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Posted: 2 years ago
#71

Yeh master ji sachi valay master nikla.

Hame tho koi our ummed thi iss master ji se😂🫢

Wow nice rev!!

Finally proposed vo bhi red rose ke saath kneel down karke..🥰

Waiting for next part soon..

Mujhe rona aa raha hai bas khatm ho rahe hai..

Rev itna chotu sa story koun deta hain yaar hame 100 episode ka story chahiye…

Thank you for this beautiful story of ViDev 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Chotu story, mere khayal se yeh lambi ho rahi hein. But Haan unn donon kee journey dikhani hein....Almost dikha chuki hoon. Abb sab theek ho rahe hein toh mein Ekta Kapoor thodi hun kee aakhiri moment pe twists pe twists leke awun. Nahi aati aisi likhna....Yeh itne parts huye, mujhe khud hi yakeen nahi aati. But maza aa rahi hein, Vidhi and Dev ke thode moments dikha saki, Priya Abhi ko bhi , Bims, Hp ke chotu romance bhi dikha di. Chitra kee Amy Mausi se irritated hun. Isiliye use yahan nahi leke aayi aur lawungj bhi nahi. No Chaachi, golden, Amba, Chitra....Inn sabke Bina do normal families aur ViDev ke lamhe dikhakar joh relief mil rahi hein ussi se khush hun mein. 100 episodes ke story likhna mujhe aati nahi yaar.... Every story has to end. Toh mein ek happy ending dene waali hun. Thanks Shinika 😄. Abb tak itne patience ke saath saare chapters padhi tum, yahi bahut badi baat hein mere liye. Masterji ko kahin naa kahin laana chahti thi , finally woh armaan puri ho gayi. Actually show mein dikha sakte Vidhi MBA karte huye , Dev use guide karte huye kitna cute moments milenge humein....Lekin makers ko toh drama hi chahiye. Side characters ko zyada screen space mil rahe hain aajkal 🤔 . Hum log gine chune ViDev moments ko dhoondne ke liye skip karke precap dekh rahe hein. Kya din aa gaye hamare naseeb mein? Ek waqt Aisa bhi thaa jab itne yaadgar episodes Mile kee hum alag threads pe ViDev ke discussion karte the. Pata nahi kab dikhayenge makers acche ViDev moments?

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Thanks a lot 😀 masterji lover

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Originally posted by: Revutty

Thanks a lot 😀 masterji lover

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Part 12

At Raichand group of companies

Dev : Vidhi , yeh ribbon kaat lo.Tum Finance Department kee Head ho. Abb se tumhare liye bhi ek separate Cabin hoga.

Vidhi held the scissor from Dev's hand and looked him.

Yogesh: Give a big round of applause for our new Finance Head Vidhi Sharma.

Kanika: Come on Vidhi Ribbon kaat lo , aur apne cabin mein jawo.

Vidhi: Thank you sabko. Aap sab ne mujhe bahut support kiya hein. Jab mein aayi thi toh mein bas ek pagli film hi thi , jisse theek se computer operate karna tak aati nahi thi. Phir Dev Sir ne mujhe expenditures dekhne kaa kaam Diya . Wahan se har mod mein Dev sir mere guide bane , pehle mujhe koyi dost nahi mili yahan. Mein jab royi toh Sangeeta didi ne mujhe kaha kee roti rahogi toh kaam kaise karogi ? Office aayi hun toh kaam karna hi hein. Phir unse meri dosti ho gayi, ek apnapan lagne laga jaise kee sach mein woh meri badi behen ho. Hum sabko coffee ke saath greet karne waali Sangeeta di actually hum sabke din kee shuruwat mein kitni mithaas laati hein, isiliye Sangeeta di aapko ek bahut badi thank you.

