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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part seven


At the gurdwara, 2 pm.

Kneeling at the alter in front of the holy Grant Sahib , she felt at peace for the first time since her marriage took place.


She seeked for strength from the Almighty in her mission to save her husband. It was risky and challenging as she already had the idea in mind.


After visiting the temple, she rang Shamsher who was busy in a meeting with a lawyer to release his son. The oldie was out that morning and she didn't get the chance to see him. The annoyed father in law didn't answer her call thinking she must be involved with her ex. She then texted to him stating.

" Papaji, ap ke bete ko bechane ka aek terika hain mere pas. Uske liye mujhey ap ki help chahiye".

( I have a way to rescue ur son and need ur assistance).


The puzzled politician then rang her instantly and enquired if she had anything to do with the matter to which she pleaded not guilty. She had broken all ties with her ex Somehow , the oldie felt maybe she was telling the truth and decided to give her a chance. She's going against her ex. That's good. The more she stayed away from Ekam the better for him. At least his past deeds of killing her parent's would be hidden forever.


Nehmat spilled her plan and Shamsher gave his consensus, instructing firmly that no one should find out. Not even mrs shamsher and Nikhil .

Nehmat agreed and hung up



Two hours later , at a hotel room nearby the temple.


A man delivered a fake id, a phone , a burkha and 50 lakhs of cash bundles in a black leather bag to Nehmat , sent by her father in law. After he left, she used the new phone with unidentified sim card to text her ex.


" Hotel Prince room no . 201 . Illegal activities going on ".


As Ekam received the text , he took action immediately. He was new to the police duty and determined to portray a good image to obtain a fast route to promotions so that he could prove to Nehmat that he was far better than her husband. She should regret losing him


Ekam left the station hurriedly with a team of two guards accompanying him to tackle the new case. At that time, Shamsher 's men followed him to create an accident. They hit the police jeep from behind on purpose. The angry Ekam stepped out shouting at them . The guards accompanied him. During the physical brawl between them, a man removed Ekam's phone from his pocket and erased Nehmat 's message from the phone settings including the history tab , cautiously and speedily that the latter didn't realize as he was busy hitting the goons.


As soon as the trick completed, he signalled to rhe others and they all took off leaving Ekam annoyed. The guards then reminded him that they have a mystery case to solve and had to leave instantly.



At the hotel .

He demanded for a key to the room from the puzzled receptionist who obeyed instantly without any queries.

Nehmat wore a burkha using a veil to cover her face pretending as a guest of the hotel so he wouldn't be able to recognize her . She waited in the next room impatiently for him to arrive. Shamsher 's men were all over the place. Hidden cameras were already fitted in the rooms.


Nehmat reserved two rooms on that day . 201 and 202 using a fake id



To be continued

Edited by Aniash - 2 years ago
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Part six


In the cell

He woke up half asleep from the long wooden bench when a hawaldar on duty alarmed him

" Apki wife milne ayi hain".

( Ur wife came to see u).


He was ready with all sorts of accusations. I will finish u and ur ex for plotting against me. Just u wait


The enraged lion prepared with his claws but went into a silent mode the moment his upset blue eyes were set on the food carrier she held in her right hand.

It exposed a wonderful aroma of secret delicacies and his hungry stomach warned

U better be quiet!

Otherwise u will get only dry capathis and watery lentil dal here. Don't expect five star hotel food.


He starved since the previous day. His father busy lectured him on his Idiocracy of spoiling his own reputation and his mother just kept crying and wining. No one understood the plight of the poor tummy.


The hawardal allowed Nehmat to provide the meal to the distraught husband after she bribed the former with three motichoor ladoos. Ekam strictly restricted no outside food for the politician. Let him starve.


Nehmat entered the premises only after her ex left hurriedly to solve a robbery case. She sneaked around the place a while, waiting for him to take a leave so she could meet her husband. She was pretty sure Ekam was behind the arrest. She needed to find out the solution.


