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Thank you for this, I so so wanted Annu to go to Mumbai as well❤️
Thank you for this, I so so wanted Annu to go to Mumbai as well❤️
Interesting story eagerly waiting for next part🥰
If you don't mind can I share one suggestion with you and kindly you can deliver your genuine perspective on this as it will b hearty nd haughty discussion i think so. But if you feel otherwise then I m sorry for this remark in the beginning of this process.As this is your story but i just want to add on a little detail in this chapter 15-Originally posted by: Suhani2Chapter 15: Ishq Visk Pyaar vyaar:
GG reaches Mumbai and Prakash bhai comes to pick her up. She gets emotional Seeing him after such a long time. Both hug each other and cry.
PB: Didi aap toh bahut change Ho gayi ho.
GG: Prakash bhaiya, aap bhi bahut handsome ho gaye ho, aur Bhabhi kaisi hai?
PB: Sab theek hai Didi aap Delhi mein rehti hai toh Lucknow se Mumbai kaise?
GG: Mein kuch dino se Lucknow mein hu, Hospital ka kuch kaam tha isliye Aana pada.
PB: Matlab aap Annu Bhaiya se mile? Aur Ridhi kaisi hai.
GG: Ji mile, aur Ridhi abhi uske papa ke pass hai.
PB: Annu bhaiya aaye the kuch din pehle
GG: Apni birthday pe, har saal ki tarah hai na?
PB: Ek baat Puche aapse?
GG nods her heads
PB: Aap Annu bhaiya ko maaf kyun kar kar rahe ho, Aap dono aaj bhi ek dusre se pyaar karte hai aur who hume dikhai deta hai phir yeh dooriyan kyun?
GG: Kyunki, itna easy nahi hai to forgive someone,especially someone who is your main and breaks your heart, what do you expect ki mein itni jaldi use maaf kar du. No, never kabhie nahi karuji use maaf .
PB sees her Anger rising and says: Di, Aap na bahut thakgayi hogi, mein aapko hotel chod deta hu.
GG: Prakash Bhaiya, hotel nahi Ghar pe.
PB: Mumbai mein ghar hai aapka?
GG: Kuch saal pehle liya tha, aap mujhe please waha pe dropkar dege please.
PB drops GG to a high-rise apartment facing the Marine drive. GG has a penthouse on the 30th floor overlooking the sea. As soon as the bell rings, Gauri Tai opens the door and seeing GG she takes her luggage in and closes the door.
GG: Gauri Tai kaise hai aap?
GT: Mein bilkul theek hu Didi, kitne dino baad aap yaha aayihai.
GG: Jab ghar liya tha tab aayi thi aur uske baad aaj, so technically aap is ghar mein mere se zyada rehti hai.
GT: Mein toh hafte mein 1 baar ise saaf karne aati hu, paraaj aap ne phone karke bola ki aap aa rahi hai islye ruk gayi. Dinner ready hai aap fresh hoke aaye tab tak mein kahanagaram kar deti hu.
GG: Gauri Tai, you must be getting late, please take aal the food and go home and enjoy with your family I will do manage, aur kal please subah time pe aa jaana okay.
GT: Ji Didi, Good night.
GG stands in the balcony overlooking the Marine drive She could see people enjoying the nights, romancing some dancing, some just sitting looking the tide. A City that never sleeps at night, the chaotic feeling beingthere brings her memories back too.
“Mumbai, the only city which has her good memories,Mumbai, Jahan Anubhav aur mere kitne pyaar moments create hue hai, Chahe woh chai pe charcha ho, ya phir hasi Mazak, Candlelight dinner ho, ya phir Akriti se chupe chupana, Pyaar ke lamhe ya Judaai ka gham, Ek family ka milna ya apno se dur hona sab is seher ne mujhe dikhaya hai.
Mumbai, Jahan Anubhav aur mere saare pyaar bhare lamhe hai, jise meine apne dil ke camera mein kaid kiye hai, Uska Birthday surprise dena, ya who saare raat joh humne ek saath yahan guzaare hai, bina kisi tension ke, bina kisi ke taane ke, bina kisi aur ki parwah kiye hue, Jahan Mein aur Anubhav were being ourselves, the self we would have wanted to be always as. Agar aaj hum ek saath hote toh kitne saare aur memories create kar paate, Ridz ko yaha leke aate, PB aur family se milvate, phir se woh saare memories ek saath create karte, Sab kuch karte agar tumne mujhe par bharosa kiya hota.
PB ne mujhe kaha ki hum dono aaj bhi pyaar karte hai, Hakarti hu, itna pyaar jitna kabhie kisi se nahi kiya hai, itna ki tumhare liyeduniya se fight kar lu, 5 saal mein maine tumhe kitna miss kiya yeh sirf mein janti hu, tumhe Akriti ke court case bachaya, har pal ki khabar rakhi taki tum safe raho, koi problems nahi aane di, par kyun ? iss sawaal ka jawab aaj tak nahi hai mere pass, Kyun? Kiya yeh sab jab ki mujhe tumse nafrat karni chahiye,phir kyun???? Kyun nafrat nahi kar paa rahu, kyun tumhe dekh kar aaj bhi mein kamzor pad jaati hu???
Meanwhile in Lucknow: Anubhav leaves the airport, thinkingabout her weird behviour but brush it up saying: Weird behave karne mein usne Degree le rakhi hai, par kuch toh hua hai. He reaches home and at the same time he sees BM, Maa, and Divya chachi walking along with Ridz in the house, the whole house is shocked to see this, suddenly BP ask
BP: Tum teeno toh bazaar gayi thi na, toh Ridz ke saath kaise aayi.
Sargam: woh hume, yehna bahar mile, woh Garima ji use yaha drop karne aayi thi hai na Jiji.
BM: ha, sargam bilkul sahi keh rahi hai, woh Andar kaise aa sakti thi, toh humne use andar le aaye.