Phir meri dosti ho gayi Anaya aur Rishabh se joh mere colleagues hein. Password kaise banate hein, presentation kaise karte hein mujhe toh woh bhi pata nahi thi. Par Anaya ne uss mein meri madad kee. Thanks Anaya. Phir Rishabh se zyada baat huyi nahi par project mein mere bahut help kee. Aur Arjun. ....Arjun toh mera sabse accha dost bana yahan. FM waali project karte waqt zyada dosti ho paayi hamari aur mein jitna bhi tensed hun Arjun apni style aur smile se mera mood ekdum theek kar deta hein. Thank you Arjun for being a good friend. Kanika Mam se attachment thodi late huyi aur Yogesh Sir se bhi. Par har meetings organize karne mein, official deals mein inn donon kee experience aur capabilities ne mujhe acche se sab kuch sambhalne mein kaam aayi. Thanks a lot Yogesh Sir and Kanika Mam. Finally mein jitna Thanks bolun woh Kam padega Mere Dev Sir ke liye..Vidhi Sharma aaj ek MBA holder hein, Raichand group of companies ke Finance Head hein aur iske liye mujhe guide kiya hein mere Dev Sir. Sirf studies aur official matters mein hi nahi meri zindagi kee , mere pariwar kee mushkilon mein inhone Mera saath diya hein. Ek aisa saath kee kabhi kabhi mein sochti hun kee Dev Sir meri life mein nahi aate toh kya hota ? Mujhse zyada mujh par trust Kiya, meri strength ko samjha, weakness ko hata diya. Aur aaj dil se bhi mein unse jud chuki hun..Mujhe yeh kehte huye koyi hichkhichahat nahi ,koyi objection nahi kee Yes , I am going to be his future wife. Thank you so much Dev Sir aapne mujhe sirf officially hi nahi dil mein bhi promote Kiya hein, Thank you Dev Sir.

Vidhi's eyes went teary. For a while everyone were silent. Suddenly from the last raw Sangeeta stood up and started clapping..All the other staffs also joined and the round of applauses were heard louder. Dev held Vidhi's hand and said : Mujhe nahi pata kee maine kya kiya hein. Par joh tum deserve karti ho woh tumhein milna chahiye, Vidhi . Bas uthna pata hein. Phir aaage joh journey hamare huye hein uss mein toh Mein bas ek role play kiya , mehnat toh tumhari thi.

Vidhi: Jeet hum donon kee hein Sir..

Rishabh: Dev Sir, hamare Finance Head se kahiye kee jaldi se ribbon kaatke inauguration kare. Aap donon kee baatein toh baad mein bhi ho sakte hein.

Anaya: Haan Sir. Woh kehte hain naa office mein personal baatein allowed nahi hein.

Dev looked them : Kya guys aap log bhi ?

Kanika: Dev please don't mind, aaj toh office waale personal baatein karenge.....

Yogesh: Kyunki iss office ke boss kee Bachelor life kee End hone waali hein.

Arjun : Mom, Dekh rahe ho Dev kaise haath ko pakda hein..Dar hein kee koyi Vidhi ko le naa jaaye unke hath se.

Vidhi and Dev smiled and looked each other.

Sangeeta: Kyun naa Dev Sir aur Vidhi milkar hi isss ribbon ko kaate ?

Arjun: Yeh toh ekdum bhannat boli Sangeeta....

ViDev smiled and held the scissor together and cut the ribbon. They opened the cabin door and entered inside.

Dev : Our Finance Head, this chair is yours . Please take your seat.

Vidhi sat at the chair and Dev stood beside her with a smile. All the staff smiled and give big round of applauses. ViDev looked each other with a smile.

" Pyaar toh hona hi tha" plays in background music.

After the office hours, ViDev reached Sharma Niwas. Vidhi gave her promotion order in HP's hand . Bimla and Hp became very happy and they hugged their daughter.

Bimla: Hamari beti kee itni kamyaabi ho jaayegi yeh humne kabhi socha bhi nahi thaa Dev.

Hp: Aapki wajah se meri beti aaj mere khaandan kaa naam roshan kee hein.....Dev. Vidhi beta , tum toh mera abhimaan hein. Mujhe garv hein kee mein tumhare Paapa hoon.