As she sat right opposite of him on the long bench removing the lid of the food carrier to provide him the meal, he controlled his frustrations.


If it wasn't for the food, he would have strangled her there and then.


" Khana kahan se layi ho".

( Where did u bring the food from )

He enquired still eyeing her closely, couldn't believe that she actually brought lunch for him


She replied casually not looking at him .

"Benaker layi hun"

( I prepared)


The aroma punished his nostrils so badly that as soon as she offered to feed him, he didn't object and was ready to swallow the food as she placed the small bites of capati with veges into his hungry mouth.


Part of him instigated to bite her fingers as she placed the second bite but the other part kept warning him to not lose his cool. Food is essential for u to live. So just control buddy.


She fed the lion silently who held back his claws a while as his stomach was being filled with wonderful dishes.


As she finished feeding him, she offered a bottle of orange juice and he snatched it from her rudely, drinking it in one go


Nehmat remained silent. Her mind occupied with the ways to deal with the matter and less on his tantrums . She was somehow getting used to it


As she closed the lids of the stainless steel containers, he enquired sarcastically.

" Mithha nehin layi".

( U didn't bring sweet?)


She smiled weakly ignoring his hard stare

"Teen motichoor ke ladoo hawaldar ko khiladiye taki apko khana de sekun"

( I gave the guard three ladoos so i could feed u).


Ouch!! That was too direct. A straight sweet blow.


Silence.


As she walked out of the door for the guard to lock it again, he smirked.

"Agli baar mitha bhi lana".

( Next time bring sweet as well).


She stopped and then turned to look at him with a wide smile this time

"Agli baar ap ghar mein ake khana".

( Next time u come home and eat)


That was a puzzling statement.

He wondered

What did she mean??



After she stepped out of the station, the annoyed wife signed to her husband's Idiocracy.

How nice it was if my dream came true

He should be stranded in a jungle surrounded by wildboars!



To be continued

Awww Nehmat feeding the hungry lion Show me ye sab kab dekhne ko milega😭

Plz don't stop this ff....love your writing👍🏼

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part eight


He barged into the room finding no one present except for a black leather bag placed on a small coffee table at the bedside.

Puzzled, he opened the bag and took out a bundle of notes examining it carefully not realizing that his acts were recorded. The other two cops were confused as well. How could someone leave a bag filled with so much of cash in a hotel room just like that.


Suddenly, a lady with a burkha walked in with a husky voice pleading Ekam saying.


" Ap ne jitna paisa bola tha, main utna layi hun. Pls ap mere peti ko arrest mat karna"

( I brought the amount u wanted, pls don't arrest my husband).


What the hell!

He was about to approach her but she took off instantly . He followed behind but as he came out of the room someone struck his head with a blunt weapon and he fell unconscious. The two officers panicked finally realising they were tricked and rushed him to the nearest hospital.


An hour later at the hospital.

Ekam suffered just a mild injury at the left side of his head . He struggled under the heavy eyelids and looked around the room The latest incident puzzled him. The officers naratted they were tricked and showed a video sent to his phone.


A recording of the event in the room.


Just then a phone call came in from an unknown number and he answered at once . It was Shamsher on the other side of the line threatening to release the video proving that ekam and the officers were involved in bribery. He panicked. It would destroy his career forever. He couldn't afford to bear the humiliations and gave his consensus to release Advait.


Deep inside, he was furious. Shamsher played a dirty trick with him. But he was no lesser. He sew his seeds. He framed Advait and the same someone else did to him. Ekam swore he was not going to stop. This was just the beginning of the war


At 7 pm.


At the station

He was shocked to receive news of his release with excuse given that the abortion report turned out to be of other patient's and the reports got mixed Advait hugged his father warmly as the former came to fetch his son . Apparently Shamsher took all rhe credit upon himself without mentioning Nehmat 's name


Ekam didn't turn up at the station and went home straight from the hospital. Seeing his upset state, Malika decided to help her brother destroy the Kapoors.



