ShiVi FF- Erased from fate (3 updated on 4)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Prologue


Skies turn red,

And the wind is scorching,

Her legs are blistered,

But there is no stopping...

She has fought battles after battles,

There have been no ease

Now lost and tired,

She wants some peace...



She watched the clock for the umpteenth time and decided that she had had enough. It was time. He would not come. And she could not wait anymore. So sighing to herself, she watched Aalap, who was giggling to himself as he was trying to grasp the hanging toys in his bed. His tiny feet were kicking the air fiercely. She smiled. He was a strong one. She turned away with a breaking heart. She had wanted answers and he wasn’t ready to give them to her. Now... it was too late.

Sharp at eleven, her door opened gently and her Maasima entered the room. She knew what was coming.

“Raavi... Chal. Muhrat ka samay ho gaya hai beta!” Prafulla walked towards Raavi and patted her shoulders lovingly albiet a bit sadly. Raavi herself gave a wilted smile and adjusted her heavy red dupatta before she stood up from the stool. Each step weighed a hundred tonnes as she took them towards the door. Then she turned towards Aalap, who had just laughed out loudly.

“Uski chinta mat kar. Main le aaungi use.” Anita, who had just arrived, assured. Raavi nodded and then swallowed as she faced forwards and began to walk, towards a new life, a new future. She couldn’t procrastinate anymore. He had been forever erased from her fate... Pain ripped her apart as she settled beside her future...


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He knew he was loosing her. He himself had let her slip away. She was the sand that he couldn’t hold on to. But he had to do it. He had made a promise and he intended to keep it.

Shiva Pandya squared his shoulders and swallowed the hurt that had shrouded his soul.

Today was the day when his broken heart was rebelling with all it’s pieces but a vow was a vow and he wasn’t ever breaking it.


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Seems interesting,

Liked your writing style

Will love to read more

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Posted: 3 years ago
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really very excited for upcoming updates
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Posted: 3 years ago
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It looks interesting.

Waiting for more.


Please tag me in upcoming parts

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow

Seems interesting

Would love to read more

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter 1


BR (Before Raavi) (9-3 years ago)


Some relationships are doomed from the start,

Some sink as they begin...


Shiva Pandya’s life was divided into two halves. Before Raavi and After Raavi. Before Raavi, he knew her. She was his maami ki behen ki beti after all. He always knew her. But he wasn’t close to her. She was just there. She loved his brother. And he hated her maasi, his maami.

Shiva was engaged to be married to Disha, his childhood friend and his Father’s friend’s daughter. She had been with him as he grew up and he had liked her too. She gave him the confidence to become something more. So when the shop stabilized, Shiva decided to go for his studies again.

Disha stood by him, supporting him. She was his voice of reason, when he lost hope. She was his defense when he was being attacked. His own brothers made fun of him sometimes but Disha believed in him. So they progressed in their relationship from friendship to like. And he was proven good in studies so when he was twenty one, four years after rejoining, he went abroad for three years with Gautam and Suman’s blessings. Dhara cried but made tasty snacks for him to carry, wishing him the best.

His last meeting with Disha before he left was still fresh in his head. She had sadly smiled at him and when he asked her why she looked so upset, she had shaken her head.

“Kabhi imagine nahin kiya tha ki tum kahin chale jaoge padhai ke liye. Mera matlab, I am happy, par itni der tak tumse door rehna. Aur fir timezones bhi to alag hai na! Pata nahin sab kaise hoga!”

“Ye saal to yun nikal jayenge!” He said as he flicked his fingers. She smiled.

“Mujhe tumhari bahut yaad ayegi.”

“Main bhi miss karunga tumhen. Disha tumhara yeh ehsaan nahin bhulunga main. Mujhpar belief rakhne ke liye Shukriya.”

Aftet meeting everyone, he boarded the flight and went away.


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Raavi loved Dev. Everyone knew it. She used to act crazy, clumsy in his love. She made snacks for him, wore fashionable clothes for him, tried new hairstyles and make up for him and finally even wrote poems for him. He was her sun, her moon and her solar system. The twinkle in his eyes and the confused smile on his face was her favorite sights.

