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Originally posted by: sanabmw

Part 1 51

Part 2 52

Part 3 55

Part 4 63

Part 5 69

Part 6 72

Part 7 75

Part 8 77

Part 9 78

Part 10 79

Par 11 80

Part 12 81

Part 13 83

Part 14 84


Part 15



Azlan azka ki side aata hai aur car ka door kholta hai.

Azlan:chale ?

Azka azlan ko dekhkar smile karti hai.Dono ghar ke andar jate hai.

Azlan: Asalamualaikum kaise hai aap?

Prof: Walekum assalam Azlan aao na.

Professor Rehman Azka ki tarf dekhte hai.

Azka: ASALAM ALAIKUM

Prof: Walekum assalam

Azlan: professor ye…

Prof:AZKA HAI NA?

azka apna naam sunkar heraan hoti hai uske liye ye surprising hota hai ke wo use jante hai.

Azlan:jee Azka hai

Prof:kaisi ho beti?

Azka:jee me thik aap kaise hai?

Prof:maliq ka karam hai bacche ,aao betho.

Azlan:i m sorry me aise bina bataye aa gaya but Azka ka bahot dil tha aapse milne ka.

Prof:waise to tum aate nahi, azka hi hai jo tumhe yaha laayi hai ek baar phir se.

Azlan:aisi baat nahi hai.

Azka ko samjh nahi aata ke wo kaise azlan ko yaha layi thi pehle.

Prof:azka aao betho.

Azka: shukriya me bahot khush hu aapse milkar.aapko pata hai me aapka program hamesha se sunti aa rahi hu

Azka azlan ki taraf dekhti hai jo use aise excited dekhkar bahot khush hai

Azka: aapki baate bahot kuch sikha deti hai.bahot se mushkil faislo me mujhe raasta dikhaya hai,meri madad ki hai aapne.

Prof:madad to Allah karta hai beta me to bas waseela hu.mujhe khushi hai ke me tumhre kaam aa saka.

Azka:aapko pata hai me aapka ek bhi program mis nahi karti.me sach me abhi tak yaqeen nahi kar paa rahi ke aap mere saamne hai.

Prof:,Azka beta mene bahot kuch suna hai azlan se tumhre baare me mashaallah se jo suna tha bilkul waisa hi paaya hai tumhe.

Azlan:azka ko jab se pata chala tha ke me aapko janta hu ye us din se khush thi.isliye me aaj isko yaha lekar aaya.mene isko bataya bhi nahi ke hum aapke ghar aa rahe hai.

Prof:accha kiya na shohar ka farz hota hai ke wo apni biwi ki har khushi ka khayaal rakhe kyu azka rakhta hai na ye tumhra khayal?

Azka ek sec ke liye azlan ko dekhti hai aur phir professor Rehmaan ko.

Prof:beta dunia me humare aaspaas kitne rishtey hote hai par Allah ka banaya hua sabse pehla aur ahem rishta MIYA AUR BIWI ka hai!!! Ye sabse majboot rishta bhi hai aur sabse kamzor bhi.ye ke 3 lafzo se judta hai aur 3 hi lafzo se khatam bhi ho jata hai.

Azka aur azlan dono prof rehman ki baat sun rahe hai.

Prof: Is rishtey ki ahemiyat yaha se nazar aati hai ke hum jab is dunia se chale jayege tab waha hume Inaam ke taur par jannat milegi aur jannat me hum apne saathi apne partners ke saath jayege na ke kisi aur rishtey ke saath.

Yahi rishta hume Miya biwi se maa baap bhi banata hai.meri duaa hai tum dono apne is rishtey ko mohabbat se jiyo ek saath dunia me bhi aur dunia ke baad bhi.

Professor Rehmaan ye bol rahe hai aur azka aur azlan dono ekdusre ki taraf dekh rahe hai.Azlan azka ki taraf dekhkar muskurata hai aur azka bhi.prof unko dekhta hai.

Prof:tum dono ko pata hai Allah sabse jayada kab khush hote hai.jab Miya biwi ek dusre ko dekhkar muskurate hai to unke saath Allah bhi muskurata hai.to baccho aise hi khush aur muskurate Raha karo ek dusre ke saath.

Azlan: inshaallah

Prof:azka beta aap kya karti ho?

Azka:jee me doctor hu.

Prof: mashaallah Azlan tumhe to hospital Jane ki zarurat hi nahi hai kyu azka?

Azlan:aaj isne aapki taarif ke alawa kuch nahi bolna hai

Azka:ha aaj aapse aise yu milna mere liye ek khawaab ki tarah hai.

Prof:khawaab to kuch der ke liye aate hai beta jinka haqiqat se koi lena dena nahi hota.par ha jo tumhre khawaab ko tumhre liye haqikat bana de, tumhe tumhri zindagi ki har khushi de de wo insaan sabse pyaara hai.

Professor Rehman azlan se baate karne lag jate hai aur azka unki ye kahi hui baat se kuch sochne lag jati hai.

In the evening

Azka:hello Asalamualaikum bhabhi.

Kanwal: Walekum assalam kaha hai tu azka me dopher se calls kar rahi hu.

Azka:sorry bhabhi me us waqt lunch bana rahi thi azlan saab ke liye aur phir hum bahar chale gaye the

Kanwal:Azka tune ghar kab aana hai?

Azka:kya hua bhabhi sab thik hai?me abhi aa jati hu Amma thik hai?

Kanwal:Azka yaha sab thik hai par tu thik nahi hai.

Azka:bhabhi mera pair to ab bilkul thik hai

Kanwal:par dimaag nahi hai azka.ye kya kar rahi hai tu?

Azka:kya matlab?

Kanwal:Azka tu wapas aaja hamesha ke liye tune kaha tha pehle bhi par tu aayi nahi ab kyu roka hua hai tujhe azlan saab ne.wo jo chahte the wo sab ho gaya hai na to ab tera waha rukne ka kya maqsad.

Azka:bhabhi wo bas chahte the ke me thik hu jau aur isli…

Kanwal: ho gayi hai na tu ab thik..bas ab aaja azka !!! ab tera us ghar me rahne ki koi wajah nahi bachi.

Azka khamosh ho jati hai

Kanwal:AZKA…AZKA.

Azka:jee bhabhi

Kanwal:tu sun rahi hai na?

Azka:ha g

Kanwal:Azka dekh is se phele ke aur kuch ho bas tu aaja.

Azka:aap aisa kyu bol rahi hai?kya ho jayega?

Azka:Azka mujhe kuch sahi nahi lag raha dekh mene pehle bhi samjhya tha tujhko phir se samjha Rahi hu ye aise Tera azlan saab ke saath uthna bethna ,ek kamre me rehna aur aise bahar ghumna ye sab sahi nahi hai.jab wo tujhe biwi nahi mante uska darja nahi dena chahte to phir kyu ye sab kar rahe hai.

Azka:bhabhi aap ye kaisi baate kar rahi hai?

Kanwal:Azka tujhe nahi samjh aayegi meri bate par me jo bol rahi hu wo tere liye sahi hai..bas tu aaja warna me khud karti hu azlan saab se baat.

