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Posted: 2 years ago
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Finished the FF. You can find all parts here. Please read and tell your views.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162348256

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Please read and drop your views guys

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162348256

I have finished this FF. All links are here.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#83

Wow wow wow revu ye ff to mind blowing tha🄳

Sorry mein sath sath comment nhi kr ski kyuki i was busy but aaj mene sara pdha bht hi acha likha hai sbse best part tha vo jahan satyawati convince krti hai vidhi k parents ko vhan to tune satyawati k character ka jo analysis kia hai show k writers tk nhi kr sktešŸ‘

Or last part mein to aag hi lg gyi kitna acha hota tu ye bhi likhti k videv jb subh uthte to dev vidhi ko kese chedta about their last nightvidhi to sharam se marr jati🤣vese sochna is bare mein

Keep it up my dear tujhme telant haišŸ‘šŸ¼

Thanks for tagging me on each chapteršŸ¤—

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Posted: 2 years ago
#84

Yeh khatam bhi ho gaya!!!! I will read it again later as first time read se man Nahi bhara. I loved it a lot. Thank you for spreading all the positive vibes during this turbulent phase of the show. ā¤ļø

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Posted: 2 years ago
#85

Thanks a lot Parud7 🄰 Arrey woh shaadi karwayi aur woh raat kee scene likhte likhte chalo kaise bhi ho gaya. Yeh naa mere liye sabse mushkil task hein ,yeh intimate lagna bhi chahiye lekin zyada se zyada ussko likhna possible nahi hein. 12 parts likhke positivity dikhane kee koshish thi, ViDev journey acche se ho jaaye, yahi meri wish thi. Subah udkar chedna yeh sab mind mein nahi aayi, phir kabhi koyi OS likhungi jab man karega, tabh koshish karti hun....but bahut zyada romance expect naa karo, mein weak hun woh sab dikhane...... Satyawati ko bahut intelligence hein, aur woh khud umra ki Seema ko laanghkar Shantanu se shaadi ki thi , toh mujhe laga kee wahi convince kar paayegi Hp and Bimla ko. Isiliye woh likhi . Iam happy that you liked this FF. Thanks a lot for reading this.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#86

Haan khatm ho gaya. Mein Ekta Kapoor nahi hoon kee zyada lamba kheench sakun. ViDev journey dikhado, that was my attempt. Aur positivity maintain Karo, kyunki show mein kaafi Dramebaazi chal rahi hein. I am so happy that you read it and liked it Saumya. Thanks a lot šŸ¤—

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Yaar itna pyara ff khatam nhi ho skta... Itni jaldi khatam... Is pure week ye sahara bana hai mera... Itni pareshaan and busy thi ki main bta hi nhi skti... Bas beech veech mein aake padh leti thi... To mann theek ho jaata tha... Aaj free thi to sab dubara padha and ab pta chala ki ye khatam.... But all the parts are very very beautiful.. Loved it seriously... Thank you yaar is bure se week mein sath dene k liye

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Thanks a lot šŸ˜€ Geeta. Happy that you liked it šŸ™‚. Isse zyada kheench nahi pawungi. Sab dikha Dee, bas koshish thi kee bina negativity ke ViDev journey dikha sake and woh ho paayi. Sabko accha laga, wahi kaafi hein.

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