FF : Mission Ghanchakkar (COMPLETED) - Page 3

Originally posted by: anwaya

aage aage dekho kya hota hai!!!!!!!!

Aap dikhao toh sahi hum zaroor dekhenge🤪

Chapter 6 : The Unfulfilled Dream

------------------ Sid’s room :

“Really?” Karan looks at the jacket in front of him. “Really?”

Faizi was sitting at corner trying hard not to laugh. Karan, Faizi , Sid and Bala were in Sid’ room.

Bala : Sirjee abhi tapori lafanga banna hai to aise kapade pehenne padenge na.

Sid : Balajee bro, ye thoda OTT nei ho jaega?

Bala : OTT kya?

Sid : Over The Top! Ekdum too much?

Bala : arey Sid Bhaijee waise hi to banna hai na humko. Karan Sirjee apne kya bola tha ekdum dhinchak personality hone chahie jise dushman gang notice kare , shak kare.

Faizi : Waise Karan, Bala keh to sahi raha hai. Aur sorry to say jo character tum log play karane wale ho na, is Bala se jada uske barein me koi nei Janata. I think we should listen to Bala in this matter.

Faizi and Karan both have been under cover thousands of time. They both knew how to pick the nitty-gritty of characters. Karan looks at Faizi, and see Faizi is in total mood to pump up Bala’s confidence. And decided to play along.

Karan : Waise point to hai. To Bala, aaj se tere din shuru. Tu jaise bolega waise hum karenge. Par ha yeh mat bhulana ke jis din ye mission khatam ye tera nautanki bhi khatam

Bala wasn’t sure if he should be happy with first comment or dishearten of second.

Faizi : Kya Karan tu bhi! Jine de usko ye kuch din. Bol Bala age kya?

Sid happy with the tentative promotion Bala has got, “Bro!!!! Aage kya?”

Bala : Sirjee next hai bhasha. Bolne ka apna jo tareeka hai kafi ijjat dar, lekin apun ko banna hai bejjat-dar! To baat baat me “Bhai” “Sala” ana hi chahie.

Karan smirks. “To kya mujhe bolna padega, “Sid Saalee….”?????”

Sid smiles and mutters,” Wo to rishtey se mein apka banunga hi. Saala. To abhi se adat daldo!”

Bala : Haaan! Aur batata hoo ruko………………………….

Bala went on explaining in very explicit manner how to become “Lafanga”.

Karan mutters to Faizi,” Isse accha Monami ka husband ban jata”

“Janab jee abhibhi badal sakata hai. Soch lo chota sa sukhi pariwar apka aur Monami ka!”

Karan , partially in his sweat dreamland, smiles a bit.

“Wah Janab jee , blush kiya jar aha hai”

Karan stops smiling, “ Tujhe tayyari nei karani kuch apne part ke liye”

“Bhaiyya hum to bachpan se hi sayane hai , marriage material. Bala ke training ke baad hum se le lena training adarsh jamai ki and adarsh pati ki... kaam ayega”

Karan rolls his eyes.

--------- Monu’s room

“Nahi ho raha hai Sumanjee” Monu completely flustered drops the saree on floor.

“Arey Monami asan hai saree pehenna! Dekho yeh saree ko aise pakado phir usko aise modo”

Monu tried again but fail!

“Ruk Monami, mein ek kaam karti hoo iska video banake tujhe deke rakhta hoo. Tum dekh dekh ke pehenna! “

Sumnajee keeps all the sarees in Monu’s bag.

Monu and Saree’s war ended but another war was ongoing with Sanju.

She looks at the box n front of her, with 10-20 different bottles.

“Chitra, Pure sir se leke paav tak Rangana hai kya? Yeh kya pitara hai?”

“Arey Sanjana ma’am yeh to bas face makeup hai!”

Sanju looks at Chitra with her mouth open, “Je? Je pura sansar bus chehare ke liye hai?”

Chitra nods innocently.

Monu turns to Sanjana and smiles, “ Sanju, dekha? Titliya banana bhi asan nei hai! Badi mehnat ka kaam hai. Mere kapado ka kaam to ho gaya Sumanjee ne apni sunder sunder saree mujhe dedi. Ab tumhari bari. Let me share my cloths”

With equally amusing expressions Sanju looks at the cloths she has to wear.

------------------- Next day Morning

Everyone gathers at reception area to leave for Mumbai.

Karan : Ustad ji pehle hi subah nikal chuke hai sare surveillance equipment’s and ammunitions leke. Resort ke paas ek building me hamara safe house banaya hai. Jaha pe Ustad ji aur baki lok hume back-end support denge.

Faizi : Teeno teams alag alag niklenge yaha se. Once you leave this academy hum logonka ek dusre se koi lena dena nei hoga. Hum ek dusre se kum se kum contact karenge. On field you have to be in command of your trainer in the team.

“Yes Sir”

Karan : Pehle team Titliya jaegi then Grihasti and end me team Team …

Karan clear his throat ,” Wo 3rd team”.

Faizi : Team Jhingoor.

Karan : Haan wahi.

Karan avoids Faizi.

Karan searches for Monu. ,”Monami kaha hai? Sanju?”

“Sirjee me nikal rahi thi tab Monami boli thi wo aa rei hai, pata nei kidhar reh gayi”

“Thik hai Faizi Sanju tum log ruko me dekh ke ata hoo”.

----- Monu’s room.

Monu was struggling with hook of Mangal sutra standing in front of mirror.

“uff, yeh kaunsa wala Mangal Sutra laya hai Sumanjee ne. Lag hi nei raha kabse try kar rei hoo”.

