena.

P:sure Doctor Azka.

Azka to her self:me kaise bhul gayi..meri appointments thi aur me..Azlan saab ne sham ko aana hai tab tak me hospital se aa jaugi.me unhe phone kar deti hu.

azka calls azlan

Azka: Asalamualaikum

Azlan: Walekum assalam Jee Azka

Azka:wo mene aapko batana tha me kuch der ke liye hospital jaa rahi hu.

Azlan:accha kheriyat ?

Azka:jee jee bas kuch appointments thi is wajah se.

Azlan:thik hai me shaam ko aapko pick kar luga.bas office me ek meeting hai abhi than Shirin aunty ka thoda sa kaam hai.

Azka:nahi aap busy hoge me waise bhi 2 3 ghanto me ghar aa jaugi.

Azlan:thik hai but agr me jaldi free hua to me aa jauga warna driver to hai hi.

Azka:.......

Azlan:Azka u there?

Azka:jee …me sun rahi hu

Azlan:kya hua sab thik hai?

Azka:wo mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi.par koi nhi hum shaam me kar lege.

Azlan stops his car.

Azlan:Azka batao kya baat hai?

Azka:wo mene Shirin aunty ke baare me baat karni thi.

Azlan:Shirin aunty ke.

Azka:jee wo main ye bol rahi thi ke aap aisa kare……

Azlan listens to Azka's whole talk and he is very happy.

Azka:hello..Azlan saab

Azlan:Azka me yahi hu.

Azka:aapko mera ye bolna bura to nhi laga na? I mean aap agar chaahe to apni marzi…

Azlan:Azka meri marzi wahi hai jo aapki hai.so don't worry me ghar aakar baat karta hu.

Azka:thik hai par aap ye baat …mera matalab hai.

Azlan:Azka me ghar aakar baat karta hu ok..aap abhi hospital jaye.

Azka:thik hai Allah hafiz

Azlan:Allah Hafiz

azlan hangs up the phone

Azlan:Azka tum bhi kamaal ho sach me..Aaj tumhre liye mere dil me Izzat aur Pyaar aur bhadh Gaya hai.Main kaise tumhe Jane du apni zindagi se..nahi me nhi kho sakta tumhe.

Next scene

Umair:ok so gentalman shell we start the meeting?

P:Where is Mr.Azlan.

Umair:He has some urgent work,that's why he's out of the country,That's why I am conducting this meeting in his absence.

P:ohh ok than.

Umair:let's start.

just then azlan comes to the office

Azlan:GOOD MORNING EVERYONE.

Everyone turns back to see that Azlan has come to the meeting.Umair is surprised to see Azlan.

P: Mr.Azlan par Mr umair to bol rahe the aap out of country hai?

Azlan looks at Umair and Umair gets up from his chair.

Azlan:Mr.Umair ki aadat hai hamesha meri cheezo ko misunderstood karne ki.mene kaha tha me thoda late hu.but ye samjhe ke me aauga hi nhi.

Azlan goes to Umair

Azlan:Umair tumhri meri cheezo pe qabza karne wali aadat abhi tak nhi gayi.come on grow up man.tum jante ho jaha mene pahochna hota hai waha aane se mujhe koi rok nhi sakta.

Umair doesn't say anything. Azlan sits down and starts the meeting.

After the meeting Everyone leaves the room

Azlan:Umair

Umair turns to Azlan

Azlan:sorry yar tumhri wo shopping list to wahi reh gayi.aisa karo tum chale jao aur aaram se shopping karna.dont worry about here ,main hu na sab sambhal lunga jaise hamesha se sambhalta aaya hu

Umair:me tumhre absence me meeting conduct kar raha tha nothing else.agar mujhe pata hota ke tum wapas aa gaye ho to me yaha nhi aata.

Azlan:u think I believe on you.

Umair: ofcourse not hamesha ki tarah.

Azlan:really phir tum mujhe ye batao tumne meri tickets 2 din baad ki kyu karwayi?

Umair:tumhe usse business me kuch loss hua? Nahi na than chill.

Azlan:i don't care about meeting and business but me apne ghar walo se door rahu 2 din ya 2 min us me mera loss hai.

Umair:tum kab se family man ho ban gaye Azlan?aur kaunsi family? contract se bane rishtey ko tum family ka naam mat do.

Azlan:Azka aur mere beach me bolne wale tum hote kaun ho?