Anu and GC found it very weird and wanted to inquire more sothey take Ridz to Anu’s room.
Anu: Ridz aaj ghar pe kya hua tha?
Ridz: Woh Papa, park se aane ke baad Mumma ne mujhe bahut shout kiya ki hum saath nahi reh sakte kyunki hume wapas delhi jaane hoga aur aap yaha rehte hai phir Badi Dadi, Dadi,aur Choti Dadi Rasika Bua se milne aayi thi aur Dadi ne mumma ko maafi bhi mangi, aur phir Raashi Aunty aayi aur mumma aur Raashi Aunty study room mein gaye aur phir Mumma ne kaha ki woh Mumbai jaarahi hai aur hum waha se aaha aa gaye.
Papa jab mumma wapas aayegi toh aap mumma ko shout karoge na usne aaj kitna gussa kiya mujhpe. Aur papa ab bhi mumma se sorry bol do phir hume wapas Delhi nahi jaana padega.
Anu: Acha tum Champ ke saath khelne Jaao.
After she leaves, he turns to GC, Yug and Ankit: BM aur sab Rasika Di se milne Gaye?
GC: Bhabhi ne maafi mangi?
Ankit: kahi mein sapna toh nahi dekh raha hu? Yug Bhaiya please pinch me.
Yug: woh sab toh theek hai lekin Anu, GG wapas Delhi jaanewali hai uska kya karega tu?
Anu: pata nahi Bhaiya par itna pata hai, ki mujhe kuch karna toh padega.
Mumbai:
Gungun looks at his and Anubhav photo which is in her bedroom
GG: Pata hai jab mujhe pata chala ki mujhe wapas lucknow aana padega toh dikha nahi sakti thi par I was hoping that we cross path someday. When Investigation officer recommended you, I was beyond the clouds but there a fear in my heart even if I forgave you and we take a step together towards future, will you tremble down again and instead of taking a stepforward we will be back to where we were? In the institute when I was going to fall and you saved me, I was so loss on your brown eyes Ufffff, but the place nor the situation and nor the timing was right, Stupid Raashi didn’t even let me enjoy for few minutes more.Tumhari care, tumhe meri har baat yaad rakhna was pulling me again towards you but us din jab BP ne mujhse kuch kaha tab tum chup rahe, Kuch nahi bole toh mujhe laga ki hum wapas waha jaakar khade reh gaye jaha 5 ½ saal the, Aaj Tumne sahi kaha mein bhaag rahe hu, Because of the fear that you will again leave me alone and again I will have to start my journey of making my self stronger, but how can I tell you this, that it is very difficult for me.
Even if I say yes, to live together will you stand against BP? Will the family come and support our relationship ya phir samaj kya kahega iss dar se aage kadam nahi badaoge? Itne saare sawaal ka jawab mein nahi de sakti thi, is liye Mumbai aayi, Pehle Delhi bhaag gayi aur ab yaha, itne saare sawaal ka koi toh jawab hoga?
Next Mrng in Mumbai
PB calls Anubhav: hello, Annu bhaiya kaise ho aap?
Anu: I am fine PB, kya hua sab theek hai na itni subah call kiya apne? GG theek hai na?
PB: woh bhaiya, Didi theek hai woh apse akele mein baat karni thi.
Anubhav sees Champ and Ridz sleeping so he gets up and goes to the balcony
Anu: Ji PB kya kua?
PB: Kal Didi bahut disturb thi, Kuch baat hui hai kya,kyunki Didi ko ghar pe drop karne ke waqt bahut gussa ho gayi isliye
Anu: Ghar??
PB; Ji Didi ka ghar, hume bhi nahi pata tha, woh toh kal hume pata chala ki Didi ka Mumbai mein ghar bhi hai, Woh abhi hum use lene jaane wale the par kal ka gussa dekhkar thoda nervous hu isliye.
Anu: Aap chinta mat kijiye PB aaj jab Gungun wapas aa jayegi tab baat kar luga use.
PB: Aaj?
Anu: Kya hua Gungun toh aaj wapas aa rahi hai na? Aap itna shock kyun ho gaye
Flash back: In PB car GG: Meri tickets ko extend karwa do please till Friday.
Present:
Anubhav: Extend??? PB mein apko baad mein phone karta hu. He calls Raashi to inquire about the extension of stay
Raashi: Yes sir, Gungun ne apni tickets extends ki hai.
Anu: kyun???
Raashi: Pata nahi sir.
Anu: Okay.
Anu gets ready and goes down for breakfast still thinking about why she extended her tickets when he gets a call, it was from Gungun
GG: Joh bhi puchna hai mujhse pucho meri PA se nhi.
Anu: Tickets kyun extend ki
GG: going to buy a company, so that’s why
Anu: Matlab??
GG: Jab bhi tumpe gussa aata hai, kisi aur ki shamat aati hai, toh kisi ko barbaad karne jaane wali hu
Anu: Paagal ho, kya bol rahi ho. Mera Gussa tum mujhe par nikalo kisi aur ko kyun barbaad kar rahi ho.
GG: Tum Gussa mat dilao, mein kisi aur ko barbaad nahi karuji. Simple
Anu: Mujhe tumse baat karni hai.
GG: Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni, especially about yesterday otherwise mere high temper mein kisi aur ko temperature aa jaaye.
Anu: please aisa kuch mat karna, I beg you
GG has a soft smile coz she is joking but can’t show to Anu: Tum kabse please bolne lage.
Anu: Ridz theek hai, dnt worry waise tumne Ghar kharida aur mujhe kyun nahi pata.