Karan approaches Manu’s room but stops at the door. Monu wore sky blue color chiffon saree and matching bangles which were making sweet sound when she was moving her hand. A small bindi on her forehead below her hairs was shining. Karan couldn’t move from his place, that sight of her was so breathtaking he couldn’t even move single muscle of his body. He could see her struggling with Mangal Sutra and frowning, she was looking so beautiful he just stood there smiling.

‘Come on Karan , Man to tera bada kar raha hoga bus dekhe jae Monami ko but agar tu aise hi dekhta raha to tere dil me jo apne payr ko daba rakha hai wo bahar aa jaega! Go and help her aur jaldi niklo yaha se’, Karan though to himself.

“Ahem”, He cleared his throat, “Monami, you are late. We need to leave”

Monu still struggling turns to him , “I know Karan late ho raha hai but kya karu ye hook nei baith raha. Mera mobile bhi sab luggage ke sath chala gaya so couldn’t call anyone. Bus 2 min I am hurrying up!”

Karan watched her struggle more , then nods his head , “Lao me kar deta hoo”

Monu didn’t wanted Karan to come close to her and that to help her wear Mangal Sutra. But they didn’t had time to think about these things. She hands him the Mangal Sutra and turns facing the mirror. Carefully she shifts her hair to one side of her nape exposing her neck.

Slowly Karan approaches her and stand behind her. She put the Mangal Sutra around her neck and stares hard at hook to make sure it gets fixed.

Monu slowly looks up at mirror, looking at Karan. He too had creases on his forehead trying to fix the hook. A painful thought struck her at that moment. She has dreamt of wearing Mangalsutra from his hand one day, she has dreamt of this exact situation. She wearing saree, bindi and he helping her with Mangal sutra. But that seems like an impossible dream, but here they are doing exactly same thing in an exactly weird situation!

A drop of tear appears on her cheek, Monu looks down at floor to avoid looking at Karan’s reflection. At the same moment Karan looks up in the mirror, watching Monu turning her head.

The thought hits Karan. He wanted , one day to give her Mangal Sutra. To put Mangal Sutra from his hand ,this exact moment he had dreamt too! They were living the same moment but….Karan stops putting the hook and looks at Monu. She could feel him tensing up and again looks at mirror. At that same moment both look at each other in the mirror and both knew they were thinking the same thing. Same moment , same dream they have seen together shattering in front of them.

Now Monu couldn’t control her tears and they starts flowing on her cheek. Karan was about to turn towards her but instead he fixes the hook quickly and turns away from her. He couldn’t let his emotion handle him, he should better control them.

Monu wipes her tears, she knew she shouldn’t have cried. Not in front of him. She shouldn’t have shown how vulnerable she is.

At that same moment ….

“Wah bhai yeh sahi hai”

They both turn to find Faizi at door. Faizi was smiling and he enters room.

“Kya Monami abhi tak hamari shadi thikse hui bhi nei aur tumhara extra marital affair shuru bhi?”

Monu smiles , “Haan to! Aise Apni nayi naveli Dulhan ko chod ke jaoge to kaise chalega?”

“Koi na , der aye durusta aye! To Biwijee chale ab? Humein nikalana hai . Karan Direct resort pe milte hai?”

“Yes Faizi, tum niklo. Me bakiyonko leke resort pe aata hoo”

Bidding Karan bye both Monu and Faizi leaves the room.

Karan stays there with complete silence and throbbing pain in his heart.

At Resort :

Monu, Faizi and Premjee enters the resort in their Sedan car. They were about to came out of car when Faizi’s phone rings

“Hello, Karan. Kya hua?”

“Arey Faizi mera jo jacket haina Bala ne diya tha wo yaar galti se tere bag me chala gaya hai and tera mere paas. Before you enter resort we have to switch it quickly.”

Faizi checks his bag and finds the weird jacket Bala has given, denim with sequence work, in his bag.

“Haan Karan ye to mere paas hai but we have just entered the resort and abhi yaha aise hi ruke rahenge to ajeeb lagega. Somebody will come out to receive us”

“Do anything Faizi pretend office se phone hai ya anything do not enter the resort”

“Ok Karan”.

Faizi briefs Premjee and Monu regarding situation. Monu has a plan ,”Faizi ek kaam karo , me and Premjee just wait outside the car you just roam around talking on phone. Ye Jacket apne hath me hi rakho. Karan ki gadi ati hi hogi just pretend you are talking and approach the car. Karan ko bolna jacket ready rakhe and you guys quickly exchange”

Faizi explains the plan to Karan. Karan parks his jeep right at the back of Faizi’s car. Takes the Jacket and waits outside car. Faizi pretends that he is talking on the phone and approaches Karan’s jeep. Karan doing same, talking on phone, approaches Faizi’s car. He was about to come to car when somebody collides with him. Karan loses his balance and was about to fall when Monu comes and holds Karan.

“Sorry sir, extremely sorry I was in hurry and didn’t saw you!” The one who collides apologies to Karan.

“It’s ok , no problem”, saying Karan stood, still holding Monu’s hand.

And to that exact same moment resort’s manager comes to welcome them.

“Hello Sir, Good morning! Sorry you have to wait outside! Welcome Mr.and Mrs. Kapoor to Unwind. And yes to you too Mr. Senior Kapoor” , Manager

gestures Premjee.

Dumbstruck Monu and Karan looksat manager.

“Sir I always say life me wife ka hona bahot jaroori hota hai! Wo ghar ko bhi sambhalti hai aur hume bhi! Jaise inho ne apko sambhala abhi! And ye is jacket ko aap mujhe de dijiye me apke language ke sath isse rakh dunga! “

Saying this the manager asks bell boy to take all their luggage and hands the jacket to him.

Still calculating what just happened Monu and Karan looks at each other. Karan turns to look at Faizi. He gestures Karan to play along. Grabbing the jacket Bala have given he shifts to clan “Jhingoor”.

