New Life (PriRa TS) - Part 2 Updated - Page 2

Oh wow! You know how we have CVs lurking on IF? I really hope they read your work and makes them feel little and embarrassed.

So glad RaYa settled somewhere far and Tarun has joined them.

Thank you for letting us imagine a different outcome.

Originally posted by: RandomWaliLadki

I really hated how the episodes turned out lately so I decided to write this TS. Tried my best to write a good one, hopefully you all will like it.

It is raining heavily.

Ram is walking sadly in the rain.

He gets into flashback.

Nandini: Mujhe iss case se koyi lena dena nahi hai. Mujhe baas Ram ke saare property ka 100% custodian banna hai. Par Ram ne ulta Priya ko hi bana diya.

Nandini confesses how she wanted to seperate Ram and Priya and even brought Vedika for that but all foiled and they came closer and closer.

Ram: Toh yeh tha aap ka aasliyat.

Nandini gets shocked seeing Ram.

Nandini: Ram...

Ram: Aap ko kya laga?! Maine Priya ko isliye custodian bana diya tha cause she can take care of everything and you wont be influenced and lose them.

Nandini: Toh tumhe kya laga tha Ram ke I behaved nicely cause I cared for you?! No Ram! I did this so that we can be in your good books and you name us everything but everything in vain.

Ram: Aap voh nahi ho jisse Dad pyaar karte the. Where was the sweet caring lady I knew?! The same person who took care of me when I was young. Who always gave me advices whenever I was demotivated!

Nandini: Yes Ram I changed. I had to. I had enough of struggling due to lack of money, I am not letting go of this luxury life. I cannot go through these hardships again! I cannot, I am not that strong.

Ram: But for that you crossed your limit. You did not even think about your own family.

Shubham: Ram Bhai Mom ke baath toh sun lo.

Ram: Mujhe jo sunna tha voh sun liya maine. Aur tumne bhi sahi nahi kiya Mom ke saath dekh kar aise kaam mai. Agar Shivi hoti kabhi bhi aise nahi hone deti.

Nandini: Yeh maine sirf Shubhu aur Shivi ke khushi ke liye kiya hai!

Ram: Aur mere khushi ke kyaan?! Aap kyun sochenge mere khushiyoon ke baare mai. apne toh kabhi mujhe apna samjha hi nahi toh Chalo acha hai ke maine apne aap ko ek baadi galati karne se roka hoon acha hua maine property aap ka naam nahi kiya.

Just then Ram gets Shivi's phone

Shivi: Ram Bhai aap mujhe abhi ke abhi Sood house se le jao. Mujhe yahan nahi rehna hai.

Ram immediately rushes to Sood house with one phone call from his dear sister.

Ram froze seeing how he found his Shivi laid motionless with blood oozing out from her head after she fell down from the stairs.

And even worse he hears the love of his life saying

Priya: Yeh sab maine kiya hai! Meri wajah se Shivina...

Priya cries.

Ram: (angry) Priya!!!!

Ram gets out of the flashback

Ram: Kuch din tak mai kitna khush tha ke mujhe jo chaye tha mujhe sab mil gaya. A happy family and a loving wife. Par ek pal mai sab kuch chin gaya. Mere parivaar ne mujhe kabhi apna samjha hi nahin. Maine yeh bardassh kar liya par Shivi....(Ram breaks down) Shivi ko maine bache ke tadha paala hai. Meri pyaari behna, why did God do this to me?! Why she had to be the one to suffer?! She brought positivity no matter what.

Ram recalls how Priya said she is the one who pushed Shivina.

Ram: Priya...Priya se toh maine kitne pyaar kiya...phir bhi...kyun Priya! Kyun tumne aisa kiya! Kyun!!!

Tumne sab kuch khatam kar diya Priya! Kyun Priya Kyun!!!

Ram cries and just then he gets a phone. He gets shocked and drops the phone.

