Originally posted by: naaheean
Wow....wow.... Wow...kya baat hai!!! Meri toh haste haste pet bhi dukh rahi hai aur toh aur aansu bhi nikal aye....itna mazedar tha. The dialogues of Riya's father were damn good.... Kya punch line mara! Aur uss police officers ke har ek baat par unka woh "toh?" wala remarks, Kulkarni par hi kahi sare IPC sections pe FIR likhwana, and that "beach ke badle ghar pe kyun nahi bulaya?" wala dialogue just blown me out. Lagta hai jaise dialogue bazi mein aur Riya ko tease karne mein sasur aur jamai dono ki khub jodi jamegi.
Waise tumhari comic timing sense ki daad deni padegi....lagatar do chapters pe light & fun moments aur woh bhi itni saari ki sirf do hi chapters pe sabki dil bhi jeet chuki hai yeh story. Kudos to you...👏👏👏.
Lastly tnx for the pm...I was quite late in reading as there is guest in my house. Agli update ki besabri se intezaar rahegi.... Also, I hope that, tumhari life ki chaos ab tak shayed kafi kam ho gayi ho. Take care.
Yea it has been better. Thank God for that.
Kya karu, most of the story is pretty serious toh abhi thoda compensate kar rahi hun😂
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