Bimla: Abb toh Dev , aapka swagat iss Ghar mein Daamad ke roop mein hi hoga .

Hp : Haan bilkul.

Dev : Lekin...

Bimla: Kya lekin wekin ? Abb koyi bahana nahi chalega.....Abb toh Vidhu dulhan banegi aur aap Dulha.

Hp: Aur Haan , Shaadi kee muhurat nikalni hein....

Bimla: Bilkul..Sahi kaha aapne.

Vidhi and Dev looked each other.

Hp: Abb joh bhi pyaar hein naa woh shaadi ke baad karna donon . Iss tarah Dev baar baar ladki ke ghar nahi aa sakte shaadi se pehle.

Bimla: Arrey Haan,....

Vidhi: Par Maa ....Hum log bahut kam waqt bitaye hein saath mein.....Maa office, university inn donon kee round lagate lagate kahan hum romance kar paaye ?

Dev : Haan woh toh hein. Jab bhi milte the Baalghar mein yeh apne kitab kholke mujhse doubts puchti thi.....Toh zyada ...woh.... baatein....ho nahi paayi..... Paapa..,

Hp; Kuch bhi kahiye, aap toh samajhdhar ho naa beta . Arrey yeh sab toh ho jayega abb shaadi mein deri nahi karni chahiye. Satyawati ji se kahiyega kee hum log Ghar aa rahe hein....Baat karni hein unse .... Theek hain.

Vidhi: Toh kya shaadi se pehle hum aise mil nahi sakte? .

Bimla: Bilkul nahi. Jawon apne room mein.

Dev looked when Vidhi walked inside.

Dev : Toh mein chalta hun.....Namaste.

Hp : Haan....

At Raichand house

Satyawati: Yeh toh bahut accha huwa.

Priya : Bhaisaab khush nazar nahi aa rahe hain..Aapki shaadi hone waali hein Vidhi se.

Abhimanyu: Wahi toh.....Hari Prasad uncle ne mana kiya naa shaadi se pehle mil nahi sakte....Isliye udas hein ...

Satyawati: Bilkul theek kaha unhone....Jaldi se shaadi karwa Deni chahiye Dev kee. Hamesha bhaagta hein .....Shaadi se ......Abb mein bhi dekhti hun kahan tak bhaagega tu ?

Dev ; Maa aap bhi!!!

Satyawati: Apne room mein Jawon aur aaram se so Jawon. Sapne dekho takiye ko gale lagakr....

Abhimanyu: Bechara Bhai, Priya humein toh college ke time pe class bunk karke thode bahut canteen mein jaake romance karne kaa mauka milte the.

Priya: Bhaisaab kya jaane yeh chori chupke romance kee maza ?

Satyawati: Bas karo. Mera Dev bahut Sharif hein....Tum log uske dimag mat kharab karo.....

Priya: Aapke laadle bete toh roote huye bacche lag rahe hein.

Satyawati: Abhi , Priya tum log jaate ho kee nahi apni room mein?

Abhimanyu; Okay okay. Jaa rahe hein hum log.

All went to their respective rooms. Dev was feeling restless.

Dev : Mujhe kaise bhi karke Vidhi se milna hein Vidhi se....

At Sharma Niwas

On the other side Vidhi was also feeling the same.

And when the time almost went midnight, Vidhi received a message at her phone 📱. Ghar ke chath pe mujhe milo ".

Vidhi: Dev sir ghar ke chath pe.

Vidhi slowly went upstairs and finally reached there.

Vidhi: Aap pahunche kaise yahan ?

Dev : Woh peeche ke gali se ladder laake upar chadke yahan aa chuka hun.

Vidhi: Waah, Kya Bhannat Premi hein aap..Aadhi raat ko mujhse milne ke liye itni khatarnak kadam udaye.

Dev : Itna risk udake aaya hun aur tumhein mazak sooch rahi hein.

Vidhi: Aapko aise choron kee tarah aana nahi chahiye tha.

