Originally posted by: EmeraldStar
Wow! Amazing.. congrats for pehla OS๐ค
Always wanted this Anu
Do continue pls๐ณ
Enjoyed reading โค๏ธ
Thank you dear...โค
I am glad you enjoyed...๐๐๐
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 36
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Originally posted by: EmeraldStar
Wow! Amazing.. congrats for pehla OS๐ค
Always wanted this Anu
Do continue pls๐ณ
Enjoyed reading โค๏ธ
Thank you dear...โค
I am glad you enjoyed...๐๐๐
Hello lovelies, since we were not very happy with that baddua episode so I would like to write it in my version. I hope yeh padhne ke baad mujhe jhoote chappal tamatar wagera nahi padenge, since itโs the very first time I am writing something, itโs a mix of Hindi and English, hope that it will not be a problem. It was supposed to be posted earlier but I couldnโt complete it and also was confused whether to post or not.
After the baddua scene,
Anupamaa: - Baa if you remember some time ago I had asked you about our relation, I had asked you who am I to you and you couldnโt reply but now I know the answer to my question, that you have never considered me as your daughter at all, never, else you wouldnโt have wished bad luck and sadness for me. I feel so horrible that a woman I considered as my mother for 26 long years couldnโt even consider me as her daughter even for a day, I have always served you, always loved you, always stood up for you, even when you were totally against me. How can you be so heartless to me and Anuj that you are wishing bad luck for us, if itโs the matter of your son you would bless him hundred times but in my case you are wishing me bad luck then how can you be my mother. A mother would never curse her child or even think of something wrong for her child but you have proved to me that I was wrong for so many years in considering you as my mother. You never deserved that position in my life, I always wished that one day you will know my importance, one day you will also love me as your daughter, but how can I forget that love cannot be forced it has to be felt from within the heart which you donโt have when it comes to me.
Baa and Vanraj: - ANUPAMAAA
Anu: - Chillaiye mattโฆ. Chillane se sach nahi badatla Mr.Shah. Aap, Baa, Toshu aur Pakhi kabhi mujhe deserve hi nahi karte the isiliye app logon ko kabhi meri kadar nahi huiโฆ.par AB BAS, meri sehen shakti ki bhi ek seema hai aur woh aaj paar ho chuki hai,mein toh yahan apne bachon se aur apne Baa Bapuji se milne aati thi par ab jab mere bachon ko mein embarrass karti hun aur kyunki Baa ko iss ghar ki izzat mujhse zyaada pyaari hai mera iss ghar mein rehna ka ya yahan aane jaane ka koi matlab hi nahi hai, isiliye mein waapis apne ghar jaa rahi hun. Samar, Bapuji aur Kinjal se toh mein dance academy mein bhi mil sakti hoon aur ab toh Kinjal ke saath Rakhi Ben bhi hai yahan, toh meri zaroorat nahi padegi (turning to Kinjal) aur agar kabhi zaroorat pad gayi toh mujhe bula lena beta mein aajaungi.
Kinjal: - Haan mummy aap apne ghar laut jaiye waise bhiyahan rehkar mein aap ko har roz insult hote hue nahi dekhna chahti, aur koiaapko samjhe na samjhe aapki beti hain aapko samajhti hai aur mein nahi chahtiki meri wajah se meri mummy ko koi bhi problem ho.
Baa: - Tu uss Anuj keliye, hum sabko chod ke jayegi usne aate hi tujhse tera parivar cheen liya, tujhe teri maa aur bachon se door kar diya, dekh uske pyaar ne kya kar diya.