At the earliest of the morning, she reached their home and began to help Dhara with her duties. She made food. She washed clothes. She sweeped and wiped along with Dhara. They had conversations about everything under the sun. Dhara understood her and she loved Dhara. Dhara wanted her as her co sister because she knew Raavi loved Dev but Suman had given this choice to her sons and Dhara could not force her decisions so she used to praise Raavi before Suman and Dev.

“Dhara! Tu kitni hi tarref karle par shaadi Dev ki uski pasand se hogi! Samjhi? Ab tum ye sab chodo aur apne online bujiness par dhyaan do. Jab se online Pandya store ka webshite khula hai tab se keh rahi hoon ki thoda aur waqt udhar daalo. Ghar ke kaamon ke liye hi to Sushma ben aati hai.” Suman told her. Dhara smiled awkwardly at being found out and walked away. Suman smiled.

Suman liked Raavi too. But she didn’t see Dev and her working out. Raavi was the sunshine. She illuminated everything she touched. Dev was an awkward man. He needed a firm partner. He loved his family, but he was never someone to stand firmly on something. Suman wanted him to have someone who could push him to do more. Raavi would just love him more and that would limit both of the kids. Suman didn’t want that. Raavi needed a sky to fly like the bird and Dev needed roots to make him firm. Both of them had no compatibility. Suman was far sighted. She could see their end and wasn’t a fan of it, so she had secretly already put her foot down.

She saw Raavi coming over with a packed tiffin and shook her head.

“Aye Raavi! Kahan se aa rahi hai?”

“Oh!” Raavi was shocked for a second then smiled. “Kaaki! Main ghar se aa rahi hoon. Dev ka favorite nashta leke.”

“Kahin kaagdi ne zeher to nahin milaya hai ismein?”

“Nahin Kaaki! Maine banaya hai!” Raavi said shyly. Suman shook her head, but before she could reply, someone walked in.

“Kaaki.” Disha said calmly and wished her obediently. Raavi just didn’t like Disha. Something about her rubbed Raavi wrongly. She thought it was because of her association with Shiva as Shiva and herself were always in a fight, but Shiva didn’t make her feel like this. Disha just felt plain wrong.

“Are Dishu? Tu kab aayi beta? Padhayi kaise chal rahi hai?”

“Sab theek Kaaki.” Disha replied. Suman frowned. Something seemed plain wrong today. It was almost three months since Disha visited her and even she seemed to be avoiding her eyes. Suman knew wrong when she saw it, so she felt her heart lurch.

Disha was her husband’s choice for their son and she was dear to their family. But today something seemed very wrong. Suman prayed for the best and decided not to pry.

Raavi frowned at Disha and stilled her about to start tongue. She better leave this to the Pandyas. Her interference wasn’t needed everywhere. So after wishing Suman, Raavi left. Disha stayed for sometime before she left too.

“Maa?” Dhara called out from her seat. Suman looked at her. “Aaj Disha kuch badli badli lag rahi thi. Pata nahin kyun?”

“Jis dil mein yuddh ho raha ho, woh insaan aise hi badla sa lagta hai.” Suman replied and shook her head. The guilt in Disha’s eyes was quite clear.


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkbell

It looks interesting.

Waiting for more.


Please tag me in upcoming parts

🤎

I am really sorry

I don’t do tags

Just update as and when I can and edit the topic name to let people know

Do read

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So disha already found someone.. It seems like that to me

Accha hai no unnecessary drama😆

Suman knws everything kiske man me kya chal rahi hai.. Mind reader hai kya??? 😆sorry bad joke😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prizi

So disha already found someone.. It seems like that to me

Accha hai no unnecessary drama😆

Suman knws everything kiske man me kya chal rahi hai.. Mind reader hai kya??? 😆sorry bad joke😆

I believe a woman as old as her, who has gone through quite a lot of experiences, was restricted to a bed and then to a wheel chair, was unable to speak for a period, should have been shown as quite a good people reader because she had a lot of time to just study people around her...

Hence this is how I will try to show her...🤷🏻‍♀️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interesting, oh god Shiva and Disha🤢


Raavi has a child😲?!


Looking forward to reading the next part :)

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