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Heyyyya Lovelies!!

This is gonna be a tedious one. 🥲

I promise I had every intention of making it as short as possible but I strayed SO BAD. Tried and failed, as usual.

Sorry to all who expected romance in the bonfire. Yeah, I have butchered your wishes there.

I might not feel this is perfect or anywhere near but I am actually pretty proud of two scenes and those are - a) Raavi refusing to sit behind him in P1 - b) Shiva's realisation that Raavi means something to him in this part above.

I have done a decent job in it because I felt happy after writing that lol, could be wrong though. Whatever. 🤣🤣

Also there is a HP reference in there all my fellow Potterheads would know. I just went wild. LMAO. 🤭🤭

I could have gone either way with this confession and believe me I have oscillated a lot, but ultimately I went with the gut feeling here. My Co-author has been busy Asf so this might lack sanity LMAO.

I hope this met up to your expectations!

Don't stop yourself from giving me those long comments! We live for those.

Lots of love,

Ritu.❤️

Heyyyy Guysss! Updated the Last Part! 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Heyyyya Lovelies!!

This is gonna be a tedious one. 🥲

I promise I had every intention of making it as short as possible but I strayed SO BAD. Tried and failed, as usual.

Sorry to all who expected romance in the bonfire. Yeah, I have butchered your wishes there.

I might not feel this is perfect or anywhere near but I am actually pretty proud of two scenes and those are - a) Raavi refusing to sit behind him in P1 - b) Shiva's realisation that Raavi means something to him in this part above.

I have done a decent job in it because I felt happy after writing that lol, could be wrong though. Whatever. 🤣🤣

Also there is a HP reference in there all my fellow Potterheads would know. I just went wild. LMAO. 🤭🤭

I could have gone either way with this confession and believe me I have oscillated a lot, but ultimately I went with the gut feeling here. My Co-author has been busy Asf so this might lack sanity LMAO.

I hope this met up to your expectations!

Don't stop yourself from giving me those long comments! We live for those.

Lots of love,

Ritu.❤️

yayy fellow potterhead😆

will read now and leave a lamba comment soon

i hope it doesnt get too annoying🤔

Ritu writing about a trip and no mention of Jaipur... Is it possible.... Nadaa... Meko bhi laake do jaipuri authentic duppatte koiii

The way you introduced Jaipur in your story is so beautiful..

The breakfast scene was pure beauty.. Them being in their zone.... I love raavi so much... How pure ,caring and big hearted she is.

Imaginining dev saying.. Hanging like freshly washed clothes

Eeeeee... Shiva was meeeaaaannnyyyy to siddhy boy... Bechara..

Riahita understands shiva better than dev

Uuffff... The bonfire scene was not at all boring... It has right amount of anguish, angst, torment,tension bw them...... Oh I loved how Raavi held her ground. Perfect boss lady. This piece is all kinds of beautiful!! It filled my heart with so much love, watery eyes, and a big, big smile.

This confident dev is something else... Kaun hai ye dev ke get up me

Rishita's pep talk and shiva's realisation... Oh soo fascinating it was... Description was lit..

The final showdown.... Ahh.. I liked siddy boy but kya kre... I love jelly shiva... Bilkul aag... And you did perfect justice with this version of shiva. The ending scene with shivi was sooo outstandingly beautiful...their hurt, their pain and their no over the top yet out of the world confession .. I re read the whole showdown part... Ekdm paisaaa vasoool. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

You write strong inner monologues, which are so interesting and that add depth to the characters. I admire your ability. You managed the narrative well, with great subtlety.🤗

Originally posted by: qwerty.shivi123

yayy fellow potterhead😆

will read now and leave a lamba comment soon

i hope it doesnt get too annoying🤔

also tag me too on your future works

looking forward to reading more of your pieces

Heyyyy Guysss! Updated the Last Part!

Tagging.

Heyyyy Guysss! Updated the Last Part!

TAGS. <3

Updated!

Part Two : Page 18

Updated!

Part Two : Page 18

Tagging. <3