Azka:accha aap na kariyega me unse baat karti hu.

Kanwal:thik hai chal Allah hafiz.

Azka:Allah hafiz

Azka call cut karti hai aur sochne lag jati hai.

Next scene

Azlan:Danish saab aap wo meeting aaj hi karwaye kal me yaha nahi hu so me nahi chahta ke mere absence me yaha kuch bhi kaam ruke.

Danish:jee sir meeting me karwa Dee hai 7 baje ka time hai.

Azlan:thik hai aur wo meri tickets ka kya bana?

Danish:sir wo Mr umair ki PA ki call aayi thi unhone karwa Dee hai.

Azlan:unhone kyu?

Danish:wo bata rahe the ke Mr.Umair ne is project ka sara kaam unko handle karne ko kaha hai.

Azlan:phir bhi aap khud personally dekhe me un par trust nahi kar sakta.aap apni taraf se bhi flghts timing dekhe aur mujhe bataye.

Danish:ok sir.

Azlan:thik hai aap jaye

Azlan Umair ko call karta hai.

Azlan:hello

Umair:bolo

Azlan:project ki details send Karo mujhe.abhi tak last meeting ki details nahi aayi hai tumhri side se.

Umair:kuch changes hue hai last moments so tumko kal subah tak mil jayegi.

Azlan:R U mad? Mene kal meeting subah ki fix ki hai unke saath.

Umair:so what? Postponed kar do.evening me rakh lo meeting.

Azlan: umair look don't play games with me u know meri raat ki flight hai.

Umair smile karta hai.

umiar:accha raat ki flight hai.chalo koi baat nahi ek din extra reh Lena waha kuch ghanto ki baat hai.

Azlan:me waha rahne ke liye nahi jaa raha kaam karne jaa raha hu.

Umair:i know Azlan tumhri life me sirf paise bana na aur logo se apna kaam niklawana hai.

Azlan:isi ko business kehte hai.

Umair:par ye business tum har cheez me karne lag gaye ho.

Azlan:look jo bola hai wo karo mujhe wo saari deatails aaj raat tak chahiye otherwise

Umair: otherwise???

Azlan:me nahi jaa raha, tum chale jao aur waha reh bhi Lena acche se.

Azlan ye bolkar call cut kar deta hai

In the night

Azka sitwat ke paas bethi hui hai.aur wo baar baar wall clock ki taraf dekhti rahti hai.

Sitwat:Azka beta kya hua hai?

Azka:kuch nahi..kuch bhi to nahi?

Sitwat:phir tum baar baar ghadi ki taraf kyu dekh rahi ho? Koi aane wala hai?

Azka:nahi bas me bas aise hi.

Sitwat:Azlan ka wait kar rahi ho?

Azka: NAHI AISA KUCH NAHI

Sitwat muskurati hai.

Sitwat:azka tum bol sakti ho ke haa tum azlan ka wait kar rahi ho.is me koi burai nahi hai.biwi ho tum uski

Azka kuch nahi bolti.

Sitwat:Azka tum azlan ke saath khush to hona?

Azka:aap aise i mean ye kyu puch rahi hai.

Sitwat:beta me waisi saas nahi hu jise sirf apne bete ki khushi ya uski fiqar rahe aur apni bahu ko puche bhi nahi.

Azka:aap bahot acchi hai mom.aapne mera bahot khyaal rakha hai jab se me yaha hu.

Sitwat:azka phir batao tum khush ho na azlan ke saath?

Azka ko samjh nahi aata wo kya kahe.

Azka:jee hum dono khush hai

Sitwat:dono khush ho par kya ek dusre ke saath khush ho? Azka beta mujhe andaza hai tum dono ke rishtey ka.maa hu me apne baccho ko samjhti hu.biwi ho tum azlan ki agar haq jama logi to use bhi accha lagega dekhna.

Azka:mom Haq ..mera matlab hai me..

Sitwat: Azka tum phone Karo use aur bolo ke ghar jaldi aaye.

Azka:main..mera matlab hai wo busy hoge.

Sitwat:wo busy hai to usko yaad dilao koi uska intzaar kar rahi hai.chalo lagao phone abhi

Azka azlan ko call karne hi lagti hai ke use azlan ki gaadi ki awaaz aa jati hai.

Azka:mom wo aa gaye hai.

Sitwat:ha abhi aata hai na to uski khabar leti hu.

Azlan room me enter hota hai.

Azlan: Asalamualaikum

Both: Walekum assalam

Azlan:mom kya hua aise kyu dekh rahi hai?

Sitwat:azlan ye koi baat nahi hai ke tum lunch ghar karo aur phir shaam ko der tak ghar na aao.

Azlan:mom kuch importance meeting thi jo kal karni thi but kal possible nahi hoga so unko Aaj reschedule kiya isliye late ho gaya.

Sitwat:kyu sab thik hai na?

Azlan:yes mom sab sahi hai ,wo kal mene office ke kaam se bahar jana hai.

Azka:bahar?

Azlan:yes ek din ka kaam hai bas.

Sitwat:tum ye baat ab bata rahe ho?azlan tum kab samjhoge?

Azlan:kya mom?

Sitwat:beta atlist azka to pata hona chahiye tumhra.

Azlan:mom mujhe khud aaj subah pata chala.

Sitwat:phir bhi it's not good.

Azlan:accha sorry na.Azka sorry aap dono se sorry kar raha hu.

Azka:nahi it's ok.

Sitwat: Azlan tum azka ko bhi apne saath le jao na uski bhi outing ho jayegi.

Azka:.......

Sitwat:kyu azka abhi to azlan ko Miss kar rahi thi tum ,kuch der late ho gaya wo to baar baar ghadi dekh rahi thi ab kal to wo jaa raha hai.tum bhi chali jao saath kyu azlan?

Azlan ye sunkar Azka ki taraf dekh raha hota hai aur azka usse nazre nahi mila rahi.

Azlan:nahi mom Azka waha jakar kya karegi.i mean mera matlab hai mene bas aana jana karna hai ek din ki baat hai aur waise bhi travelling not good for her.but i promise Next time pakka mom.

Sitwat:are par tum hoge na iske saath phir kis cheez ka darr..kyu azka me sahi bol rahi hu na.

Azka:mmmom..main ..ye sahi keh rahe hai.me kaise

Azlan:mom ek din ke trip me kaha ghumna hoga mene bola na inshallah next time.

Sitwat:chalo jaisa tum thik samjho.chalo jao tum dinner kar lo.

Azlan:jee me bas fresh ho jau.

Azka:me khana garam karti hu aapke liye.

After sometime

in kitchen

Azka:(to her self)mom bhi na pata nahi kyu unhone wo sab bol diya azlan saab ko ,pata nahi wo kya soch rahe hoge mujhe lekar…wo kya sochege main bhi na, me hi jayada soch rahi hu wo to kuch nahi sochte ,kitne aaram se unhone mom ko mana kar diya mujhe saath lekar jane se aur me kyu jaugi unke saath.mujhe to waise bhi kal yaha se chale jana hai bhabhi sahi kehti hai me kuch jyada hi involved ho rahi hu in sab me.aur ye kaha reh gaye hai abhi tak aaye nahi.

