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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Nany

You are just sweetest....

Ur naughty raichand is half done🤣Its just my eyes...nai tha kuch b likhna but thoda ye baki hi tha to I completed...

Tera aur Scissor dono ka special farmish baki he ....vo to me Pura karugi hi🤣🤣late to late but hoga...🤭🤭🤭

N yes back for this part only...abhi to rest wale mood me hi hu....

🤗🤗Thank you re..❤️

Hey take rest properly n dont bother ur eyes any more. Ye sb to chlta rhega but apna dhyan rkhna.

Meri or scissor ki farmaaish to puri ho hi jayegi but tum pls khud ko risk pe mt rkhna

At the end you r the best in every aspect 😳🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Tisri baat....ye likhte likhte sometimes me dant fadke hasti husmiley37smiley37N I love my hasi ..bhale raksas b sharama jaye but I love my hasi... to me khud kr liye b likhti hu ye nautnki smiley36


N yaha ki meri pyari pyari tharki's....I love them all....to Banta he yaar likhna....


Aur meri baheno...meri life ki pahele hi lagi padi hui he...vo to bhgwan ji ke control me he par idhar jo b likhu ...jesi b ending du it's in my hand...I love happy ending...I love happy moments....I love when people are happy....to ye happy happy likhkr me b happy ho jati n do panch aur ko khush Kar leti hu...




♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️



Loved it ,and enjoyed it.

( Chalo ab Vidhi trolling shuru karte hai,

Ok itna hot dev aur uske kamre main bethke Vidhi ko nind kaise aa sakti hai yar?

Ye to vahi bat hui, Jo mil gaya uski Kadar NAHI ,


Kitna kuchh hota agar ye soti na to )




Nany please ek baat In dono ko Ghar se bagha do apni OS main.

Tum hi kar sakti how Meri iccha puri.





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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Parud7

Hey take rest properly n dont bother ur eyes any more. Ye sb to chlta rhega but apna dhyan rkhna.

Meri or scissor ki farmaaish to puri ho hi jayegi but tum pls khud ko risk pe mt rkhna

At the end you r the best in every aspect 😳🤗

Are ha re...ye already likha hi tha 80% jitna....thank you for ur concern 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

As usual bhannat part tha.. ❤️❤️

Just love it.. ❤️❤️

Show me umr ki seema ki tagline chalti hi ja rhi ha khtm hone ka naam hi ni le rhi ha..

Aise me yaha pe Videv moments dekh k parh k sakoon sa mil jata ha. ❤️❤️❤️❣️

I just love ur writings..

When i didn't receive any notification about ur work i was thinking where is she..??

I thought to msg you but i was not able to msg

But now when my mail box notify me about ur name i just left all the work & came to read the next part. ❤️❤️

I can say that i have gone crazy about these two.. 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

But still ur work is amazing👏

It always bring smile on my face & i am laughing like a mad person. Infact blushing 😊 ❤️❤️

So Plz if i request you to write more os as tomorrow is sunday & it is a most difficult day for me to spend 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️😆plz write something if you r comfortable 🙏

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

It was amazing yaar . Like bilkul husband wife types. How he accepted her and how he gave back to Priya

Yeh padhke bahut khushi milgayi.vidhi our dev ke scenes both got solace by being together.that hug part is very nice.

Keep writing yaar…

Padne ke baad bahut relief feel hua our bahut hasa bhi main.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Yeh last scene mai aag laga kr latka diya 🙈🙈 kal mera exam hai aur instead of sleeping I am grinning like a fool yeh studies kai stress sai bohat hi pleasant break mila mind ko yeh perh kr

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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Nany

He run to his room as he know she must be waiting for his arrival n as usual he was late....


He stopped at the door n get awestruck by d view n he leaned to d door crossing his leg he enjoyed the view...


She was engrossed in her task..cleaning his wardrobe...with her bangles making cute little noise from each movement she made.. her duppata tied on her her waist and she was working...she ws so busy in her work tht she didnt notice pair of eye looking at her intensely.... she kept everything well and her gaze went on one of his coat.... she took tht in her hands.....n smile looking at it...n than hug it with quite a blush on her face....


