Karma - short stories ( future track)

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This ff is based on future track. A route which the writer can take. A karmic route . A plot that i had in mind. Sharing in parts.



Karma!!



In the dark room.


She looked around desperately,searching for a way to escape. It's been a week she had been admitted to a mental asylum far away from her family. No one knew her whereabouts.


Naaz Nikhil Kapoor was tortured badly with electric shocks as a punishment for destroying her sister nehmat 's life. The karmic payback.


It happened on the 8th February, the grand birthday celebration of shamsher Kapoor , her father in law, in a five star hotel. The whole moga was present. She was kidnapped by three goons disguising as guests.


Pissed to the core , she recalled the tragic events of that day. Her husband , Nikhil Kapoor apparently hired strangers to get rid of her. She was getting on his nerves with her constant rants. He was sure that she only made use of him for her greedy motives. She never loved him


Sipping a cup of hot black coffee in his room, Nikhil smirked. It was a relief. His wife became pain in the a**. He was getting attracted to her friend Malika Randawa instead who apparently made numerous trips to his place recently.


Malika wanted to get her hands on Advait and hence decided to keep meeting up with him at his residence. Nikhil misunderstood that the former was interested in him little realising that she was trying to woo his older married brother instead. Falling indirectly into Malika's trap, he deceived his own annoying manipulative wife by admitting her into a mental asylum receiving shocks so that she could suffer from memory loss and never returned, forgetting him forever


Lying on the hard cold marble floor, she cursed her cruel destiny. It was all her bad karma. She sew her seeds. She was determined to teach the culprit a lesson of lifetime.

Nehmat!! Her own sister.

She did this to me!!

Nehmat!! I am gonna kill u . Just let me get out of here !!!



To be continued

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow this is amazing. 👏

This seems to be an extended version of the OS I had written recently.

Really cool story bro, I loved the first part.❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

Wow this is amazing. 👏

This seems to be an extended version of the OS I had written recently.

Really cool story bro, I loved the first part.❤️


Which os??🤣🤣🤣

I haven't read

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


Which os??🤣🤣🤣

I haven't read

Oh really bro!😆

Then maybe your ghost commented in my OS thread.🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

Oh really bro!😆

Then maybe your ghost commented in my OS thread.🤣



Ok. So u are talking about that OS🤣🤣🤣

U wrote a few . I haven't read.

I was wondering which one🤣🤣

Ok, urs was about naaz punished . I had the same idea but different route

That what what i commented there

But i don't have time to write too long. Just few parts in synopsis version.

This one is what i thought last month but was really tied up . It does resemble ur idea but with slight difference.

There is a twist for admat in this os 😍😍

But I didn't start with them

It is suspense 😎🤨

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Please update next part

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: la_Reine

This is so twisted😆


Wait for it to unfold further 🤣🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part two


At the police station

He searched some information through three files trying real hard to concentrate on his work but it was so difficult.

To move on

Nehmat! Ahhh , it's just my fault i never believed in you that day which changed our lives forever.

Karma!

He was suffering. He understood well that he had to sew his seeds. He pushed her towards the forced undesired marriage. She was pregnant. Or was she?? He wanted to desperately find out the truth but due to his promises to his mum for moving on and not looking back, held him back .

Ahhh! He felt his heart was exploding.

Rage , frustration, disappointment.


Immediately, Ekam Randhawa took off to the Gurdwara to seek peace and solace. The house of the Lord invited him with a small crowd of devotees demanding selfies from the shrewd politician turned MLA , Advait Kapoor with his wife Nehmat standing just beside.


He watched her closely. She seemed happy. Maybe she could really be pregnant

" Bro, u want to babysit her kid that u think too much about her pregnancy?? Just move on , will u".

His inner voice taunted him harshly resulting him leaving the place instantly and back to the station.

He had to avoid them


At a hotel room

She smiled as she admired her reflection in the dressing mirror. Harleen looked stunning in a maroon saree. The soft fabric wrapped her slim figure very neatly exposing her slender arms through the sleeveless blouse.

She desired to be dressed like a bride but controlled her emotions.

" Take it easy woman, otherwise he will run away from u and disappear in thin air".

She calmed her raging heart. Ekam Randawa.She was madly in love with him.

Karma!!

Maybe she had never done anything wrong to anyone in the past. So she received the fruits of her karma. Ekam is a good man She desired to spend her whole life with him

Nehmat!!!

Was her biggest obstacle.


She controlled her anger. She knew she had to play her cards well to win the officer's heart. She had no intentions to hurt Nehmat but she prayed to the Almighty to clear her path. Keep Nehmat away


Two days later.


Harleen 's wish was finally fulfilled when she received an alarming call from Sati Sandhu checking out if the former had seen Nehmat lately.

The puzzled Harleen enquired the reason for the granny panicking over the phone and was extremely shocked to find out that Nehmat was missing.

Karma!!!

Did Nehmat run away??

She deceived Ekam so she isn't happy with her marriage. Maybe she felt suffocated.

Harleen thought real hard.


Deep inside she felt her cousin was a good woman.

Then why is she missing??

Is she sewing someone else's seed or a stranger out there is paying for his bad karma??

Or Nehmat is facing the wrath of her twisted destiny?

Perhaps the Almighty had plans for her

Maybe it was her good karma seeking justice for her



To be continued

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Please update next part I really like it

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Yeh Harleen to soch soch ke mental ho jayegi🤣

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