Dev : Toh tum kyun aayi Chath pe? Message bhej sakti thi Naa nahi awungi.

Vidhi: Roothiye mat , mein bhi kabse bechain ho rahi thi kee kaise milun aap se , Sir ?

Dev : Ek important baat batani hein. Aaj se tum mujhe Sir nahi bulawogi.

Vidhi: Par yeh kaise possible hein? Mujhe toh aadat hein.

Dev : Vidhi, mein sirf office mein boss hoon.... Tumhare hone waale pati hun..Pati ko kaun Sir bulata hein Vidhi ?

Vidhi: Par mein umra mein choti ....

Dev : Vidhi hum donon ne, hamare families ne iss umra ki Seema ko laanghkar ek nayi shuruwat, ek naye rishtey banane waale hein.....Toh kisi bhi mod mein yeh umra ki Seema hamare beech nahi aani chahiye. Vaada karo mujhse.

Vidhi: Vaada, mein dubara aisa nahi kahungi.

Dev : Toh kaho Dev .

Vidhi: Mujhse nahi hoga

Dev : Agar tum nahi kahogi toh mein.....shaadi nahi karunga tumse.....

Vidhi; Aisa mat kahiye Dev....Iss khushi ke liye toh kitne din intezar kiye hum donon ne.....

Dev : Toh phir kaho Dev , I love you

Vidhi: Nahin....Woh mein keh chuki hoon

Dev : Mujhe dubara sunna hein....Kaho...

Dev held her hands and placed them around his neck and then he placed his hands at her waist..

Dev started tickling her waist.

Vidhi: Kya kar rahe hein aap?

Dev : Jab tak tum nahi kahogi mein yeh karta rahunga, shaitan baccha hun mein.

Vidhi moved upwards and whispered at his ear : I love you Dev .

She slightly bite his ear and ran away from there.

Dev smiled and touched his ear .

That was the last meeting of them before marriage. Finally the most awaited beautiful day of their life arrived. Before Milapini mayya Dev and Vidhi exchanged garlands..The marriage happened on the traditional way and when Dev tied the mangalsutra and filled her hairline with sindoor parents of her's and Satyawati's eyes drenched with tears of joy. When the marriage was finished ViDev did the Aarti of Milapini mayya together.

Hp : Milapini maa ne hi Jodi banayi hein Dev aur Vidhi kee. Bolo Milapini maa kee

All assembled there said Jai .

Afterwards Abhimanyu, Priya also did aarti...

Satyawati: Aaj Shantanu ji yahan Hote toh bahut khush ho jaate. Dev ke liye maine kuch kiya nahi iss baat kaa afsos thaa, par aaj toh woh dukh nahi hein. Sahi maayne mein Mein abb Dev kee sagi maa ban chuki hun uski zindagi kee sabse badi khushi Vidhi ko uss se milakar.

Dev : Maa !! Aise khushi kee mauke pe aap royiye mat. Aaj saare uljhanein door huye hein. Hum ek pariwar ke ho chuke hain.

Vidhi: Haa Maa, aapki Bahu aapke bete Dev kaa dhyaan acche se rakhungi.

At the time of bidai Bimla and Hp gifted a gold coin to Vidhi.

Hp : Tumhari shaadi ke liye bachake rakha thaa Vidhi.

Bimla: Ek hi toh beti ho tum hamari abb bidayi ka waqt aaya hein.

Vidhi: Maa mein thodi Naa aap logon se bahut door jaa rahi hoon. Yahi Indore mein hi hoon.....

Dev : Vidhi aur mein aata rahunga yahin aur aap log bhi aate rahiyega ghar mein.

Hp : Haan Dev.

At Raichand house

Vidhi completed the ritual of grah pravesh. And when they were taken by Abhi and Priya to Dev's room , Priya stood infront of them .

Priya: Aise nahi jaane dungi aap donon ko. Bhaisaab behan hun aapki ....

Dev : Oh Accha , mein samajh gaya. Abhi deta hun.