Dev was looking at her every changing expression on her face...he wanted to know wht she was thinking tht make her blush this much...


Before he can take step towards her...she kissed his coat n twirl with one of the biggest smile....


Before she can twirl for other time her her leg got caught in the carpet and was about to fall flat on her face but instead of it she felt a cold hands holding her waist......


her back hit His solid chest as he pulled her towards him..... her breathing got fast from the thought of falling down but soon it was replaced to his cold hands which made her breathing go rapid.....


dev who was starring at her intensely saw her about to fall n reached there on time to hold her....his hands turn cold with the touch of her skin.




his hands were still on her waist while her one hand holding his arm for the support...



Dev slowly turn her ...n they look into eachothers...he noticed the colour of her chick turning....


slowly His hand travelled from her waist to her back....



she was burning from his touch. her entire body was melted in his....



her cheeks go red and she shly shifted her gaze ...



Dev:aaram se gol gol ghuma karo vidhi...



Her chick turn more red with the thought that he notices...


Vidhi:vo..vo ..me saaf kar fi thi......haa...Me saaf kar ri thi...


Dev chuckle at her fumbling n lift her in his arms n put her on his giant bed....


Vidhi gasped with this sudden adventure of him...


Dev:agar tumhara saaf karna ho gaya ho to Abb mujse thodi baat karo...


Vidhi lower her gaze:ji..


Dev:baat to karege bht sari par usee pahle pasta khaogi...bht bhukh lagi he yaar muje..khaogi tum..

Vidhi was in her own world in this whole time..


Dev:vidhi..


Vidhi:kaunnn meeinnnn??


dev:nai..padoshi ko puchh ra...



Vidhi try get up from bed ..


Vidhi:me..me banake la ri..


But dev stop her ...


Dev:betho chup chap...aajke liye bht kaam Kar liya he tumme...do rest...me bAS u gaya aur u aaya

..


Vidhi:par..


Dev:mere pichhe vidhi kitchen me mat aana n do rest.....


N dev leave to kitchen...leaving her all smily...


She laid down on his bed n sleep on her tummy...rubbing the bedsheet imaging its him..thought of him give her a blush..


she found his photo on other side of the bed n she suddenly grabbed it...


Keeping his photo near her heart she started to carrase it...meanwhile dev come with the bowl of pasta n look at her


she was carassing his photo with closed eyes...n again lost in her own world...its second time in a day he caught her like this...he thought again wht she must be thinking...something naughty about him ? He hit his forhead call her...


Dev:come on mem...khayalo se bahar aaie aur pasta khaie...


N vidhi come in seating position with a jerk with his voice...dev sit opposite her...


There was only one bowl ...with look at tht with little confusion...


Dev smile at his chirpy bird...


Dev:aaj ek hi bowl me se khate he na n he smile...with little shy smile she nod...


She was hesitate Lil nervous....


But dev offer her first bite making her little Care free n so she did the same...



they started to eat tht saucey pasta.. feeding eachother...like its so normal ..they chit chat,laugh while eating...n didn't realise when they finished pasta but only one was remaining n they didn't notice n they keep their fork on tht pasts...


Vidhi giggle at this n remove her fork..


Vidhi:kha lijie aap...


Dev gave a naughty smile to her:kyu na dono hi ise khaye...


N he keep tht remaining pasta in his mouth keeping half for her out of his mouth...n signal her to eat...vidhis eyes popped out with this...she so wanted to run from tht room but she knows she can't....


She was so hesitate to do this but don't want to make him sad..


She lower her gaze n went near him...n erase the distance between them by eating tht half pasta from his mouth...


In this close moment her lips touched his lip...before things go in another way she came in her original position...


Dev look at her lips.....n trace her lips with his thumb n remove the little sauce before he goes out of control n lick tht saucy lips..


Vidhi:mee...me vo..rakhke aayi bowl...


Dev:shhh...do rest bola na...


N he left her to keep the bowl...n came again to found her sleeping...


Dev came close to her n carrase her hair...n though how beautiful,masoom she is looking n look at her rossy lips n carrase it with his thumb...again controlling his desire he gave a kiss on her forhead n left to do his work...


It's been 10 pm n he was still working n satya came....


Satya:dev....


Dev:jii maa...