Umair comes to Azlan and puts his hand on his shoulder.

Umair:main kaun hu !!! ye me tumhe zarur batata but abhi mujhe kahi Jana Hai.but relax hum bahot jald baat karege.

Umair says this and he leaves.

Next scene

Azka is in the hospital and gets a call from Kawal.

Azka: Asalamualaikum bhabhi.

Kawal: Walekum assalam Azka tune kab Tak aana hai? Me tere liye Teri pasand ka khana bana rahi hu.

Azka:bhabhi me shaam ko aaugi.

Kawal:shaam ko kyu?

Azka:bhabhi mene aa jana tha par Azlan saab ne kaha ke me shaam ko unke saath aau.

Kawal:aur tu maan gayi.

Azka:jee bhabhi ab me unhe kaise mana karti.

Kawal:kaise matlab jaise mana karte hai waise..Azka tu hamesha ke liye aa rahi hai.talaq de rahe hai wo tujhe,wo koi tujhe noramal shohar ke jaise chodne nhi aa rahe hai.tujhe kya zarurat hai unki har baat maanne ki.

Azka feels bad hearing this. But she knows that this is the truth of their relationship.

Kawal:Azka ..helloo

Azka:ahh..bhabhi aisi koi baat nhi.

Kawal:Azka dekh

Just then there is a knock in the room and Umair comes in. Azka sees him and signals to sit.

Azka:bhabhi me shaam ko aa to rahi hu na wapas,me abhi hospital me hu shaam ko baat hoti hai.

Kawal:accha thik hai tu phir apna kaam kar le.

Azka:thik hai.Allah hafiz.

Azka starts thinking of leaving. Umair notice her

Umair:Azka..

Azka:aahh..Umair i m so sorry

Umair: it's ok ,kaisi ho Azka?

Azka:bilkul sahi..aap bataye.aunty kaisi hai?

Umair: mashaallah she is fine.aapne jo physiotherapist recommend Kiya tha usse bahot help hui hai

Azka:that's great.aap reports laaye hai.

Umair:yes.

Azka:dikhaye …hmm mashallah aunty ki progress day by day acchi hoti jaa rahi hai.bas aap yahi medicine continue rakhe and wahi routine workout.

Umair:ok.

Umair looks at Azka, Azka is feeling extinguished today.

Umair:so tumhre husband aa gaye?

Azka:jee raat ko aa gaye the.

Umair:good phir tum aaj ghar kyu jaa rahi hu.

Azka:wo.. actually Bahot din ho gaye hai Amma se nhi mili.

Azka says this and starts writing something.

Umair:Azka can I ask u something?sahi sahi jawab dogi?

Azka:jee puche

Umair:tum azlan se shadi kar ke khush ho?

Azka immediately looks at Umair. And Umair still looking at her.

Azka:..ha..mere aur Azlan saab ..ke beach sab sahi hai.

Umair:aur me agar ye kahu ke mujhe contract marriage ke baare me pata hai phir bhi.

Azka gets shocked hearing this.

Azka:aapko…kaise?matlab aap ye sab

Umair:Azka relax mene ek din by mistake tumhri aur bhabhi ki baat suni Li thi,mujhe bas yahi pata hai aur kuch nhi.me sach sunna chahta hu aur mujhe pata hai sach mujhe tum hi bata sakti ho.

Azka:Umair ye sach hai mere aur azlan saab ke beach contract marriage hui hai.

Umair:wajah?

Azka:unki mom ko KIDNEY ki zarurat thi aur meri kidney match hui thi.

Umair:To usne tumhe ye ghatiya offer ki.

Azka:haa.. matlab nahi..Umair aap jante ho KIDNEY doner me bahu ka naam bhi aata hai.

Umair:aata hai i know but for God sake Azka wo tumse sach me bhi to nikaah kar sakta tha …contract nikaah ki kya zarurat thi?.aur ye sab bhi chodo,tum kaise maan gayi uski behuda offer ke liye.dunia me kitne log hai jinko kidneys ki zarurat hoti hai.azlan ki mom ke liye hi kyu tumne ye kiya?

Azka:kyu ke Azlan saab ne mere upar..

Umair asks angrily before Azka can say anything.

Umair:usne dhamkaya tha tumhe? Ya apni power ka istmaal kiya tha?

Azka:NAHI..nahi umair aap galat bol rahe hai.unhone mujhe Zara sa bhi force nhi kiya.