Azka room me aati hai aur dekhti hai azlan cupboard me kuch dekh raha hai

Azka:aap yaha hai me Kab se aapka intzaar kar rahi hu.

Azlan:sorry bas me wo kuch files set kar raha tha kal ke liye.

Azka:ye aap kal subah bhi kar sakte hai.abhi aaye khana khaye.

Azlan:Azka subah nahi ho sakta abhi bag bhi set karna hai ,mene Aaj rat ko jana hai 3 baje ki flight se early morning.

Azka ko ye sunkar aur gussa aata hai but wo kuch nahi bolti.Wo waha se chali jati hai.

After sometime

Azka room me khane ka tray lekar aati hai aur bed par rakhti hai

Azka: Hatiye aap !! ap khana khaye aur mujhe batate jaye me aapka samaan pack kar deti hu.

Azlan:nahi it's ok I manage.

Azka:azlan saab kabhi to koi baat maan liya kare.Time dekha he aapne 10 baj rahe hai aur aapne abhi tak khana nahi khaya.aur upar se aapne flight bhi late night ki karwayi hai.aapko Zara sa bhi khud ka khayaal nahi hai.

Azlan azka se ye sab sunkar samjh jata hai wo kisi baat ko lekar upset hai.

Azlan:accha sorry me jaa raha hu khane.

Azka:badi meharbani.

Azlan khana khane lagta hai.

Azlan:aapne khana khaya?

Azka:jee mene mom ke saath kha liya tha.accha bataye is me se kaunsi file rakhni hai.

Azlan:ye green wali aur wo do black.

Azka:aur kuch?

Azlan:nahi thank you.

Azka azlan ki taraf dekhti hai kuch der chup rahti hai.

Azka:wo mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi.

Azlan:jee bole

Azka:me ab thik hu to me apne ghar wapas jana chahti hu.

Azlan koi reaction nahi deta wo bas azka ki baat sun raha hai.azka think ke wo sayad kuch bolega but wo kuch nahi bolta.

Azlan:me driver ko bol duga aap uske saath chali Jana aur kuch?

Azka:nahi me kal nahi ja rahi,wo isliye ke mom akeli ho jayegi aap bhi yaha nahi hoge to aap aa jaye phir me chali jaungi.aapne waise bhi ek din me aa jana hai so me tab chali jaugi.

Azlan:ok as u wish.

Azka sits there for a while Azlan doesn't talk, he is eating silently.Azlan finishes his food Azka leaves the room and Azlan turns his face up and takes a deep breath and he starts smiling

Azlan:ab me tumhe kaise batau azka ke me tumhe rokne ke liye raat ki flight se jaa raha hu.tumhe apne saath rakhne ke liye tumse dur Jana pad Raha hai.

azka is putting food in the refrigerator

Azka:kitne aaram se bol diya ke As u wish ,mujhe sab pata hai, ye bhi to yahi chahte hai.khair ek din ki baat hai aur phir me

Azka bolte bolte ruk jati hai.wo apni hi feelings ko samjh nahi paa rahi hai use aise yaha se jana kyu ajeeb lag raha hai.wo kuch der baad bedroom me aati hai.Aur wo dekhti hai ke azlan kuch paper dekh raha hai

Azka:aap thak nahi jate Sara time kaam kar kar ke?

Azlan(with smile):nahi

Azka:zaahir hai aapse aur umeed hi kya laga sakte hai.

Azlan:aap laga ke to dekhe ek baar ,mujhe umeed se behtar hi payegi.

Azka: matlab?

Azlan paper side table par rakhta hai aur azka ki taraf aata hai.

Azlan:kuch nahi aise hi mazaq kar raha tha.i m sorry ke me late aaya Aaj aap mera intzaar jo kar rahi thi.

Azka:nahi wo mom to aise hi bol rahi thi me aapka wait nahi kar rahi thi.

Azlan:phir bhi aap pareshan to hui na mere late aane se.

Azka:nahi mujhe kyu pareshani hogi.aap jab marzi aaye

Azlan:phir aap muihe kyu rok rahi thi kaam karne se abhi?

Azka:main…main nahi !!! me bas bol rahi thi

Azlan:kyu?

Azka:.......

Azlan azka ko kuch der dekhta hai

Azlan:accha chode ye baat, idhar aaye zara.

Azka:kaha

Azlan azka ko cupboard ke paas lekar jata hai.

Azlan:ye kuch paise hai mene yaha rakhe hai.

Azka:kyu?

Azlan:in case zarurat pad jaye.

Azka:zarurat?

Azlan:aapke paas hone chahiye

Azka:mere paas kyu i mean aap mom ke pas rakhwa de

Azlan:unke paas hai ye aapke liye hai azka

Azka ye sunkar shocked hoti hai

Azka:mujhe inki zarurat nahi hai

Azlan:janta hu aapko meri kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat na thi aur na hai but phir bhi me ye yaha rakh Raha hu aapke liye.

Azka khamosh ho jati hai.

Azlan:Azka mere liye ek cup coffee bana degi.

Azka: coffee!! Aapne Sona nahi hai.

Azlan:nahi already 11 bajne wale hai.

Azka:accha me abhi lekar aati hu.

Azlan:Thank you,me mom ke paas hu tab tak.

End of part 15

Do comments

Well I am commenting on this part too...again late😆...Loved it❤️

The scenes were interesting❤️

Professer Rehman whenever says something..it is very knowledgeable and fitted to the situation..Azka and Azlan ki life mei jo chal raha hai aur jo unke emotions hain uss hisab se ye sari batein jo unhone boli hai vo kafi sahi hai...Azlan is the one jo uski khawaisho ko poora karne ki koshish kar raha hai...jo bhi Azka ko achha lagta hai...pasand hai and jo miya biwi se related baat kahi hai❤️..good writing there👍🏼

kanwal bhabhi jo bhi keh rahin hain sab sahi hai sa unhe abhi sach nahi pta...unhe nahi pta ab Azlan kya sochta hai...Vo Azka ko chhodna nahi chahta..pyar karta hai..unke hisab se toh Azlan biwi ka darza toh dega nahi toh wahan Azka ka rehna sahi nahi hai aur vo involve ho rahi hai...jo ki sahi hai as Azka involve ho rahi hai...although ye sab confusion dur ho jayengi baad mei...

Azlan ko umair ki kisi baat pe bharosa nahi...tickets pe bhi nahi😆 and I like it when he says..tum khud chale jao aur raho achhe se...Sitwat Azka ko kehti hai haq jatane ko and Azka was hesitating..vo apna haq samajhti nahi hai abhi and Azlan ke keh dena ki trip pe nahi le ja sakta...Azka ko achha nahi laga bilkul ye...kher Azlan ke apni planning hogi kuch but Azka was like ki kaisa mana kar diya sidha...

