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Posted: 3 years ago
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Today my story about the series is a little different)


Equal to hearts that deny love with their lips,

But they live with their souls.

Repulsed by words

But they bring back memories.

They lie, but they tell the truth.

Depicting coldness,

But they warm more than any fire.

Accused but defended

Fairy tales are told, but they are real.

Create a picture

But they live by the truth

Resist themselves

But they don't take their eyes off.

Thinking about false

But they feel the truth.

Quarrel,

But they create new life.

Dirt all around

But they are beauty.

Who are they?

Two whose hands hold fire.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's beautiful. I love how you have come up with a different and a creative way today. You, my optimistic amazing friend, always give me hope because of which I linger on more to this show. You capture their inner feelings, and that's awesome.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Catching what is hidden is the best and most important thing that every person should be able to do, especially if he writes for others.

I have many poems. In the original, in Russian, this text rhymes properly. I should try to rhyme English or Hindi next time.

Thank you for your warmth, dear)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's honestly so well-written! I love the entire 'but' pattern- they lie, but tell the truth, quarrel, but they create new life.

Ahhh, the angsty feeling that it portrays is perfect and totally fits the mood of the show now, thanks for posting this <3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I tried to convey what they feel. Thanks for the feedback)

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