Bala and Sid was looking at all this drama from Jeep.

“Sid Bhaijee , yeh ho kya raha hai?”

“Bala G bro, ye destiny hai! Ab jo aage jake jaise hone wala hai uska trial hi samjho!” Sid smiles and give high five to Bala.

Faizi joins them , “Ab jaha uper wale ki ho merzi waha kya kare yeh Faizi! I hope ye mission to successful ho hi, in dono ke bich bhi sab successful ho!”

With wishful thinking they look at Karan and Monu. Who were still under shock of what has just happened.

Sid : I am sorry sir but welcome to Jhingoor gang!

Faizi smiles "Mere liye to out of syllabus question aa gaya ye! Koi nei wahi karenge jo school me kiya karte the! Copy!"

Laughing all of them wears the most in-your-eyes jacket ever, a machis ki tilli in their mouth and total 1rupee swag then move towards the reception area.

Once Grihasti team left the reception area, Team Jhingoor enters. If gully boy was made on very low budget, these three could have been apt casting. Manager stops them,

“Arey aap kaun ho yaha kaha ghuse ja rahe ho? Yaha reservation ke siva kisiko aana allowed nei hai! Security………..”

Faizi : Oyeee sekurti kyu bula raha hai? Hum kya tera resort lutane aaye hai? Baat karta hai. Oyee dikha isko apna booking.

Bala : jee Bhaijee!

Bala takes out the printout of the booking they have done and hand it over to Faizi.

Faizi : Le! Ankh phad phad ke dekh le.

Manager checks the booking and confirms with his team.

“Sorry sir, wo thodi misunderstanding ho gayi thi. Wo matlab sorry”

Faizi : Tere sorry ko daal jeb me aur chal rasta dikha.

Manager calls another bell boy to take them to resort.

Sid : Bhai kya thakele log bhare pade hai yaha. Pata nei andar ka mahol kaise hoga.

Bala : Arey mahol nei hoga to bana denge!

Completely into their characters, all three of them follows bell boy.

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba

Aap dikhao toh sahi hum zaroor dekhenge🤪

Your wish my command 🤪

Dhoka hua hai mere sath DHOKA😭😭

Faizi or Monu ko husband wife dekhna tha mujhe😵

Not fair bro not fair🥺🥺

Saare Armaan aansuon mein baha diye😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Dost Dost na raha🥺😭😭😭😭😭😭😭💔💔💔💔

Faizi or Monu sath mein flirt karte hue kitne ache lagte

Originally posted by: anwaya

Chapter 6 : The Unfulfilled Dream

------------------ Sid’s room :

“Really?” Karan looks at the jacket in front of him. “Really?”

Faizi was sitting at corner trying hard not to laugh. Karan, Faizi , Sid and Bala were in Sid’ room.

Bala : Sirjee abhi tapori lafanga banna hai to aise kapade pehenne padenge na.

Sid : Balajee bro, ye thoda OTT nei ho jaega?

Bala : OTT kya?

Sid : Over The Top! Ekdum too much?

Bala : arey Sid Bhaijee waise hi to banna hai na humko. Karan Sirjee apne kya bola tha ekdum dhinchak personality hone chahie jise dushman gang notice kare , shak kare.

Faizi : Waise Karan, Bala keh to sahi raha hai. Aur sorry to say jo character tum log play karane wale ho na, is Bala se jada uske barein me koi nei Janata. I think we should listen to Bala in this matter.

Faizi and Karan both have been under cover thousands of time. They both knew how to pick the nitty-gritty of characters. Karan looks at Faizi, and see Faizi is in total mood to pump up Bala’s confidence. And decided to play along.

Karan : Waise point to hai. To Bala, aaj se tere din shuru. Tu jaise bolega waise hum karenge. Par ha yeh mat bhulana ke jis din ye mission khatam ye tera nautanki bhi khatam

Bala wasn’t sure if he should be happy with first comment or dishearten of second.

Faizi : Kya Karan tu bhi! Jine de usko ye kuch din. Bol Bala age kya?

Sid happy with the tentative promotion Bala has got, “Bro!!!! Aage kya?”

Bala : Sirjee next hai bhasha. Bolne ka apna jo tareeka hai kafi ijjat dar, lekin apun ko banna hai bejjat-dar! To baat baat me “Bhai” “Sala” ana hi chahie.

Karan smirks. “To kya mujhe bolna padega, “Sid Saalee….”?????”

Sid smiles and mutters,” Wo to rishtey se mein apka banunga hi. Saala. To abhi se adat daldo!”

Bala : Haaan! Aur batata hoo ruko………………………….

Bala went on explaining in very explicit manner how to become “Lafanga”.

Karan mutters to Faizi,” Isse accha Monami ka husband ban jata”

“Janab jee abhibhi badal sakata hai. Soch lo chota sa sukhi pariwar apka aur Monami ka!”

Karan , partially in his sweat dreamland, smiles a bit.

“Wah Janab jee , blush kiya jar aha hai”

Karan stops smiling, “ Tujhe tayyari nei karani kuch apne part ke liye”

“Bhaiyya hum to bachpan se hi sayane hai , marriage material. Bala ke training ke baad hum se le lena training adarsh jamai ki and adarsh pati ki... kaam ayega”

Karan rolls his eyes.

--------- Monu’s room

“Nahi ho raha hai Sumanjee” Monu completely flustered drops the saree on floor.

“Arey Monami asan hai saree pehenna! Dekho yeh saree ko aise pakado phir usko aise modo”

Monu tried again but fail!

“Ruk Monami, mein ek kaam karti hoo iska video banake tujhe deke rakhta hoo. Tum dekh dekh ke pehenna! “

Sumnajee keeps all the sarees in Monu’s bag.