Azka bahut Parwah karne lagi hai Azlan ki...pehle bhi karti thi par ab thodi baat alag hai...uske kaam ko leke bolna...khana khane ko leke bolna...so equation kafi change ho chuki hai...Poor Azka was waiting ki Azlan kuch kahega uske jane ki baat ko lekar par vo kuch nahi bola and she was disappointed💔...Azlan vaise flirt ka mauka nahi chhodta...aap mujhse ummeed laga ke toh dekhiye,,,,arae bhai ham bhi bethe hain ummeed lagake ki kab sab thik hoga😆...and the last scene ki vo usko paise deta hai uske liye..for me it was like a husband giving money to his wife for her expenses...vo usko haq de raha hai indirectly...use iss tarah se kehna chah raha hai ki you have right on everything...so nice❤️

So keep writing...updating it...awaiting the next part...what happens jab Azlan jayega aur jab vo wapas ayega...Azlan and Azka❤️

God bless you and lots of love❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wonderful update..

Really liking the bold Azlaan.. poor Azka is confused..

Wonder what will Azlaan do next..

Do continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: la_Reine

idk i guess i was expecting too much...i get excited whenever you update🤣

waiting for next part I think azlaan koi na koi excuse bana ke Azka ko phir se rok lega...kya pata shayad apni feelings hi confess kar de frustrate hoke but maybe im expecting too much again😆

They didnt like the first 10 epis...bohat slow tha...but they liked it after the murder case started before Shanayas death😳 ab to I think end ke kareeb hain...Azlaan is still heartbroken aur office mein bhi uska mann nahi lag raha, idk which episode that is


I'm glad you like it so much😊A lot is going to happen in future story line.You will like it for 😊 lots of romance and emotions dekhne ko milege.


Yes show middle me bhi bahot drag kiya..Azkaan ka track bahot late start Kiya and jaise hi start Kiya show end kar diya🤣but koi nahi jo cheeze waha reh gayi thi mene apne FF me puri karne ki koshish ki hai

sanabmw thumbnail
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Wonderful update..

Really liking the bold Azlaan.. poor Azka is confused..

Wonder what will Azlaan do next..

Do continue soon


Yes, Azlan's behavior is confusing Azka.. keep reading, it will be more fun

sanabmw thumbnail
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kamleshmehra

Well I am commenting on this part too...again late😆...Loved it❤️

The scenes were interesting❤️

Professer Rehman whenever says something..it is very knowledgeable and fitted to the situation..Azka and Azlan ki life mei jo chal raha hai aur jo unke emotions hain uss hisab se ye sari batein jo unhone boli hai vo kafi sahi hai...Azlan is the one jo uski khawaisho ko poora karne ki koshish kar raha hai...jo bhi Azka ko achha lagta hai...pasand hai and jo miya biwi se related baat kahi hai❤️..good writing there👍🏼

kanwal bhabhi jo bhi keh rahin hain sab sahi hai sa unhe abhi sach nahi pta...unhe nahi pta ab Azlan kya sochta hai...Vo Azka ko chhodna nahi chahta..pyar karta hai..unke hisab se toh Azlan biwi ka darza toh dega nahi toh wahan Azka ka rehna sahi nahi hai aur vo involve ho rahi hai...jo ki sahi hai as Azka involve ho rahi hai...although ye sab confusion dur ho jayengi baad mei...

Azlan ko umair ki kisi baat pe bharosa nahi...tickets pe bhi nahi😆 and I like it when he says..tum khud chale jao aur raho achhe se...Sitwat Azka ko kehti hai haq jatane ko and Azka was hesitating..vo apna haq samajhti nahi hai abhi and Azlan ke keh dena ki trip pe nahi le ja sakta...Azka ko achha nahi laga bilkul ye...kher Azlan ke apni planning hogi kuch but Azka was like ki kaisa mana kar diya sidha...

Azka bahut Parwah karne lagi hai Azlan ki...pehle bhi karti thi par ab thodi baat alag hai...uske kaam ko leke bolna...khana khane ko leke bolna...so equation kafi change ho chuki hai...Poor Azka was waiting ki Azlan kuch kahega uske jane ki baat ko lekar par vo kuch nahi bola and she was disappointed💔...Azlan vaise flirt ka mauka nahi chhodta...aap mujhse ummeed laga ke toh dekhiye,,,,arae bhai ham bhi bethe hain ummeed lagake ki kab sab thik hoga😆...and the last scene ki vo usko paise deta hai uske liye..for me it was like a husband giving money to his wife for her expenses...vo usko haq de raha hai indirectly...use iss tarah se kehna chah raha hai ki you have right on everything...so nice❤️

So keep writing...updating it...awaiting the next part...what happens jab Azlan jayega aur jab vo wapas ayega...Azlan and Azka❤️

God bless you and lots of love❤️❤️


Professor Rehmaan ke scenes mere liye hamesha difficult hote hai 😆itna gyaan dena aur wo bhi samjhdari wala bahot soch ke likhna padta hai..tumko accha laga bas Mera beda paar ho gaya 🤣ha azka sochne lagi hai ..aur kya soch Rahi hai ye next me pata chalega.

Kanwal bhabhi sach me sahi samjha Rahi hai azka ko..aur unko nahi pata sach me ke azlan azka ko dil se accept kar chuka hai.Azlan ka behaviour azka ke liye Naya hai use ye sab accha lag raha hai par usko samjh aane lagi hai ab but still wo nahi samjhegi ke azlan isse pyaar karne laga hai.kyu ke azlan saab kaise pyar kar sakte hai ..wo bhi azka se lol

Azka me change aata jaa raha hai jaise jaise wo close ho rahi hai wo haq jamane lagi hai aur parwaah bhi karne lagi hai..pehle bhi karti thi but tab itni free nahi thi ..ya yu kaho ke azlan hone nahi deta tha free.😆but ab azlan sabkuch chahta hai so azka bas uske pyaar me giri jaa rahi hai.


Umair and azlan Tom jerry jaise ladte rahege..tum enjoy karogi unke scenes.


Thank you for your comment..tumse to haq jama ke leti hu me🤣

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i apologise for the late comment....but Loved the update❤️❤️

Umair Azlan ko bahut preshan kar raha hai yar...Azlan ko uspe gussa aata rehta hai...But yes It is understood that Umair does not have any malacious intent towards him..he is under this impression that Azlan ne Azka ke sath galat kiya hai...usko use kiya hai aur kar raha hai and ofcourse he does not know that how Azlan feels now...I like it ki Azlan usse kehta hai ki meri wife se dur raho...he thinks Umair is doing everything to irritate him..Hope unki misundersyanding clear ho jaye...

Well lunch conversation was too cute...They are still doing that baal ki khaal...and Azlan was saying ki mujhe samjha deti ...Seriously...vo kisi ko bolne bhi deta hai...and Samina ne ye kya samajh liya😆😆 It was a cute scene though❤️Azka ko kuch samajh nahi aaya and finally Azlan was like chhodo...And the agre difference talks😆Azlan is a boy mujhe nahi pta tha😆and Azka ki calcuation uff 12-15 years...use kaise laga ye..Azlan toh Azka ki poori information liye betha hai...kitne saal ki hai and all..and Azka usko itna badha samajhti hai😆...kamaal ladki hai...

