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Oh my Ritu this is so long even after separating it into 2 parts 🤪

Behen how do yo write so much descriptive mein toh able janam hi likh paaungi itna 😆

Now let’s get to the story

Man I loved this version of Raavi too being a dancer and a nerd to hide her feelings and interaction with Shiva for so many years because I was not at all expecting this nature of Raavi and let me tell you you have given full justice to it like it looks convincing the Raavi’s part of nature and her fear of losing Pandya Parivaar because what you have written is so true though her Maasi loves her and has taken care I knew she couldn’t take even a bit of her mother’s place or mother’s Love and always wanted a family of her own like Pandya Parivaar. I loved Raavi and Rishita’s bond here shows perfect bestie interaction.

So I had read the flirting part which is so smooth but I didn’t knew the back story or either of them's nature or the past they would share it came as complete surprise to me.
Some people may think Shiva has Casanova type of image but it isn’t he seems to be typical teenager to me with lack of maturity and emotion suppression but still he carved for the support, care , love and affection she gave to me like how every teenage girl or for that matter I would say how every single girl craves more but the case here is just he tried to find that in others with a bit of hope she gets jealous.

But I am glad he knows all his mistakes and all tried to mend them and didn’t let his ego come in between.

Waiting for next part, because I know you have gold content stored in , let’s see how both resolve their distance and come together.❤️


You have written amazing Ritu ❤️ even the dialogues are so smooth and relatable that I was like ki yaar main bhi toh Aisa hi bolti hoon 😆
Never thought this type of alternate version of shivi after reading so many fan fictions that’s its so convincing because same unique shivi punch is still there.

Keep writing and cribbing to me ❤️
Love you 😚

Heyyya Lovelies!!!

It has been 84 years....🙃

Yeah. Quite literally.

I don't know what or how this concept came into existence. It was the New Year's eve and we were all babbling on the DT after KDice stories and that's probably the moment I got a whiff of a possible story that could be constructed.

So then I began creating a full length plot and it was ready by 2nd January but here I am posting the part one almost 3 months later. LOL WHAT??!

We need help. Truly. 😆

This is a different take on Shivi. Totally no relation to the show and it has a completely different Raavi. She loves Shiva but nothing like what we're getting in the show currently. I've tried to explain all their thoughts and feelings with as much clarity as possible so I would advise you to NOT SKIP between the lines pls. You could get lost in the maze. Lmao.

Also this wouldn't have been possible without one person and that beautiful human is @Pottermeow. Sathya - you beautiful gem...I really couldn't have done this without you. From helping me with all the conflicts in my head about these characters to LITERALLY WRITING the dialogues for the last scene of this part. This would have never existed without her.

And also @VaishnaviG who had to keep up with my cribbing throughout. Sorry girl but you will do that for life now. 🤭🤭

I hope y'all don't sleep in the middle of reading this. 😅🥲🥲

Also We Love LONG comments...so...I mean yeah. 😳

Lots of love,

Ritu. ❤️

PS : IF has been making me edit since 7:20 pm...its 8:22 now. 💔🤡

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Heyyya Lovelies!!!

It has been 84 years....🙃

Yeah. Quite literally.

I don't know what or how this concept came into existence. It was the New Year's eve and we were all babbling on the DT after KDice stories and that's probably the moment I got a whiff of a possible story that could be constructed.

So then I began creating a full length plot and it was ready by 2nd January but here I am posting the part one almost 3 months later. LOL WHAT??!

We need help. Truly. 😆

This is a different take on Shivi. Totally no relation to the show and it has a completely different Raavi. She loves Shiva but nothing like what we're getting in the show currently. I've tried to explain all their thoughts and feelings with as much clarity as possible so I would advise you to NOT SKIP between the lines pls. You could get lost in the maze. Lmao.

Also this wouldn't have been possible without one person and that beautiful human is @Pottermeow. Sathya - you beautiful gem...I really couldn't have done this without you. From helping me with all the conflicts in my head about these characters to LITERALLY WRITING the dialogues for the last scene of this part. This would have never existed without her.

And also @VaishnaviG who had to keep up with my cribbing throughout. Sorry girl but you will do that for life now. 🤭🤭

I hope y'all don't sleep in the middle of reading this. 😅🥲🥲

Lots of love,

Ritu.

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