Scene 2: Hospital

Ram rushes to the hospital and he goes to the doctor.

Doctor: Aap ki wife jis gari mai thi uska accident hogaya. No one survived in the accident. Aap ko body pehchana padega it has been ruined very badly!

The police is talking to the doctor. The other doctor comes to bring him to the morgue. Ram recalls the fear he faced 15 years ago when his dad's death body was revealed to him. He won't be able to face this again!

The doctors unreveal the dead body. Ram falls down and cries.

Ram recalls all his memories with Priya. Starting from when they met, their engagment, wedding, how they started understanding each other, supporting during the interview, when Priya stitching his shirt, Priya taking care of him when he was ill, him wiping her tears during diwali, their long drive during their first date, both of them enjoying in the rain together during Ram's bday, their first intense hug,both of them looking at stars together, priya scolding him, both of them enjoying 'rain' in the shower, their dance during holi, their first kiss, when they both became one, their love confession and then when priya walked out of the house dragged by Meera Maa.

Ram: I am sorry Priya...I could not fulfill my promise. To keep faith and trust on you on matter what! I was so busy in my past , so busy i my grief that I completely forgot about yours. Maine jisse bhi pyaar kiya pure dil se they left...

It's all my fault! I failed...

Later,

The doctor takes the body away.

Ram: No Priya you cannot leave me!!!

He holds the tattooed hand of Priya and cries.

Krish comes there and he is also shocked to see the dead body.

Krish: How is this possible?! Priya?!

The police tells Krish everything.

Ram comes back home broken. It was like he was a living person who was already dead inside.

Adi: (worried) Ram...

Meera and Sara are also there. She did not see Ram's state and just went to Ram to confront him.

Meera: Ram aap meri beti ki bail kar di jiye. Aap ko jo chaye voh mil jayega. Mai apni beti iss parivaar se dur rakhungi.

Ram cries.

Ram: Sab kuch khatam hogaya hai.

Adi is confused.

Nandini comes downstairs.

Adi: Matlaab? Ram dekho tumhe iske baare mai sochna chaye...Tum aur Priya...

Ram: It's too late now.

Ram hugs Adi and cries.

Meera: Matlaab?! Ram kya hua mujhe kahoon. Mujhe dar lag rahi hai.

Sara: Ram kuch toh kaho. Kya hua?!

Krish comes there too. He is in shock too.

Nandini: Tumhe pata hai kya hua?!

Krish: Priya ko jis gaari se le jaa rahi thi uss gari ka accident hogaya. Priya ab iss duniya mai nahi rahi. She is no more.

Nandini is shocked. Ram's friends are shocked too. Meera falls down. Sara is broken too and starts crying!

Meera: Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hai. Meri bachi ko kuch nahi hua.

Krish: Unfortunately yeh hi sach hai. Priya jis car mai thi ussi gari ka accident hogaya. No one survived.

Krish passes the items to Sara and Meera. They see Priya's belongings and cry. Krish looks at them sadly.

Sara: Yeh sab mere wajah se hua! Agar maine sach kahan hota toh Priya aaj zinda hoti. Meri wajah se Priya ne itni baadi jhoot boli. Mere bete ke jail jaane se bachane ke liye. Kaash I was there and I wish I allowed her the truth.

Ram looks at Sara.

Next day,

The last rites of Priya is taken place. Everyone is crying. Ram is silent and has not spoken a word since the time he found the body. Meera, Sara and everyone are crying.

Ram looked at picture of his and Priya. He hugged it and cry.

Ram: I promise Priya! I will do anything! Anything to bring you back!

Few days later,

Ram called his friends and his family is also there. Meera and Sara are there too. Meera is silent and in shock.

Vicky: Ram are you sure about this?

Ram: Yes...

Nandini comes.

Ram: Mujhe aap hi ka intezaar tha.

Ram says he has distributed all his properties. His friends Vicky, Kunal, Adi and Brinda receive 5% each. Shubham and Akshay will receive 20% each. Rest 40% will go to charity.

