OS: helping hand part 2,page 6 - Page 8

Originally posted by: carljung

This reminded me of the car ride scene, vidhi kandhe pe sar rakh ke so gyi thi. One of my favourite scenes, same wahi feel di ye waali os ne. ❤️

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Kitne cute lag re the dono naa us scene me ...Mast tha...ek vo scene tha na when he was gayab n vo dono ghar ja re the n d way she Said personal kaam☺️It was so so cute...

Originally posted by: Suvika.

I genuinely don't think you can only write - agdam bagdam. This OS had a lot of things in it. His love and desire for her, her tentativeness (in the way she hesitates to touch / feed him despite her wanting to) mingled with her exuberant nature (in the way she twirls with his coat and later hugs his pic), his protective side in the way he defends her place in his house / life, his pain watching her reliving her trauma... and in the end their mutual contentment as they sleep in each other's arms.

You go girl!! Don't stop writing, that's all I'll say. Whether it is a long FF or short OS... do keep writing. As and when you can.

Thanks for the tag

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Hey suvika thanks a lot dear for wonderful comment n ur kind words..means alot...❤️

Originally posted by: Chakor07

Part 2 bhi bole toh ek dum jabardast hai🤗

I liked the swag Dev showed to Priya😎

Maza aa gaya😁 cute Videv☺

P.s. happiness is what we need right now! Toh it is not agdam shagdam!

Hehehhehe....

Thank you🤗

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

aa gayi 🤗

mast bhannat likha... dil khush kiya and thank you...

aur jo dm karte hai unko bol aap hi likh do kuch serious sa hume bhi mil jayega padhne ko... hume yaha bhi mil jaye thoda kuch serious ka dose...

thanks again

Thanks re telly..🤗🤗

Chhor Jane de sabko😆...ham apni dhun me mast rahte he naaaj muje dev ko tadne ka man ho raa bht vese b

Paper bohat axha hua tha thanks for asking🤗

This time I had a control on my emotions otherwise I used to keep humming a song during my exam or ek baar ek ladke nai comment kya kai kon gaane ga raha hai main itna focused thi mujhe realize hi nhn hua kai mai hi gaane gaa rahi hun🤣🤣🤣 it was so embarrassing 🙈😂😂

Originally posted by: Revutty

Arrey oh Romance Maina !!! I am so so sooooo happy 😊 after reading this one and smiling like a kid. Nany you are super talented and don't tell it as agadam bigadam. Iss tarah ke kuch dikhana yaa likhna baaki kaa toh mujhe pata nahin but mere liye bahut mushkil hota Hein. Kuch hatke aap likhte ho and sabko maza aati hein, smile aati hein iss se badi aur kya credit chahiye aapko? Mein ek tang pe khade hoke HP kee tarah Tapasya karun naa tabh bhi itna romantic aur intense scene for ViDev likh nahi pawungi. I loved it 🥰🥰. Aaj lagatar theen OS padi and theenon se bahut khush hoon mein. Thanks for this.

Are meri pyarii🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Ek tang pe khada rahe dev ka sasur...

Tu apna jo mast likhti he vo likhti rahe...intense wale ke liye hu na me yaha🤣

Chal tera mood thik hua na I m happy usi me🤗

Tu khush raha kar pagal...load na le jyada❤️

Originally posted by: Agastia

Paper bohat axha hua tha thanks for asking🤗

This time I had a control on my emotions otherwise I used to keep humming a song during my exam or ek baar ek ladke nai comment kya kai kon gaane ga raha hai main itna focused thi mujhe realize hi nhn hua kai mai hi gaane gaa rahi hun🤣🤣🤣 it was so embarrassing 🙈😂😂

Are are🤣

Koi na yahi harkate to hasati he baad me😆😆

Paper achha gaya vahi bht he...🤗