Umair:to phir kyu Azka? Batao mujhe? Itni kaunsi musibat aa gayi thi ke tumne apni life ka itna zaruri faisla le liya,US AADMI SE JUTHA NIKAAH KARNE KE LIYE RAAZI HO GAYI

Azka:Kyu ke Azlan saab hi mere Mohsin the.

Umair is very surprised to hear this. He knew this from Azka that someone had paid Azka's medical fees.

Umair:WHAT!!!!…. Azlan…Azlan tumhra mohsin kaise ? i mean ..wo ye sab kyu karega?

Azka:Shanaya ji ke liye.

Umair:Shanaya !!!!

Azka:unki pehli wife

Umair:mujhe pata hai..Mera matlab.. hai ..bhai ne bataya tha.

Azka:Umair Shanaya ji ne wada kiya tha ke wo mujhe doctor banayegi aur Azlan saab ne unki ye khawaish puri ki.mujhe to pata bhi nhi tha apne mohsin ka aap jante hai ..me kaise hamesha apne mohsin ke baare me baate Kiya karti thi.phir jab unse milne unke office gayi to pata chala ke wo shakhs aur koi nhi Azlan saab hai.wo insaan jo mujh se sadeed nafarat karte the.

Umair:nafarat…?kyu?

Azka gets up from her chair and stands near the window.

Azka:Azlan saab ke ghar Bhai kaam kiya karte the.bhai ki jab death Hui tab unka case Shanaya ji handle kar rahi thi.usi case ki wajah se

Umair:Shanaya ka murder hua tha.

Azka turn hoti hai.

Azka:aapko kaise pata?

Umair:it's a very famous news..bahot chali thi TV pe.but mujhe nhi pata tha wo tumhre bhai ka case tha.

Azka:Shanaya ji ke jane baad Azlan saab ki nafarat mere liye aur bhadh gayi.unhone mujhe us din office me jo kuch bhi kaha mere liye wo sab baate kisi tamache se kam nhi thi.aur mere paas yahi ek mauka tha ke jis se me unke ehsaano ke bojh se khud ko azaad kar saku.

Umair comes to Azka

Umair:Azka mujhe ek baat samjh nhi aayi you said Azlan tumse pehle se nafarat karta tha..kyu?

Azka smile karti hai.

Azka:Aaj se 5 saal pehle huamri mulaqat hui thi ek do baar jab me Amma ke saath unke ghar gayi thi.aur un mulaaqato mein humare beach nafrat ke siwa kuch nhi tha.

umair: Ofcourse wo insaan ko insaan kaha samjhta hai,Waise kitna bada dramebaz insaan hai azlan us din Ghar pe kaise parwaah kar raha tha tumhri mere samne.

Azka:wo karte hai meri parwaah,bahot parwah karte hai.aapne jo us din dekha us me kuch juth nhi tha.

Umair:u mean to say uski tumhre liye sadeed nafarat khatam ho gayi?

Azka:jee.

Umair:phir tum dono alag kyu ho rahe ho?

Azka:kyu ki yahi teh hua tha humare beach me.jis maqsad ke liye humne ye contract marriage ki thi wo maqsad ab khatam ho gaya

Umair ye sunkar kuch der rukta hai.

Umair:Azlan ye contract khatam na karna chahta ho to?

Azka:wo kyu ye karege?

Umair:MAY BE AZLAN KO TUMSE PYAAR HO GAYA HO TO..?

Azka:mujhse pyaar?

Umair:ha jaise wo tumhra khayaal rakhta hai.ye sab cheezo ka kya matlab ho sakta hai

Azka:matlab bas yahi hai ke wo meri parwaah karte hai.kisi ki parwah karna aur usse Mohabbat karna do alag alag baate hai.wo aaj bhi Shanaya ji se mohabbat karte Hai,aur mujhse jayada ye baat kaun samjh sakta hai

Umair:Aur tum khush ho is sab se?

Azka looks at Umair

Azka:jee bilkul,me bahot khush hu,Azlan saab bhi bahot khush hai.wo bahot pareshan the mom ko lekar.par ab sab sahi hai.mom bilkul thik ho gayi hai,aur Ab Azlan saab ko koi pareshani nahi hai.

Umair keeps looking at Azka.

Azka:chale mene Ghar jana hai Azlan saab aate hi hoge unhone kaha tha wo mujhe khud drop karne ayege me chalti hu.