Sitwat and Azlan ki conversation was so good...Azlan ke ye kehna ki he wants her to fall in love with him..aur vo uske sath bina kisi pressure ke rahe...here Azlan is again thinking about her not about him..he has so many ways to have Azka with him but he wants ki uski khud ki pasand ho...choice ho...really nice❤️...one of my favourites..

And car scene..Azlan is getting bold and bold ...Azka is getting confused again and again...main kuch bhi kar sakta hu aur aap mujhe rok nahi sakti....well true that is...and that was a wonderful surprise ki vo usko Prof. rehman se milane laya hai...Azka admires him and looks upto him..

All in all it was a wonderful update...there was fun and emotions..I liked it...Lets see What Azlan gonaa do next..he is all over the place now...trying his best for his love...Azlan is too good..hope Azka realises her love soon...

Keep Writing dear❤️ God bless you ...lots of love❤️❤️

Umair kya koi bhi hoga wo yahi samjhega ..even azka ko bhi pehle yahi lagega ke azlan koi game kar Raha hai as subah paper banwa raha tha divorce ke and now zindagi bhar ka saath..so umair confused hai.


Tabhi to azka ne bola ke aap sunte meri baat tab aapto muh me angaare lekar chalte the🤣baal ki khaal nikalna banta hai ..azlan ne kam nahi sunaya tha usko waha.samina bechari kya samjh bethi 🤣she is like azlan saab romance kar rahe the and azka poor soul kuch nahi samjhi lol.mere upar gayi hai 😆

Usne azlan ko jayada hi old bata diya ..dil pe le gaya humara azlan bechara ..azlan Ki khushi ab azka ki khushi me hai aur wo yahi sitwat ko samjha raha tha.

Azlan Azka ko reminder de raha tha ke bhulo mat me kaun hu🤣🤣wo wais kar sakta hai kuch bhi agar tum likho to lol


Ha ye wala part funny bhi tha and romantic bhi abhi next padho maza aayega waha bhi .


Thank you ❤️

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Part 1 51

Part 2 52

Part 3 55

Part 4 63

Part 5 69

Part 6 72

Part 7 75

Part 8 77

Part 9 78

Part 10 79

Par 11 80

Part 12 81

Part 13 83

Part 14 84

Part 15 85





Part 16



Sitwat:Azlan waise tumhe azka ko apne saath lekar Jana chahiye .

Azlan:mom try to understand me ek din ke liye jaa raha hu.waha me azka ko time bhi nahi de sakuga mene site visit karni hai wo waha jayegi to Sara time hotel me hi rahegi.

Sitwat:shaam ko to tum hoge na uske paas.tab ghum Lena kahi.

Azlan:mom i told u na next time pakka.

Sitwat:waise mujhe tumhri bhi samjh nahi aati..itna accha mauka hai par tum pata nahi kya soch ke bethe ho.

Azlan:mom believe me accha hi socha hai.aur jaha tak baat hai aapki bahu ko bahar lekar jane ki me use lekar jauga par us jagah pe jaha Jana uska khawab hai.

Sitwat:kaha?

Azlan:UMRAAH karne.me chahta hu me aur azka sabse pehle Allah ke Ghar jaye.aur ye aapki bahu ki hi khawaish hai.

Sitwat: Inshaallah zarur jana.

Azlan:Accha chale now u take rest,I have to go early in the morning tab aap soyi hogi isliye abhi Milne aaya tha.

Sitwat:Apna khayaal rakhna

Azlan:u too

Sitwat:Allah hafiz meri jaan

azlan kisses her forehead.

Azlan:Allah hafiz mom.

azlan goes to the kitchen He sees that Azka is making coffee, he stands there n watching her.He wants to get close to Azka take her in his arms and love her.He think something And walks up to Azka,Azka feels someone standing behind her

Azka:Aapko kuch chahiye?

Azlan:nahi bas restless ho gaya hu.

Azka:aapko kya zarurat thi late night ki ticket karwane ki subah bhi to jaa sakte the na.

Azlan:mujhe bas tha ke ek din me aana jana ho jayega.

Azka:aap rest kar le thoda

Azlan:nahi me thik hu.abhi coffee piyuga to thik ho jaunga.

Azka turns and starts taking mugs.she freez on her action when she feel his presence behind her and gasped when he put his forehead on her shoulder.she stays in the same position,she couldn't see his face.his hair were brushing her cheeks.she feel his breath on her back neck.

Otherside Azlan takes comfort in having Azka so close to him. He doesn't want to separate himself from her, but he knows He hasn't gotten to the point where he can do all this.he stay like this for a minute and then move away.

Azlan:i am sorry Mera iraada aapko uncomfortable karna nahi tha.me bas

Azka:it's ok mujhe pata hai aap bas thak gaye hai.chale coffee ready hai aap ye lege to behtar feel karege.

Azka coffee lekar room ki taraf jane lagti hai.azlan hold her hands

Azlan:azka aaye Aaj aapko me is ghar ki sabse best jagah dikhata hu.

Azka: kaunsi?

Azlan:aap aaye to

Azlan azka ko lift ki taraf lekar jata hai.dono andar jate hai.

Azka:waise mujhe aajtak samjh nahi aayi iski kya zarurt thi

Azlan:kyu?

Azka:use to hoti nahi kabhi

Azlan:haha…waise baat sahi hai

Azka:bas fazool kharchi hai aur kuch nahi.aapko zarurat kya thi itna bada Ghar banane ki

Azlan:ye mene nahi dad ne banaya tha.

Azka:3 logo ke liye ye ghar bada nahi tha.

Azlan:bahot bada tha.u know 8 bedrooms he.

Azka:aur use sirf 2 hote hai.

Azlan:dad ne ye ghar apne grandchildren ko soch ke banaya tha.

Azka: grandchildren??

Azlan:ha ab me ek lauta tha iska matlab ye nahi ke mera bhi ek hi baccha hota.

Azka:matlab aapko ek se jayada bacche pasand hai

Azlan: ofcourse bacche 3 to hone chahiye,aur aapko

Azka:2 ek ladka ek ladki

Azlan:hum ruke kyu hai phir?

Azka: Matlab?

Azlan: chale??

Azka ye sunkar azka ki taraf heraan nazro se dekhne lag jati hai.Azlan uske kareeb aata hai aur wo peeche hatna suru ho jati hai.Azka ka back lift ki wall se touch hota hai.wo peeche dekhti hai aur phir azlan ko.jo uske ekdum paas khada hai

Azka:Aap ye kya kar rahe hai?

Azlan:tray le raha tha aapke haath se.

Azka:KKK..kyyuu?

Azlan:chalna nahi hai?

Azka:mene… nahi ..matlab…kaha jana hai?

Azlan tray leta hai azka ke haath se

Azlan:humare floor pe aur kaha.

Azka:floor

Tabhi lift ka door open hota hai

Azlan: chale?