Anu: - Anuj ke liye nahi Baa, mein apne aap ke liye aap logon ko chod kar jaa rahi hunโฆthak gayi hoon inn roz roz ke taano se, roz rozke ilzamo se, Mr. Shah ki watchmangiri aur aapki taanebaazi se mujhe chutkara chahiye isisliye chod ke jaa rahi hun. Anuj ke pyaar ne nahi Baa aap logon ke dikhar ne aur app logon ki soch aur nafrat ne mujhse mera parivaar cheen liya joh shayad sahi mayne mein mera kabhi tha hi nahi. Anuj ne mujhse kuch nahi cheena Baa unhone toh sirf diya hai, woh sab diya hai joh pichle 26 saalon mein mujhe na is ghar mein aur na hi is parivar mein mila...aur woh hai samman, barabari ka rishta, mere sapnon ko poora karne ka mauka, vishwas, dosti aur poori umar bhi karo tabhi na khatam hone wala pyaar.
Baa, V, Kavya, Rakhi, Toshu and Pakhi make faces while MaAn army are super proud of Anu and Anuj's love.
Bapuji: - Beta, tu abhi bhale chali jaa par shaadi ke liye toh tum yahan aaogi naโฆmein tujhe iss ghar se vida karna chahte hoon poore izzat aur saman se.
Anu: - Nahi Bapuji, mujhe maaf kar dijiye mein yahan waapis nahi aana chahti, kheechad se nikale hue kamal par bhi kabhi kabhi kheechad reh jaata hai aur aise haalat mein, mein apni nayi zindagi ki shuruwat nahi kar sakti aur yeh shaadi sirf meri nahi hai Anuj ki bhi hai isiliye yeh shaadi un logon ke beech nahi ho sakti jo mera ya mere Anuj ka bura sochte ho ya phir jinhe humari shaadi se taqleef ho, meri shaadi bhale hi doosri ho par unki toh pehli haina mujhe maaf kar dijiye bapuji.
Bapuji: - Theek hai beta jaisi teri iccha...ithna sab hone ke baad tujhe yahan rokna sahi nahi hoga.
Anu leaves Shah house and comes to her apartment, sitting on the floor near the sofa and she breaks down thinking of all that happened in last one hour, Baa wishing bad luck for her, Toshu and Pakhi calling her an embarrassment and all the hate kept ringing in her ears, making her close her ears in an effort to mute those voices. Anuj comes back from Udaipur at dawn and notices Anuโs apartment door is a little open, making him really excited meet her, he keeps his stuff in his apartment and tip toes inside only to see Anu on the floor sleeping with a tear stricken face.
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Phewwโฆ finally post kar diya, please let me know if I should continue this and also give me suggestions for improvement, I am not at all a writer and ho sakta hai that there will be a lot of mistakes in the writing style.
Woww this is really amazing Meghu...ingu vaa..oru ummma๐๐๐๐ I loved that ending..can you write a part 2 where he is seething with anger and goes to shah house thrashing the crap out of everyone๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ
Originally posted by: sunshine36
Woww this is really amazing Meghu...ingu vaa..oru ummma๐๐๐๐ I loved that ending..can you write a part 2 where he is seething with anger and goes to shah house thrashing the crap out of everyone๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ
Awww....thank you soooooo much Sunny ๐โค๐
Yess babyyy...I would definitely add that part, I am myself waiting for that to happen onscreen ๐ฅบ๐
Happy Anu left that houseโญ๏ธPlease continue
Bhai tu kab writer ban gyi... Yr...tere ko us din bola tha kuch likh de tab to bhav khaa rhi thi naaa sab pitenge main writer nhi hu blah blah blah ....
Hello lovelies, since we were not very happy with that baddua episode so I would like to write it in my version. I hope yeh padhne ke baad mujhe jhoote chappal tamatar wagera nahi padenge, since itโs the very first time I am writing something, itโs a mix of Hindi and English, hope that it will not be a problem. It was supposed to be posted earlier but I couldnโt complete it and also was confused whether to post or not.
