Dos Oruguitas - A ShiVi Drabble - Page 4

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Yeh kya hai 🥺🥺🥺

Main katti tere se aisa koi karte hai kya 🥺🥺

Ab mujhe thark chhaiye Aisa bass last baat likha tu ab age Mat likhna 🥺

Hmm maybe I've already been writing it for the last 2 days? ;)

Originally posted by: Iktara22

damn.i hate you for this, i was not ready okay and uk i DONOT like this hospy bed tragedies.

p.s.- whatsapp aa. subah se sab ne rulaya aaj, tu hi baki thi, so kuddos you made me cry too!

p.p.s-dont judge me, im sobbing and im a kiddo.

Aati hu, aati hu, but promise you'll love the next update of the ff <3

Sorry 🥺

Originally posted by: Prizi

I'm in a sobbing mess right now😭

The way she said she wants to have babies with himit hurts a lot knowing you're going to lose the person u love

Such an beautiful os

It does. But thank you for appreciating this <3

Originally posted by: Seja1

Hi 👋

I guess this is my first time reading your drabble. It’s different to what I have read on Shivi so far and have to say, this made me cry, a lot. I don’t want Shiva to die but loved the way how Shiva wants Raavi to find love again.

Neither do I want to see him die, just exploring my writing capabilities :)

Also, hi! Thank you for reading it, I do have more happy works if this made you very sad🥺

Thank you <3

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

As I began reading...started tearing up and then moments later became a complete and utter mess. I've always been a big crier😭😭.

Still crying while typing this.... Definitely kudos to you for having the talent of crafting such intense and terrific plots.

With stories we want to see happiness all around as it takes us outta our otherwise difficult lives. But this one is close to reality and practical in approach... Shiva asking her to go ahead and be her ownself...find love in life again.... Them wanting to have babies together...and goddd....🥺🥺However emotionally attached we are with shivi but what you have written is something that any lover would do❤️

This is heartbreaking... Yeah.... Sooo badly it broke my heart... But at the same time this is gut wretchingly beautiful.

Gimme gehrayiyaan soon plz(ofcourse when you can).... I need to get this outta my head...🥺

Thank you for reading and appreciating it, I promise this is the last time I'm writing something sad, my own heart couldn't take it!

Working on gehraiyaan, maybe by the end of the week I'll update hopefully :)

Originally posted by: Say123

Rula diya na 😭😭

Why do you do this 🥺

This drabble is heartbreaking this will be a first drabble of yours which I won't re read I am sorryyyyy I will cry again 🥺🌼but this drabble will always remain in my heart and the way you write takes my heart ❤

Disclaimer me tissues leke rakho toh add krna tha 🤦‍♀️

Haha no problem, I understand! Maine trigger wanting toh diya hi tha start mein 🥺

Thank you so much for appreciating it <3

Originally posted by: Janeavneil

Me before you is a painstakingly beautiful movie and most of their conversations reminded me of it 😢. This was so heart breaking yet so beautiful 💔

Yes, a lot of it inspired from movies and books that I read! Thank you for reading it <3

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

I think letter would break her more, it is so much better to see this raw side imo <3

Hum dil jod bhi lenge jaldi, tension not ;)

I agree, the letter would have been more heartbreaking, that's why I liked this. ❤️

Looking forward to the dil jodna part.

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Diya toh tha warning start mein🥺

But thank you for appreciating this, I know it's super sad but I have a very nice gehraiyaan update that you might love 😉

We talking about Advance notice of at least a week to prep our fragile heartstrings. 🐷

REALLLYYYYYY???

IS THE SHOWDOWN COMING?

AM I GONNA SEE AAG BOI IN ACTION??!!!

YK I HONESTLY CAN'T WAIT. That story has my heart and I gush all about it every one in a while to my two pulaao shishtars who gush back. ❤️

So sad, but beautifully written 💔