Priya : Rukiye uski zarurat nahi hein. Abhi woh tickets dheejiyega.

Abhimanyu: Yeh lo Priya.

Priya: Bhaisaab, Vidhi yeh flight tickets hein . Actually meri salary se maine ek honey moon package book karwayi hein resort mein aap donon ke liye....Abb tak Dev Bhaisaab ne kitna kuch kiya hein. Pehli baar meri job kee baat inhone hi kee thi Mumma se. Aapke liye aapki behan kee taraf se uski khud kee kamayi se chota sa gift .

Dev held Priya's hand and said: Priya , yeh kya kiya ? Tum apni salary se yeh ....

Abhimanyu: Aap jaante hain naa Priya bahut straight forward hein aur yeh uski ziddh thi kee uski pehli kamayi se aapko kuch gift doo.

Vidhi: Aapne toh best gift Diya Priya didi.

Priya : Accha laga yeh sunke Vidhi . Meri ek pyaari behan aayi hein.

Priya hugged Vidhi and said : Bhaisaab ko kabhi akela nahi chodna Vidhi .

Abhimanyu: Chalo, abb toh donon ko Chod do.... Humein bhi tayari karni hein apne second honeymoon kee.

ViDev laughed. Priya and Abhi left from there.

Dev : Mmmhhh, Vidhi...

Vidhi: Haan

Dev lifted Vidhi in his arms.

Vidhi was surprised with this deed.

Vidhi: Kya kar rahe hein aap?

Dev : Romance kar raha hun apni patni se .

Vidhi: Darwaze toh bandh keejiye.

Dev gently placed Vidhi in bed and locked the door. As soon as he turned to bed he saw Vidhi standing beside the table scratching her nails.

Dev moved towards her slowly and gently removed her ghunghat.

Vidhi: Dev , kabse iss bhaari lehanga mein hun.... Mujhe change karni hein.

Dev : Toh mein help karta hun....Tum bhi help Karo meri. Mujhe bhi change karne hein yeh Sherwani suit.

Vidhi: Dev !!!!Aapke irade ....bahut naughty hein..

Dev : Shaitan baccha hun....Tumhein Sunni padegi kyunki Masterji bhi hoon.

Vidhi pushed Dev to bed.

Vidhi: Yeh jewels, lehanga please mujhe badalne hein.....

Dev : Theek hain. Mujhe bhi badalna hein...Mmhh.... Yahan se left mein side door hein , mein wahan jaake change karta hoon. Aur tum change karne ke baad uss door ko knock karna....

Vidhi nodded her head. Dev took his dress from cupboard and moved to the side door. Vidhi smiled and removed her jewels. After a while Dev knocked the door.

Dev : Abhi tak change nahi Kiya kya ?

Vidhi: Aap andar aa sakte hain.

Dev came inside and saw his lady love Vidhi in a satin transparent blue saree. She was covering her face and was sitting at the bed. Dev came and sat beside her.

Dev : Yeh chehre mein ghunghat kee tarah kyun daali ?

Vidhi: Yeh riwaaz hein. Dulhe ko ghoonghat udake dulhan ko dekhne padte hein.

Dev slightly lifted the saree's pallu and peeped inside the tiny face which Vidhi was helding downwards. He slowly lifted her chin and she opened her eyes and looked Dev.

Dev : Meri pyari patni Vidhi

Vidhi: Mere pyaare pati Dev

Dev : Yeh din bhi zindagi mein aayegi aisa socha nahi thaa Vidhi.... Mujhe laga thaa kee kabhi bhi mere andar aise juzzbaaton kee toofan bhi aayenge jisse pyaar, mohabbat, shaadi mein badlenge.

Vidhi: Pehli baar ehsas huwa toh mein bahut uljhan mein thi. Par waqt ke sath mein samajh gayi kee aap hi mera pehla aur aakhiri pyaar hein.

Dev : Yaad hein Vidhi tumne woh angooti lautayi toh ungli mein pehnayi jaise haq se pehnayi ho.

