RaYa TS :" Regrets and Mistakes ( Final shot Pg 4 [22/8/22]) " - Page 4

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Posted: 2 years ago
#31

Heartwrenching! But really a good depiction of their emotions! You've called this the final part, but if possible, I would love to read a part where they talk to each other about all of their unsaid emotional upheavals!


Thank you for writing this!

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Posted: 2 years ago
#32


Thank you. Glad you liked it ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
#33

This is good 🤍🌚 once their wounds heal hoping to see ram and priya becoming friends , then slowly rebuilding their relationship on basis of trust and then love !!!

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Posted: 2 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Milalal27

😭😭 Poor Ram. He is there for his Pihu, earning to hear Papa.


Wonderful, i am in😲 .


The feelings of them you have written it beautifully.

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Thank you for the lovely feedback ❤️. Glad you liked it .

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Posted: 2 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ajacob31

How did I miss this. Read both the parts in one go. So beautifully written. I hope the CVs bring at least 0.1% of this creativity in the show. Lovely and so relatable. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


@bold - I will tag you next time when I write something ❤️

Thank you for the lovely feedback ❤️. So glad you liked it . The CVs will bring in more boxing matches for us to get frustrated 😆.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#36

Sara is a b*tch! I loved how you explained PriHuAm's life through Krish's pov. He was an outsider, yet he isn't. Maitrai being sis goals is something I could never imagine. Ram, I feel so bad for him😭😭😭 Great job! 🥰

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Posted: 2 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

This is good. Hope they resolve properly in show. Loved this


Thank you . Glad you liked it ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
#38


Thank you ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
#39

Thanks Meri Tia for the lovely book cover ❤️🤗.


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Posted: 2 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

This is so heartbreaking 😭 but given what Ram and Priya have been through I can’t imagine a happily forever end for them. Will there be another part where Pihu calls Ram papa? Loved how u have written Krish. And also liked the conversation between Sood sisters.


Thanks Mandy ❤️. Glad you liked it 🤗.


The longer the show drags any progress. The more I am on the camp they won't get happily ever after 😆. It is frustrating watching the show waiting for any sign of improvement.


Regarding another part, not sure Mandy. I plan to finish the TS, I started today and finish my RaPi OS series and stop writing altogether on RaYa for awhile. 🤪

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