Satya:abi Tak kaam Kar re ho...so jao jakar..baki kaam Kal Kar lena...vese kuch khaya ki nai...


Dev who was still busy in his work...


Dev: haa..ma ....vidhi ke sath kha liya....


Satya smile hearing her name..


Satya: chalo achha he...tum b abb so jao...


Dev: maa...aap pls mere liye guestroom thik karwa sakti he...mera last kaam hi bacha hr..


Satya:kyuu...guestroom kyu....apne room me so jao...


Dev:maa vo vidhi mere room me so ri he... vo itna achhe se so ri thi uthane ka man hi ni kiya...


Stya:vidhi...vidhi yaha he...ghar nai gai...


Dev:nai na ma...so ri thi ...thak gai thi aaj bht to mene uthaya hi nai...medam aaj mera cupboard saaf kar ri thi n he look at his mother...


Satya gave him shocking expression n laugh...


Satya:tum to kisi ko apna Saman nai touch karne dete...


Dev gave shy smile to her n they both laughed...


Dev:maa...pls vo..kamra thik karwa do na...


Meanwhile priya enter...


Priya: so touchy touchy bhaisahab....kya baat he...us do kodi ladki ke lie aap guestroom Me sovoge?Kamal he...


Satya:priya...


Dev:ma...shhh...


Dev:priya....vo ladki jise tum do kodi ka kah rahi vo i mera pyar he....aur jab ghar mera he...vo pyar mera he to vo jaha chahe vaha rahe.....tumhe koi taklif nai honi chahie...


Priya:bhaisahab us ladki ne aaj aapko aaj aapke hi room se nikal diya he...ek din aapke sir pe nachegj vo...


Dev was still calm..


Dev:Nachne do...uska man jo hoga vo karegi ...muje koii prblm nai he...


N dev turn to leave n stop midway...


Dev:ma....me apne hi room me sone ja raha hu...mere liye koi alag room ready karane ki jaturt nai he....


Priya get shock with his this move n leave...


Dev entered in his room n see his sleeping beauty.....unaware about the world...dirty politics...society...taunts...n n wht not.... she was sleeping so peacefully....


He carrased her hair n sit beside her for few minutes holding her hand......looking at her angelic face he remember every moments they share.....


It's been minutes he was sitting like tht....n she stir in her sleep n not wanting to wake her up in this late he get up after giving her a kiss on her hair n went to sleep on sofa tht was laid on his room...he laid down there looking at her face....



It's midnight when he heard some cry n noticing its her he woke up with jerk...


He switch on the lamp


Hee body was shaking...She was crying In her sleep.....


Vidhi:mat karo vikram..Vikram maa ko Jane do...


Dev understand the pain she was going through..they never get a chance to talk about it...first tht case then her dad in hospital...things were so fast ..they didn't get enough time...he feel tug in his chest looking at her like tht...


He run to her


. Vidhi holds him tightly.....


He sooth her by carrasing her hair.....


Dev:vidhi....vidhi...me yahi hu... bura sapna he vidhi...me yahi hu...kuch ni hone duga me abb tumhe...I promise....


He gave her side hug to aasure her tht he was here with her....n try to calm her...


but vidhi...doesnt leave him....although his words made her stop crying but still she didn't let him go....she hold him more tightly.....


after few minutes Dev sense her not moving n calm...so he decided to shift to sofa again as she was sleeping n he get up but before he can move she caught his hand ...


DEv turn to her...But she opened her eyes...


Vidhi:muje chhodkar mt Jaie...


He looked at her...her pleading eyes...how can he say no to tht..


He sit beside her...


Dev:me kahi nai ja ra vidhi....yahi hu tumhare pass...but she was not convinced with him.....


She pull him towards her...before he can react she cross her arm against his neck...


Dev was Lil bit shock but he knew too wht she was going through...and in d end she wanted him close to her n nothing else



Other side vidhi brought him closer n closer and made him rest his head on her chest....



Dev was way way more heavier thn her......he try to stop her....but she tighhten her grip....so lastly he slowly relaxed his body and closed his eyes hearing her heart beats.


he rested his hand over her waist n other lying at the other side holding her shoulders.