GG: Tum mere baare mein kitna jante ho? Anyways I got to go
GG cuts the call and wait for PB and instruct him to take her to the Agarwal Builders office, as she has a meeting to buy out the company. (There is a reason for it, will know later)
GG after the meetimg goes to PB house and meet everyone there, and she is so happy but suddenly she starts to cry and puts her heads on Aai lap and closes her eyes
GG: Aai, kya mujhme itna badlav aaya hai, ki mein apne aapko hi pehchan nahi paa rahi hu? Pyaar kiya tha maine, aur nibhaya bhi, sabki insult suni kyunki pehle pyaar hai Anubhav mera, shaadi hui jis bhi halat mein ho, pyaar hua, sabse khaas moments create kiya humne, pyaar ki nishani hai humhari beti, bharosa tuta, dil tuta, vishwaas toda usne phir bhi sazaa mujhe mili, use bhi mili, aaj bhi mil rahi hai, par sabko lagta hai ki mein badal gayi hu.
Ha Badlav hai, I became ruthless, par phir bhi sabke baare mein sochti hu, toh galat kaha hu main? Meri beti chahti hai ki hum dono saathe mein rahe, par kaise aur kaha, Mera Ghar Delhi hai ab, aur uska Lucknow, Aur agar mein use kehdu ki leave everything here and come with me to Delhi,woh nahi aayega, aur Mein sab kuch chod kar waha nahi reh sakti. Isliye, aaj Mumbai Bhaag aayi hu, kuch dino ke liye.
Aai: Ek baat bata, tu Anubhav se pyaar karti hai?
GG: ha Karti hu mein pyaar, par bharosa woh kaise karu? Dar lagta hai ki usne wapas tod diya toh? Itna asaan nahi hai na Aai.
Aai: Nahi hai Asaan but beti hai tum dono ki, koi toh rasta hoga kuch toh solution nikal na padega.
GG: janti hu, lekin soch nahi paa rahi hu, isliye aaj yahahu lucknow mein nahi.
Aai: Ek baat manegi meri.
GG: Ji boliye
Aai: Anubhav ko Mumbai bula lo
GG: Par Aai
Aai: Sun mein maaf karne ke liye nahi keh rahi hu, Mumbaitum dono ki safe place hai toh baa taro solution nikalo bhaggo mat.
GG gives a Smirk, a well known one, PB sees it
PB: Tumne already kuch kiya hai use yaha bulane ke liye, haina?
GG calls Raashi and tell her its Go time
FLASHBACK: Raashi calls GG and tells her about Anubhavasking her about the extension, as expected and GG advise her to wait for hercall and to go give tickets for Mumbai to Anubhav
In Shanti Niwas, Anubhav is still disturbed by what will GG do in anger when the doorbells rings, Chaavi opens the door
Rasshi: Kya Dr Anubhav Kulshreshth ghar pe hai?
Chaavi: Ji, Aap kaun?
Raashi: Aap please unse kaheye ki raashi aayi hai.
Chaavi comes to the dining hall
BP: Kaun hai darwaze pe?
Chaavi: BP koi Raashi aayi hai, Annu bhaiya se milne.
Ridz: Raashi Aunty, and she runs to greet her along with champ
The whole family gathers in the living room, BM ask her to come in
Raashi: Sorry itni subha disturb kiya par mujhe Anubhav sir se milna hai
Anubhav was just coming out of his room when he heard Rasshi’s voice and he comes down
Anubhav: Raashi tum yaha, abhi thodi der pehle toh phone par baat hui thi, phir aachanak yaha kaise?
Raashi: Woh mujhe yeh aapko dene ke liye kaha gaya tha.
Anubhav takes the envelope and opens it, and sees the tickets inside and looks at Raashi and then his family members
Anu: Tickets Mumbai ke liye?
Raashi: yes, your flights leave in 3 hours, Have a safe flight
Saying this Raashi leaves from there, Anu is hell Confused, His family members are more confused than him.
Screen freeze.
What if Anubhav went to meet GG on his own in Mumbai without ever GG herself thinking of calling him nd sending him tickets? Nd may b when PB informs him about GG delayed stay in Mumbai then he opts for personally meeting her and asking a favour from PB to pick him at the Mumbai Airport.He can easily visits her place by taking PB's help without even informing her aur woh usey door pe dekh k bahut surprise hoti. Shayad isey readers ko yeh bhi lagta ki Anubhav k taraf se bhi kuch efforts kiye jaa rahe hain is rishtey ko lekar Jo usne drame mein bhi kabhi nahi kiye.That's why kyuki jahan tak GG ka character arc bahut strong hai is storyline mein wahin Anubhav ka character Drama waali vibes abhi bhi deliver kar raha hai jo acha nahi lagta.
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Chapter 16: Mumbai countless. 0
BP: Mumbai Kyun?
Anu: Pata nahi, woh toh waha jaake hi pata chalega. Ridz aap yaha rehna chahti hai ki Garima Bua ke pass chod du
Ridz: GB ke pass aur Kya champ bhi aa sakta hai kehlne?
Yug: Kyun nahi, jaao bags pack karo dono, Neeti Champ ka school bag or one pair of clothes bhi pack kar lena.
Sargam: Anu, jaa tum hi apna bag pack kar, hum in dono ko chod aayege.
Anu: Theek hai, mein GB ko phone karke bata deta hu.
Mumbai:
GG: Bhaiya, kya aap Anubhav ko Aaj sham Airport se pick karke ghar par drop kar dege, mujhe thoda kaam hai woh khatam karke mein aa jaugi aur kal shaam aap sabka dinner hamare ghar pe hai bhulna mat.
Arti: Arey Didi, hum kaise bhul sakte hai, aaj apne 4 baar mujhe yeh baat kahi hai.
GG: Theek hai, mein chalti hu, kal milte hai.
GG bids them farewell and leaves from there and calls Rasika Di
GG: Di, Aapse kuch kaam tha. Aap please ek report collect karni hai office se aap please collect karke Bua ko degi please and when she sees the report make sure you sit with her.
Rasika Di: Theek hai, Yug bhaiya Maa ko leke aa raha hai who2 badmassho ko drop karne uske baad chali jaaugi.
