RaYa TS :" Regrets and Mistakes ( Final shot Pg 4 [22/8/22]) " - Page 2

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

WOW

Absolutely amazing, beginning to end

Thank you for the lovely feedback. ❤️. Glad you liked it

Your welcome ☺️ yeah i really did ☺️

You should really join the writing team..this is so good..and this is what we want to see in the show instead of never ending misunderstandings and ram being an utter fool.

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Loved this OS Nita ❤️ The show is dragging at a snail's pace - well no! Scratch that! The writers of this show will put even that snail to shame 😛 I loved how Ram executed Pihu's wish in your story better than the show one. And you have expressed Ram's inner turmoil beautifully. It hurts to see Ram look at Pihu like she is connected to him but does not belong to him and thats killing him.

I loved this line:

It was as if every memory he shared with Priya was broken by new truths 💔

Loved this line. His anger coupled with regret for not trying to look beyond Priya's lie was depicted very well 👏

P. S - Everytime u get frustrated with the show, its good news for your readers 🤣 so I ain't complaining 😛

Thank Mandy for the lovely feedback ❤️💙. So glad you liked it 🤗.

The show lost its own mind 🤪. Seven days is more like 7 months with this show . The writers got no continuity or anything. Just random inserted scenes everywhere .

Ram and Pihu became the main reason I watch the show . And I am glad you liked their moments ❤️.

I have zero hopes left with this show. This the first one I wrote without RaYa reunion. I fear the more they ruin RaYa as character, the more harder it would be to write on them together.

The frustrated me may start writing them as co parents at this rate 😆. But still a part of me hopes we would get good Priya moments like the one with Ram yesterday .

Originally posted by: Monaparekh12

Awesome update you describe ram pain beautifully wish it can happen in serial also enough of ram dumbnesss and Priya Mahanta do write more

Thank you for the lovely feedback. ❤️. Glad you liked it.

Yeah I am tired of the dumbness, Mahanta and detectivreness as well 😆

This is super awesome⭐️ This is how they should end the show, since its Ram's hidden talent to overhear stuff😆 Really good work👍🏼 Pihu is so cute❤️ Shubhu on street🤣

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

You should really join the writing team..this is so good..and this is what we want to see in the show instead of never ending misunderstandings and ram being an utter fool.

Thank you for the lovely feedback ❤️💙. Glad you liked it.

At the rate the show is going there can be new misunderstanding each day but they would never end any current ones 😆

Originally posted by: tournesol

This is so beautiful, Nita 🥺❤️. Thanks Meri Tia ❤️🤗. So glad you liked it.

Whenever I watch the show and see Pihu and Ram bond so beautifully, I always wonder how Ram would feel when he learns the truth.It is really heart breaking to see RaPi moments now especially yesterday's scene 🥺. Ram already loves Pihu a lot and the way he said don't go hungry, go on lots of adventures and eat lot of cupcakes. My heart cracked to see the moment 😭. He is already this sad to let Pihu go, imagine how hurt he would be with the truth.

If the audience feels this way, Priya should feel at least one percent of that, but no. It is so disappointing she only thinks about Ishaan. The time has changed, the situation has changed, it's high time the truth comes out. Well Audience are the only living being attached to this show. So we feel for every character, be it Ram, Priya or Pihu. We try to see all sides but most often feel angry at useless characters like Sara and Vikrant 🤪. The point is if then writers keep us in mind, we would get good scenes. If not we will get quick reunion with happy wala bgm 🤣.

I am happy you wrote this. 🤗 I am happy that Ram learned the truth on his own and not by someone else telling him their version of the truth. The rain scene was fantastic. How Ram was hoping for an artificial one and it rained for real. ❤️ I am glad you liked it. The only thing my mind keep coming up with his more OS for this show and I am like focus on your others works a little. But I can't stop writing on this show for now 🤪.

And I love that Nandini, Shubhu and Vedika get kicked out of KM at the end 😅🤣 It will happen only in our dreams and OS. In show, i see quick forgiveness

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Truly this was so beautiful written. I am in awe 👏👏👏

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Do tag me for your future stories.

take care and be blessed.

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

This is super awesome⭐️ This is how they should end the show, since its Ram's hidden talent to overhear stuff😆 Really good work👍🏼 Pihu is so cute❤️ Shubhu on street🤣

Thanks Shibu 💖. So glad you liked it ❤️🤗. Even I want them to end the show soon enough. I can't imagine how much more they would destroy the characters otherwise 🤪.