Azka apna bag lekar Jane lagti hai.

Umair: Azka

Azka:jee?

Umair is still looking at her.

Umair:kuch nahi .bas ye bolna tha ke tum bahot acchi ho,aur bahot bahadur bhi.

Azka smiles and so does Umair. Both come out, Azka goes with the driver and Umair starts thinking about Azka's words.

Next scene

Azlan: Asalamualaikum mom

Sitwat: Walekum assalam Azlan beta tumse kuch puchna tha

Azlan:jee mom

Sitwat:beta Azka ne mujhe bataya ke wo apni Amma ke ghar jaa rahi hai

Azlan:mom…wo wapas jana chahti.

Sitwat:aise kaise wapas jana chahti hai …Azlan usko roko beta.

Azlan:mom pata nhi use kya hua hai mene aunty ka bhi bola usko ke wo yaha aayi Hui hai isliye abhi na jaye..but wo nahi maani.

Sitwat:to tum use jane doge ?

Azlan: ofcourse not mom but mere paas use rokne ke liye koi wajah bhi nhi hai..kya bol ke roku use.wo to subah hi Jana chaah rahi thi mene kaha ke shaam tak ruk jaye me khud drop kar duga,mom shaam hone wali hai aur mujhe kuch samjh nhi aa raha.

Sitwat:Azlan usko batao ke tum usse mohabbat karte ho bata do ke tum kya chahte ho.

Azlan:mom mere chahne se kya hota hai..agar wo mere liye kuch bhi feel karti to wo aise jane ka nhi bolti.pata nhi mom kuch samjh nhi aa raha.

Sitwat:me baat karu azka se?

Azlan:nhi mom bilkul nahi..me nahi chahta us pe kisi bhi tarah ka pressure ho.

Sitwat:par azlan aise to wo…

Just then Umair enters Azlan's cabin

Azlan: chali jayegi i know but use rokne ka koi….

Azlan looks at Umair.He gets angry because Umair comes without knocking.

Azlan:mom me aapse ghar aakar baat karta hu…jee ok ..don't worry..ok Allah Hafiz

Azlan stands up from his chair.

Azlan:ye kya battmizi hai

Umair:kyu tum bhi to us din mere office aise hi aaye the? Aaj mene ye kiya to battmizi ho gayi

Azlan:point pe aao..kya baat hai?

Umair:tum batao kya baat hai?

Azlan:kaunsi baat?

Umair:Azka aur tumhre contract ki baat.

Azlan:umair mene pehle bhi kaha hai Azka aur mere beach jo kuch bhi hai ye mera aur uska personal matter hai.

Umair:Kaunsa Personal matter Azlan,tumne jis maqsad ke liye usse nikaah kiya tha wo maqsad pura ho gaya hai to ab azaad kar do usko.

Azlan:Azka ko mene qaid kab kiya hai jo use Azaad karu.

Umair:phir Abhi jo bol rahe the wo kya tha? Kyu use rokne ke bahane dudh rahe ho?

Azlan:tum hote kaun ho mujhse ye sawaal karne wale?

Umair:jaha Azka ki baat aayegi me sawaal karuga.

Azlan:kyu?

Umair:kyun ke mujhe uski fiqar hai.

Azlan:mujhse jayada fiqar nhi kar sakte tum uski

Umair:tum ye baat bolte hue acche nahi lagte azlan ..uski itni fiqar hoti to sirf kidney ke liye use yu use nahi karte.

Azlan gets angry hearing this.

Azlan:mene galti ki hai me ye manta hu..par mene kabhi Azka ko lekar galat nahi socha na pehle jab wo meri kuch nahi lagti thi aur na ab.

Umair:accha kya faraq aa gaya hai ab?

azlan remains silent

Umair:nahi batao na ab me aur tab me kya faraq aa gaya hai.Ab tumhe lag raha hai ke chalo accha hai meri Maa ko uski aadat ho gayi hai,wo chali gayi to wo udaas na ho jaye,Azka ladki bhi masoom hai me rokuga to ruk jayegi.koi bahana sochta hu hai na yahi soch hai na tumhri?

Hearing this, Azlan looks at Umair with a smile.

Umair:ye jo tum game kar rahe ho na uske saath me hone nhi duga.har baar tum jo chaho ye nhi hoga.