Azka:oohh

Azka bahar nikal rahi hoti hai

Azlan with smile:waise aap kya samjhi thi?

Azka:kuch bhi nahi ,kuch bhi to nahi

Azka comes out of the lift and Azlan smiles.Azka goes to one place and stands. Azlan turns on the lights.

Azka sees that the rooftop terrace is beautifully decorated.There is a very beautiful seating area, Azka sees that there are sofas, some chairs and there is also a swing on one side.Azka goes to the end of the terrace and then she starts looking at the moon.azlan comes to her.

Azlan:yu jo taqte ho aasman ko tum,koi rishta hai aasman me kya?

Azka ye sunkar Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai aur muskurati hai.

Azka:aap sayri bhi karte hai?

Azlan:nahi bas aapko aise Chand ko dekhte hue dekha to dimaag me aa gayi.ye le aapki coffee

Azka:Thank you.

Azlan:so tumne bataya nahi Chand se kya baate kar rahi thi?

Azka:kuch nhi.

Azlan: matalab meri burai kar rahi thi.

Azka:buraai ?? Main kyu karugi ?

Azlan:kyu ke mene taarif karne ka koi mauka to diya nahi.

Azka:........

Azka ki khamoshi azlan ko acchi nahi lagti.wo janna chahta hai Azka kya sochti hai use lekar.wo saamne dekh raha hai.

Azlan:Azka ek sawaal karu sach sach jawab dogi?

Azka:jee?

Azlan azka ki taraf turn karta hai aur uski aakho me aakhe daal ke puchta hai

Azlan:aapko me kaisa lagta hu?

Azka:ye kaisa sawal hai?

Azlan: i mean to say how u discribe me in words?

Azka: aap mujhe MAGROOR BATTMIZ AUR BERAHEM lagte the.

Azlan:wow koi aur bure words nahi mile aapko

Azka:mene kaha pehle lagte the.

Azlan azka ki taraf dekhta hai

Azlan:aur ab?

Azlaan is desperate to know what Azka thinks of him now.Azka kuch der chup rahti hai aur phir.

Azka:Ab ye sab nahi lagte.

Azlan ko ye sunkar accha lagta hai.wo Azka ko dekh ke smile karta hai par azka ke dil me abhi bhi aisa kuch hai jo wo bol ke bhi nahi bol paayi.dono khamosh ho jate hai.

Azlan:aapko accha laga phir aaj prof rehmaan se mulaqaat kar ke?

Azka:jee bahot ..agar aap mujhe pehle bata dete na ke hum unke ghar jaa rahe hai to me unke liye koi tohfa lekar jati.

Azlan:wo kyu?

Azka:me pehli baar unse mili thi aur me itni Aqidat karti hu unki ,tohfa to banta tha na.

Azlan:koi baat nahi next time le jana.

Azka: inshaallah

Azlan kuch sochta hai aur phir azka ki taraf dekhta hai

Azlan:Azka can I ask u something?

Azka:jee

Azlan:mene to aapko koi tohfa nahi diya tha phir aapne mom ko kyu bola ke mene aapko nikaah pe bracelet diya tha.

Azka:wo..isliye ke unhone pucha tha jab wo hospital se ghar aayi thi

Azlan:aap unse sach bhi to bol sakti thi na.

Azka:Azlan saab hum unke samne ek normal Miya biwi ke jaise behave kar rahe hai aur…

Azka thoda hesitate hoti hai bolne me aur azlan uski ye hesitation samjh Raha hai.

Azka:aur har shohar apni biwi ko muh dikhayi me kuch na kuch gift dete zarur hai

Azlan ko apne is behaviour pe bura mehsoos hota hai wo janta hai ke usne aisi koi rasam koi cheez azka ke liye nahi ki.wo phir saamne dekhne lag jata he.

Azlan:i am sorry

Azka:nahi is me sorry ki kya baat hai.humne nikaah kyu kiya, kis wajah se kiya ye to hum jante hai na

Azlan:phir bhi atlist mujhe sochna chahiye tha is baare me

Azka:soch to waha aati hai na jaha jazbaat matter karte ho,aur me janti hu mere liye aapke dil me koi jazbaat nahi.aapki koi galati nahi.mere aur aapke beach ye rasme ho hi nahi sakti thi.

Azlan:Azka pehle ki baat aur thi me aapko samjha nahi tha but ab aap mere liye bahot maayne rakhti hai.me chahta hu ke aapko wo har khushi mile jiski aapko aarzu ho.mene jane anjane me aapko bahot si cheezo se mehroom kar diya hai.

Azka ye sunkar kuch der khamosh rahti hai.Azlan bhi kuch nahi bolta.

Azka:Azlan saab kal shaam ko aapne mujhse kuch pucha tha ke mujhe kabhi kisi se mohabbat hui thi.

Azlan azka ki taraf turn karta hai

Azka:aapke liye sayad mera ye jawab koi maayne na rakhta ho par me aapse kuch bolna chahti hu ,meri zindagi me kabhi bhi mohabbat ka waqt ya khayaal nahi tha,ya sayad jo zindagi me jee rahi thi waha koi aisa mila hi nahi ke jisse me aisa rishta bana sakti,sultan Bhai ke alawa mene zindgi me ek Abid ko dekha aur ek aapko,uski nazro me apne liye hamesha bas mujhe paane ki zidd dekhi izzat nahi,aur aapki aakho me apne liye bas haqarat dekhi thi.mera to bachpan se bas ek hi cheez par focus tha ke me doctor banu.jisse ye jo gurbat ki zindagi me jee rahui hu,usse khud ko bahar nikaal saku!!! bas yahi ek khwaab yahi ek mohabbat thi meri zindagi me.

Azlan Azka ki baato ko dyaan se sun raha hai wo samjhna chaah Raha hai uski har baat ke peeche ke khayaal ko

Azka:phir zindagi me aisa waqt bhi aaya jaha laga ke ye khawaab bas khawab hi reh jayega kabhi pura nahi ho sakega.badi umeed lekar me gayi thi collage waha baat karne ke liye ke kuch bhi kar ke mujhe thoda waqt dede ke me medical me admission le saku.par jab waha gayi to pata chala fees already pay ho chuki hai.meri zindagi ke sabse khushi ke dino me se ek din tha wo.phir me bas usi din ka intzaar karne lagi ke kab me doctor Banu aur kab us insaan se mil saku jisne mere liye ye sab kia.us insan se mera ek dil ka rishta sa ban gaya tha.phir pure 5 saal baad meri zindagi ka sabse khubsurat din aaya.aapko pata hai me puri raat so nahi paayi thi yahi soch aa rahi thi ke kaise baat karugi aapse.aap kaise hoge.kya aap muje pehchan jayege ke nahi phir …me apne wo letters aapko dikhna chahti thi jo mene un 5 saalo me likhe the.

Azka ki aakho me aasoo aane lagte hai aur uski awaaz bhari ho jati hai.