Monu and Saree’s war ended but another war was ongoing with Sanju.

She looks at the box n front of her, with 10-20 different bottles.

“Chitra, Pure sir se leke paav tak Rangana hai kya? Yeh kya pitara hai?”

“Arey Sanjana ma’am yeh to bas face makeup hai!”

Sanju looks at Chitra with her mouth open, “Je? Je pura sansar bus chehare ke liye hai?”

Chitra nods innocently.

Monu turns to Sanjana and smiles, “ Sanju, dekha? Titliya banana bhi asan nei hai! Badi mehnat ka kaam hai. Mere kapado ka kaam to ho gaya Sumanjee ne apni sunder sunder saree mujhe dedi. Ab tumhari bari. Let me share my cloths”

With equally amusing expressions Sanju looks at the cloths she has to wear.

------------------- Next day Morning

Everyone gathers at reception area to leave for Mumbai.

Karan : Ustad ji pehle hi subah nikal chuke hai sare surveillance equipment’s and ammunitions leke. Resort ke paas ek building me hamara safe house banaya hai. Jaha pe Ustad ji aur baki lok hume back-end support denge.

Faizi : Teeno teams alag alag niklenge yaha se. Once you leave this academy hum logonka ek dusre se koi lena dena nei hoga. Hum ek dusre se kum se kum contact karenge. On field you have to be in command of your trainer in the team.

“Yes Sir”

Karan : Pehle team Titliya jaegi then Grihasti and end me team Team …

Karan clear his throat ,” Wo 3rd team”.

Faizi : Team Jhingoor.

Karan : Haan wahi.

Karan avoids Faizi.

Karan searches for Monu. ,”Monami kaha hai? Sanju?”

“Sirjee me nikal rahi thi tab Monami boli thi wo aa rei hai, pata nei kidhar reh gayi”

“Thik hai Faizi Sanju tum log ruko me dekh ke ata hoo”.

----- Monu’s room.

Monu was struggling with hook of Mangal sutra standing in front of mirror.

“uff, yeh kaunsa wala Mangal Sutra laya hai Sumanjee ne. Lag hi nei raha kabse try kar rei hoo”.

Karan approaches Manu’s room but stops at the door. Monu wore sky blue color chiffon saree and matching bangles which were making sweet sound when she was moving her hand. A small bindi on her forehead below her hairs was shining. Karan couldn’t move from his place, that sight of her was so breathtaking he couldn’t even move single muscle of his body. He could see her struggling with Mangal Sutra and frowning, she was looking so beautiful he just stood there smiling.

‘Come on Karan , Man to tera bada kar raha hoga bus dekhe jae Monami ko but agar tu aise hi dekhta raha to tere dil me jo apne payr ko daba rakha hai wo bahar aa jaega! Go and help her aur jaldi niklo yaha se’, Karan though to himself.

“Ahem”, He cleared his throat, “Monami, you are late. We need to leave”

Monu still struggling turns to him , “I know Karan late ho raha hai but kya karu ye hook nei baith raha. Mera mobile bhi sab luggage ke sath chala gaya so couldn’t call anyone. Bus 2 min I am hurrying up!”

Karan watched her struggle more , then nods his head , “Lao me kar deta hoo”

Monu didn’t wanted Karan to come close to her and that to help her wear Mangal Sutra. But they didn’t had time to think about these things. She hands him the Mangal Sutra and turns facing the mirror. Carefully she shifts her hair to one side of her nape exposing her neck.

Slowly Karan approaches her and stand behind her. She put the Mangal Sutra around her neck and stares hard at hook to make sure it gets fixed.

Monu slowly looks up at mirror, looking at Karan. He too had creases on his forehead trying to fix the hook. A painful thought struck her at that moment. She has dreamt of wearing Mangalsutra from his hand one day, she has dreamt of this exact situation. She wearing saree, bindi and he helping her with Mangal sutra. But that seems like an impossible dream, but here they are doing exactly same thing in an exactly weird situation!

A drop of tear appears on her cheek, Monu looks down at floor to avoid looking at Karan’s reflection. At the same moment Karan looks up in the mirror, watching Monu turning her head.

The thought hits Karan. He wanted , one day to give her Mangal Sutra. To put Mangal Sutra from his hand ,this exact moment he had dreamt too! They were living the same moment but….Karan stops putting the hook and looks at Monu. She could feel him tensing up and again looks at mirror. At that same moment both look at each other in the mirror and both knew they were thinking the same thing. Same moment , same dream they have seen together shattering in front of them.

Now Monu couldn’t control her tears and they starts flowing on her cheek. Karan was about to turn towards her but instead he fixes the hook quickly and turns away from her. He couldn’t let his emotion handle him, he should better control them.

Monu wipes her tears, she knew she shouldn’t have cried. Not in front of him. She shouldn’t have shown how vulnerable she is.

At that same moment ….

“Wah bhai yeh sahi hai”

They both turn to find Faizi at door. Faizi was smiling and he enters room.

“Kya Monami abhi tak hamari shadi thikse hui bhi nei aur tumhara extra marital affair shuru bhi?”

Monu smiles , “Haan to! Aise Apni nayi naveli Dulhan ko chod ke jaoge to kaise chalega?”

“Koi na , der aye durusta aye! To Biwijee chale ab? Humein nikalana hai . Karan Direct resort pe milte hai?”

“Yes Faizi, tum niklo. Me bakiyonko leke resort pe aata hoo”

Bidding Karan bye both Monu and Faizi leaves the room.

Karan stays there with complete silence and throbbing pain in his heart.

At Resort :

Monu, Faizi and Premjee enters the resort in their Sedan car. They were about to came out of car when Faizi’s phone rings

“Hello, Karan. Kya hua?”