After the baddua scene,
Anupamaa: - Baa if you remember some time ago I had asked you about our relation, I had asked you who am I to you and you couldnโt reply but now I know the answer to my question, that you have never considered me as your daughter at all, never, else you wouldnโt have wished bad luck and sadness for me. I feel so horrible that a woman I considered as my mother for 26 long years couldnโt even consider me as her daughter even for a day, I have always served you, always loved you, always stood up for you, even when you were totally against me. How can you be so heartless to me and Anuj that you are wishing bad luck for us, if itโs the matter of your son you would bless him hundred times but in my case you are wishing me bad luck then how can you be my mother. A mother would never curse her child or even think of something wrong for her child but you have proved to me that I was wrong for so many years in considering you as my mother. You never deserved that position in my life, I always wished that one day you will know my importance, one day you will also love me as your daughter, but how can I forget that love cannot be forced it has to be felt from within the heart which you donโt have when it comes to me.
Baa and Vanraj: - ANUPAMAAA
Anu: - Chillaiye mattโฆ. Chillane se sach nahi badatla Mr.Shah. Aap, Baa, Toshu aur Pakhi kabhi mujhe deserve hi nahi karte the isiliye app logon ko kabhi meri kadar nahi huiโฆ.par AB BAS, meri sehen shakti ki bhi ek seema hai aur woh aaj paar ho chuki hai,mein toh yahan apne bachon se aur apne Baa Bapuji se milne aati thi par ab jab mere bachon ko mein embarrass karti hun aur kyunki Baa ko iss ghar ki izzat mujhse zyaada pyaari hai mera iss ghar mein rehna ka ya yahan aane jaane ka koi matlab hi nahi hai, isiliye mein waapis apne ghar jaa rahi hun. Samar, Bapuji aur Kinjal se toh mein dance academy mein bhi mil sakti hoon aur ab toh Kinjal ke saath Rakhi Ben bhi hai yahan, toh meri zaroorat nahi padegi (turning to Kinjal) aur agar kabhi zaroorat pad gayi toh mujhe bula lena beta mein aajaungi.
Kinjal: - Haan mummy aap apne ghar laut jaiye waise bhiyahan rehkar mein aap ko har roz insult hote hue nahi dekhna chahti, aur koiaapko samjhe na samjhe aapki beti hain aapko samajhti hai aur mein nahi chahtiki meri wajah se meri mummy ko koi bhi problem ho.
Baa: - Tu uss Anuj keliye, hum sabko chod ke jayegi usne aate hi tujhse tera parivar cheen liya, tujhe teri maa aur bachon se door kar diya, dekh uske pyaar ne kya kar diya.
Anu: - Anuj ke liye nahi Baa, mein apne aap ke liye aap logon ko chod kar jaa rahi hunโฆthak gayi hoon inn roz roz ke taano se, roz rozke ilzamo se, Mr. Shah ki watchmangiri aur aapki taanebaazi se mujhe chutkara chahiye isisliye chod ke jaa rahi hun. Anuj ke pyaar ne nahi Baa aap logon ke dikhar ne aur app logon ki soch aur nafrat ne mujhse mera parivaar cheen liya joh shayad sahi mayne mein mera kabhi tha hi nahi. Anuj ne mujhse kuch nahi cheena Baa unhone toh sirf diya hai, woh sab diya hai joh pichle 26 saalon mein mujhe na is ghar mein aur na hi is parivar mein mila...aur woh hai samman, barabari ka rishta, mere sapnon ko poora karne ka mauka, vishwas, dosti aur poori umar bhi karo tabhi na khatam hone wala pyaar.
Baa, V, Kavya, Rakhi, Toshu and Pakhi make faces while MaAn army are super proud of Anu and Anuj's love.
Bapuji: - Beta, tu abhi bhale chali jaa par shaadi ke liye toh tum yahan aaogi naโฆmein tujhe iss ghar se vida karna chahte hoon poore izzat aur saman se.
Anu: - Nahi Bapuji, mujhe maaf kar dijiye mein yahan waapis nahi aana chahti, kheechad se nikale hue kamal par bhi kabhi kabhi kheechad reh jaata hai aur aise haalat mein, mein apni nayi zindagi ki shuruwat nahi kar sakti aur yeh shaadi sirf meri nahi hai Anuj ki bhi hai isiliye yeh shaadi un logon ke beech nahi ho sakti jo mera ya mere Anuj ka bura sochte ho ya phir jinhe humari shaadi se taqleef ho, meri shaadi bhale hi doosri ho par unki toh pehli haina mujhe maaf kar dijiye bapuji.