GG: Thank you.
Anubhav calls GG
Anu: Mumbai kyun?
GG: Tum bina sawwal kiye kuch kaam nahi karte kya?
Anu: Yeh mere Saawal ka jawab nahi hai
GG: who meri line thi tumhari nahi.
Anu: Sawaal galat tha us din bhi aur aaj bhi
GG: Aaj sawwal nahi pucha maine, aur us din ka jawab tumne us din theek se diya nahi tha.
Anu: Mumbai Kyun?
GG: kaam hai tumse isliye, PB tumhe airport pick karne aagayege aur Ghar par drop kar dege, the penthouse on floor 30 apartment number3012, Gauri Tai Darwaza khol degi tumhare liye. Mujhe late ho jaaega please Gussa mat dilana warna kisi ki shammat aa jayegi. Bye
Anu: Arey… The call gets disconnected.
GC: Kya hua, kuch kaha kyun bula rahi hai tumhe.
Anu: Kaha Chachu, kahe ki kaam hai mujhse aur waha PB airport se pick kar lege. Aur kaha hai ki Gussa mat dilana warna kisi ki shammat aa jayegi. Acha hum nikalte hai,der ho gayi hai.
Anu reaches Airports, Boards the flight, and reaches Mumbai where PB has come to pick him up.
Anu: PB, Aapko kuch idea hai kya ho raha hai?
PB: Idea hai par aap Didi se hi puch lena, chaliye mein aapko ghar chod deti hu.
Anu is very confused, he calls home and let them know that he reached Mumbai, he also Facetime Ridz and champ and let them know that he reached. PB drops him to the apartments and Shanta tai opens the door for him,takes his luggage and show him the bedroom, Anubhav enters the bedrooms and shock to see the simplicity of the room, GG room in Lucknow is much more decorative but this one is plain simple just the way he likes it, he looks at the photo frame above the bed the one from Mumbai’s Balcony, and also small frames of Ridz and her, GC Gang, His and Hers, Garima Bua and Rasika di along with Yash Jiju. He smiles looking at everything,
Anu Takes her and his photo: “Sadhe 5 saal ho gaye lekin aaj bhi saare memories ko jab bhi yaad karta hu, toh ek khushi milti hai. Jis din tum chod ke gayi, tab maine faisla kiya tha, ki jitney bhi saal kyun na hogaye, mein wait karuja, shayad aage bhi karna pade, par aaj mauka mila hai maafi maang kar rahuja aur tumhare dukh ka hissa ban jayuga, GC us din kaha thaki mein tumhara dil kabhie na todu, but maine tod diya, us din maine tumse kaha tha ki ek din tumhe meri patni hona par garv hoga, par aaj mujhe tumahara pati hone par Garv hai, Shaadi jis haalat mein hui ho, Maine tumhe aur sirf tumhe apni patni mana hai.”
His chain of thoughts is broken when Gauri Tai knocks on the door
GT: Sir, aap ko kuch chaiye, mera ghar jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai.
Anu: Nahi, thank you
As soon as GT leaves, Anubhav gets freshen up and thinks to cook dinner for himself and GG, when he is preparing Dinner GG enters the house and see him in kitchen, her mouth wide open because and staring at him in shock. Anu sees her like this and smiles
Anu: Hi, Dinner is almost ready, tum fresh ho jaao then we shall have dinner.
GG goes to the kitchen and checks what he made and is shocked to see all her favourite dishes made.
GG: Did you cook it did you order it and just garnished it
Anu: Banaya hai
GG: Impressive Mr Scientist, not bad
Anu: Thank you, go get freshen up.
She comes out and is shocked to see the table set up in a balcony decorated with flowers and champagne bottle and slow music playing
GG: Alright, not bad are you trying to impress me?
Anu: Impress maybe but trying hard or taking at least a step-in apologizing to you so will you (takes his hand in front for her) give me a chance?
GG things a while and gives her hand: Sure, but A for effort I must give you that
Anu: Thank you, Shall we?
GG: We shall, and they proceed to the balcony.
Anu pulls a chair out for her and opens the champagne bottle and serves her dinner and then takes a sit. GG takes a bite of the pasta he had made
GG: Not bad, are you cooking for the first time or have you cooked before?
Anu: kyun itna bura tha?
GG: No, I mean asking in general, this is good so i had to ask….
Anu: 5 ½ saal Mein tumhari Fav Dish banana toh sikh liya.
GG: So, lets talk
Anu: lets play 20 Questions, I ask you one and the next is yours.
GG: Okay Ready?
Anu: Alright ladies first
GG: oh cmon not this concept of ladies first, I hate it
Anu: Kamaal hai, everyone loves this concept and you hate it.
GG: well, I am not everyone, if I was you would have moved on in all these years, yet here we are. So I am not everyone
Anu: That’s true, you can’t be everyone tum single piece ho, Bhagwan ne na pagalo banana band kar diya hai islye tum single piece ho
GG: Haha very funny, bakwaas joke tha. 5 ½ saal joke marna nahi sikhe tum
Anu: Jab zindagi hi mazaak ho, toh yeh joke toh bahut chota hai usme. Anyways let’s start
1. Why did you run to Mumbai?
GG: Coz, I couldn’t answer your Question about living together, I couldn’t find one yet so.
2. Why didn’t you get married again?
Anu: After Akriti left, BP did try to get me married but I couldn’t, I couldn’t do this to you. You are my wife no matter how we got married us din bhi kaha tha, aaj bhi keh raha hu.
3. Jab gussa hoti toh company buy karti ho kyun?
GG: tum hamesha mujhe BA fail kehte the, toh your taunt haunted me aur Jab Bharosa toda toh I was very angry at you so to satisfy my anger I brought company who weren’t performing well, studied them, made offers they couldn’t refuse, pressed the right nerve as they say in Business world and subdued my anger on you.