“Arey Faizi mera jo jacket haina Bala ne diya tha wo yaar galti se tere bag me chala gaya hai and tera mere paas. Before you enter resort we have to switch it quickly.”

Faizi checks his bag and finds the weird jacket Bala has given, denim with sequence work, in his bag.

“Haan Karan ye to mere paas hai but we have just entered the resort and abhi yaha aise hi ruke rahenge to ajeeb lagega. Somebody will come out to receive us”

“Do anything Faizi pretend office se phone hai ya anything do not enter the resort”

“Ok Karan”.

Faizi briefs Premjee and Monu regarding situation. Monu has a plan ,”Faizi ek kaam karo , me and Premjee just wait outside the car you just roam around talking on phone. Ye Jacket apne hath me hi rakho. Karan ki gadi ati hi hogi just pretend you are talking and approach the car. Karan ko bolna jacket ready rakhe and you guys quickly exchange”

Faizi explains the plan to Karan. Karan parks his jeep right at the back of Faizi’s car. Takes the Jacket and waits outside car. Faizi pretends that he is talking on the phone and approaches Karan’s jeep. Karan doing same, talking on phone, approaches Faizi’s car. He was about to come to car when somebody collides with him. Karan loses his balance and was about to fall when Monu comes and holds Karan.

“Sorry sir, extremely sorry I was in hurry and didn’t saw you!” The one who collides apologies to Karan.

“It’s ok , no problem”, saying Karan stood, still holding Monu’s hand.

And to that exact same moment resort’s manager comes to welcome them.

“Hello Sir, Good morning! Sorry you have to wait outside! Welcome Mr.and Mrs. Kapoor to Unwind. And yes to you too Mr. Senior Kapoor” , Manager

gestures Premjee.

Dumbstruck Monu and Karan looksat manager.

“Sir I always say life me wife ka hona bahot jaroori hota hai! Wo ghar ko bhi sambhalti hai aur hume bhi! Jaise inho ne apko sambhala abhi! And ye is jacket ko aap mujhe de dijiye me apke language ke sath isse rakh dunga! “

Saying this the manager asks bell boy to take all their luggage and hands the jacket to him.

Still calculating what just happened Monu and Karan looks at each other. Karan turns to look at Faizi. He gestures Karan to play along. Grabbing the jacket Bala have given he shifts to clan “Jhingoor”.

Bala and Sid was looking at all this drama from Jeep.

“Sid Bhaijee , yeh ho kya raha hai?”

“Bala G bro, ye destiny hai! Ab jo aage jake jaise hone wala hai uska trial hi samjho!” Sid smiles and give high five to Bala.

Faizi joins them , “Ab jaha uper wale ki ho merzi waha kya kare yeh Faizi! I hope ye mission to successful ho hi, in dono ke bich bhi sab successful ho!”

With wishful thinking they look at Karan and Monu. Who were still under shock of what has just happened.

Sid : I am sorry sir but welcome to Jhingoor gang!

Faizi smiles "Mere liye to out of syllabus question aa gaya ye! Koi nei wahi karenge jo school me kiya karte the! Copy!"

Laughing all of them wears the most in-your-eyes jacket ever, a machis ki tilli in their mouth and total 1rupee swag then move towards the reception area.

Once Grihasti team left the reception area, Team Jhingoor enters. If gully boy was made on very low budget, these three could have been apt casting. Manager stops them,

“Arey aap kaun ho yaha kaha ghuse ja rahe ho? Yaha reservation ke siva kisiko aana allowed nei hai! Security………..”

Faizi : Oyeee sekurti kyu bula raha hai? Hum kya tera resort lutane aaye hai? Baat karta hai. Oyee dikha isko apna booking.

Bala : jee Bhaijee!

Bala takes out the printout of the booking they have done and hand it over to Faizi.

Faizi : Le! Ankh phad phad ke dekh le.

Manager checks the booking and confirms with his team.

“Sorry sir, wo thodi misunderstanding ho gayi thi. Wo matlab sorry”

Faizi : Tere sorry ko daal jeb me aur chal rasta dikha.

Manager calls another bell boy to take them to resort.

Sid : Bhai kya thakele log bhare pade hai yaha. Pata nei andar ka mahol kaise hoga.

Bala : Arey mahol nei hoga to bana denge!

Completely into their characters, all three of them follows bell boy.

This was amazing, looking forward to next chapter. You are too good.

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba

Dhoka hua hai mere sath DHOKA😭😭

Faizi or Monu ko husband wife dekhna tha mujhe😵

Not fair bro not fair🥺🥺

Saare Armaan aansuon mein baha diye😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Dost Dost na raha🥺😭😭😭😭😭😭😭💔💔💔💔

Faizi or Monu sath mein flirt karte hue kitne ache lagte

hayyeeeee i feel like original maker of ZDMN..jo tumhara dil tod raha hai twist in story se🤔

waise twist khatam nahi hua hai!

Originally posted by: iAmSphere

This was amazing, looking forward to next chapter. You are too good.

Thank you dearrrrr🤗

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Hilarious man

All the mission team has been were all very serious, in all cases kisi na kisiki jaan khataremene.

First Monu, then Koel and then Sanju/ Sid.

But we never had any mission (apart from Jalpari) where you know team is kind of enjoying as well.

I want such mission where you know story goes, light. / romantic /comic scenes with all, bonding between various characters not only the couples.....

Originally posted by: anwaya

hayyeeeee i feel like original maker of ZDMN..jo tumhara dil tod raha hai twist in story se🤔

waise twist khatam nahi hua hai!