At 9 pm, Kapoor's dining table.


After living almost a day in the prison, he was glad to be home again. His mom made his favorite dishes. Nikhil stated Naaz went out shopping with her friend and will have dinner outside.


His blue eyes wandered around the living room searching for her

His wife!

But she was nowhere in sight.


As though understanding his curiosity, his mum naratted that Nehmat still hasn't returned home. She left in the afternoon without noticing anyone. God knows where she went. Perhaps spending time with friends while husband rotting in the jail.


Shamsher was silent. He was puzzled at the same time


Where is Nehmat?

After the hotel, she didn't return home. It's been few hours by now.


He swallowed his food quietly annoyed with his missing wife. She brought me lunch and then disappeared. Is this woman for real?


In the bedroom

He rested his aching spine on the soft mattress of his king size bed and sighed to it's comfort. He checked his watch at the bedside. It's going to be 11 pm. Nehmat is still not home. Doesn't she know she is married now?


Suddenly, he recalled her last words at the prison

" Agli baar ap ghar ake khana".

( next time u come home and eat).


He sat up straight at once and freaked out.


Oh my God! Nehmat was the one behind my release. How the hell did she do it??? Did she sleep with Ekam to get me out??? No, no , it can't be . That's why she didn't return home. She couldn't face me .


Nehmat!!!

He screamed furiously.


Ekam, u are dead now. How dare u !!



Seconds later, Advait speeded off to Ekam's place for answers.




To be continued

Edited by Aniash - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Looks like Jasmine executed her plan. Hope Advait will heroically save his wife.

Ekam getting a taste of his own medicine was nice.

Do update fast.

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Part nine


Shamsher 's bedroom

Loud bangs on the door . Mrs. Shamsher unlocked it complaining about the disturbance late night and the house keeper alerted the couple that their son took off furiously screaming ekam ko mar dalunga( i will kill ekam) numerous times .


They freaked out at once leaving in a hurry in their night suits. The furious Shamsher was upset with his son's Idiocracy. He just got released. Is he planning to go into prison again. M*r*n


Mrs. Shamsher advised him to remain calm. She was extremely worried about her husband and son's conflicts lately. Nehmat was a bad luck to them. She ruined everything.


At Ekam "s residence.

The men fought fiercely. Malika and her mum stood in a corner. Panicked and terrified. Advait behaved like an injured lion. He could kill her brother. What made him sooo angry.


After pounding his fist one after the other on Ekam 's face and pushing him around the living room breaking the wooden furniture, he finally spoke.

" Teri himmat kaise hui meri biwi ko hath legane ki!!"

( How dare u touch my wife?)

" Kahan chupaya hain usko.!! Nehmat kahan hain!!"

( Where did u hide her. Where is Nehmat)


He couldn't reply as he was already weak from the blow he received on his head at the hotel. Ekam fell unconscious on rhe floor. Advait never stopped. He continued kicking him till his parents arrived and stopped him.

Three tight slaps on his right cheek one after the other from mr. Shamsher.

" Pagal ho geya kya!! Dobara jail jana chahta hain!!"

( Are u crazy. U want to go to prison )


He pushed his father aside.

" Pagal mein nehin ap ho, jisko sirf apna political career or image dikhti hain. Meri biwi la peta hain. Koi fikar hain uski!!"

( U are crazy for being obsessive about ur political career and image. My wife is missing. Are u even worried).


Mrs. Shamsher interfered consoling her son.

" Tu shant hoja. Nehmat mil jaigi".

( Calm down, nehmat will be found).


He walked towards Malika and blurted angrily in English.

" Want to know the truth. I never loved u. I only used u to separate ur brother with his gf. I am sorry if u are hurt. I am a married man now. It makes no difference to me if u are in my life or not. But it makes a difference if your best friend is missing. Coz she is my wife. So u move on".