4. Mujhepe bhrosa kyun nahi kiya, joh dekha use sach maan liye kyun?
Anu: Sorry, I am guilty for it,not giving any excuses or explanation for my action all I can do is try winning you back
5. Will you ever give n my efforts?
GG: Maybe, maybe not
6. Living situation,since Ridz made a demand to you.
Anu: Jaise tum kaho
7. Ridhi name kaise socha?
GG: Rasika Di ne rakha, she always wanted a girl name Ridhi, when she had miscarriage, she gave the name to our daughter.
8. Agar mein kahoon ki Mein Delhi nahi chod sakti,kya Tum Lucknow chod doge hamare saath rehne ke liye.
Anu: Shayad, Woh toh baat karke hi pata chalega Ghar Pe
9. The anger you subdued on the company did it help?
GG: Tum aaj wahi kar rahe ho jo us din kiya, never trying to know the second half of the story. Yes, I brought company who were failing not just because of my anger towards but also, I was helping someone to save the family, the Employees worked so hard, and the company was shutting down they would lose work and income, so I brought them.
10. BP se Ridhi aur Mere liye Stand loge, God forbidden if you must, will you stand against your family for our family?
Anu doesn’t answer, GG gets it and eat her remaining dinner in silent.
GG: Its fine, your silence is speaking a thousand words now, no need to answer it
She drinks rest of the champagne and gets up, “Thanks for the dinner.”
As she is about to leave, he holds her hand, like she did when he was leaving that day, and gets up and instantly hugs her. His hold is too tight that she can’t even breathe, she doesn’t give in the hug first but when she hears him cry, she hugs him back
Anu: I am so sorry, please dnt leave me and go, I can’t lose you again for so many years I was lost without you, miserable and angry at myself for letting you go, When you came back I saw the change sin you and I knew that those changes are because of me, first time I saw your eyes after so many years, I saw sadness like the one you described to Dr Maya on your birthday, I may be the reason for everything going bad in your life, so sorry for not trusting you, sorry for not standing by you and sorry for everything.
GG release herself from the hug and looks at him, she sees there is genuinelity in his eyes, but she also know she cant trust him completely yet.
GG: Look, I can forgive you but trusting you again, that’s going to take time, so for now nest we can do is start from starting and let’s see how things work out this time for us.
He smiles a bit and shakes her hand and speaks
Anu: So let’s work our way of being best parents to our daughter while I try to win you back
GG: okay, so now that dinner is done are there more surprises or shall we say good night
Anu: Actually, there is one more thing
he turns the music up a bit and ask for her hand in dance, like Mumbai black saree one, they sway away to the music and look at each other with such intensity, He runs his hands up her arms and her shoulders. Then cups her face and bites her lips and she laughs again and for the first time he lets himself think about the possibilities…His lips are sure, demanding, capturing her mouth with a low moan that resonates throughout her body. She is overwhelmed by how quickly he assaults her senses, how quickly she abandons thought for sheer sensation. Anubhav kisses along her throat, fingers trace her nape, cup her head, as his mouth travels to suck gently along her collarbone. She sighs deeply, arches closer, her hands finding their way around his neck.
GG immediately comes to her senses and moves back, she cant go further not now at least, Anubhav also becomes too awkward by this and he starts stammering and muttering sorry to her.
GG: Its fine, we will have to work on the boundaries too, since we will have to stay together in future.
Next mrng: they have breakfast in peace, no one wants to talk about what was going to happen yesterday.
GG: Oh by the way, I forgot to tell you I have invited PB and family today for dinner.
Anu: Okay, we can do a dinner, but also since we are in Mumbai, and we never have done Mumbai Darshan let’s do that today.
GG: I am in but on one condition
Anu: What condition?
GG: you dnt taunt me, nor tease me and you talk sweetly today, no matter how much I irritate you. Deal?
Anu Smiles: Done deal.
They smile and laugh while GG looks at him in a mischievous way,
Anu: I dnt like that look.
GG: what look?
Anu: the look you are giving right now, as if you are going to do something
GG: Dar Gaye?
Anu: Nahi,bilkul nahi, anyways what we are making for dinner, we must get supplies also.
GG: tum pasta ke awala kuch aur bana lete ho, nahi na toh dinner I will cook
Anu; Tumhe khana banana aata hai?
GG: ofcourse, aata hai, us din jab Bua ne kaha tha, ki beta Aaj yaha kha lo, GG ne help ki hai, Suna nahi tha
Anu: Suna tha, par laga tumne sirf kitchen saaf karne mein help ki hogi
GG: oh hello, agar us din taste kar lete toh pata hota I can cook not just bake. Mr Food waster.
Anu: Oh hello, Ms Papa ki Pari, us din maine already BM ko promise kiya tha isliye nahi khaya.
GG smiles looking at him and he realize what he did and what she was doing
Anu nodding his head: That’s not fair, no way I am not counting this one.
GG: What? How easily I can do that to you, and you didn’t even realize so now Mr Mummy ke Magarmach Mumbai darshan akele karna.
Anu: No that was not fair, you didn’t give me a warning and they fight and run around the house until they are tired. They make the list to get things from the grocery store, they go for shopping, background fun music your choice, they do all crazy stuff all in the stores, come home and start preparing dinner for themselves and their guest.
GG while chopping vegetables: Tell me something, tumhe really laga ki I might not know who to cook
Anu: Actually,I thought that coming from a family how has cook and all that, I misjudged you.
GG: who toh tum hamesha karte ho, usme naya kya hai.
Anu: Toh tumne us din zeher nahi milaya tha?
GG: Nahi,tumhe marne ke bahut saare tarekke aate hai, toh zeher kyun use karu.
Anu: Toh tumne mujhe marne ke baare mein socha bhi hai
GG: tum toh boredom se martre ho, meri kya hi aukat hogi tumhe marne ki
Anu: Tumhe lagta hai mein boring hu?