Kya twist hai jaldi update karo na🥺

Nahi yeh story original wali se better jaa rahi hai toh unki tarah feel karne ki zarurat nahin hai😂😂

Chapter 7 : Parakrami Jasoos

Bell boy takes team Grihasti totheir room.

“Sir ye aapka kamara hai. Mr and Mrs. Kapoor and ye baju wala apka Mr. Kapoor”, gesturing Premjee.

Karan : Thanks.

Premjee gives tip to bell boy which he happily takes, nods at Karan and Monu and goes into his room.

Karan and Monu, still in partial shock, stays in lobby. Bell boy not sure what to do , asks them “ Sir , ma’am aapko kuch chahie?”

At the same moment a door in front of them opens. Team Titliya who have already made their entry were at their room’s door. As they have heard the voices.

Bell boy turns to them bowing down and again turns to Karan/Monu.

“Yes, Mr. and Mrs. Kapoor. You need anything?”

All the Titliya stood in silence, looking at Karan/Monu for any response.

Karan gather ups his thoughts ,”No! No thank you!”

With another bow bell boy leaves.

Now Karan/Monu and Titliya in lobby at their respective doors. Sanju has 0 idea what has happened and how should she react. She opens her mouth many times to say something but not sure what to say makes a 180 degree turn back to her room along with Chitra and Sumanjee.

Karan who was looking forward to some support from Sanju, was about to stop them but of no use. Again with very awkward silence Karan and Monu finally decides to go into their room.

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Into the room:

Monu sits on sofa near window playing with her bangles not sure what to do or say. Karan sits on bed.

“Tumhe pakadana nei chahie tha mujhe”

With creases her forehead and irritation in her voice she asks, “What?”

“Me jab gir raha tha tumhe mujhe pakadana nei chahie tha. Ab ho gayi na gadbad”

“Tum gir rahe the Karan”

“Haan to jada se jada kya ho jata gir hi jata na! Ye gadbad to nei hoti aisi!”

“Unbelievable!” Monu stood up and sits next to Karan, “Matlab tum gir rahe the aur mene pakada ye bhi meri galti?”

“Mein thodi bol raha hoo galti hai, bus bol raha hoo ke agar tum nei pakadati to shayad ye nahi hota”

Monu takes deep breath ,” Right! Right! Yes, meri hi galti hai! Mujhe tumhe girane dena chahie tha. Ab dekho na kitni badi gadbad ho gayi , na chahate hue bhi tumhe mera husband banana pad gaya!”

“Dekho Monami ab tum na baat ko ghuma rahi ho. Mene aise thodi kaha, I was saying plan me thodi problem…”

“To? Mission me aise hota rehta hai na? Plan bigadte hai phir you must improvise! And we did that!”

“To tumhe koi problem nei hai ye naye plan se? tum gussa nei ho?”, Karan asks very slowly not to sound too happy or not to sound too confused.

“Mujhe kyu koi problem hogi. We made a plan, it didn’t worked out, so we made new plan! That’s how a mission goes, aur ab tak itni baat to samajh chuki hoo mein”

Now relieved Karan sighs, and sits properly on bed. With smirk on his face and mischief in his eyes he says,“ Nei matlab mujhe laga tumhe Faizi ki biwi banana tha na kab se. to… “

Monu was about to retort back when he holds his hand in front of her in surrender,” Ok! Ok! Ok! Sorry! Waise sahi hai Mangal Sutra mene pehenaya to Pati bhi me hi banunga. Fair and square!”

Monu has no idea what she should reply, but Karan could see the smile in her eyes which she was trying hard not to show on her lips.

At that same moment Monu’s phone rings, it was Sid.

“Bro, domestic fight ho gayi hoto thoda plan pe focus kare?”

“What? Sid you mad or what? Aise kuch nei ho raha hai yaha pe”

Karan raising his eyebrow on “aise kuch”.

“Rubbish, I know you dude and I know him too”

Monu clearing her throat “ahem….Sid kaam ki baat kare. Why have you called?”

“Wo Faizi sir ne bola tha sabko conf call pe lene to discuss something”

“Haan ruko me speaker pe dalti hoon tumhe”

Monu puts phone on speaker and then they add team Titliya as well along with Premjee. Karan takes over the call

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“Ok guys we have 3 days , aaj ka pura kal ka pura but parso only till Lunch after which we have to leave. Limited time hai we have to utilize it well so we have to split and search. Har ek team ek area of resort target karenge. All team members would always be in touch with their lead trainer all the time. Aur info dete rahenge. Koi bhi, I repeat, koi bhi action nei lega. We are hereto observe and agar jaroori pade you must take your trainers permission.”

Karan knowingly looks towards Monu and repeats “Am I clear?”

Monu nods, she knew with he track record this last line was for her and Sid. And if Sid and Sanju would have been in same room, Sanju too, would have given same to look to Sid.

Karan continues ,” After entry to resort sabko ek pamphlet mila hoga of resort activities for next 2 days. Me and Premjee would go to golf area now. Around it there are few independent villas jaha dekha jae to privacy bhi milti hai and it’s secluded from rest of the resort. We will try to find something over there. Meanwhile Monami I want you to call room service and try talking to servants/maids. Anything you can dig up. “

Monu nods.

“Sanju, Chitra and Sumanjee,your area would be Spa area. The kind of character you are playing you are expected to be at such activities. And luckily the back entrance of Spa area has same route to resort’s storage area. Try to see any activities there”

“Jee Karan Sirjee”

“Accha to meri Ex-team. Team Jhingoor. Apko kaha bheja jae?”

Sid interrupts, “ If I may sir?”

“Yea bolo”

“Jis tarikeke hum ladke bane hai they will look out mostly for two things. Girls and Booze”

“Right!”

