One possible logical storyline

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Right when Deviji is about to open her trap and spew a boring tirade about Ache Pita, the phone rings. Deviji puts it on speaker:

Deviji: Haan, Kinjal. Kya hua? Sab thik Che?

Kinjal (panicking): Mummy! CA kahin nahin mil rahi. Main abhi sokar uthi aur dekha toh woh kahin nahin hai! Driver bhaiya bhi nahin jaante ki woh kahan gayi!

Deviji starts to hyperventilate and drops the phone. Anuj is speechless and shocked and panicking and is standing frozen.

Samar picks up the phone: Bhabhi aap ghabraiye nahin! Thoda idhar udhar dekhiye! Hum abhi aate hain!

Anuj starts for the door when Deviji tries to hold his hand, whispering “Anuj…..” , to gain sympathy.

Anuj jerks his hand off and turns to her with flaming eyes: Tum ek soti hui bacchi ko….. Nahin, tum MERI bacchi ko chodkar bhaagkar yahan apni “zimmedari” nibhaane chali aa gayi.

Deviji: CA meri bhi bacchi hai…

Anuj (screams and interrupts): NAHIN! Woh tumhari bacchi nahin hai. NOT. ANY. MORE.

Deviji is speechless. She has crocodile tears in her eyes and is having a panic attack.

Anuj walks up to her: Maine kaha tha tumse ki Ab main tumhare aur tumhare zimmedariyon ke beech nahin aaunga (Deviji shaking her head as Anuj is saying this “Anuj……”). Toh yahi sahi . Tum raho yahaan and apni zimmedari sambhaalo. Main apne parivar ko sambhaalta hun.

Deviji, crying: Yeh mera bhi parivar hai! Main CA ki Maa hun……

Anuj, cutting her off: Nahin ho. Tum CA ki maa nahin ho. Tum sirf Iss Pakhi ki maa ho. Toh JAAO and apni zimmedari nibhao.

Anuj starts walking to the door with Ankush, Barkha and Adhik behind him.

Deviji, holds Anuj’s hand and is on her knees: Anuj! Aisa mat kahiye!

Anuj jerks his hand off and walks away.


Deviji: Anuj! Anuj! ANUJ!



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Posted: 2 years ago
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Before Tashraj and crew follow Anuj and others to look for CA, the police arrive at their house based in BB complaint.

Inspector: Hum yahaan Vanraj Shah and Pakhi Shah ko giraftar karne aaye hain. Unke khilaaf hamaare paas warrant hai.

Venom Shah: Kya! Nahin inspector!

Trashraj is all surprised and panicked. Papa ki pari is also panicking and all “Papa! Mujhe jail nahin jaana! Mummy! Please mujhe bacha lo!”

Venom Shah: Anupama! Please roko inhe! Mere bete ko mat lekar jaaiye!

Dukhmukh Shah, with his hand on his chest, just falls down.

Kavya and Samar: Bapuji!!!

Inspector: lekar chaliye inhe.

The lady inspector cuffs the brat and the hawaldars cuff the brat’s dad. They drag them away.

Venom Shah: Anupama! Anupama! Rok inhe! Mere bete ko mat lekar jaaiye


Deviji is lost in her own world, panicking and numb. She is sitting on the floor, staring into space and not saying anything.

Edited by femmefatale09 - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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I would suggest if you want to keep building the story, do continue by replying to the post!!

Posted: 2 years ago
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I really wish CA would get lost or maybe get mildly hurt as a strong reminder to Anupamaa for her carelessness she has been trying to mask as multitasking

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: femmefatale09

Right when Deviji is about to open her trap and spew a boring tirade about Ache Pita, the phone rings. Deviji puts it on speaker:

Deviji: Haan, Kinjal. Kya hua? Sab thik Che?

Kinjal (panicking): Mummy! CA kahin nahin mil rahi. Main abhi sokar uthi aur dekha toh woh kahin nahin hai! Driver bhaiya bhi nahin jaante ki woh kahan gayi!

