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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hii guys, this is story i wrote basically about me and my friends,

with some details changed of course!

Please read and review....

ill update onl if u guys like it😊

Its about friendship, commitment and loyalty!

It starts ina normal way, but then has many more touchy

scenes...hope u like it, here it goes ...*fingers crossed*

6:30 AM

Samya got up.

Kaira is on a date.

7:00

Samya half reading, half sleeping

Kaira is chatting animatedly with a cute guy, whose fallen in love with her.

8:00

Samya getting ready for school.

Kaira got up.

8:15

Samya having breakfast

Kaira dressing up.

8:20

Samyas in the elevator, but forgets her book, so goes back home.

Kaira done with her breakfast

8:30

Samya and Kaira waiting for the lift.

'Hi' they both say together.

As they enter the lift, They both look at their reflection in the mirror.

'Wow Kaira looking nice' Kaira said mischievously.

And Samya rolled her eyes.

'I think Samya looks better' she said, looking at her reflection.

'Yeah sure..she is like the prettiest girl in the world!'

'It took you five years to figure that out Kai?'

'Sure sam' she said rolling her eyes.

Just then the elevator stopped at the ground floor.

They both got out chatting happily.

Samya's little sister, sara called out to her 'Sam comin o what?'

'What' she replied frowning.

AT THE SCHOOL

'Hey' Kaira told Samya again that day.

'Hey back….'

'Oh God Sam! Guess what? I had this amazing dream!'

'Really? What did Harshad Chopra ask you out?'

'No silly, he asked me out last week, this time we were out on our first date' she said with a grin.

And Samya laughed.

And then until they reached their classes, they chatted loudly.

And then when they reached the second floor, Kaira entered the '10th B'

And Samya '9th B'.

Kaira was actually just one month one day older to Samya, but she joined school earlier.

They had been friends five years back, when Samya shifted to samyas apartment.

And now they were the best of friends.

9th B

Samya entered her class, and saw 79 familiar faces. She smiled at them, as she walked to her place.

'Hey Sam..' Sheetal one of her good friends called out.

'Yeah?' she asked dropping her back at her seat.

Just then the senior year prefect Rochelle said 'Sam, sheetal……study hour, don't talk'.

'But this is Important…Sr. M told me tell her something!' sheetal said.

'Then go out….' She said.

Sheetal pulled Samya out.

'Whats so important?' she asked.

'Umm…I forgot….anyways…. Michael apologized to me!' she said happily.

'He did? Cooool!'

'Yeah. I blasted at him….and told him that he broke our friendship for good and stuff and he being obtuse and all felt guilty and apologized and he told me that he'll tell all his friends that we aren't dating anymore!'.

'You'll are not!'

'Yeah, we were just good friends, but that dweeb lied to his friends!'

'Good, don't reply to his mails anymore'

'Why not?'

'Its not nice talking to people you dunno'

'Well I do!'

'Through the net'

'Yeah so? Lifes short, make as many friends as possible'

'Sure. But friends who lie about you, telling everyone that youre his girlfriend?'

'He apologized na..plus he ditn start the rumour'

'no. of course not! My teddy bear did!'

'No that chris did!'

'Argh he is sucha loser!'

'I know anyways…..i remember…Sr.M was calling you!'

'What?' she asked flabbergasted.

Sheetal laughed, Sam turned her heels and ran down.

Kaira was doodling in her rough book.

It was study hour, but no one was studying.

They ahd just finished their exams, and got their papers.

So no one was in a mood to study.

Actually in the study bell no one was supposed to use their staioanry, it was strictly only for revising the previous days lessons, at first they were allowed to, but then the students started doing their home work at that time, so according to the new rule, they were allowed only to rude.

But Kaira beign Kaira felt duty bound to break rules!

She wasn't the only one though, most fo them were.

Her classmates were all very close and the prefect was also from their class.

So no sweat!

Kaira scribbled something and passed it to Divya, her best friend.

It read:

If I was more dead, id be dead

Divya replied:

Me too

And it went on…

Okay toh lets make a list…

This ''list making'' trend started after theu read the princess diaries series. And it was always a fun past-time.

Kewl, you start…..

10 best actors

1) Harshad Chopra – my ranjha!

Yeah he's nice, he looked so cute in yesterdays episode.

Shut up, dnt look at your jeeju in sucha way!

Ok ok sorry!!!!

2) Saif Ali Khan

Cute! Par, I ditn like him in race?
WHY?

I dunno…looks old

You need my specks div?

3) Ranbir Kapoor…..He's so cute, he was so good at Saawariya….

.nuff said!

4) Hrithik Roshan.

*fainted* hes soooo cute

5) SRK!

Eww no. he;s old.

So?

Soh….i like younger actors ;)

6) Shahid Kapoor in JWM

He was soooo good wasn't he! Hey do I resemble geet?

NO!

7) John Abraham

Whys he 7th he should be at number 2! Dint u watch GOAL?

8)Salam Khan

Yeaaaaah

9)Abhishekh Bachan!

Haayyy!

10)Aamir Khan

He is #1

No Harshad Chopda is!

Yeah yeah wa'eva!

Okhay, guys hope u like it😊

plz review..

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Mini786 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Interesting so far..
Do continuee Zoyaa!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mini786

Interesting so far..
Do continuee Zoyaa!!!

sure thanx!😊😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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really nice, zoya! 👏 cant wait to read more!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really nice
look forward to reading it
legallyzoya thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ krupa and shruthi!
thanx a lotttt 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoya24

@ krupa and shruthi!
thanx a lotttt 🤗 🤗

No problem! 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Zoya it's amazing!!!!!!!!
I love it.....continue asap....
legallyzoya thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx basanti, well u have no option..u like it or not,
u ahve to give me good rviews 😆 kidding!
thanx again...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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helllooo??????? where's the next part??????????
update!!!!!!!!!

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