Bapuji: - Theek hai beta jaisi teri iccha...ithna sab hone ke baad tujhe yahan rokna sahi nahi hoga.
Anu leaves Shah house and comes to her apartment, sitting on the floor near the sofa and she breaks down thinking of all that happened in last one hour, Baa wishing bad luck for her, Toshu and Pakhi calling her an embarrassment and all the hate kept ringing in her ears, making her close her ears in an effort to mute those voices. Anuj comes back from Udaipur at dawn and notices Anuโs apartment door is a little open, making him really excited meet her, he keeps his stuff in his apartment and tip toes inside only to see Anu on the floor sleeping with a tear stricken face.
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Phewwโฆ finally post kar diya, please let me know if I should continue this and also give me suggestions for improvement, I am not at all a writer and ho sakta hai that there will be a lot of mistakes in the writing style.
Koi mistake nhi hai pagal... Kitna achcha likha hai tune. .... Humein bhi yehi chahiye tha... Even mujhe bhi.. Maine thoda alag socha tha.... But this version also great baby meri jaann.... Meghu.... Tu achcha likh sakti hai. ... Aur tune sach me bohot achcha likha hai....chal abb jaldi jaldi aramse age kaa likhe... Anu anuj convo... N anuj consoles anuj... Ab pta anuj kaise anu ko console krega.... Anuj ka reaction kaisa hoga...I want to kw yr.... ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Meghu this is ur first os.... Aur bohot achcha lgta kha hai.. U have done great job baby.. ๐๐๐โค๐ฅฐ
Ab nxt part bhi likhna...
Originally posted by: QueeN456
Bhai tu kab writer ban gyi... Yr...tere ko us din bola tha kuch likh de tab to bhav khaa rhi thi naaa sab pitenge main writer nhi hu blah blah blah ....
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Meine ussi din likhne ka socha tha, par time nahi mila phir woh baddua wala episode aaya toh meine ussi din yeh wala version likhna shuru kiya par complete nahi ho paya...aaj complete kiya toh post bhi kar diya. Mujhe toh laga hi tha tamatar padenge phir sab ko accha laga toh I feel soooooo grateful and happy ๐๐๐
Originally posted by: ...Tiana...
Happy Anu left that houseโญ๏ธPlease continue
Finally...๐๐
Thank you dear โค
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Meine ussi din likhne ka socha tha, par time nahi mila phir woh baddua wala episode aaya toh meine ussi din yeh wala version likhna shuru kiya par complete nahi ho paya...aaj complete kiya toh post bhi kar diya. Mujhe toh laga hi tha tamatar padenge phir sab ko accha laga toh I feel soooooo grateful and happy ๐๐๐
Koi tamatr nhi marega tuze yha pe maine phle bhi bola tha naa tuze.... Chal Tu happy to main b happy.. Chalo happy happy mein happy wala dance krte h...
Originally posted by: QueeN456
Koi mistake nhi hai pagal... Kitna achcha likha hai tune. .... Humein bhi yehi chahiye tha... Even mujhe bhi.. Maine thoda alag socha tha.... But this version also great baby meri jaann.... Meghu.... Tu achcha likh sakti hai. ... Aur tune sach me bohot achcha likha hai....chal abb jaldi jaldi aramse age kaa likhe... Any anuj convo... N anuj consoles anuj... Ab pta anuj kaise anu ko console krega.... Anuj ka reaction kaisa hoga...I want to kw yr.... ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Meghu this is ur first os.... Aur bohot achcha lgta kha hai.. U have done great job baby.. ๐๐๐โค๐ฅฐ
Ab nxt part bhi likhna...
Thank you so so so so so much baby.....๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I am soo happy and grateful you guys liked it....๐๐๐๐
Next part bhi likhungi โค