Originally posted by: IamRaj96
Wow, its awesome.... It reminded me so much of "The guest"
Ekdum thodasa similar tha plot, abt 20-30% baaki ekdum diff tha.
Usme bhi a great evil spirit first tries to posses ML body as he wanted new body which will contain him fully & ML was descendant of great shaman's family thats why his body was special, but ML's family performs supression on him (ML) so evil spirit couldnt enter bidy and instead it enters his grandfather's body.
Then evil spirit starts killing everyone around ML to weaken him so that he can enter ML's body.
This story reminds me so much of this guest story but in guest, actually woh spirit kiska tha woh pata nhi bcz in the end that spirit itself reveals that it came from east sea and he is here from the very start of this mankind.
Btw evn guest me bhi FL detective hoti hai.
Tumhari story me bhi mujhe same great potential dikha, but meri taraf se thoda changes suggest karunga ki thoda evil spirit ke character pe work karo. Imean this rape & revenge plot looks little cliche so thoda udhar kuch change kare toh better rahega.