Deviji starts to hyperventilate and drops the phone. Anuj is speechless and shocked and panicking and is standing frozen.

Samar picks up the phone: Bhabhi aap ghabraiye nahin! Thoda idhar udhar dekhiye! Hum abhi aate hain!

Anuj starts for the door when Deviji tries to hold his hand, whispering “Anuj…..” , to gain sympathy.

Anuj jerks his hand off and turns to her with flaming eyes: Tum ek soti hui bacchi ko….. Nahin, tum MERI bacchi ko chodkar bhaagkar yahan apni “zimmedari” nibhaane chali aa gayi.

Deviji: CA meri bhi bacchi hai…

Anuj (screams and interrupts): NAHIN! Woh tumhari bacchi nahin hai. NOT. ANY. MORE.

Deviji is speechless. She has crocodile tears in her eyes and is having a panic attack.

Anuj walks up to her: Maine kaha tha tumse ki Ab main tumhare aur tumhare zimmedariyon ke beech nahin aaunga (Deviji shaking her head as Anuj is saying this “Anuj……”). Toh yahi sahi . Tum raho yahaan and apni zimmedari sambhaalo. Main apne parivar ko sambhaalta hun.

Deviji, crying: Yeh mera bhi parivar hai! Main CA ki Maa hun……

Anuj, cutting her off: Nahin ho. Tum CA ki maa nahin ho. Tum sirf Iss Pakhi ki maa ho. Toh JAAO and apni zimmedari nibhao.

Anuj starts walking to the door with Ankush, Barkha and Adhik behind him.

Deviji, holds Anuj’s hand and is on her knees: Anuj! Aisa mat kahiye!

Anuj jerks his hand off and walks away.


Deviji: Anuj! Anuj! ANUJ!



I want to watch this show. What time? which channel?
Edited by Koms9 - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Trashraj and Papa ki pari reach the Police station. They beg and plead with the officers that they are "achhe ghar ke log" and this will impact their career and life. The police just shrug them off roughly and say ki ye sab criminal intimidation karne se pehle sochna chahiye tha.

Meanwhile Anuj finds CA who wandered off after a butterfly or dog or something. They go home and drink hot chocolate with Adhik, Barkha, Ankush and GK. Adhik accidentally touches dimpy's hand and their eyes meet and they fall in love.

Pakshi and Vanraj are convicted and jailed for 3 years. Their family suffers the ultimate badnami because of which Baa falls into a spiral of self loathing. She stops speaking and takes mon vrath. Anuj divorces Anupamaa and she shifts back to SH. She spends the rest of her life serving Baa and Bapuji. She occasionally visits achhe pita and sweetudi's jail cells to give them homemade carrot cake.

Edited by Badatusernames - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Continue this story a bit further showing CA a little scared when Anuj drops him of school. Because she is scared of being alone as she thinks people leave him. Then she keeps asking everything from Anuj instead of Anupama. For the first time I wish CA was almost a teenager whose bday party is going on and Pakhi and Shah create a scene and there CA lashes out at Anupama that you always do this youbalways bring your so called family drama unto our live. I told you not to do all this I don't want a party no but you wanted to show how much you love me. See what happened. Please concentrate on Pakhi only. Please..

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I for one would love to see this.

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Originally posted by: Koms9

I want to watch this show. What time? which channel?


I do too. Much better than the crap I see daily. I will not Fast Forward through.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85

Continue this story a bit further showing CA a little scared when Anuj drops him of school. Because she is scared of being alone as she thinks people leave him. Then she keeps asking everything from Anuj instead of Anupama. For the first time I wish CA was almost a teenager whose bday party is going on and Pakhi and Shah create a scene and there CA lashes out at Anupama that you always do this youbalways bring your so called family drama unto our live. I told you not to do all this I don't want a party no but you wanted to show how much you love me. See what happened. Please concentrate on Pakhi only. Please..


I so want to see this too.

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