Originally posted by: kamleshmehra
Yar you have written it very well...
It's really very detailed and clear...Azlan is attracted to her..Love the way Azka clearly says you don't have to do it..and Azlan explains he is doing it out of his own will not because of mom.....How Azlan shares his personal feelings and how Azka shares her past life and problems...It gave them both some clarity about each other's situation....Very well done...Very happy and at the same time I got emotional too..Very touchy...and the progress in their relationship...friends... they are now...
Take your time...I will be waiting for the next part...again very well written
Thank you so much ❤️I m glad u liked
Me hamesha se chahti thi ke azka Azlaan ke aise kuch scenes humko milte..I always want ke azka ko Azlaan and shanaya ke baby ka bhi pata chalta.same with Azlaan .dono ekdusre ko aur ekdusre ki situation ko samjhte.
I m happy u enjoyed my writing style🤗
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