He left towards his car to search for his missing wife with his father trying to stop him explaining the media is everywhere. If anyone sees him in that condition roaming on the streets middle of the night looking out for his wife, their image will be tarnished. They will be the talk of town. As it is his political career is on stake after the arrest.


He ignored his father's plight and speeded on the roads of Moga looking out for his missing wife. Mrs. Shamsher felt something amiss about her son. He was changing. The obedient son never went against his father. Was he getting attracted to Nehmat?? Thousands of questions in her mind. The puzzled mother worried for her son. He was getting closer to a woman who loved another man .


An hour later

He drove recklessly on the empty streets. It was past midnight. There was no sight of her.

A call came in from his mother who instructed him to return to the mansion

Nehmat reached home safely.


Minutes later at Kapoor's residence.

As he walked into the living room, the family was already seated, waiting for him except for Nikhil who was fast asleep after taking medication. He was down with cold.


Naaz was covered in a blanket. She was bruised from head to toe with stitches all over her body.

Indications of injuries . Nehmat sat right beside consoling her crying sibling.


He pulled her to the side shocking everyone present demanding for an answer as to why she went missing after meeting him at the prison.

She tried explaining but he kept on shouting at her that she should consider about other's feelings. She could have at least made a call or texted her whereabouts.


The puzzling fact was he never questioned her about Ekam. If she had slept with him ? Has he forgotten or was he afraid?His parents exchanged glances. Over there, he beat the sh** out of Ekam and over here he didn't even enquire her. It's an indication every man is afraid of his wife


The puzzling fact

What was he afraid of ?? That she might slap him or leave him?

Leave him?

Mrs. Shamsher was sure now that something definitely was amiss. Advait acted weirdly.

Was he attracted to Nehmat much earlier and never realized it


His aunt pulled him back to the living room sofa and instructed him to take a seat. She then spilled the details of the day to him calmly.


After leaving the hotel, Nehmat decided to go home. She hailed a taxi On her way back, she saw Naaz walking on the roadside with a friend carrying some shopping bags.


Suddenly, a masked man rushed out from a black van and ambushed her. She was kidnapped. Nehmat instructed the taxi driver to track the culprit and managed to rescue Naaz with the help of a few farmers.


She was taken to a deserted shoe factory nearby some cropfields. Over there she was beaten badly by three women cursing her . U destroyed ur sister's life. She was held captive.


Nehmat managed to get hold of a few men walking towards their cropfields and requested for help. Naaz was rescued but had to be taken to the hospital. During the brawl, Nehmat's phone was destroyed. So was naaz. That explained she couldn't inform anyone. She got panicked in her sister rescue mission.


Naaz was escorted to her bedroom by her mother in law.

He took Nehmat 's hand and pulled her towards his bedroom. He was not satisfied with the explanation. Mr. Shamsher looked on anxiously.

Will Nehmat tell him the truth?? That it was her who rescued him


In the bedroom,

He took the first aid box and mended the bruises on her face and arms. He lectured her for not getting a treatment at the hospital.

As soon as he finished, he looked her straight into the eye.

She knew he demanded answers. Shamsher has informed her about the incident in Ekam 's house.


She took a deep breath and naratted how she fooled Ekam witt his father's help. He searched her carefully to see if she spoke the truth.


Minutes later, they went to bed without wishing one another goodnight. He slept in his bed instead of the balcony. She slept on the couch and dozed off immediately due to tiredness of the day but he remained awake The fact of her sleeping with her ex shook him real hard.


Mrs. Shamsher sipped a cup of coffee all alone in the living room in the dark.

Something was amiss. Advait is not in himself lately.


To be continued

Edited by Aniash - 2 years ago
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Caught up with all parts

I love NehVait and hope they will be end game

BTW you might wanna change the title from OS to FF😆

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Part ten.


The next morning , at randhawa residence

Ekam Randhawa couldn't stop giggling to himself leaving his mother and sibling confused. What's wrong with him?. He has become mentally retarded after the bad beating? Has he gone crazy?