“So for us the apt place would be Pool. And there is Pool and rain dance happening so I guess we should go there”

“Nice thinking Cadet Ganju! So aap tino will cover pool area! I think our plan is fixed. Tonight we will again have call to discuss all the inputs and make tomorrow’s plan. Please aap sab log dhyan rakhiye apna”

“Yes, Sir”.

---- At Golf course

Karan and Premjee were on the golf ground.

“Karan Sirjee, mujhe ye khelna nei ata hai bilkul”

“Koi baat nei Premjee waise mujhe bhi nei ata hai khelna but we have to act”

Karan was scouting for any suspicious thing.

“Karan Sirjee wo jo mere daye baju pe entry hai waha se sare private villas shuru hote hai. Total 3 aise villas hai resort me”

“Premjee ek kaam kijiye jor se marie golf ball ko usi direction me”

Premjee took a big breathe “Chalie marata hoo leke prabhu ka naam”

Premjee hits the ball hard in the same direction.

“Well done Premjee, well done ”Patting on Premjee’s back he goes to same direction.

Like Premjee said, he could see 3 villas. He could see some young crowd in one of the villa’s balcony. He knew this could not be the villa they are looking for. Then there were rest of the two villas, both looked empty. But as far as he knew both have been booked. Why there is no activity or noise, Karan thought. He could see one of the ground keepers and approaches him.

“Suno”

“Yes, Sir”

“Nice and well-maintained ground. Aap hi kaam karte hai yaha?”

“Jee haan”, With pride in his voice he confirms “Jee mein yaha ka in charge hoon. Maintenance and cleaning meri responsibility hai!”

Karan trying to sound very casual asks ,” But I wish wo samne wale Villas jo hai, unki responsibility bhi apki hoti. I mean look at the lawn area over there , not at all good!”

“Arey Sirjee kya bataye apko,pura resort ki responsibility meri hi thi, and wo Villas ki bhi. But last month se naya log rakhe hai”, The keeper comes closer to Karan ,” Sirjee, aap please kisiko boliye ga mat ke mein aise bol raha hoo, chugli kar raha hoo. But pata nei kya soch ke un logonko rakha hai, bus Villas Maintenance ke liye. Koi bhi hotel ka regular cleaner waha allowed nei hai. Aur kaam bhi thik se nei karate”

Karan finds that suspicious, why only for Villas a new cleaning staff? And the rest of the resort looked more maintained and clean than Villa.

“Sirjee, lekin ye jo baat apne boli hai na ke mera kaam accha hai, ye jarror boliyega manager ko!”

Karan smiles, pats the keeper on back , “Arey bilkul, jo sach hai wo jarror batayenge. Thank you!”

Karan has found one piece of the puzzle , now he just have to search for rest. He hoped others have found some of the pieces too!

----- At Spa

Sanju, Chitra and Sumanjee approaches the Spa area.

Sanju : Hello, we have 3 full head massages booked for today.

Receptionist: Sure ma’am! Your room number?

Sanju : 303

Receptionist : Yes, please come with me.

They entered the room where 3 chairs were already laid out with oils and scents. With full of aroma Sanju felt dizzy. Chitra was in complete owe of the room and gasping at everything. Sumanjee was looking at everything starting from towels to oils with very suspicious looks.

“Ma’am please have a seat I will be back in minute”, and receptionist left them alone in room.

Sanju : Je kya hai? Kaise smell aa rei hai. Is oil se, agar battise.

Chitra : #Luxury ki smell hai yeh. Wo dikhate hai na Karan johar ki movie me waise.

Sumanjee : Sumanjee ke moholle me the ek Vaidya Raambharose wo aisi hi kisi tel se champi karte the. Phir banda so jata tha tab uske paise aur ghadiya chura lete the.

Chitra :Sumanjee , wo apka moholla tha! Ye resort hai 5 star yaha aise kuch nei hota.

Sanju : Par ye ek baat to sahi hai Sumanjee ki, ke malish karwate karwate kahi itne bhi relax na ho ke so jao.Jagate rehna yaad rakhana!

Chitra gulps!

3 girls comes into the room,after much of delay. One of the girls looked nervous. And Sanju could not help but notice her. She was stealing the glances to one of the other girls. Sanjud eliberately sat in chair in front of her.

Sumanjee to chair to left and Chitra to the right.

While the girl was doing head massage, she could feel her being all tensed up.

After they were done with massage and the girls left them to relax. Sanju tried hard to keep her eyes open.

“Je champi to karti bohot badhiya hai, jo nind aa rei hai na.”

“#total relaxation! But Sanju ma’am me so na jau is liye baar baar me khud ko pinch kar rei thi. Apke dar se”

Sumanjee sits up right in chair,”Sanju madam jo apki wali thi na wo thodi ajeeb nei lagi apko”

Sanju also sat upright ,” Haan Sumanjee apne bhi notice kiya?”

“Haa madam, Sumanjee ke mohalle me dekhi hai aise aurate. Jo pet me bada raaz chupake baithati hai. Batana to chahte hai but kisike dar se nei bol sakte.”

Chitra joins them , “Yes, and I notice ke usne jo makeup pehna tha, her hand all that looked like she from decent family. Aise nei jo koi aise Spa me kaam kare. Ya phir koi hai jo usko ehenge gift deta hai”

Sanju thinks hard. Isse baat karni padegi.

While they were chatting all three girl comes. One of the senior girl says

,”Madam hope you enjoyed and felt relaxed! Please do visit again and try our other services as well!”

Sanju smiles. They were about to leave when Chitra thought of something.

“Arey you gave us such nice service lets have #selfie”. The rest of the 2 girl agreed immediately but the 3rd one tried to hide her face. Sanju drags her in front ,” Arey where you are going. Aajo”

Sanju got the idea why she did that, to have that girl’s pic to share. Once they left the Spa Sanju pat’s on Chitra’s back “#good work” and they all laugh.