Azlan:i don't care whatever u think ,par me koi drama nhi kar raha

Umair: ofcourse tum kar rahe ho,i know,kuch bhi emotional drama karoge aur Azka ko rok loge,aur tumhra kya hai Azlan tum to use zindagi bhar ek bina maqsad ke rishtey me baandh ke rakh loge jaise abhi tak bhandha hua hai.

Azlan:.......

Umair:bolo yahi irada hai na tumhra?

Azlan:Mera irada kya hai ye me tumhe kyu batau?,tum kyu aa rahe ho humare beach me?

Umair:Main Azka ki fiqar karta hu.Azka ko tumhre ye juthe nikaah se azaad dekhna chahta hu.

Azlan:wajah?

Umair looks into Azlan's eyes for a second

Umair:Wajah …thik hai phir suno,MAIN AZKA SE PYAAR KARTA HU AUR USSE SHADI KARNA CHAHTA HU TUMHRE IS JUTHE NIKAAH SE BAHAR KAR KE ME APNAA NA CHAHTA HU USE

Azlan loses his temper after hearing this.

Azlan:Tumhri himmat kaise hui meri biwi ke baare me aisa sochne ki??

Azlan starts punching him..and Umair holds his hand

Umair:Azlan bhul ke bhi ye galti na karna

Azlan: galti…main tumhe ye bakwaas karne ke liye jaan se bhi maar sakta hu.

Umair is happy to see Azlan like this.

Umair:yahi sach hai.aur me tumhe Azka ki zindagi se nikaal ke rahuga.tum hamesha se first aaye ho ,school ho ya college ya phir koi deal but not this time Azlan.

Azlan:Azka koi deal ya koi trophy nahi hai.

Umair:par uska pyaar meri liye zindagi ki Sabse badi jeet hai,aur is dafa me tumhe wo nahi lene duga.

Azlan looks at Umair angrily. And then after thinking for some time, he becomes normal.

Azlan:agar me purana wala Azlan hota na to is baat ke liye me tumhe jaan se maar deta.par nahi me ab wo nhi Raha Azka ke pyaar ne mujhe badal diya hai.par Iska matlab ye nahi hai ke tum meri biwi ke bare me ye sab bakwas baate Karo.

Umair:biwi bolne ke liye pehle use biwi ki tarah izzat bhi deni hoti hai Azlan.jo tum use nhi de sake.aur ye sab mere samne nhi Azka ke samne bol ke dikhao to Maanu.

Azlan:mujhe apna pyaar kisi ko bhi proof karne ki zarurat nhi hai.

Umair:sahi hai tum apna pyaar apni tarah jatao aur me apna pyaar apne tarike se dikhauga.aur faisla Azka pe chodte hai.kya kahte ho?

Azlan does not give any answer and goes to his seat and sits.

Umair:tum to abhi se haar maan ke Beth Gaye ho.

Azlan:tumhe jo karna hai kar lo par ek baat yaad rakhna Azka meri izzat mera pyaar aur meri Biwi hai humare Darmiyan beshaq contract hua ho,par Nikaah saccha hai.bilkul mere pyaar ki tarah,mere liye ye koi jung nahi hai BUT tum kal bhi haare the aur aaj bhi haroge.

Umair:good dekhte hai phir kaun kisko haraata hai.

Umair leaves after saying this. His words do not hold any importance for Azlan, he is still worried about how to stop Azka.

Next scene

Azka hospital se ghar aati hai

Samra:Azka Bibi aap aa gayi begam sahiba aapka puch rahi thi.

Azka:accha.

Azka comes to Sitwat's room where Shireen Alreday is sitting.

Azka: Asalamualaikum

Sitwat: Walekum assalam Azka aao beta.

Azka:sab thik hai mom ?

Sitwat:ha beta sab thik hai,aaj subah thik se baat nhi Hui tumse.

Azka:bas mom hospital Jana zaruri tha warna mene Aaj off hi Lena tha

Sitwat:tumhri aadat ho gayi hai mujhe Azka,tumse baat na ho to ajeeb sa lagta hai.

Azka does not speak anything, remains silent.

Sitwat:accha idhar aao me subah tumhe dikhana hi bhul gayi thi

Azka:kya mom?

Sitwat:yahi ke mere kanjoosh beta aur tumhra shohar mere liye kya lekar aaya hai.

Azka smile karti hai.