Malika taunted him harshly

" Bhai, pagal ho geye ho kya???".

( Brother, are u mad).


He stopped at once and with an evil smirk on his face. "Pagal toh main ab us politician ko benaunga"

( I will drive that politician crazy instead).


Ekam realized the same that Mrs shamsher did. Advait was hardly married to Nehmat for just few days and he was definitely attracted to her way before the wedding. He and his sibling were cheated. It's payback time.


He was pretty sure Nehmat still loved him. He could see her pain. She may be attracted to Advait but she doesn't love him

Ekam owned the trophy in the love game.

Advait's weakness is Nehmat and she has to be removed.

Ekam swore to persue Nehmat and for that he devised a plan against Advait using Malika as the bait. The latter agreed to help her brother still hurt with Advait's words the previous night. He used her. He should pay for his deeds.


At a hotel room.

Jasmine was annoyed to the core with Shelly's constant phone calls, finally answering rudely fir the morning disturbance. Her head spinned as she returned home heavily drunk from a nightclub enjoying her revenge against Nehmat. She sent goons to kidnap and torture her


The angry Shelly taunted her sarcastically for getting her own daughter Naaz kidnapped instead. She was beaten into a pulp. Nehmat rescued her. Jasmin plan backfired


Irritatingly and furiously she disconnected the line and checked the snap in the phone that she sent to the goons the previous morning. Oh my God!!

She screamed frantically

She sent Naaz's instead.

How did that happened??


She contacted the goons and fired them badly for injuring her daughter but the goons taunted in return that they waited for the snap for few hours. It was only after lunch, the snap was sent to them and that too after numerous reminders.


Jasmine recalled that she was busy throughout the day with meetings with few investors from Canada on video call due to an emergency back home and coz of the stress, she sent the wrong snap.

After all Nehmat and Naaz had similar physique.


Damn!!


She rang Shelly and requested her to update Naaz's condition every hour.

She decided to go to Kapoor 's to reveal Nehmat 's identity that neither she was a sandhu or a virk. She was just an orphan. Nikhil should take the stand this time not advait. That's the way she can help her poor Naaz.



At sandhus residence.

Sandhus were delighted to see their daughters for the pag fera rasam and treated the Kapoor's well. They were glad that Naaz was safe and sound.

They decided to visit the Golden Temple in Amritsar to thank the Almighty. Their daughters are settled now


There were variety of delicacies. The rasam went on well. Rupi took Nehmat to a corner and enquired if everything was alright back home at her inlaws to which the latter lied that she was treated well. Advait was a good husband. He took a good care of her. The family were polite to her

Rupi felt relieved hearing the good news and blessed her. They left to the living room to be seated with the rest.


Advait who was on a phone call heard the duo's conversation. A guilt in him arose.

She said good stuff about him and his family.

The day passed with the girls enjoying their moments with their grandparents.


Nikhil despite still recovering from a cold sneaked into Naaz's room to be with her for the night. He couldn't spare a night without her. They snuggled and giggled under the covers in the bed while Nehmat shifted to a coach near the corner.


Her thoughts flew towards her shrewd husband. What is he doing now? He must be fast asleep peacefully in that king size bed snoring loudly that he got rid of me for one night.


He rested on the coach deep in thoughts . She must be really happy there. She didn't need to face me for one night. Must be snoring by now


Throughout the nite, both remained awake in each other's thoughts . Still amazed with how they ended up getting married. Reminiscing the moment they met one another with kismet song playing in the bkg.


That night was the first time, Nehmat sandhu didn't think about her ex but only her husband.



To be continued

Edited by Aniash - 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: la_Reine

Caught up with all parts

I love NehVait and hope they will be end game

BTW you might wanna change the title from OS to FF😆


Actually i forgot to add that

Tks for reminding

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OhMy...... Going to read everything you ✍ 🤗

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Part eleven.


The next morning at 10 am after breakfast.


