Dos Oruguitas - A ShiVi Drabble - Page 3

Rula diya na 😭😭

Why do you do this 🥺

This drabble is heartbreaking this will be a first drabble of yours which I won't re read I am sorryyyyy I will cry again 🥺🌼but this drabble will always remain in my heart and the way you write takes my heart ❤

Disclaimer me tissues leke rakho toh add krna tha 🤦‍♀️

Me before you is a painstakingly beautiful movie and most of their conversations reminded me of it 😢. This was so heart breaking yet so beautiful 💔

Why ????Why did you do this ???😭

It was heartbreaking to read😓

But loved it dear🤗

NO!!!!

NOOOOO!

NOOOOOO!!!

Just No! I cant take this. My heart is broken. This is so beautiful, poignant, sad and so so so touching.

That's it. I have no words, as I go cry in a corner.

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

RES 😈

Bwaaahhhhhhh!!!

Now that I've realised how stupid that gif was let's remedy it :

Ye kya kiya aapne? Why did you todo my dil and do chanka-choor of it??😭

This is soooo...un-kaagaz. Yk what I mean??

So different from what you usually do and that is why it reflects of the versatility. You'd never think a piece like this from Kaagazu because it's damn unusual and that is why it hit me so bad. SO BAD.

Raavi stopping to cry is probably the biggest indication of her strength EVER. As someone who is a cry baby max pro along with fragility thrown in the mix, I know what this kind of action must mean. For the life of me I would have had a 'difficult to breath crying attack' and never stopped, because I couldn't stop.

I knew he was going to ask her to find love. It was lingering in the air and I'm glad she listened. Practical and un-story like. I loved it.

It had me in tears Kaagaz.

Sachiiiiii.

Fair warning tu dena padinga aage se aaisa kuch bomb dene ke pehle. 🤡

Diya toh tha warning start mein🥺

But thank you for appreciating this, I know it's super sad but I have a very nice gehraiyaan update that you might love 😉

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

I am literally crying.......

Believe me i don't know but i connected with it........

The way she said she want to have babies with him and all the stuff i cried......... I choked and literally had my screen wet. Reading it❣️

Loved it.....

And trust me on this part i cried will re read it.......

Thank you so much for appreciating this <3

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Why you do this to me?? Why??

I demand something light, fluffy or tharki to soothe my aching heart. Then I’ll come back and comment on this one. 🥱

Maybe you'll get all three in the update for gehraiyaan. Maybe I'm brewing something ;)

Originally posted by: Shru_thebaadal

Ok read this and I will say

As Shiva said Raavi not to cry same I also don't want to cry But you pool u make me cry like a moron & now I'm sobbing so hard I mean 😭

This was a very beautiful piece it's not necessary that a complete love will always to be remembered sometimes ankahee dastaan makes us believe in love more

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So I would consider this a very beautiful piece different from the way I used to see your writing but a writer's efficiency is only made when they try different fields and you nailed it...

Ik it wasn't a blissfull happy ending but I would say Shiva taking his last breath when Raavi was with him makes me to love this so much💔

Ankahee dastaan hits harder sometimes, na?

I'm glad you think it's written well, Thank you for appreciating this <3

Originally posted by: Kristmas

This was so beautiful

But now I’ll just be hefe, sitting, in a corner, crying my heart out.

They spent their last moments together, there were supposed to have babies and a puppy. I cannot, Shivi ❤️

I loved it ❤️

Thank you so much, also I'll bring you out of the corner soon with a happy update hehe <3

Originally posted by: VNuts

Rulaaya kyun?! 😭

Accha tha, par dil todna zaroori tha?! 🥺

Be happy, I love and hate it all at the same time.

And I love that Raavi stopped crying for Shiva, while Shiva himself told Raavi to live again (instead of a letter). 💔

Now, I'm going to find something happy to read.

I think letter would break her more, it is so much better to see this raw side imo <3

Hum dil jod bhi lenge jaldi, tension not ;)