GG: ha toh ho usme bura lagane ki kya baat hai.
Anu: mein bilkul bhi boring nahi hu.
GG: ohhh haa, tum boring nahi MAHA boring ho.
Anu pointing Fingers at her: you………. You know what Good luck with your cooking, mein toh Mumbai darshan ke liye Jaa raha hu.
Saying this he leaves the house.
Anu to himself: Boring kaha nah usne, Lucknow wapas jaane do, mein dikhata hu, ki mein boring nahi hu, Suddenly Chachu Facetime him and in Anger he says: Chachu, please aap bhi mat shuru ho jaana
GC: Par humne toh kuch nahi kaha tumhe, Kyun GG ne kuch kaha tumse.
Anu: HA,Boring kaha usne,
Yug: Actually,Boring nahi MAHA boring kaha hoga usne, Hai na Anu?
Anu: Yes
GC: Toh usne Sach hi kaha, Sach kadwa hota hai.
Anu: Chachu aap bhi.
GC: Acha yeh sab chod, sab theek hai na?
Anu: Ha chachu sab theek hai, baat ki hai aage kya karna hai, ab ghar aake hi pata chaelga.
GC: Arey humne yeh kehne ke liye ki chaavi ki shaadi ki date fix ho gayi hai. Panditji ne 2hafte baad ka muharat nikala hai toh jaldi se Lucknow aa jaao bahut saare kaamhai yaha.
Anu: Chachu aake living arrangement ke bhi baat karni hogi, ab sab kaise karege who toh waha aake hi pata chalega.
Anu goes up and tells GG about Chavi wedding and GG is too excited as Chavvi is so close to her, they prepare for dinner together and gets ready and wait for BP and family and Gauri Tai and family and they all have dinner with fun and laughter and enjoyment.
Anu sees the old GG’s Glimpse after a long time, and he is just admiring how she is and have those stolen moments every now and then with their eye’s conversations. This GG is someone whom he fell in love with, and Anu know no matter what he has to win her back. Both look at each other and the screen freezes.
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BP: Mumbai Kyun?
Anu: Pata nahi, woh toh waha jaake hi pata chalega. Ridz aap yaha rehna chahti hai ki Garima Bua ke pass chod du
Ridz: GB ke pass aur Kya champ bhi aa sakta hai kehlne?
Yug: Kyun nahi, jaao bags pack karo dono, Neeti Champ ka school bag or one pair of clothes bhi pack kar lena.
Sargam: Anu, jaa tum hi apna bag pack kar, hum in dono ko chod aayege.
Anu: Theek hai, mein GB ko phone karke bata deta hu.
Mumbai:
GG: Bhaiya, kya aap Anubhav ko Aaj sham Airport se pick karke ghar par drop kar dege, mujhe thoda kaam hai woh khatam karke mein aa jaugi aur kal shaam aap sabka dinner hamare ghar pe hai bhulna mat.
Arti: Arey Didi, hum kaise bhul sakte hai, aaj apne 4 baar mujhe yeh baat kahi hai.
GG: Theek hai, mein chalti hu, kal milte hai.
GG bids them farewell and leaves from there and calls Rasika Di
GG: Di, Aapse kuch kaam tha. Aap please ek report collect karni hai office se aap please collect karke Bua ko degi please and when she sees the report make sure you sit with her.
Rasika Di: Theek hai, Yug bhaiya Maa ko leke aa raha hai who2 badmassho ko drop karne uske baad chali jaaugi.
GG: Thank you.
Anubhav calls GG
Anu: Mumbai kyun?
GG: Tum bina sawwal kiye kuch kaam nahi karte kya?
Anu: Yeh mere Saawal ka jawab nahi hai
GG: who meri line thi tumhari nahi.
Anu: Sawaal galat tha us din bhi aur aaj bhi
GG: Aaj sawwal nahi pucha maine, aur us din ka jawab tumne us din theek se diya nahi tha.
Anu: Mumbai Kyun?
GG: kaam hai tumse isliye, PB tumhe airport pick karne aagayege aur Ghar par drop kar dege, the penthouse on floor 30 apartment number3012, Gauri Tai Darwaza khol degi tumhare liye. Mujhe late ho jaaega please Gussa mat dilana warna kisi ki shammat aa jayegi. Bye
Anu: Arey… The call gets disconnected.
GC: Kya hua, kuch kaha kyun bula rahi hai tumhe.
Anu: Kaha Chachu, kahe ki kaam hai mujhse aur waha PB airport se pick kar lege. Aur kaha hai ki Gussa mat dilana warna kisi ki shammat aa jayegi. Acha hum nikalte hai,der ho gayi hai.
Anu reaches Airports, Boards the flight, and reaches Mumbai where PB has come to pick him up.
Anu: PB, Aapko kuch idea hai kya ho raha hai?
PB: Idea hai par aap Didi se hi puch lena, chaliye mein aapko ghar chod deti hu.
Anu is very confused, he calls home and let them know that he reached Mumbai, he also Facetime Ridz and champ and let them know that he reached. PB drops him to the apartments and Shanta tai opens the door for him,takes his luggage and show him the bedroom, Anubhav enters the bedrooms and shock to see the simplicity of the room, GG room in Lucknow is much more decorative but this one is plain simple just the way he likes it, he looks at the photo frame above the bed the one from Mumbai’s Balcony, and also small frames of Ridz and her, GC Gang, His and Hers, Garima Bua and Rasika di along with Yash Jiju. He smiles looking at everything,
Anu Takes her and his photo: “Sadhe 5 saal ho gaye lekin aaj bhi saare memories ko jab bhi yaad karta hu, toh ek khushi milti hai. Jis din tum chod ke gayi, tab maine faisla kiya tha, ki jitney bhi saal kyun na hogaye, mein wait karuja, shayad aage bhi karna pade, par aaj mauka mila hai maafi maang kar rahuja aur tumhare dukh ka hissa ban jayuga, GC us din kaha thaki mein tumhara dil kabhie na todu, but maine tod diya, us din maine tumse kaha tha ki ek din tumhe meri patni hona par garv hoga, par aaj mujhe tumahara pati hone par Garv hai, Shaadi jis haalat mein hui ho, Maine tumhe aur sirf tumhe apni patni mana hai.”
