Ankahi- An Anupamaa Story

Cheeku, this is heartbreaking n traumatic. So CA finally started hiding her pain like Anuj. And from the looks of it, I think she harms herself too. Why didn't Anuj kick out Maa and leela? Why is CA still suffering with this Maa.

Brilliant oiece of writing btw. U said a lot in vey few words.

Originally posted by: Koms9

Cheeku, this is heartbreaking n traumatic. So CA finally started hiding her pain like Anuj. And from the looks of it, I think she harms herself too. Why didn't Anuj kick out Maa and leela? Why is CA still suffering with this Maa.

Brilliant oiece of writing btw. U said a lot in vey few words.

Let's see what this story has in store for us.

Self-inflicted? Kahe bhai?

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Self-inflicted? Kahe bhai?

Let's see where it goes.

Your writing flows...and the characters feel so believable! Somehow I didn't catch the transition to Anu's entry at first...but maybe that's just me?

I really like how you made Anu-Anupama relationship seem pleasant on the surface and the last line makes you question everything. Fitting end and definitely interested in reading more chapters!

Anupama being alive I can understand but why on earth is Leela still alive? Her character is on point though, and I like how Anuj politely kicks her out.

Originally posted by: SoulSpiller

Your writing flows...and the characters feel so believable! Somehow I didn't catch the transition to Anu's entry at first...but maybe that's just me?

I really like how you made Anu-Anupama relationship seem pleasant on the surface and the last line makes you question everything. Fitting end and definitely interested in reading more chapters!

Anupama being alive I can understand but why on earth is Leela still alive? Her character is on point though, and I like how Anuj politely kicks her out.

Leela is alive to get insulted😆

Bold: no no, that's not you, that's me actually😆I didn't know how to not let readers know at first which girl is Anu so...

I had a feeling it was done deliberately...and it did work to some extent, I was thinking it was Anu who was the alcoholic at first! Just something like 'two girls stood at the door, one clearly drunk' would have been enough, maybe?

Aha, now that you are trying to write a sad story, you're going to have all your fun and entertainment with Leela, huh?

Originally posted by: SoulSpiller

I had a feeling it was done deliberately...and it did work to some extent, I was thinking it was Anu who was the alcoholic at first! Just something like 'two girls stood at the door, one clearly drunk' would have been enough, maybe?

Aha, now that you are trying to write a sad story, you're going to have all your fun and entertainment with Leela, huh?

Italics: maybe, maybe not😆 I might not try to venture into that space because then it's difficult to stop🤣