Slowly both drifted off to sleep . She was still holding him tighly and him feeling her chest rise and fall from her breathing.........




Khatam😆😆


So I received some dms...asking me to write long ff n some about vidhi dev's relationships ,n most important write something serious about videv n why I write little off beat on them...


Well today I m gonna give all the answers...


First....a big no too long ff...I m not the person who can write long stories....I m not the one.... me suspene pe lake bich me story chhod Dene walo me se hu n u guys don't want tht rightttttt.....


Second....writing something serious or emotional about them.... a big nooooo again..... me Mar jaugi if I write something emotional.... emotional likhne ke liye different level ka talent chahie jo mere me to jara b nai he... yaha bht bht bht sare writers he they can fulfill ur wish n I love them all...🤗🤗They are just amazing with all the emotions....


Mere pass ek hi talent he agdam bagdam likhne wala 🤣Mere se emotional ki ummid mat rakho...me udhar b comedy karugi trust me....I m not talented enough for tht matter...


Again why I write this stuff....well...show Me kuch hota nai... yaha pe sab ka evvai mood khiska rahta aaj ye hua aaj vo...to why not this comedy.... sabka mood thik rahta he n isse achha kya hi hoga...


Someone commented tht break milta he ye padhke...achha lagta he ....muje ye sunke achha lagta he yaar....


Tisri baat....ye likhte likhte sometimes me dant fadke hasti hu🤣🤣N I love my hasi ..bhale raksas b sharama jaye but I love my hasi... to me khud kr liye b likhti hu ye nautnki 😆


N yaha ki meri pyari pyari tharki's....I love them all....to Banta he yaar likhna....


Aur meri baheno...meri life ki pahele hi lagi padi hui he...vo to bhgwan ji ke control me he par idhar jo b likhu ...jesi b ending du it's in my hand...I love happy ending...I love happy moments....I love when people are happy....to ye happy happy likhkr me b happy ho jati n do panch aur ko khush Kar leti hu...


It makes me happy n at some point others too.....Iske liye me ye likhti hu


I hope mene sab kah diya ho jawab mil gaye ho.....


I want to say thanks to my readers ...big hug to people who love my work...n jo like n comment dete he unke liye right wali jhappi..nai dete unke liye aur tight wali jhappi😆🤗


Guys on a serious note do like n comment here...I know lots of people read...I m not saying do in my work...I m saying for all...writers of here are doing amazing job....Lil credit n appreciation can do a lot....vese b forum me bht kam he os ,ff... may be this little efforts of urs can gave u many more...



This reminded me of the car ride scene, vidhi kandhe pe sar rakh ke so gyi thi. One of my favourite scenes, same wahi feel di ye waali os ne. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I genuinely don't think you can only write - agdam bagdam. This OS had a lot of things in it. His love and desire for her, her tentativeness (in the way she hesitates to touch / feed him despite her wanting to) mingled with her exuberant nature (in the way she twirls with his coat and later hugs his pic), his protective side in the way he defends her place in his house / life, his pain watching her reliving her trauma... and in the end their mutual contentment as they sleep in each other's arms.


You go girl!! Don't stop writing, that's all I'll say. Whether it is a long FF or short OS... do keep writing. As and when you can.

Thanks for the tag

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Arrey oh Romance Maina !!! I am so so sooooo happy 😊 after reading this one and smiling like a kid. Nany you are super talented and don't tell it as agadam bigadam. Iss tarah ke kuch dikhana yaa likhna baaki kaa toh mujhe pata nahin but mere liye bahut mushkil hota Hein. Kuch hatke aap likhte ho and sabko maza aati hein, smile aati hein iss se badi aur kya credit chahiye aapko? Mein ek tang pe khade hoke HP kee tarah Tapasya karun naa tabh bhi itna romantic aur intense scene for ViDev likh nahi pawungi. I loved it 🥰🥰. Aaj lagatar theen OS padi and theenon se bahut khush hoon mein. Thanks for this.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

aa gayi 🤗

mast bhannat likha... dil khush kiya and thank you...


aur jo dm karte hai unko bol aap hi likh do kuch serious sa hume bhi mil jayega padhne ko... hume yaha bhi mil jaye thoda kuch serious ka dose...


thanks again

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