Azka:mom me bhi bhul gayi, aap ye dekhe jo wo mere liye laaye hai,

Azka takes off her pendant and shows it to Sitwat.

Sitwat:MashaAllah Azka bahot pyaara hai.

Azka:mom same aise hi earrings aur ring bhi hai.

Sitwat:chalo thodi to akkal aayi mere bete ko.

Azka:mom aap bhi na

Sitwat:kya mom bilkul sahi bol rahi hu main,aao me tumhe apna gift dikhati hu

Azka sits beside Sitwat on the bed

Sitwat:ye dekho

Azka takes the box from Sitwat, opens it and sees small earrings in it.

Azka:mom ye bahot pyaare hai.

Sitwat:ha mujhe bhi bahot acche lage,pehli baar Azlan ne jewellery buy ki hai khud se

Azka:ha unhone mujhe bataya tha.

Sitwat:sab tumhri wajah se hai Azka..tumne aakar mere us pagal bete ko thodi si samjh de di.warna shirin se puch lo Azlan aur gifts ye to impossible baat hai.use apne business tour me apne kaam ke alawa kuch yaad nhi hota tha.

Azka:mom waha itna Sara kaam jo hota hai.kaise yad reh sakta hai

Sitwat:Azka tum side mat lo apne shohar ki ,me maa hu uski janti hu use acchi tarah ye sab tumhra kamaal hai.

Azka:mom aisa kuch nhi hai.

Sitwat:na mano par sach yahi hai,kyu Shirin sahi bol rahi hu na,tumne to dekha hai azlan ko suru se.

Shirin:ha ab biwi demands karegi to use Lana hi padega na.

Azka:aisi koi baat nhi hai aunty,mujhe to pata bhi nhi tha ke wo ye laaye hai.

Shirin:phir bhi insaan ko pata hota hai kaun kaisa hai aur use kya cheez se Khushi milti hai.

Azka does not say anything, Shireen keeps looking at Azka for some time. Azka feels uncomfortable seeing her.

Azka:mom me aati hu kuch der main.

Azka waha se chali jati hai.

Sitwat:Shirin dekho meri baat ka bura na manana par mene dekha hai tumne abhi tak Azka ko apnaya nhi hai.

Shirin:sitwat Main kaise use accept kar lu,tum janti ho mere liye ye sab asaan nhi hai.

Sitwat:me samjhti hu par Azlan hamesha to Shanaya ki yaado me nhi reh sakta tha na.

Shirin:mujhe azlan ke dobara shadi karne se koi problem nhi hai, infact me to khud chahti thi ke wo shadi kare apna ghar basaye,jab tumne mujhe uski shadi ki news dee yaqeen mano me bahot khush hui thi.

Sitwat:to phir ab kya hua ?

Shirin:azlan ne shadi ki bhi to kis se Azka se…ye wahi ladki hai jiske bhai ke case ki wajah se meri bacchi is dunia se chali gayi.me kaise aise apna lu sitwat mere liye bahot mushkil hai.pehle ye meri beti ki maut ki wajah bani aur aaj usi ki jagah bhi le li.

Sitwat:par Shirin Azka bahot..

Before Sitwat could say anything, Shireen leaves from there.

Next scene

Azka comes in the room and starts looking at the room. She sits on the bed and closes her bag.Then she takes the pendant given by Azlan in her hand. And then starts wearing it.Shireen is passing by the room and she sees Azka and comes to her room.

Azka:aunty aap aaiye na kuch kaam tha to mujhe bula liya hota

Shirin:kyu ab me is kamre me nhi aa sakti.

Azka:nahi..mera ye matlab nahi tha main to bas..bas ye keh

Shirin:ek baat to batao Azka Tumhe zara si bhi Sharam nhi aayi meri beti ki jagah lete hue.

Azka is very shocked to hear this.

Azka: JAGAH…Aunty aap..

Shirin:.ye mat bhulo ke ye jo kuch bhi tumhe Mila hai is par meri beti ka haq tha jo sirf aur sirf tum aur tumhre ghar walo ki wajah se is dunia me nhi hai.kaisi behiss aur chalaak ladki ho tum Azka kitni besharami se usi ke shohar ke saath usi ke kamre me reh Rahi ho.

