FF: My Rainbow In The Rain, Chap 4 on Pg 10 - Page 4

Firstly thanks for tagging me. Secondly it was amazing... Waiting for the story to unfold.

All the best ❤️

Both the chapters are amazing...❤️

Looking forward to the next chapter 😊

The moment I read RV, I was like I don't like the way this is going as I knew it stood for Ram-Vedika but at the end of it I ended up laughing really badly. Vedika dyeing the dog in pink and I'm glad it was a dream.

Ram seems to be having a more fun life here.

RaYa had to meet in such circumstances or where would be the fire haha. This made me remember Rani and Saif characters in Hum Tum, how they used to bicker in the beginning.

I really don't mind having fiction in a different world than BALH especially for those that aren't watching the show anymore. It feels like we have Disha and Nakuul in a different show❤️

The starting part was so good...Pure Comedy as I was ROFLing🤣🤣

Did Adi die when Ram was driving the Bike

I love the flow you have here....Piu sounds like such a cute nickname for Priya - the scenes just flow & that says something about you as a writer so 👏

Can't wait to read more of the new ahe PriRa

Oh, man. Poor Ram seems traumatized by his ex. So much that's he's been repeated nightmares about her. 😂😂 If she was like that for real with him, poor fellow really had it real hard in his life. And that surprise. Oh, my God! Idk if to cry to laugh. The fact that Ram didn't beat her black and blue even in his nightmare is beyond me. 🤧🤧 Anyway, I'm against violence, so it's kind of good?

Vikrant and Brinda are his friends, right? I mean in the show as well? Vikrant and Ram with their banters, both of them pulling each other's legs had me rofling.

Now, to the more serious business. Priya has been avoiding dates, while her family is super romantic and wants her to embrace the colours of life, Priya herself wants to stay in her black and white world. I wonder what could have happened for her to be this distant and aloof from everyone? It's assuming there's still some time before we move to the moments in the prologue. Oof, I'm confused.

But, the last part. 😂 I totally share Priya's feelings here. I don't hate dogs but they freak me out. Though Priya snapping at the poor doggo was probably because she'd been having a rough day already. Still, the way these two met and shots were fired right away..

Amazing work on the chapter. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Wow! This is so so good! ❤️

I was ROFLing throughout the whole Ram-Vedu nightmare. Also, that her place is in his nightmares 👍🏼

Pink labrador 🤣🤣 How did you even think of that!! Too good!

I'm intrigued to know more about Ram's dream. Loved RaYa's first meeting. Also, Ram the fashion photographer, probably surrounded by models is going to have eyes only for Pri (I'm hoping, sometime in the future) ❤️..can't wait!

I have fallen for your story hook, line and sinker! Keep it coming ❤️

Thanks a ton dear ❤️ Glad u liked it. TBH before coming up with this story, when I wrote ffs in other forums, my themes were generally dark. U can say there was barely any humour there. Even when I tried writing a love story ages ago, it was dark. There came a point when I realised it was leaving me depressed. That's when I thought of this idea. It is completely opposite to anything I have ever written and I was sceptical to post it but my readers back then seemed to like the idea 😊

Pink labrador? 🤣 Defo not my idea, trust me. I used to follow a Youtube influencer who used to get his dogs colored and I was like Coming to this story, Vedika never dyed Whiskey. Its just Ram's nightmare 😆

Ram was surrounded by beautiful girls most of the time but he is not the kind of a guy who will fall for glamour. Oh yes, the day he falls for Priya, trust me he will fall hard 😆

Thanks for your kind words dear 🤗 Motivates me to write more.

Originally posted by: tumhiho

🥰🥰ahhh chapter 2 also left me with a huge smile on my face!!

that was a super fun read!! Glad u liked it dear 🤗

Vedika and her pink obsession 🤣🤣 Ram’s nightmare killed me too, now i cant to actually meet Vedika in the story because i can already tell her interactions with him are going to be hilarious 😆 Ohhhh, so dating her was to get back at his mom 👀 that actually makes a lot of sense why Vedika came to his dreams as a nightmare 🤣He never wants to relive those days again🤭 U will meet Vedu soon and I am hoping u guys will enjoy this 😆 Ram's plan backfired on him dearly 🤣

Ahh poor Vik🥹 Hope he can move on soon 💕 Don't worry about Vik! He is no dukhi aatma, he is a mast maula to be honest 😉

i wonder what happened to Adi🥺 i guess there was an accident 🤔 not sure if Adi just doesn’t speak with them anymore or he is no more🥺 hope it’s not the latter 😭😭 Ram seems to be hiding his emotions well:( but i’m sure those walls will come down soon♥️🥺 U will know who met with the accident in the next update. Ram has been hiding it for years now but his walls will come down soon. Maybe not so soon also.

ahh what can i even say about their “first” meeting 😭😭😭 Whiskey just turned cupid for them😌❤️ i’m so here for this enemies to lovers trope🤩🤣 i loved how protective Ram was for Whiskey tho😭😭that was so adorable!! One day i’m sure Priya will also have a soft spot for Ram’s Whiskey 🥰♥️ Whiskey has an important part to play in the story 😃 Priya will not be able to resist his charm for long 😉

Looks like Pri is there to meet Brinda 👀 🤔 so these two will be acquittances in a way 👀 i’m here for that😌 Pri and Bri will become good friends soon 😊

Had too much fun reading this chapter🙈🤣 cant wait for the rest!! Thanks dear ❤️

My comments in blue.

Originally posted by: tournesol

Lovely chapter. ❤

Ram's nightmare about Vedika and her 50 shades of pink was fun to read. Esp its ending. 🤣

But why is he having recurring dreams about her 2 years after the break-up? Is he not over her? Or does he fear being in a relationship with a girl like Vedika?😆 (I assumed recurring because Vikrant could tell what it was about)

Loved the friendship between Ram and Vikrant. Soon Bri is also gonna make entry into the gang. But why is Adi not around? Can't wait to find out.

Finally RaYa meet! Whiskey just knew who was the right girl to run into. 😆 Loved the cute little fight between RaYa. Hope to see cupid shoot his arrow soon.

Looking forward to the next chapter. 😃

Thanks Tiara ❤️ Well if you have Vedu for a gf, u r bound to have nightmares 😆 He is well over but Vedu is about to create a big hungama in the next chapter. So wait and watch 😉 U will know where is Adi in the next chapter.

Whiskey will be a huge part of RaYa's life and u will know how later 😉

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Really enjoyed the update!!! Looking forward to Ram and Priya's budding relationship

PS - Love your writing style 😳

Thanks dear 🤗 Glad u enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: Nitisha_NM

Firstly thanks for tagging me. Secondly it was amazing... Waiting for the story to unfold.

All the best ❤️

Thanks for reading ❤️ Hope you will like the next chapter.