His chain of thoughts is broken when Gauri Tai knocks on the door
GT: Sir, aap ko kuch chaiye, mera ghar jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai.
Anu: Nahi, thank you
As soon as GT leaves, Anubhav gets freshen up and thinks to cook dinner for himself and GG, when he is preparing Dinner GG enters the house and see him in kitchen, her mouth wide open because and staring at him in shock. Anu sees her like this and smiles
Anu: Hi, Dinner is almost ready, tum fresh ho jaao then we shall have dinner.
GG goes to the kitchen and checks what he made and is shocked to see all her favourite dishes made.
GG: Did you cook it did you order it and just garnished it
Anu: Banaya hai
GG: Impressive Mr Scientist, not bad
Anu: Thank you, go get freshen up.
She comes out and is shocked to see the table set up in a balcony decorated with flowers and champagne bottle and slow music playing
GG: Alright, not bad are you trying to impress me?
Anu: Impress maybe but trying hard or taking at least a step-in apologizing to you so will you (takes his hand in front for her) give me a chance?
GG things a while and gives her hand: Sure, but A for effort I must give you that
Anu: Thank you, Shall we?
GG: We shall, and they proceed to the balcony.
Anu pulls a chair out for her and opens the champagne bottle and serves her dinner and then takes a sit. GG takes a bite of the pasta he had made
GG: Not bad, are you cooking for the first time or have you cooked before?
Anu: kyun itna bura tha?
GG: No, I mean asking in general, this is good so i had to ask….
Anu: 5 ½ saal Mein tumhari Fav Dish banana toh sikh liya.
GG: So, lets talk
Anu: lets play 20 Questions, I ask you one and the next is yours.
GG: Okay Ready?
Anu: Alright ladies first
GG: oh cmon not this concept of ladies first, I hate it
Anu: Kamaal hai, everyone loves this concept and you hate it.
GG: well, I am not everyone, if I was you would have moved on in all these years, yet here we are. So I am not everyone
Anu: That’s true, you can’t be everyone tum single piece ho, Bhagwan ne na pagalo banana band kar diya hai islye tum single piece ho
GG: Haha very funny, bakwaas joke tha. 5 ½ saal joke marna nahi sikhe tum
Anu: Jab zindagi hi mazaak ho, toh yeh joke toh bahut chota hai usme. Anyways let’s start
1. Why did you run to Mumbai?
GG: Coz, I couldn’t answer your Question about living together, I couldn’t find one yet so.
2. Why didn’t you get married again?
Anu: After Akriti left, BP did try to get me married but I couldn’t, I couldn’t do this to you. You are my wife no matter how we got married us din bhi kaha tha, aaj bhi keh raha hu.
3. Jab gussa hoti toh company buy karti ho kyun?
GG: tum hamesha mujhe BA fail kehte the, toh your taunt haunted me aur Jab Bharosa toda toh I was very angry at you so to satisfy my anger I brought company who weren’t performing well, studied them, made offers they couldn’t refuse, pressed the right nerve as they say in Business world and subdued my anger on you.
4. Mujhepe bhrosa kyun nahi kiya, joh dekha use sach maan liye kyun?
Anu: Sorry, I am guilty for it,not giving any excuses or explanation for my action all I can do is try winning you back
5. Will you ever give n my efforts?
GG: Maybe, maybe not
6. Living situation,since Ridz made a demand to you.
Anu: Jaise tum kaho
7. Ridhi name kaise socha?
GG: Rasika Di ne rakha, she always wanted a girl name Ridhi, when she had miscarriage, she gave the name to our daughter.
8. Agar mein kahoon ki Mein Delhi nahi chod sakti,kya Tum Lucknow chod doge hamare saath rehne ke liye.
Anu: Shayad, Woh toh baat karke hi pata chalega Ghar Pe
9. The anger you subdued on the company did it help?
GG: Tum aaj wahi kar rahe ho jo us din kiya, never trying to know the second half of the story. Yes, I brought company who were failing not just because of my anger towards but also, I was helping someone to save the family, the Employees worked so hard, and the company was shutting down they would lose work and income, so I brought them.
10. BP se Ridhi aur Mere liye Stand loge, God forbidden if you must, will you stand against your family for our family?
Anu doesn’t answer, GG gets it and eat her remaining dinner in silent.
GG: Its fine, your silence is speaking a thousand words now, no need to answer it
She drinks rest of the champagne and gets up, “Thanks for the dinner.”
As she is about to leave, he holds her hand, like she did when he was leaving that day, and gets up and instantly hugs her. His hold is too tight that she can’t even breathe, she doesn’t give in the hug first but when she hears him cry, she hugs him back
Anu: I am so sorry, please dnt leave me and go, I can’t lose you again for so many years I was lost without you, miserable and angry at myself for letting you go, When you came back I saw the change sin you and I knew that those changes are because of me, first time I saw your eyes after so many years, I saw sadness like the one you described to Dr Maya on your birthday, I may be the reason for everything going bad in your life, so sorry for not trusting you, sorry for not standing by you and sorry for everything.
GG release herself from the hug and looks at him, she sees there is genuinelity in his eyes, but she also know she cant trust him completely yet.
GG: Look, I can forgive you but trusting you again, that’s going to take time, so for now nest we can do is start from starting and let’s see how things work out this time for us.