Azka:phir jab aapne mujhe bataya ke wo jisne meri medical ki fees dee wo koi aur nahi aap hai,me kuch soch samjh hi nahi paa rahi thi,un 5 saalo me na jane kitni baar mene aapko aap hi ke baare me bataya ke aap kitne zaalim hai aur mere mohsin aap kitne acche.

Azka ye bol ke halka sa muskurati hai.

Azka:kitni pagal thi na me itne saalo se ,aapse aap hi ki shiqayate kar rahi thi.uske baad jo kuch bhi hua ,jo kuch bhi mene Kiya wo meri apni marzi thi aapne mujhe force nahi kiya.me bas aapke ehsaano ka badla chukana chahti thi.chahti thi ke aapke ehsaano ka jo bojh mere dil pe hai wo me kisi bhi tarah se hata du.

Azlan ko ye sunkar bura lagta hai.use wo sab baate yaad aati hai jo usne azka se kahi thi.

Azlan: Azka aap ye sab..

Azka:plz azlan saab mujhe mat rokiye pata nahi mujhe ye mauka phir kabhi milega bhi ke nahi..ye meri aaj aapke saath aakhri raat hai.me aapse kuch kehna chahti hu jo phir sayad kabhi mauka na mile.

Azlan kuch nahi bolta wo azka ko jaise aakho se bata raha ho ke wo sun raha hai wo bole.azka khud ko sambhalti hai aur Azlan ki taraf dekh ke bolti hai

Azka:par aaj me sochti hu me kuch bhi kar lu aapka ehsaan to kabhi bhi utaar hi nahi sakti.Wo ehsaan jo aapne mujhse sadeed nafarat karte hue bhi kiye.wo ehsaan jo aap kabhi mujhe pata bhi nahi chalte agar me us din aapke office na aati to.Meri wo mohabbat aapki wajah se muqammal ho gayi.So mujhe meri mohabbat se milane wale aap the,aap wo zariya the jiski wajah se mene apni mohabbat ko paya.mujhe padhaya likhaya mujhe wo zindagi dee jo me jeena chahti thi.

Azka Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai

Azka:aapne is ghar me mujhe jitni izzat dee mera jitna khayaal rakha.un sabke liye me saari zindagi aapki shukar guzaar rahugi,mene kabhi nahi socha tha ke hum dono yaha tak bhi kabhi aayege.mera matlab hai itne sukoon se ekdusre ki baato ko sunege.

Azlan azka ka chehra dekhne lag jata hai aur azka hasti hai

Azka: aap mujhe ghoor bhi nahi rahe.

Azlan:ha aap mujhse lad bhi nahi rahi

Azka:aur aap mujh par gussa bhi nahi kar rahe.

Azlan:aap meri baat bhi Maan Rahi hai.

Azka:aap mujhe SHUT UP bhi nahi bol rahe

Azlan:but aap mujhe U SHUT UP bol sakti hai,i don't mind

Dono haste hai.dono ki Back balcony ki grill ki taraf hai aur peeche se sara aasmaan nazar aa raha hai.Azka azlan ko dekhti hai jo abhi bhi has raha hai

Azka:to aapke sawaal ka jawaab ye hai ke,

Azka Azlan ke haath ko pakadti hai

Azka:Ab aap mujhe BATTMIZ MAGHROOR AUR BERAHEM nahi lagte,AB AAP MUJHE MERE MOHSIN LAGTE HAI. wo mohsin jisne meri tab bhi madad ki jab wo mujhe bilkul pasand nahi karta tha aur aaj bhi jab wo mera itna khyaal rakhta hai.meri izzat karta hai,aur meri har khawaish ko pura karta hai ,phir chahe wo doctor banna ho ya proff:Rehman se milna.Ya phir mujhe chot lagne pe mera khyaal rakhna ho.

Azlan Azka se ye sab baate sunkar bahot khush hota hai.Azka use dekh rahi hai.aur uski aakho me aasoo hai.

Azka: aapka bahot bahot shukriya MERE MOHSIN!!!!!!

Azlan is very happy to hear all these things from Azka.There is a peace and happiness in his heart,that Azka thinks so much for him,both keep looking at each other,Azlan brings his hand to her face.Azka doesn't stop him nor does she hesitate,Because she knows what Azlan is going to do and that's what she wants right now.azlan wipes her tears,both are smiling to eachother.

Azlan comes close to her, Azka closes her eyes, Azlan kisses her forehead.In this act of Azlan, she feel respect, honesty, loyalty, responsibility and most of all love is pure love, which Azka is not feeling bad at all.

This is a beautiful moment for both of them, which both are feeling with closed eyes.Like every moment, this moment also had to end,But this moment will always be a beautiful memory in the heart of both of them,Both are separated from each other but one thing which has been understood by both of them is that they can never separate from each other's heart.

Azka:Azlan saab meri ek aakhri khawaish puri karege?

Azlan:.......

Azka:mere is ghar me, ye kuch Chand lamhe hai.pata nahi phir kabhi mauka mile na mile..KYA AAP MERE SAATH IS LAMHE KO QAID KAREGE.

Azlan's eyes are on Azka's eyes, who is looking at him with a hope.Azlan keeps looking at her for a while. Then he brings her close to him. And takes out his phone.Azlan turns on the camera and looks at Azka, she is looking at him already,Both smile at each other.Azlan presses the button of click.This way a beautiful memory of them together is captured forever.

Azka:Thank you

Azlan:wait ek do aur lete hai.sirf ek se kya hoga.

Azka: hmmm

Azlan:thoda paas aajaye,me aapko katuga nahi.

Azka:haha mujhe pata hai.

Azlan aur kuch pics leta hai.

Azlan:me aapke number pe ye send kar duga.

Azka:aapka bahot bahot shukriya Azlan saab

Azlan:Azka me aapse kuch maangu.

Azka: mujhse?

Azlan:ha aapse

Azka:mere paas to aapko Dene ke liye kuch bhi nahi hai.

Azlan:hai aur wo mujhe aap hi de sakti hai.

Azka:accha Bataye phir?

Azlan:Aap mujhe Mere naam se bulayegi.

Azka does not understand at first what Azlan is trying to say.But then she understands what he's asking for.She looks at him for a few seconds.She sees a lot of feelings for her self in Azlan's eyes.Her eyes also have a lot of emotions but thinking of something,she wipes them off suddenly.She lowers her eyes and then raises her eyes to see Azlan.

Azka:mujhe maaf kar de par me ye nahi kar sakti.

Azlan:kyu?

Azka:kuch cheeze kabhi nahi badal sakti.

Azlan:Azka hum jaise pehle the ekdusre ke saath wo sab bhi to badla hai na to phir mera naam kyu nahi le sakti aap?

Azka:kisi ko naam se mukhatib karna matlab uspe haq Jatana aur me aisa aapke liye kabhi nahi mehsoos kar sakti.i am sorry par ye mujhse nahi hoga.

Azlan Azka ki taraf dekhta hai jaise wo use padh raha ho.

Azlan:chale phir mujhe intzaar rahega.

Azka:kis baat ka?

Azlan:aapka mujh pe Haq jatane ka.