Azka feels very ashamed after hearing all these things, tears well up in her eyes

Azka:aunty ..main..aap …aap galat samjh Rahi..main kabhi Shanaya ji ki jagah…

Azka stops and starts looking towards the door. Shirin also turns back and sees Azlan standing there.Who is looking towards Azka.Shirin goes to Azlan but Azlan has his eyes fixed on Azka, she leaves without saying anything to him.Now there is no one in the room except both of them, both Azka and Azlan are looking at each other.

End of part 20

Yar Ye Dono Azka Aur Azlan Kitne Toh Pyare Aur Awesome Hai

Azka Aur Azlan Ka Dil Bhi Kitna Saaf hai They are Just Love 💕🥰

Literally Yar Azka And Azlan Are Soo Masoom , Innocent,Pure ,and Ekdam Chote Bacho Jaise Hai Dono

Cute Se Sweet Se

Azka and Azlan Are Just Pure Love and Innocence In Your Story and

Azlan Azka Ko Leke Kitna Toh Gentle and Sensitive Hai

Azlan Is Total Gentleman Har Ladki Ka Dream Boy Hai Azlan Toh

And Azlan aur Azka Ekdoosre Se Unconditional Love Karte Hai

Azlan Aur Azka Ka Pyar Total Divine and Pure Hai Ekdoosre Ke Liye Dono Apne Bare Mein Nahi Sochte bas Ekdoosre Ke Baare Mein Sochte Hai

Azka Aur Azlan Dono Ko Khud Se Zayada Ekdoosre Ki Fikar Rehti Hai

And That's What It Is Called As Pure and Divine Love

Koi Milavat Nahi Hai Azka aur Azlan Ke Pyar Mein

Coming to This Chapter Ye Chapter Kafi Emotional Tha and At Some Point In This Chapter I Literally Felt Like Crying 😭🥺

Azka aur Azlan Ka One On One Ekdoosre Ke Samne ya Saath Wala Interaction Nahi Tha Iss Chapter Mein

Next Chapter Mein Milega Azka Azlan Ka One On One Interaction

I Love U Address Shirin Pain ,Afflictions ,Sufferings and Shirin's Condition And Psychology After Passing Of Her Only Beloved Daughter Shanaya

And Shirin Underlying Issues With Azka

As Dii Ishq E Laa Mein Shirin Ka Issue Address Nahi Kiya Gaya Tha

Aur Shanaya Ki Death Ke Baad Shirin Ko Ekdam Se Dikhana Band Kar Diya Tha

toh Aapne Ye Shirin Wala Issue Yaha Address Karke Bahut Hee Acha Kiya Really Kudos To U And Your Writing Sana Dii

U are Awesome Writer and I Really Mean It

love Your Writing ❤️🙏❣️

Your Writing Is Just Pure Love Sana Dii

And I Really Love The Ending Of This Chapter Ki Rather Shirin Ko Kuch Bolne Ke Ya Kehne Ke Azlan Azka Se Confront Karega

Kyoki Shirin Toh Badi Hai Aur Takleef Mein Bhi Hai As Uski Bhi Toh Eklauti Beti Aur Budhape Ka Sahara Gaya Hai Shanaya Ke Roop Mein🥺😭😭

Aur Bechari Azka Bhi Apni Jagah Ekdam Sahi Theek Aur Bahut Achi Hai 🥺😔

Azka Ka Dil Sahi Mein Bahut Bada Masoom Innocent Hai

aur Azka Ke Dil Mein Logo Ke Liye Bahut Hamdardi Rehti Hai Which I Loved It

Both Azka and Azlan ❣️💗👌👌

And Ishq E Laa Drama Bhi Jo Itna Toh Bhayankar Acha i Mean Bahut Acha Hai

And The Moral Ethical And Social Messaging With Connection to Divinity and God Is Awesome in Ishq E Laa 👌👌

Dramas Like Ishq E Laa Should Be Made

And Characters like Azka, Azlan and Shanaya Who Reflect Such a Positivity and Progressive Thinking Should Be Portrayed More Often and Should be Encouraged Too ..

Anyways Dear Will Wait For Next Chapter Update in This Fanfiction

Sabr Ka Bahut Mushkil Hai Agle Update ka Par Namumkin Nahi

Toh Kar Lenge Thoda Sabr

Sabr Ka Fal Mitha Jo Hota Hai😄

Like Your Next Update Meetha Fal

Eagerly Waiting So Please Post As Early as Possible

Lots and Lots Of Happiness Love and Positivity to You ,Your Family and Your Loved Ones ❤️💖

God Bless You and All❣️