----- At Pool

The Jhingoors were at the pool. Faizi was sitting by the pool on lounge chair, Bala was in the pool and Sid was at the bar. They have divided the area by their liking.

Sid was wearing the bandana and big red glasses and was sipping through his mocktail when someone banged the glass next to him.

“Oye maza nei aya teri drink se. Kuch hai accha tere pass to pila”, He said to bartender. The bartender looked offended but he knew, customer is always right. So he obliged and went to make another drink.

The guy who was insulting the bartender looked odd. He wore black Bermuda and a very tight and tacky t-shirt. Not the kind of cloths anyone would wear at the resort like this. Sid decided to make a move and turns towards the guy.

“Bhai sahi bole ho us khajoor ko. Pata nei kya milake pilata hai. Mereko to lagata hai bas rangeen paani deke ullu banata hai”

That guy looks at Sid from head to toe, “ Tereko kisne bola apna ghyan batane ko? “ Says rudely. He was about to say something more when Faizi shows up.

“Oye kya khalbali chal rahi hai yaha? Chote , kuch bola ye tere ko”

Sid smiles at the guy and replies to Faizi “Naah bhai, lagata hai kisi aur ka gussa kahi aur nikal raha hai”

Faizi stands in between the guy and Sid “Koi pareshani hai? Mereko sab pareshaniyon ka ka pakka wala nidaan karne ata hai. Du karke?”

That guy knew he was outnumbered and anyways there was nothing to fight about.

“kya bhai, lagte to tum dono apun ki hi baradari ke, to apas me kya jhagada”, he turns and calls the other creepy guy. “Ye hamare bade bhai jaise ye apke hai. Bhai dekho itne dino baad apna koi mila hai. Nahi to ye ameer jado ke bich majja nei aa raha tha”

Faizi smiles “phir kya, wo to kaam ke wajah se yaha aan hua warna…. “ And he stops in middle. And looks at Sid. Sid also tries to avoid looking at Faizi. One of the creepy guy gets suspicious

“yaha aise resort me tum logonka kya kaam hai?”

Faizi grabs his phone from counter and turns “Haan hai kuch kaam. Chal chote!”

Both the creepy guys looks at Faizi and Sid leaving “ Chote, kya yeh dono usi kaam ke liye aye hai? Jis kaamke liye hume bulaya hai?”

“Bhai lagata to hai warna yeh dono yaha kaise ate? Wo malik ne bola tha na bada kaam hai log jada lagenge. To bulaye honge aur. Jara janakari niklne hogi inpe nazar rakhna hogi”

And they left.

---- at Monu’s room :

Monu has ordered some sandwiches and coffee for her self while she decide upon how to find out regarding the drug dealer. She was glancing out of window when she saw few workers carrying carts. All the workers she has noticed in the hotel had logo on their t-shirt but some of the workers were not having them. Even the crates they were carrying were from storage to some truck which does not seem to be from resort.

They were loading the truck when a girl approached one of the worker. She looked nervous and she looked unhappy. He tried to ignore her but of no use. She kept on talking to him, at one point he got so irritated he pulled the gun out of his back pocket to threaten her.

This was odd, why would an ordinary worked have a gun. Monu tried to click the picks but it was not visible enough. But she could identify that worker and girl from their faces.

A knock-on door pulled her back to room. Her sandwiches and coffee has arrived.

“Thanks”, she gestured the room service to keep the tray on table.

“aaj kuch party hai kya resort me?” she asks him.

“Nei Ma’am aaj to nahi hai!”

He bows down and leaves the room.

Monu sat by the window waiting for rest of the team to come back with their news. And hoped they have gathered more meaningful information than her.

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By late evening every team has returned to their respective rooms, freshen up and were ready for the conference call. They got Ustad ji and back up team on call as well and briefed everything to Karan.

While they were briefing Karan was taking notes while tapping the pen on notebook and making mental plans.

While looking at the pics all clicked Monu looked at the selfie Chitra took at spa.

“Guys! Ye wahi ladki hai jo us worker se jhagad rahi thi, while they were loading the crates. Kuch to hua hai us worked and is ladki ke bich jo wo itna upset thi. And that worker had gun, to wo koi aam worker nei hoga”

Sid thought for a sec and said “ Monu, wo photo dekh jo Bala nei click ki hai. Wo 2 goons ki”

Monu searches through that click, “Oh my god! Yeh to wahi worker hai jo us ladki ko dara raha tha!”

Karan stops tapping, “Wo Villas , Wo 2 gunde, yeh ladki , wo crates jo Monami ne dekhe. Ye ek dusre se jaroor kahi related hai and they all together are related to Ghanshankar! Good Job guys! Ek din me hi we have got plenty of intel! Aur hamare target bhi fixed hai. Target 1 : jo Mene aur Premjee ne notice kiye ,Wo do villas! hume unke bare me jitni ho sake utni information nikalana hai. Target 2 : Wo ladki jo Spa me thi and Monami ne dekhi,I have sent the photo to Ustad jee. Wo uski information nikalenge. Faizi and Sid ne jo 2 logonko dekha tha wo to for sure suspicious hai. Unpe nazar rakhna hogi”

“Ye 3 kadiya hamare liye bohot important hai! Team Grihasti will focus on those 2 villas. Team Titliya will find out about that girl. Sanju wo Spa ke baju me jo storage room ka rasta hai Monami saw some big crates going out. Jinpe resort ka logo nei tha. Yaha har ek cheez pe logo rehta hai uspe kyunei we must find out too. And team Jhingoor, wo 2 gunde! Unse dosti banao kuchbhi karo we need. We need to do this ASAP ok. Over and out! ”