Vidhi: Haan toh mujhe haq hein naa Aap pe Dev.

Dev : Tumse milne ke baad samajh mein aaya ki choti see choti lamhe bhi khushiyan dilati hein. Insaan ko bas woh yaadgar banane hein...

Vidhi: Aur hamare abb tak ke safar mein har lamha yaadgar raha.

Dev : Par aaj kee raat toh bahut khaas hein. Puri tarah se hum ek ho jaane waale hein Vidhi.

Vidhi: Mera dil dhadak raha hein Dev

Dev came much intimate towards her and told her

Dev : Toh dhadakne do.

He held her hands and kissed them gently. Slowly he made her to lie down at the bed and he gently placed his head at her body. He rolled upwards and kissed at her forehead, eyes, cheeks, earlobes and when his lips reached near her lips she shut her eyes quickly and tangled her fingers with his fingers. Dev kissed at her neck and slowly his fingers removed the saree slight downwards and her fingers scratched his shirt and she removed the buttons of his shirt. His bare body was visible towards her eyes and he gently fell over her body and kissed at her navel and she hugged him tightly. Slowly they both passionately kissed each and every parts of each other's body and completely by body and soul they melted at the feel of intimate love.

At that night Satyawati was sitting at the armchair and was looking at her husband's photo placed at her table recalling the sweetest moments of her life too. With a slight smile she placed a red rose besides his photo and went to sleep.

Finally the entwined Love of ViDev has changed to intense and passionate one. Without any barriers and thoughts they were loving each other madly and truely. This Fan fiction is ending here . I felt myself very much happy after writing this. I hope you all liked it. Thanks for the support and love given by the readers here. Kindly read this last , longest chapter and drop your views.

With all love and regards yours Revu..

Edited by Revutty - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#77

Mujhe tho comment nahi karni hai..🥲

Aap ne tho end kar dia show ko😔

Nice rev!!!!

Very beautiful heart touching smooth peaceful story

And a bhannat ending ke saath.

Thanks for giving this much detailed story with many parts(yeh dil mange more!!!).

Sab ko khush karne ke liye thank you…

We can understand how much effort you gave for this story in this beautiful phase of your life.

Take care and have a nice time❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Aww 🥰🥰🥰 thanks a lot 😊. Mehanat karo bol bolke Masterji mujhse likhwate rahe aur maine wahi Kiya. Yeh likhkar khud mujhe khushi mil rahi hein. Waise show mein kitni ummeedein hein, par unko toh Drame ke padi hein. Dev and Vidhi ke story kahan tak justice kar paayi mujhe nahi pata yaar. But kuch positivity dikhane ke liye saare negativity ko door karte karte happy ending dee. Romance utne acche se likh nahi pati warna thode aur romantic scenes likhti mein. I am glad that you liked and you are so attached with this story. Saare parts ke link ek saath ek page pe post kee. Jab man karega tabh pad lo agar dubara padna chahti ho . Thanks a lot Shine for your support and love 💕😘😘 I am waiting to read your ViDev story too.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#79

Thank you❤️

Hakikat ka update dena hain par sab sad mood pe haina thoda post pone Kia .

Ab story me separation update ka vakt aa chuka hai

Isiliye thoda break Lia .sab ka mood thik hua tho update dedungi.

Pahle hi sab rora hi hai isiliye our na rulana chhathi thi.

Kuch os/ts likhne ki koshish kar thi hu. Aaj media vala BTS ke baad thoda mood thik hogaya . So try kar thi Hu.

Thanks for your trust in me love rev!!!

Master ji ko hamari taraf se shukriya bata dena ithni ache story appse likhvane keliye..😍

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Jab Tera man lagega tabh likhna yaar. I will wait for you 🥰.. Masterji Telly ke ghar pe hein. Abhi tak nikle nahi wahan se. Telly convey karegi shukriya... Thanks Shinika ☺️..Show mein acche things dikha sakte hain. Kuch zyada hi dramatic ban gaye 🤔 .

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