She was shocked to see the blue eye hunk at the door He came to fetch her. His actions amazed the sandhus especially rupi. They all thought he would send a driver


Naaz enquired about Nikhil who took off at the early hours before anyone caught him red handed and advait explained his brother was still fast asleep and will be sending a driver to pick her up .


This disappointed her badly.

Lazy useless husband.

Harman enquired why couldn't Advait pick both sisters and his reply shocked everyone especially Nehmat.

He intended to take her for an outing.


Minutes later,

Silence in the car as he drove away slowly till sandhus residence was out of sight. Upon reaching the highway, he speeded.

Oh no! She freaked out. He's gonna torture me now.

She taunted.

" Slow chelao". ( Drive slowly).

He smirked without looking at her.

" Agar slow chelaunga toh Chandigarh kaise jaldi pahunchegein" ( if i drive slow how would we reach Chandigarh soon)

The shocked wife

" Chandigarh??".


Silence.


Then he replied with a devilish look and a wide grin on his handsome face

" Tera murder karunga Chandigarh mein".( I will murder u there)

She tried to unlock the door to jump out of the car but he held her hand tightly while still driving.


" Relax, just joking. Meeting attend kar raha hun socha tujhey sath lechelun. Isi bahane wahan aek sath lunch karlenge.Nehin toh tu apne nanu ko complain karegi mein tujhey kahin leke nehin jata".

(Attending a meeting so can have lunch together there otherwise u will complain to ur grandpa that i don't take u anywhere for an outing)


As they were about to reach the city, his dad instructed him to return home at once. Jasmin paid a visit. But he disobeyed stating she can wait. We are not her servants.


Shamsher looked at his phone, surprised.

Is he my son?

Did someone exchang him in the prison??


He sighed

These youngsters get too excited after marriage and becomes slaves to their wives .

Joru ke gulam.


Now he had to figure out how to lie to Jasmin that his son refused to be home early.


Four hours later

They had a wonderful lunch at a five star hotel with reporters clinging to them congratulating the politician for his release from the prison and gaining back his political stand once again.


He held her closer for perfect click of pictures. This time she felt the difference in his touch. It was not forced like earlier. It was a warm, caring touch . A friendly gesture. She felt comfortable and didn't bother to remove his strong hands from her slim curvy waist. She allowed him to feel her. She was giving him the rights. She acted like a typical wife.


After numerous frantic calls from his father, advait left for Moga to face Jasmin. He was determined to get away from her cluthes. Enough was enough. She can't bully us all the time.


A few hours later at Kapoor's residence.

Nehmat and Advait were extremely shocked to hear Jasmin 's harsh statement that the former was adopted. She was neither a Sandhu nor a Virk.

Jasmin instructed Nikhil to take the stand this time removing Advait.


Minutes later,

Nehmat ran towards her room. The bitter truth of her adoption crushed her badly .

The pissed Advait left the house instantly driving off to a pub. He needed time to be alone.

The statement was too shocking to digest. He married an orphan who didn't even know her own background ?? But that didn't disturb him. But the fact that his younger sibling took the pie hurt him to the core.

He worked hard for the political campaigns throughout the years. He invested so much of sweat and effort . He can't backoff now


She was fast asleep on the couch when he reached home. He removed a flock of hair very gently from her forehead. She was in pain. He could feel it but he was helpless. He was hurt as well.


The next morning, she left the house without informing anyone annoying the family more This time he didn't search for her.

He knew she needed to be alone awhile. He kept himself busy throughout the day by completing unfinished tasks for his sibling to take over his stand in the coming elections .


She returned home only in the evening, looking exhausted as though she won a Gold medal in the Olympics for a marathon.


Nehmat skipped dinner and went to bed early. Mrs Shamsher was worried about her son and daughter in law and consulted her husband


Shamsher decided to get the duo divorced. Nehmat turned out a bad luck for Advait and the family.


He would speak to Rupi the very next day.



To be continued

Edited by Aniash - 2 years ago

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