Azka:aisa kabhi hoga

Azlan:ye aapki soch hai meri nahi.mera yaqeen hai ek din ye zarur hoga.

Azka:aapki marzi aap jo marzi soche.

Azlan:ab coffee piye warna thandi ho

Azka apni coffee peeti hai.Azlan bhi coffee ka sip leta hai.

Azlan:ye phiki kyu hai?

Azka:kyu ke me janti hu aap sugar nahi lete.

Azlan:par itne dino se to aap mujhe meethi chai aur coffee de rahi thi.

Azka:wo to me jaan bujhkar de rahi thi.

Azlan:what??par kyu?

Azka:bas aapko tang karne ke liye mujhe pehle din se pata tha aap chai aur coffee me chini nahin lete.bas us din aapne Harris ki family ke samne juth bola tha.

Azlan Azka ko ghoorne lagta hai.

Azka:dekhe abhi aapne kaha tha ke aap ghoorege nahi par aap phir se

Azlan:itne din se tum mera mazaq bana rahi thi.Aur mazay le rahi thi meri situation pe.

Azka hasne lag jati hai

Azka:haha…aap ne bhi to mujhe itne saal pareshan kiya.

Azlan:wo me abhi bhi kar sakta hu.

Azka apna mug table par rakh ke waha se bhaagne lag jati hai aur azlan uske peeche jata hai.Azka sofa area ke aas pas bhag rahi hai

Azka:azlan saab dekhe aap sahi nahi kar rahe wahi ruk jaye

Azlan:nahi pehle ye batao Aaj aisa kyu kiya.

Azka:dekhe mene aapko Aaj aapki pasand ki coffee dee…mene chini nahi add ki.so plzz ab maaf kar de mujhe.

Azlan:bilkul nahi azka…waise aaj kyu ye MEHRABANI kar dee aaj bhi na chini daal deti.

Azka:azlan saab dekhe aise na kare.abhi mene aapki itni taarif ki hai.

Azlan:Azka seedhi tarah se paas aa jao warna.

Azka:warna kya karege aap ?

Azlan:warna mujhe aata hai tumhe kaise pakadna hai.

Azka:accha try kare phir.

Azlan:Azka dekho itni raat ho rahi hai aur agar …Are Mom aap yaha

Hearing this, Azka stops there and starts looking behind her. Azlan takes advantage of this and catches her.

Azka:aahhh..

Azlan:ha ab batao kyu ?

Azka:aapne juth bola.

Azlan:Ha mene bola kyu ke mujhe pata hai tumko kaise handle karna hota hai

Azka:par ye to galat kiya na aapne

Azlan:Tum bhi itne din se yahi kar rahi thi chalo batao ab kyu kiya ye sab?

Azka:wo me kal wapas jo jaa rahi thi.to mene socha jate jate aapko aapki pasand ki coffee dedu

Azlan:aur agar me kahu meri pasand kuch aur hai to.

Azka:to aap wo lele, bataye kya pasand hai aapko ?

Azlan is still holding Azka's hand, both are standing facing each other. Azka is breathing deeply because of running away.Azlan starts looking at her face. Her hair is disheveled because of running away. Dupatta is thrown to one side.there is mischief in her eyes. Azlan is looking at her. He wants hug her and tell her how much he loves her. But he doesn't let this thought stay in his heart for long.

Azka:kya hua?

Azlan:kuch nahi?

Azka:phir bataye kya pasand hai aapko?kya chahiye?

AzlaaTum……

Azka:........

Hearing this, Azka starts looking at Azlan with surprised eyes.

Azka:main???ye kya bol rahe hai aap?

Azka frees her hand from Azlan's and corrects herself.

Azlan:meri pasand ab badal gayi hai.ab mujhe phiki coffee nahi pasand.

Azka:ohh me abhi banake le aati hu

Azlan:koi zarurat nahi waise bhi me ab Jane laga hu

Azka:par aapki coffee

Azlan picks up Azka's coffee from the table.

Azlan:ye hai na tumhri..

Azlan takes a sip

Azka:ruke par ye to meri juthi

Azlan:to ..us din meri juthi Ice cream kisne khayi thi?

Azka remembers how she had taken ice cream from Azlan. She looks at Azlan.

Azlan:so ab ye meri hai.

Azka:aapko ab sach me phiki coffee nahi pasand.

Azlan:haa

Azka:kyu?

Azlan:Tumhre saath rehkar Aadat ho gayi hai mujhe tumhri..i mean to say tumhri meethi coffee ki.

Azka smile karti hai.tabhi azlan time dekhta hai.

Azlan:ok me nikalta hu time ho gaya hai.

Azka:itni jaldi.

Azlan:Hmm 3 baje ki flight jo hai.

Both come down, Azka is looking at Azlan all the time and is following him.Azlan takes his bag. Azka comes to drop it outside to the door. The driver comes and takes Azlan's bag.Azlan starts going towards the car but stops and turns. He looks at Azka who is looking at him.Azlan comes to her. Azka is standing there but her eyes seem to be trying to say a lot to Azlan.

Azlan:Azka aap bhi rest kare ab bahot late ho gaya hai.

Azka kuch nahi bolti bas azlan ko dekhe Jaa rahi hai.

Azlan:to phir me chalta hu.

She still doesn't say anything, just looking at Azlan. Seeing her like this is giving a different feeling to Azlan.As if both are trying to say something to each other. Azlan turns and opens the car door.He stays like this for 2 seconds, his face is down he closes his eyes and takes a deep breath,Then he opens his eyes and a smile comes on his face. He turns and Azka is still the same.And sees that Azka is still standing there

He goes to her. Azlan is standing a few feet away and then he goes closer to Azka.Azka's heart beats fast seeing Azlan coming so close to her.Azlan takes her face in his hands and bends towards her and kisses Azka's right cheek.Azka just freezes. She can feel Azlan's breath on her cheeks.

Other side Azlan did not want to do this but he could not stop himself.He felt bad being away from Azka like this. He wanted to tell her how he felt.Azlan has kissed her very softly,she is very close to him,Azlan can hear Azka's heartbeat.He's feeling her skin, her scent, which is driving him more crazy

After a few seconds he separates from Azka and sees that Azka's eyes are closed.He touches Azka's cheeks and Azka opens her eyes.

Azlan:Apna dyaan rakhna I will miss you a lot.See you soon Allah hafiz.

Azlan says this and he knows that Azka will not be able to say anything, so without listening to Azka's answer, he directly sits in the car and leaves,He is very happy, he is feeling complete today. He remembering Azka's words and there is a smile on his lips and a peace in his heart.Azlan is happy but he does not know how many questions he is leaving behind in Azka's heart,and she has to find the answers herself.




End of part 16

Edited by sanabmw - 2 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Wonderful update..

loved Azlaan and Azka conversation..

Good to see Azka so free with Azlaan..

Awww Azlaan kissed her.. hope Azka realizes her true feelings..

Eagerly waiting for the next one..

Posted: 3 years ago

such a romantic part❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: la_Reine

such a romantic part❤️


Thank you,for sach a long comment 🤣

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