He smiles a bit and shakes her hand and speaks
Anu: So let’s work our way of being best parents to our daughter while I try to win you back
GG: okay, so now that dinner is done are there more surprises or shall we say good night
Anu: Actually, there is one more thing
he turns the music up a bit and ask for her hand in dance, like Mumbai black saree one, they sway away to the music and look at each other with such intensity, He runs his hands up her arms and her shoulders. Then cups her face and bites her lips and she laughs again and for the first time he lets himself think about the possibilities…His lips are sure, demanding, capturing her mouth with a low moan that resonates throughout her body. She is overwhelmed by how quickly he assaults her senses, how quickly she abandons thought for sheer sensation. Anubhav kisses along her throat, fingers trace her nape, cup her head, as his mouth travels to suck gently along her collarbone. She sighs deeply, arches closer, her hands finding their way around his neck.
GG immediately comes to her senses and moves back, she cant go further not now at least, Anubhav also becomes too awkward by this and he starts stammering and muttering sorry to her.
GG: Its fine, we will have to work on the boundaries too, since we will have to stay together in future.
Next mrng: they have breakfast in peace, no one wants to talk about what was going to happen yesterday.
GG: Oh by the way, I forgot to tell you I have invited PB and family today for dinner.
Anu: Okay, we can do a dinner, but also since we are in Mumbai, and we never have done Mumbai Darshan let’s do that today.
GG: I am in but on one condition
Anu: What condition?
GG: you dnt taunt me, nor tease me and you talk sweetly today, no matter how much I irritate you. Deal?
Anu Smiles: Done deal.
They smile and laugh while GG looks at him in a mischievous way,
Anu: I dnt like that look.
GG: what look?
Anu: the look you are giving right now, as if you are going to do something
GG: Dar Gaye?
Anu: Nahi,bilkul nahi, anyways what we are making for dinner, we must get supplies also.
GG: tum pasta ke awala kuch aur bana lete ho, nahi na toh dinner I will cook
Anu; Tumhe khana banana aata hai?
GG: ofcourse, aata hai, us din jab Bua ne kaha tha, ki beta Aaj yaha kha lo, GG ne help ki hai, Suna nahi tha
Anu: Suna tha, par laga tumne sirf kitchen saaf karne mein help ki hogi
GG: oh hello, agar us din taste kar lete toh pata hota I can cook not just bake. Mr Food waster.
Anu: Oh hello, Ms Papa ki Pari, us din maine already BM ko promise kiya tha isliye nahi khaya.
GG smiles looking at him and he realize what he did and what she was doing
Anu nodding his head: That’s not fair, no way I am not counting this one.
GG: What? How easily I can do that to you, and you didn’t even realize so now Mr Mummy ke Magarmach Mumbai darshan akele karna.
Anu: No that was not fair, you didn’t give me a warning and they fight and run around the house until they are tired. They make the list to get things from the grocery store, they go for shopping, background fun music your choice, they do all crazy stuff all in the stores, come home and start preparing dinner for themselves and their guest.
GG while chopping vegetables: Tell me something, tumhe really laga ki I might not know who to cook
Anu: Actually,I thought that coming from a family how has cook and all that, I misjudged you.
GG: who toh tum hamesha karte ho, usme naya kya hai.
Anu: Toh tumne us din zeher nahi milaya tha?
GG: Nahi,tumhe marne ke bahut saare tarekke aate hai, toh zeher kyun use karu.
Anu: Toh tumne mujhe marne ke baare mein socha bhi hai
GG: tum toh boredom se martre ho, meri kya hi aukat hogi tumhe marne ki
Anu: Tumhe lagta hai mein boring hu?
GG: ha toh ho usme bura lagane ki kya baat hai.
Anu: mein bilkul bhi boring nahi hu.
GG: ohhh haa, tum boring nahi MAHA boring ho.
Anu pointing Fingers at her: you………. You know what Good luck with your cooking, mein toh Mumbai darshan ke liye Jaa raha hu.
Saying this he leaves the house.
Anu to himself: Boring kaha nah usne, Lucknow wapas jaane do, mein dikhata hu, ki mein boring nahi hu, Suddenly Chachu Facetime him and in Anger he says: Chachu, please aap bhi mat shuru ho jaana
GC: Par humne toh kuch nahi kaha tumhe, Kyun GG ne kuch kaha tumse.
Anu: HA,Boring kaha usne,
Yug: Actually,Boring nahi MAHA boring kaha hoga usne, Hai na Anu?
Anu: Yes
GC: Toh usne Sach hi kaha, Sach kadwa hota hai.
Anu: Chachu aap bhi.
GC: Acha yeh sab chod, sab theek hai na?
Anu: Ha chachu sab theek hai, baat ki hai aage kya karna hai, ab ghar aake hi pata chaelga.
GC: Arey humne yeh kehne ke liye ki chaavi ki shaadi ki date fix ho gayi hai. Panditji ne 2hafte baad ka muharat nikala hai toh jaldi se Lucknow aa jaao bahut saare kaamhai yaha.
Anu: Chachu aake living arrangement ke bhi baat karni hogi, ab sab kaise karege who toh waha aake hi pata chalega.
Anu goes up and tells GG about Chavi wedding and GG is too excited as Chavvi is so close to her, they prepare for dinner together and gets ready and wait for BP and family and Gauri Tai and family and they all have dinner with fun and laughter and enjoyment.
Anu sees the old GG’s Glimpse after a long time, and he is just admiring how she is and have those stolen moments every now and then with their eye’s conversations. This GG is someone whom he fell in love with, and Anu know no matter what he has to win her back. Both look at each other and the screen freezes.
Omg I loved thier cute fight and dance...it was really amazing..I loved how gungun irritated anubhav...anubhav did husband's duty to serve dinner to gungun to impress her..
Best story❤ suhani writer toh baki serials ke writer se bhi best nikle bhot achi lgi story with full of positivity and mysterious too eagerly waiting for the next part🤘
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