Ram: I am going abroad. I will stay there from now on. This is my last time in India.

Shubham: Ram Bhai are you sure about this?!

Ram: Yes I am... I will be staying overseas now and will keep updates from Adi. If any problem arrangements hojayega. Adi hai na. And nobody tries to contact me at all without a valid reason!

Shubham: Ram Bhai where are you going? Which country?

Ram: I can't say this to anyone.

Sara: Ram, iske baare mai ek aur bar soch li jiye.

Ram: Mujhe jo sochna hai maine soch liya. Aur haan Sara Dii aap ko tension lene ke zaroorat nahi hai. Priya ne apni will mere naam kiya tha , ab aap loge ke zimeedariyan maine Brinda ko de diya. She will take care of anything you both need.

Brinda is there and she is sad. She is teary-eyed.

Ram: After me, Priya would have choosen to take care of your family.

Meera goes to hug Ram , Ram is hesitant at first but then he gets emotional and allows her and he goes away from Kapoor Mansion forever. He never looked back at Kapoor Mansion again since then. He wiped his tears and walked out from the Mansion.

Few months later,

In the busy streets of London, A guy is shown to be talking to a lady.

The guy turns out to be Krish who is on a date.

Lady: It was nice meeting you Krish.

Krish: You too Radhika.

Radhika: How many days are you here for again?

Krish: I am leaving tomorrow. Case investigation ke liye aaya tha, ab wapas jane ka time hogaya.

Radhika hugs Krish.

Radhika: Really liked you a lot. We will stay in touch online.

Krish nods and Radhika leaves.

Krish smiles as he likes Radhika. He leaves a tip for the waiter and he gets up to leave. As he is about to leave the restaurant, he sees a familiar face entering the restaurant.

Krish: Mr Kapoor...

Yes Ram was now living in London. He was dressed in a more casual shirt rather than his previous suit looks. He dressed much more simply now and less formally now.

Krish: So Mr Kapoor is in London now...

Krish goes to speak to Ram, just then he sees someone even more familiar than Ram. The person he saw shocked him.

Krish: Priya...

End of Part 1.

Will post second part of this TS tmr.

Really good writing, if you ever need editing help feel free to reach out to me. The writers of the show need to borrow your brain.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

😭😭😭😭😭

This. This. Couldn't the writers have come up with this

This makes me heal so better along with Priya & Ram - away from their so-called 'Family'.

Good work on the alternate storyline here ❤️

Originally posted by: Milalal27

What a wonderful ending. Crying and loving it. They are finally happy.

Do tag me for your future stories.

Take care. ❤️

Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

Oh wow! You know how we have CVs lurking on IF? I really hope they read your work and makes them feel little and embarrassed.

So glad RaYa settled somewhere far and Tarun has joined them.

Thank you for letting us imagine a different outcome.

Originally posted by: averma1

Really good writing, if you ever need editing help feel free to reach out to me. The writers of the show need to borrow your brain.

since u guys watched BALH2, m tagging u all, do feel free free to give this TS a read

@didifangirl idk if u watched the show or not phir bhi tag kar diya😆

Originally posted by: RandomWaliLadki

since u guys watched BALH2, m tagging u all, do feel free free to give this OS a read

@didifangirl idk if u watched the show or not phir bhi tag kar diya😆

Originally posted by: Mish14bir26

I don't watch the show but know about them . My friends watch this show. This couple is pure love❤️❤️. Nice OS ,it's amazing. Ram just poured out his feelings and emotions on your story. You are a good writer. Thanks for the tag🤗🤗just completed part one. Will read other too later on.

Originally posted by: RandomWaliLadki

thank you ❤️ I like ur SaiRat OS too though i dont watch the show cause ur OS has the comedy genre 😆 I love comedy 😆 Thanks for reading it even though u dont watch the show ❤️